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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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gersknightlady
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
Reviews for Raven
Another great chapter bringing Harry up to date with their story. Now for the two of them to figure out the rest of it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yep, they have a lot to figure out yet, but we can enjoy it along with them. I wrote a new chapter so we now ahve 50 altogether:)Thanks
very sweet. So glad Harry is okay and Severus and Hermione might even get some time to just figure out their relationship!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, story of my life, "very sweet" LOL. Yes they will have some time now to get to know eachother and makes some plans.
Wow. I was rivetted from the beginning. You are a great story teller. thanks.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, Thats a huge compliment.
Well done. I liked how she brought Harry up to date.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Kewl, glad you enjoyed it :)
Oh my, I don't know how I missed the last chapter so I "had" to read two this morning. Simply lovely.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
You "had" too, LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed them, boy you missed the big one :)Thank you so much for the kind coments.
This is a wonderful story. Are happy to know there a 9 more chapters to go
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I wrote a new chapter this week. but still 9 from here. I had never written the Grendel meets the gypsies so I did that and added it in :)
So now they can all mov forward with their lives. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes they can and have some fun :)
Nice way to tie up some loose ends and let Harry know the full story. Great update!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm waiting the next chapter fromt he beta and will get it uploaded as soon as I get it.
Glad that's all out in the open. Is her parents' home still standing and vacant? Between that place and Spinner's End, the Grangers' home is bigger and probably newer. I think all of them need a quiet place where the press won't find them, wherever that might be. Oh wait, Grendel's place! Thanks for updating!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don't remember if I left the house standing. I thought I'd torched it but maybe that was the other story??? Its been so very long since I read the first part of Raven.
Wonderful! Harry is saved and Severus remembers everything. I'm sure he has found a sense of peace with eveything that has gone on. Hermione no doubt, helps with that.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes she does. There is more peace now for all of them and some fun to be had.Thank you :)
That was a lovely transition chapter and I like the way you are building their relationship.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I forgot there was a rather dull one before some of the fun begins :) the next ones more transition with acomplishment.
I am so pleased to see everything progressing so well. They have all been through so much and they need this healing time.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Wow your fast :) First review of the night. 'm glad yu enjoyed it it was a very layed back chapter, probably the last boring one left LOL. We get to have fun now :)Jeannie
Response from irishredlass (Reviewer)
I was lucky... the alert popped up while I was on line. I am glad as I leave town tomorrow:)
there wasn't a dry eye in the house or out in cyber-land after reading this chapter. what a exhilerating climax to a superb story. i await the last bit with relish (and mustard!). thanks and bocoup smoochies
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked how it played out. There is still a number of chapters left. Total 50 now since I added a new one this week.Jeannie
Wonderful! I love Harry's reaction to SS and HG.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you Im so glad you enjoyed it :)
LOL. Harry's out of the loop!:)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he most deffinately is LOL
Oh, my! What a wonderful read. To have him finally free and whole again must have been enormously satisfactory to Hermione. And, then, to know that Lily wouldn't stand between them again would only bring joy. His acceptance and reaction to Hagrid made me laugh and then smile fondly. I look forward to hearing Harry's reaction to their story, and hope that part is planned. Sara
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed him finally coming together. It was a very long haul but I wanted tot ake him step by step. Have him realise he loved Hermione before finally remembering and being set free, He needed to know that he, Severus, was loved as much as Raven.The next chapetr takes pkace in Harry's room :) Hope you enjoy it.
Jeannie
It just keeps getting better and better...this was great! Severus and Hermione's happiness, everyone imaginable stuffing themselves somehow into Harry's hospital room, the pandemonium when he awoke, and the final line, "When did that happen?" I feel all warm and fuzzy after this one, and I'm sorry that it's going to end soon (yeah I know nine chapters is quite a bit, but still...). Great work, and I'm already waiting for the next chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I know what you mean, I hate to end it as well. I do have plans to write a short Christmas chapter. But so far it has only one scene playing out in my mind. I'm glad so many of you liked the chapter and the big family type reunion that took place there. Harry was a means to the adventure but Severus and Hermione are the focal point so we will continue to follow them on their journey to happiness.Thanks so muchJeannie
I am so happy that Eileen Snape was finally able to do something wonderful for her son. I can imagine the fear and trepidation she would have felt as she was placing her most important memories in the beads. She had to have known that her days were numbered, and she wanted more than anything to help her son. It was the beautiful and loving act of a mother who knows she has one last opportunity to help her son salvage his life and to redeem her soul.
“I’m truly, truly free, Hermione. You cannot fathom how light I feel. I have never felt so free, so loved, and I’ve never looked so forward to my future in my entire life. My mother’s final gift gave me my life back." I doubt that Eileen could have known that she was giving Harry Potter his life back, as well. The entire Weasley clan and the Longbottoms, Minerva and Hagrid were there to welcome Harry back.
I can't wait to see how this story evolves. How will Hermione want to remodel Spinners End? When will they get married? Will Severus will allow Grendel to remain with the Gypsies when he takes him to visit? Perhaps that would give the empath a better life.
Let the fun begin. Thank you for such a wonderful chapter with a great ending! I love it!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, I'm glad the story line presented itself to me. I don't often plan much of a story it just occures to me as I go along. I just realized that Severus might not be able to face a future ith out letting go of a past, and his mother and Lily were the factors that ruled his past dissapointments.Yes, now the fun begins. Harry was never to be the forcal point of the story. Bringin him back was just a vehicle to get them from place to palce. The important part was learning to forgive and accept love in his present and future.I'm so glad you enjoyed it.Jeannie
They heard Harry exclaim as he caught sight of the couple, “When did that happen?”LOL, very nice and light chapter. A bit of a break from the slight heaviness of the past couple of chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
We did need some break from the angst and now we can have some getting to know you chapters and some fun.Thanks so much for hanging in there :)
this is great. can wait for the explainations to begin. maybe a double wedding?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats an idea but one I didn't think of. I hope you enjoy whats coming.Thanks so much
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, He remembered..YAYAYAY!!! I'm so glad that he remembered...I so love this story.. and I'm glad he and Hermione will be together..Well done!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL thanks
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
, I appreciate your time to send a review. Now we can have some fun ......
Ah, I am a complete mush, what a wonderful chapter, I think I will have to hurry writing this review and then rush back to read it once more. I loved it!!!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, I was hoping it wasn't too silly. I'm so glad you liked it, 9 more chapters to go.
That was heartwarming and lovely. I wish I could have been in the room with all of them.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Me Too! I can see it all so clearly in my head. Thanks so much.
Lovely. And Harry's reaction was perfect.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, glad you liked it :)