Chapter 20
Chapter 20 of 50
gersknightladyHermione flees the wizarding world and comes face to face with her past.
ReviewedThe next day they reluctantly packed after deciding the cave had been a useless search. They rode toward the next place. The trip high in the mountains took five days. When they got off their horses, they were slapped in the face by a sharp, icy wind. They quickly put a warming charm around themselves and erected a small shed for the horses and added a warming charm for them. Dobby had delivered hay bales shrunk into small cubes, so they expanded them and fed the animals. Hermione added a charm to replenish it if they didn't come back that day or the next.
Raven pulled out his wand and said, "Erecto." The tent opened and set itself up.
Hermione commented, "You're getting good at that. Let's change into our warm clothing."
Once changed, they decided to go into the cave right away.
They found the mouth of the cave buried beneath five feet of snow. There was barely a hint of the landmarks Severus had written about in his journal. When they entered the cave, Hermione felt the hair on her arms stand up. She saw Raven's eyes widen, and he shivered. He held his wand high to give them light, and Hermione held hers tightly and ran through defensive spells in her mind. There was definitely something here.
They cautiously moved forward. This cave had spikes of sharp ice sticking from the walls and ceiling. They had to side step some of them because they were that low.
A shriek of rage split the air around them, and they heard a shuffling sound ahead them. Hermione felt her breath leave her. Tangible fear was emanating from Raven.
"Back out! Back out!" she cried. She pulled back as a creature the size of a bear, covered in white fur, came galloping at them. Its face was long, and two sharp tusks protruded like boar tusks at the sides of its mouth. They stumbled and fell back, and Hermione's shoulder was pierced by one of the sharp ice shards. Raven grabbed her up, and they rolled head first out of the cave entrance. Hermione managed to fire off, "Duro!"
Instantly, the creature froze with its long paw with lethal claws still reaching for them. The beast had several rows of shark-like teeth. Six legs...all sporting wicked claws...held up the massive body... Its eyes glowed with a deep redness...even in stone.
They watched in horror as it started to warm and shake off the spell.
"Raven, get us into the tent!" Hermione screamed. She could feel the blood seeping from the wound in her shoulder, and the pain was like fire. "Avis Oppugno!"
Small birds with razor-sharp beaks came from her wand and flew into the creature's face. Its claws drew back, and it swatted at the birds, becoming distracted for a few precious seconds.
Raven dragged Hermione into the tent. "Cave Inimicum!" she shouted before fainting.
Raven glanced down at her in alarm and then at the lunging beast. It seemed to hit an invisible wall and bounce back. It whined, got to its feet, and tried again. Pawing at the shield, it seemed confused. Raven could see it through the door of the tent. It tried several more times and sniffed at the edge of the shield as Raven held Hermione against him. Finally the thing stopped trying to test the shield and turned and vanished back into the cavern.
Raven turned his attention to Hermione: Blood was covering her right shoulder. She was still out. He used his wand, as Poppy had taught him, and removed Hermione's jacket and shirt. He got potions from the bag he carried. He gave her a vial of blood replenisher and used another potion to sterilize and seal the wound. Then he wrapped her shoulder and laid her down on the bed. He would wait the required hour for the blood replenisher to do its job. If she had not regained consciousness by then, he would send for help.
He took his own jacket and shirt off and pulled her close, wrapping himself around her for warmth. The minutes seemed like hours before she finally groaned with pain and called to him, "Raven?"
"I'm here," he said, smoothing her hair down. "Take this pain potion. It will help."
"What happened?" she asked after swallowing the potion.
"You fell against one of the ice spikes."
Suddenly remembering, she asked excitedly, "That thing, what happened to it?"
"You put some sort of freeze spell on it and then made an impenetrable field around the tent. But the freeze spell wore off in less than a minute, and it came after us. It could not get through the shield around the tent. It finally gave up."
She trembled and laid her head on his shoulder. He held her close. "I need more practice. When I saw the blood, I just froze. I didn't react. You could have been killed, and I stood there like a statue and let it happen."
He got up and moved away. His shoulders were stiff. "This not having the part of Snape that makes me brave is a hindrance."
"You fought the Death Eaters just fine, Raven. You are brave. What happened that was different?"
"The blood, your blood," he admitted. "I was terrified; you have no idea. I wondered what would happen to me if you died. Nothing would matter to me at all. You are my life, Hermione. You are an anchor to a life I had. Without you, I'm a bum in a cardboard box. I can't go back there. I can't."
"Raven," she called to him and held out her arms, grimacing a bit with the mild pain the potion hadn't eased.
He came to her but knelt by the bed and laid his head on her knees. She stroked his hair for a long time.
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The next morning they were both starving, and Hermione was much better. Only a little soreness remained. After breakfast, they moved the tent further away from the cavern's entrance and put a concealment charm on it as well as the wards.
"There," Hermione said as she set the last ward. "We are quite safe here, and the rock facing will give us some protection against the wind. "I'm afraid we are going to have to go back in there. That animal's guarding something."
"Agreed," Raven stated. "But before we do, I need some instructions and practice with the shield charm, the stone charm, and any others you think might help. That charm didn't keep him down long, but it gave us time to escape."
"The fact that it didn't keep him down means he's enchanted. He's got a reversal spell woven into his makeup. It didn't affect my shield...only those directed at its physical body."
She spent the morning teaching Raven the shield charm and several other defensive spells. He was so quick to learn. She only had to show him once or twice, and he had the spells down. They spent an afternoon running out in the snow firing spells at each other. Magic seemed to be in Raven's blood. It was more instinctive than learned. His body knew these spells well. Hermione realized that his mind just had to be reminded.
They ate well that day, trying to fortify themselves. They decided to wait till the next morning to enter the cave again. They would try a concealment charm to start with and see if they could get past the cave's guardian. They tried not to hope this was the real deal. Had they found Voldemort's lair, or was it just some other wizard's private lair? They had little doubt that there could be some serious obstacles ahead of them. They also knew this might be a false lead. Voldemort would never have considered defeat, so this could be just a tactic to throw people off. But it didn't matter: They had no clock to race against; all they would find were the ghosts of Voldemort's past. There would be formidable protections, but the wizard was dead, and enchantments from dead wizards eventually disintegrated and could be broken through with powerful enough spells. Dumbledore and McGonagall had given Hermione spells that caused destruction and death that could help. The young witch didn't really want to use them unless she had to. Having come close to killing the Death Eaters, she did not want to go there again.
That night they held each other, each thinking his or her own thoughts, and finally feel asleep.
The next morning, they packed some survival equipment and food. They made their way under the Disillusionment charm to the mouth of the cave. Hermione also put a silencing charm on them. There was some sort of natural light, like lichen, that grew on the walls of the cave. It allowed them to see without using their wands or torches. The cave seemed to expand about fifty feet in. They still had not seen any sign of the creature.
Fortunately, the inner cave didn't have icy spikes to navigate. They heard a rumbling ahead and discovered the beast slumbering in a small alcove. With stealth they slipped past the animal, and Hermione placed an impenetrable shield behind them. After that they let go of the Disillusionment and used their wands to brighten the area so they could see better. They could feel the magical wards pressing against them. This place was definitely hiding some secret. Abruptly, the cave floor vanished. Hermione, who was a step ahead of Raven, screamed as she felt herself falling. Raven's hand shot out and clamped onto her arm. He fell to his stomach and was half dangling over the edge. By some miracle, his feet found a crack in the cave floor, and it anchored him. His arm wrenched with the weight of her, but he hung on until she was able to climb back onto the edge of the cliff. She fell to the cave floor next to him, gasping for breath as she helped pull him back away from the crevasse.
A roar split the air, and they were on their feet and running into another branch of the tunnel. The beast was coming after them. Hermione placed a shield charm at the mouth of the cave, but they didn't know if the shield would hold for long under the onslaught of the magically enhanced animal. They were no longer in their own tent but under the rules of the cave itself. The tunnel opened into another cave, and they stopped short as a rope bridge spanning a 100-foot gulf appeared to be their only way forward.
Hermione, already weak from the injury and having just exerted a lot of energy climbing back from the abyss, was already panting with effort. Raven didn't have the ability to hover them past the bridge to the other side. And Hermione, who had always been afraid of flying, had not packed a broom. She cursed her fear of heights.
Raven said, "You go head. If you get into trouble, save yourself. Don't worry about me.
I'll enhance the bridge with a strength charm, and you run."
"Raven, no! You have to come with me. I won't leave you!"
He grabbed her arm and pushed her, "Hermione, trust me and go." He yelled at her with some of his old strength and authority.
She turned and ran. She grabbed the rope rail to help steady herself and moved along as fast as she could. She felt the rope burning her hand but kept going. She then felt Raven running behind her, the bridge erratically bouncing as they went and making it harder not to lose her footing.
Halfway across the enormous gulf, the animal must have reached the bridge because it started to shake even harder, and Raven sounded a bit frantic as he urged her to move faster. Just as she reached the other side, the bridge gave way, and she screamed as she leaped for the other end. She hit the edge and managed to use the rungs of the bridge to stop herself from falling into abyss. "Raven! Raven!" she sobbed.
Then a hand grabbed her, and Raven hauled her up and onto the level ground.
She flung her arms around him, sobbing and nearly strangling him. "I thought you were gone! How?" she demanded.
He held her, trying to calm her, and managed to say, "I don't know. I was falling, and then I was here."
She pulled back to look at his face. "What?" she asked for clarification.
He shrugged. "I was falling, and then I was there. It was instantaneous...like when we Apparate."
"Your body must remember how! Self-preservation," she said with relief. She suddenly felt weak legged and sat in the dirt. "Merlin, that was close." Her body had started to shake.
Raven plunked down next to her. "You have no idea. I thought I was a goner."
She grabbed his hands. "We still haven't taught you the right stuff. We have no clue what's up ahead, and I'm not as good as I thought with all the tactical planning. Maybe we need to ask Dumbledore for help."
Raven felt his heart shrink, "No! This is our responsibility...well mine at least. I won't ask anyone else to put themselves into danger."
She touched his face, seeing his fear. "I understand you don't want to meet any other wizards, but there are good people out there more than willing to help. Neville Longbottom, Luna Lovegood...they are brilliant and would be happy to help."
"No." He pulled away from her, got up, and stepped away. He could not imagine having to deal with someone else...especially someone who knew Hermione. He didn't feel he could share her right now, and he also knew that was foolish. They weren't really qualified for this job. She might be brilliant, but she was handicapped by his inability to do the all magic he obviously knew. He couldn't depend on his ingrained magic to save him every time.
He felt her hand on his waist, and then she drew him close, laying her head on his back. "All right, Raven. I understand. We'll go a little further."
The next hour they traveled unmolested through the only tunnel that lead forward. They would have to find another way out of the cave because they could not return the way they had come. They had heard the beast's roars for some time. They had finally faded when they got far enough away.
They turned a corner in the tunnel and came face-to-face with a dead end. Hermione pounded her hands against the wall and cried in frustration. "There has to be something here. That guardian is here for a reason. This place has enchantments."
Raven watched big tears fall down her checks. He pulled her to her feet and held her tightly. "It's probably just a decoy cave ...something to waste the searchers' time. Maybe it had alarms when Voldemort was alive." A shadow passed across them, and they looked to see the beast blocking the escape route.
In seconds, Raven shoved Hermione behind him and raised his wand. The beast was inches from his face when it suddenly stopped, sniffed, and then reached out and licked his face.
Both Hermione and Raven were stunned as the great beast began to jump around him like a large, happy puppy.
"I'll be dammed," Raven said.
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I noticed a couple of small things: you used aide when it should be aid, and timber when it should be timbre.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I appreciate the heads-up but I could not find Timber/timbre. I thought it would be where he sings Harry to live and yet it's not there. I re-read the chapter twice and it didn't jump out a me.so much for your help.Thank
It probably doesn't matter at this time, but I've noticed a lot of errors: spelling and grammar.Also, there were Indians in Romania?I am enjoying your story however.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Is he so thoughtful because he is magical or because he is Severus Snape? I can't even get my husband to initiate ad take me on a date and I've been married 33 years. Our last date was to go see the last Deathly Hallows and I planned that one. He is a loving stick in the mud.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
It looks like Grendal is rejuivinated by children. That's a wonderful idea. I hurt so bad tonight I can hardly think. I wish I had a pet like him. My feet feel like they have been held in burning coals and then put in clamps. I can't sleep and I'm dreading work, tomorrow. I have peripheral neuropathy from unknown causes. Some days are worse than others.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
A very Happy Chritstmas. Severus is 10 times more thoughtful than most guys. He bought her a wedding dress, how cute.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Very sweet.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
The cauldron ring was a brilliant idea! It is very original. And, I am so glad Xenophilius is there! I really like him and am so glad Luna gets to have her dad. I'm glad to see Moody still alive too. Too bad for the Weaselys Fred isn't here. How did you decide who to keep alive and who to leave passed away? I have no criticism on the matter, just observing and wondering about the process of deciding who to bring back into the story. Great chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Seeing Severus tonight at the ball should help Ginny understand better what Hermione sees in Severus. But she is a girl and it is normal for her not to be attracted to men old enough to be her father. I, on the other hand, have always been attracted to older men. I've been inordinately "boy/man crazy" since I was literally 5 years old. LOL. My first crush was Davey Jones from the Monkeys. Allowing Harry to see the memory of his mother and Harry's mother is extremely generous. That was very very personal. I wonder how Severus will react seeing it a second time? It changed him and gave him back his memories of Raven. He was extremely emotional afterwards. I wonder if he will be able to be OK when seeing it with Harry. I understand that he and Hermione share way more with one another than anyone else does because of Severus' special needs to see Hermione's mind and Hermione seeing his pensive memories. They are comfortable with it now, but most people would feel more like Ginny does about it. I know Severus probably wants Harry to see how much he was loved as a baby. However, Harry will also be hearing his mom say she let Severus down. He will surely have conflicting feelings about that. It won't be easy for either of them to see. I'm sure Severus wants to let Harry know that he can consider him a godfather. I totally trust Harry, but I've learned in life that you can't trust very many people with too much personal information. They are only human and are bound to veiw that information from a position of thier own self interest. They are bound to let someone down even if they are sorry later. But most of the time they aren't sorry because don't even realize how hurtful they were or don't care. Severus will need to find a happy medium regarding who he trusts his most tender feelings with. Changing the subject, I wonder what Minerva thinks about Hermione and Severus snogging in front of all the students.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Great chapter!!! Everyone is coming along quite well. I love happy stories. I don't know why sad stories get so much credit. Entertainment should take one away from the pain of real life in my opinion. I think that is why many of us got hooked on Harry Potter initially when it was still fun and magic was amazing, even though we were adults. Then it went down hill and I only kept reading because I cared about the characters and felt the need to see how she resolved so much conflict, pain and betrayal. I kept hoping for things to improve, but they only got worse. I hated the last book. I hated the ending too. She killed too many people she didn't need to kill. And especially if she had to kill Severus she did it in such an un-Snapish way. Severus Snape would have been prepared for Nagini. She'd made him too smart to die that way. She also made Hermione too intelligent to be able to stay with Ron forever. She would have grown past him, though she would always love him. They don't make a believable adult couple. Your story is 100 times better. Thank you for not letting Doby be dead. That was just too much death for me. I'm sorry Ron has to be dead, but I understand it better than killing Severus and leaving him with such an unresolved tragedy of a life. I wonder if, in her mind, he met Dumbledore on the other side the way Harry did. I know publishers make you change a story a lot. At least the result left a lot of us the drive and strong need to set Severus Snape's story right. We SS fans felt the need to make more sense of his death. I truly didn't see it coming until the last story. I kept waiting for her to reveal his truth, and I thought she would give him some closure, some compensation for his suffering. Although she showed us why he protected Harry and that he wasn't evil, which were huge questions; she left him dead in a stupid way and with only pain, pain and more pain taken to the grave. Her story left me completely unsatisfied.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Quite beautiful. I'm glad everyone got to feel Severus' song of love. This will do much to make everyone feel closer to Severus. I hope Harry can love him too. I know I said that in the last review. I know Harry is a good and kind boy with a lot of love, so I'm sure he will be able to. What about the elder wand? Breaking the edler wand was a big deal regarding Harry. I wonder if you include this in your story some how so we know he did break it, since he didn't have a chance to in this version of how he killed Voldemort. It's OK if you didn't, though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
I'm glad he found out Lily didn't hate him. It must have been terrible to watch the grief of his mother and Lily at losing him to the Dark Lord. But he must have forgiven them so that he was able to remember Raven's life and his love for Hermione. Hermione will be fine. Now he will be able to love Harry like a godson. I hope Harry can love him back.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
The idea of giving Raven's memories back to Severus is brilliant! I'm really glad he mom left him the memory necklace. I wonder how she did it without her wand. Maybe after Severus' dad was gone she got another one. It must be hard for Hermione to have not taken him back to the cave. He was very pitiful. I wonder if he is blocking Raven's memories or if it is a result of the curse. This last memory of his mom after he killed his dad was good for him. Now maybe he can forgive her. The more he forgives the other people who loved him but weren't perfect, the more he will be able to forgive himself.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
I admit I was surprised that Severus didn't finish. However, this is great story telling. It will turn out well, I think. I hope the Weasely's keep quiet. Maybe only Aurthur and Ginny should be there until Severus finishes the spell. It would be less pressure, I think. Maybe Hermione needs to give him permission to love his best friend's son. Acknowledge that he loved Lily and it's OK to keep the good memories. I understand his guilt, but Peter Pettigrew is the friend who really betrayed them to Voldemort. Severus was the one who had them hidden. When he told Voldemort the prophesy he didn't know it would be about Lily's son, did he? I can't remember. I think Lily has forgiven him. If she knew that her life and Jame's were given so that her son could defeat Voldemort, I think she would have been willing to make that sacrafice. She was fighting Voldemort too. If she hadn't died for Harry, Harry would not have been able to defeat the Dark Lord. She also helped defeat Voldemort by her sacrifice. I'm certain Severus has never looked at it that way.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Great job! Just enough angst to make it exciting but not so much as to make it too stressful for a weary soul. I'm really enjoying this story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
I don't understand why they have decided not to make love at Hogwartz until after Harry is free. What am I missing? I'm really happy about his encounter with Neville. That's a healing for Neville too. His fear of Severus has been painful. He is such a good boy. He and Luna do really match. I'm so happy for them both. The Gypsy experience was a great chapter. Thanks.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
I'm having a wonderful time reading this story. I should go to bed or I will regret it. My health requires I get enough rest or I have flare ups. At least I can go to sleep with singing heart now.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Kisses, kisses!!!! I didn't think he could keep away from her until Harry was fixed. It's all good. She needed it and he needed it now they will need eachother. I knows she made love to him even if he doesn't think he made love to her. If he was worried about her loving Ravan instead of him I think some of his worries can be laid to rest. It can only get better now. I feel it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Hermione is doing a good job.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
I suppose she can't ask him to forgive her can she? She doesn't know he stood outside the door, but she knows he kissed the daylights out of her. I think that before much time goes by she needs to sincerely apologize without being overly emotional, but say she respect his wishes if he wants to continue as if the kisses never happened. It seems like the adult thing to do. To ignore it would be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
There are too many chapters left for this not to get better. Hermione needs to somehow show him that she didn't love Raven just to get Harry back. She needs to give him the memories she and Raven made. She also needs to give him the necklace. Some careful way she needs to let him know that she read his jounals and watched the memories with Raven and that she knew all those things about him but still fell in love with him. Maybe she should write him a letter and tell him, but promise never to bring it up again unless he does first. She can promise to just be a collegue and a friend no matter what he decides. And let him know she will always love him no matter what he does. Then just be there for him. I also wouldn't say a word about Harry unless he did. After he wakes Harry, he will see that she cares for him even after he does what she wants and that she isn't just using him. I bet he can't last until the end of the potion they have to prepare. Well, at least a little of the real him will break loose I think.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
I thik I might have waited in the cave for a while in case he came back if I was her. If I was her I might wait at Spinner's End. In fact, I wouldn't be at all surprised if that is where he went. But I guess that would be invading his personal space too much. I think I might send the memories there and leave them for him in plain sight. I believe he would look at them. I would also leave the necklace with the memories and the journal. If I ddin't hear from him in a couple of weeks I would check there then back at the cave. Now that she knows where it is, she can find it again.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
I'm sure he'll get over this.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)