Chapter 49
Chapter 49 of 50
gersknightladyHaving fled the Wizarding World, Hermione comes face to face with her past.
ReviewedThe Burrow was a beehive of activity. Hermione was ushered upstairs as soon as she arrived. Ginny was waiting for her, and Hermione carefully took the beautiful dress off and hung it up. She laid her bouquet down; she planned to carry it for this wedding as well.
Ginny helped her into the white gown. It was cut low and had thin straps. The bodice was covered with silver designs. Above her breasts were gathers of white silk that created two drapes that hung below her shoulders and over her arms. The lined, silk-covered skirt hung to the ground and was slit up the front to just below her knee. She did her hair rather simply, preferring attention to be on the beautiful dress. As she put on silver heels that matched the top of the dress, she blushed, thinking of Severus slowly slipping them off later that night.
Ginny laughed at her. "Hey, keep your thoughts on the wedding."
Hermione smiled. "You can't imagine what he does to me."
Ginny said, "I would rather not, thanks. Hermione, if Harry hasn't broached the idea of marriage to me by mid-summer, can you give him a nudge?"
"Sure, Ginny. He hasn't mentioned it at all?" she asked.
Ginny shook her head rather grimly. "Not even when talking about this wedding. I can't understand it." Her eyes were brimming with tears.
"He's probably just concentrating on getting his health back," Hermione said as she checked herself in the mirror. "He did look to you for an okay to work at Hogwarts. I don't think he would have done that if he hadn't planned for you to be with him," she encouraged the girl.
Ginny appraised her appearance. "You look the perfect wizard bride, Hermione...like a fairy princess. This is a beautiful dress. The other one was so... Muggle."
Hermione laughed. "Perhaps, but it was Raven's dream dress, and I am Muggle-born. It's very beautiful," she said, touching the fabric of the dress.
"I'm sorry," Ginny apologized. "That was a stupid thing to say."
"I understand. Sometimes I think the same thing. Being a witch kind of makes me feel a part of this world."
"You are, Hermione. You're one of the brightest and most talented witches I know."
Hermione hugged her. "I think I'm ready. It's nearly time to go downstairs. I can't wait to see Severus. Every minute away from him is a part of our lives together lost."
Ginny laughed. "You've really got it bad for him. I have to admit he's growing on me. He treats you like a precious stone. It's very endearing."
"Just keep your hands off my man," Hermione warned her with a fake stern look.
Ginny laughed again. "I have my own, and I plan to keep him. I have Severus and you to thank for that. Come on, Mum will get really anxious if we aren't at the door in two minutes."
Hermione picked up her flowers. "I'm ready." They went down the stairs and found the house was deserted.
Ginny went first, making sure the way was clear. Ginny grabbed a bunch of flowers that were tied with ribbon from the table and stepped out the door, and Hermione followed. Then she motioned for Hermione to step to the door.
Suddenly Molly stepped up in the front near the canopy, music wafted out of the air, and her high voice belted out an old-fashioned Muggle wedding song. Hermione remembered it as something her parents listened to when she was quite young. She saw Severus' eyes widen when Molly's voice didn't quite hit the right note. But Hermione stifled her giggles and listened to the words. Tears filled Hermione's eyes as she thought about her mother and father. The song was not perfect, nor was Molly's voice, but it warmed her and made her feel like they were close.
At last
My love has come along
My lonely days over
And life is like a song
Ooh at last
The skies above are blue
Well my heart was wrapped up in clover
The night I looked at you
I found a dream
That I could speak to
A dream that I could call my own
I found a thrill
To press my cheek to
A thrill that I have never known
Well
You smile
You smile
Oh and then the spell was cast
And here we are in heaven
For you are mine at last
I found a dream
That I could speak to
A dream that I
Could call my own
I found a thrill
To press my cheek to
A thrill that I have never known
Well
You smile
you smile
Oh and then the spell was cast
And here we are in heaven
For you are mine at last
Ooo yea
You are mine
You are mine
At last
At last
At last
At last
She grinned at Severus' grimace but smiled at Molly as she finished. She wondered what other surprises Molly had in store for them.
Hermione took one more look around before she started down the aisle. There was a floating, white muslin canopy above their heads. Small hummingbirds flitted in and out of the garden, which had been enchanted to look more like spring and heated with a warming spell. There were flowers everywhere. There were rows of chairs, friends, family, and a few dignitaries from the Ministry. The Minister of Magic himself stood ready to seal their marriage.
In the back row, Hagrid was sitting on three chairs that were bending under his weight. Hermione, whose wand was embedded in her flowers, sent a silent strengthening charm toward the chairs.
The path to Severus was a fresh aisle of mowed grass. He stood under a trellis of colorful flowers that furled and unfurled. Severus wore robes similar to his teaching robes: black, buttoned up, and proper. She wouldn't have wanted it any different. This was her Severus...the man she loved. She realized as she walked toward him that she might even love him far more than she'd ever hoped to love anyone. She also noticed that flowers were springing in the places her feet had trod. She rolled her eyes but forgot about the flowers as Severus stepped forward and took her hand in his and they turned to the Minister of Magic.
He stepped forward and took her hand in his, and they turned to the Minister. There was no repeat of the vows they had given earlier in the day. That was not the wizarding way. They took their wands and touched the tips together, and it created a glow about them. The color was a warm orange, and it signified to the watching community that they were committed in a relationship built on love.
Then the Minister asked, "Severus Snape and Hermione Jean Granger, do you commit to this marriage in the eyes of your friends and family?"
Severus and Hermione said together, "Yes, I do with all my heart."
There was an exchange of rings. Hermione and Severus had chosen a matching set of gold rings with ancient runes engraved around them that said, Loves heals all wounds and lasts forever.
The Minister then took a golden chain and wrapped it around their joined hands and up their wrists. He touched it with his wand and said, "I, Minister of Magic, seal this union now and forever. May you find the happiness and joy in your last day together as you do this first day as married wizard and witch."
The chain began to glow and shimmer. Then the glow sunk into their flesh, joining them forever. Severus picked Hermione up in his arms, kissed her, and then turned to the crowd and said, "She's mine! Every single man here can weep...and maybe a few of the married ones."
Suddenly, a spell was activated and a rather fat, naked cherub appeared before them. He drew back his bow and let an arrow fly toward them. It struck Severus in the chest and burst into hundreds of butterflies that covered Severus and Hermione. Severus looked horrified a moment and then started to laugh. Hermione laughed with him, and as they kissed, the butterflies vanished into the air.
The crowd erupted in laughter and clapped for their happiness. Some of them stared at the new Severus, wondering if he had gone nuts during his ordeal. Others thought it odd that such a young woman could love the old Bat of the Hogwarts' dungeons, and others envied the man his happiness.
Fireworks erupted into the sky, and the music grew louder. Food tables, laden with everything one could think of, appeared. Hermione laughed when she saw the wedding cake. The cake topper was a tiny Severus and Hermione on a broom. She had her face pressed against him. As she watched, the scene changed to her and Raven's wedding and then their ceremony only a moment ago. It was corny and wonderful. They were all special moments for them, and she was warmed that Severus included this tiny reference to Raven.
The chairs magically moved away, clearing a place for dancing. The grass vanished, and a polished floor appeared. Severus took her hand and walked her to the middle of the floor. He took out his wand and waved it toward an empty area in the yard. There was a flurry of activity and then the Gypsies appeared to play music. Nicholi came forward to take Hermione's hands and place a kiss against her cheek, and Magi came to give her a hug.
Hermione cried out with happiness, "Oh Severus, thank you!" She squeezed his hands. "Did you see the wedding?" she asked her friends.
Nicholi smiled warmly. "Yes, we were under a Disillusionment Charm. Severus wanted to surprise you. Now dance, and we will play." He clapped his hands toward his fellow musicians, and they brought their instruments up and started to play.
The Gypsy children ran here and there, chasing the hummingbirds.
Hermione took Severus' hand and let him swing her up against him. A beautiful melody washed over them, and as she lifted her face to his to receive a gentle kiss, Hermione realized he was asking permission to join her mind. She called, Yes! to him with her own mind. He began to step and sway to the slow music, and as if they had been trained to dance together, they moved of one accord. She felt so wrapped in love. Words were not necessary. They danced, looking into each other's eyes and stealing kisses here and there. When the first song ended, Harry came and asked, "Severus, may I have a dance with Hermione?"
Severus nodded his permission although he did not want to let her go. "I do want to dance with Minerva. For you, Harry, I will let her go, but woe to any other man who may try to take her from me," he warned with his old Snape voice.
Harry laughed. "Thank you, Severus. I promise to guard her well, and I will return her shortly."
Hermione smiled and took Harry's hand, feeling the loss of Severus immediately. She gave him a wistful smile, and he took Minerva into his arms and moved a bit from her.
"Well, you've really done it, gone and married the git, no less than twice today." He laughed fondly.
"Harry! You need to get that word out of your vocabulary. You're not a child anymore," she chided him. "I'm happier than I ever thought I'd be, probably happier than Ron and I would have been. I still wish he was here."
"No, you don't. He would have never accepted you marrying Severus. He still hated him even after I told him about the memories."
She sighed and pulled him close. "You're right. He wouldn't have." She was quiet as she held on to him.
"Hermione, I'm going to ask Ginny to marry me," he told her.
"Really," she hugged him excitedly. "How come you haven't mentioned it before? We've been talking weddings all week."
"This was your time...yours and Severus'. I wanted to wait until it was all done. At first I wanted to wait till I knew what I was doing. You know, how I was going to make a living for us. Then you got engaged, and I wanted to respect your time to shine. Has Ginny mentioned it?"
"Just once," she said as they moved around the dance floor. She was watching Severus talking with Minerva as they danced. He was laughing and looked so handsome.
"Do you think she'll say yes?" he asked, a bit of uncertainty in his eyes.
"Oh, Harry, now you're the git. Of course she will! You ask her tonight. Ask her as soon as we leave, and don't you wait another minute."
The music was coming to an end. Hermione looked around for Severus and saw he was already headed back to her.
Harry said, "Thank you, Hermione. I hope you and Severus have a wonderful, happy life."
Hermione hugged him and then turned as Severus grabbed her up against him and swung her around.
"I missed you; I could barely stay the whole song." He crushed her lips with a steamy kiss. "It's been a long day, and I don't want to stay too much longer, my wife."
"Neither do I, my husband." As they danced they exchanged words with couples who passed by to wish them well: Molly and Arthur, Frank and Alice.
Neville said, as he and Luna danced by, "This was a beautiful wedding."
Luna said, "I hope ours is as nice."
It was Severus who answered, "I'm sure it will be will be, Miss Lovegood. Neville, we are looking forward to your wedding."
Neville smiled happily. There was no fear in his eyes anymore when he spoke to Severus.
"Thank you, Professor Snape," he said with genuine affection. Then off he and Luna went.
"Harry came by with Ginny, and Hermione gave her the thumbs up behind his back. Ginny blushed with happiness.
"What was that about?" Severus asked.
She whispered into his ear, "Harry's going to ask Ginny to marry him tonight."
"Well, I hope they are as happy as we are going to be."
"Severus, where are we going tonight? I really hadn't thought of it. It hardly seems like a wedding night if we stay in the castle or Spinners End."
"Don't you worry. I have that all worked out," he said. His deep voice rumbled soothingly over her skin.
She sighed. "This has been a perfect day, Severus. Thank you for bringing the Gypsies here and for my wedding this afternoon. It was wonderful."
"It was as much for me as it was you, my love. It seemed right. You are marrying me, but you loved both halves of me separately in the beginning."
"But you're not two men anymore. You're one Severus Snape, whom I love and want to spend my life with."
"I am very blessed and grateful. It seemed appropriate to stand before God as well as our own people," he told her.
"I think maybe my parents were watching. I prayed that they were." She held him a little tighter, overcome with the emotion of thinking about her parents again.
He drew her away from the dance floor and out into the overgrown section of the garden. There were roses and lilacs blooming. "I'm sure they were, Hermione." His lips claimed hers, and he kissed away her sadness. "Let's go cut that cake so we can get out of here."
Hermione nodded gratefully. "Yes, I do want to get out of here. I want you all to myself, husband..."
"... As I do you, my wife." He kissed her again, took her hand, and they went back to their guests.
They took their place by the cake and everyone gathered. The Gypsies continued to play soft music in the background. There had been a wizard photographer at both weddings; now he asked them to pose for a few pictures. Hermione wanted some with Harry and Ginny and with Neville, Luna, Frank, and Alice. Hermione wanted one with all the Weasleys, as they had been her family and would continue to support her and Severus. It took much more time than planned originally, and Severus' voice started to get a little tense and deeper.
Hermione finally said, "Let us cut the cake. Severus and I want to be on our way." She took the knife and placed it in his hand and covered his hand with hers. When they sliced through the cake, the little cake topper spell faded away.
Severus picked up a piece and held it for her to take a bite. This was all a bit Muggle for him, but they'd had this discussion, and he'd agreed to let her have the wedding album of her dreams.
Hermione fed him a piece of cake, and they turned to their audience. "Thank you so much," she said. "I never thought I'd be this happy six months ago. You have all been such a support and so patient and never once yelled at me for vanishing on you." She reached out and took Severus' hand. "Now, my husband and I want to take your leave."
It took nearly 30 minutes to finally break free of the hugs and kisses. Hagrid was crying so loudly that everyone was laughing at him.
Minerva held Severus a moment longer than need be. "Be happy, boy," she said affectionately. She had always called him "boy" when he was young since he really wasn't her son.
"I will be, Mom," he said affectionately, kissing her cheek. "You don't mind a surrogate son, do you?"
"You've been the son of my heart for years. I'd be honored. Now I want some grandchildren." She turned away, wiping tears from her eyes.
Severus turned and held Hermione against him and guided her to Albus' portrait.
"Goodnight, you old goat. Now you can go back to haunting the castle," Severus said.
Hermione placed a kiss on her finger and put it against Albus' cheek. The portrait was warm, and she smiled affectionately at him. "Thanks for coming; I wish you could have been here to seal our marriage. But it's a comfort that you will always be at Hogwarts."
Albus actually blushed. "You have a wonderful life, both of you."
Severus said sarcastically, "Thanks, Dad." But his eyes swam with tears. "I will come visit, and we will have a long talk after Hermione and I return."
"I would like that, son," Albus said, wiping his eyes with his sleeve.
There was another flurry of goodbyes and suddenly a flying carpet swept out of nowhere. Severus and Hermione tumbled onto it awkwardly as it swept them off their feet. It flew into the air, and they hung on for dear life. It trailed sparks of color, weaving a pattern as it went across the sky around the garden. Severus used his wand to right them, and he settled back and held Hermione against him. He knew Molly was responsible for this spectacle. It finally hovered near the gate to the property. Severus tumbled off the carpet. He climbed to his feet and helped Hermione onto the ground.
"Molly," he roared, "Get your body over here!"
Everyone froze and stared, shrinking into themselves and wishing they were somewhere else suddenly. The music stopped and all eyes were on Molly as she stood white with fear.
Ginny, who was standing near her mom, whispered, "Oh Merlin, now you've gone and done it. I told you that was too much."
Hermione tugged at his arm anxiously. "Severus, please!" He winked at her, and she felt the tension leave her.
Molly came slowly, shaking. Severus in full Professor Snape mode stood towering over her and glaring. "Molly, that was the most undignified thing you've come up with so far. What possessed you?"
"I... I," she stuttered.
Severus roared with laughter, picked her up, and swung her around. "That was brilliant! I would have been disappointed had you not tried something totally outlandish."
Molly, relieved, laughed as the rest of the wedding party did too. Her legs nearly collapsed under her as he set her down. Arthur, who had come forward to fend off Severus' attack, laughed and slipped his arm around his wife's waist. "My Molly," he said affectionately, placing a kiss on her forehead.
A horse was waiting at the garden gate. Severus used his wand to change his outfit to a more comfortable black suit. They stood for a moment in front of the horse to allow another picture to be taken. He mounted the horse and drew Hermione into his lap.
Hermione laughed with joy and kissed him deeply, giving him promises of the night to come.
Severus said for her ears only, "Wench, if you do not want to cause a spectacle here, you will allow me to get us away before igniting my passion."
Hermione's beautiful laugh rang out, and she said, "Let's away then, my love."
Severus smiled and turned the horse away from the garden, and they rode away, vanishing into thin air.
Thank you, Lisa, for all your hard work. I couldn't do this without you. You're the best!
Becky, thanks for your design work around my manips. They turned out fantastic.
At Last sung by famous Etta James
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I noticed a couple of small things: you used aide when it should be aid, and timber when it should be timbre.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I appreciate the heads-up but I could not find Timber/timbre. I thought it would be where he sings Harry to live and yet it's not there. I re-read the chapter twice and it didn't jump out a me.so much for your help.Thank
It probably doesn't matter at this time, but I've noticed a lot of errors: spelling and grammar.Also, there were Indians in Romania?I am enjoying your story however.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Is he so thoughtful because he is magical or because he is Severus Snape? I can't even get my husband to initiate ad take me on a date and I've been married 33 years. Our last date was to go see the last Deathly Hallows and I planned that one. He is a loving stick in the mud.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
It looks like Grendal is rejuivinated by children. That's a wonderful idea. I hurt so bad tonight I can hardly think. I wish I had a pet like him. My feet feel like they have been held in burning coals and then put in clamps. I can't sleep and I'm dreading work, tomorrow. I have peripheral neuropathy from unknown causes. Some days are worse than others.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
A very Happy Chritstmas. Severus is 10 times more thoughtful than most guys. He bought her a wedding dress, how cute.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Very sweet.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
The cauldron ring was a brilliant idea! It is very original. And, I am so glad Xenophilius is there! I really like him and am so glad Luna gets to have her dad. I'm glad to see Moody still alive too. Too bad for the Weaselys Fred isn't here. How did you decide who to keep alive and who to leave passed away? I have no criticism on the matter, just observing and wondering about the process of deciding who to bring back into the story. Great chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Seeing Severus tonight at the ball should help Ginny understand better what Hermione sees in Severus. But she is a girl and it is normal for her not to be attracted to men old enough to be her father. I, on the other hand, have always been attracted to older men. I've been inordinately "boy/man crazy" since I was literally 5 years old. LOL. My first crush was Davey Jones from the Monkeys. Allowing Harry to see the memory of his mother and Harry's mother is extremely generous. That was very very personal. I wonder how Severus will react seeing it a second time? It changed him and gave him back his memories of Raven. He was extremely emotional afterwards. I wonder if he will be able to be OK when seeing it with Harry. I understand that he and Hermione share way more with one another than anyone else does because of Severus' special needs to see Hermione's mind and Hermione seeing his pensive memories. They are comfortable with it now, but most people would feel more like Ginny does about it. I know Severus probably wants Harry to see how much he was loved as a baby. However, Harry will also be hearing his mom say she let Severus down. He will surely have conflicting feelings about that. It won't be easy for either of them to see. I'm sure Severus wants to let Harry know that he can consider him a godfather. I totally trust Harry, but I've learned in life that you can't trust very many people with too much personal information. They are only human and are bound to veiw that information from a position of thier own self interest. They are bound to let someone down even if they are sorry later. But most of the time they aren't sorry because don't even realize how hurtful they were or don't care. Severus will need to find a happy medium regarding who he trusts his most tender feelings with. Changing the subject, I wonder what Minerva thinks about Hermione and Severus snogging in front of all the students.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Great chapter!!! Everyone is coming along quite well. I love happy stories. I don't know why sad stories get so much credit. Entertainment should take one away from the pain of real life in my opinion. I think that is why many of us got hooked on Harry Potter initially when it was still fun and magic was amazing, even though we were adults. Then it went down hill and I only kept reading because I cared about the characters and felt the need to see how she resolved so much conflict, pain and betrayal. I kept hoping for things to improve, but they only got worse. I hated the last book. I hated the ending too. She killed too many people she didn't need to kill. And especially if she had to kill Severus she did it in such an un-Snapish way. Severus Snape would have been prepared for Nagini. She'd made him too smart to die that way. She also made Hermione too intelligent to be able to stay with Ron forever. She would have grown past him, though she would always love him. They don't make a believable adult couple. Your story is 100 times better. Thank you for not letting Doby be dead. That was just too much death for me. I'm sorry Ron has to be dead, but I understand it better than killing Severus and leaving him with such an unresolved tragedy of a life. I wonder if, in her mind, he met Dumbledore on the other side the way Harry did. I know publishers make you change a story a lot. At least the result left a lot of us the drive and strong need to set Severus Snape's story right. We SS fans felt the need to make more sense of his death. I truly didn't see it coming until the last story. I kept waiting for her to reveal his truth, and I thought she would give him some closure, some compensation for his suffering. Although she showed us why he protected Harry and that he wasn't evil, which were huge questions; she left him dead in a stupid way and with only pain, pain and more pain taken to the grave. Her story left me completely unsatisfied.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Quite beautiful. I'm glad everyone got to feel Severus' song of love. This will do much to make everyone feel closer to Severus. I hope Harry can love him too. I know I said that in the last review. I know Harry is a good and kind boy with a lot of love, so I'm sure he will be able to. What about the elder wand? Breaking the edler wand was a big deal regarding Harry. I wonder if you include this in your story some how so we know he did break it, since he didn't have a chance to in this version of how he killed Voldemort. It's OK if you didn't, though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
I'm glad he found out Lily didn't hate him. It must have been terrible to watch the grief of his mother and Lily at losing him to the Dark Lord. But he must have forgiven them so that he was able to remember Raven's life and his love for Hermione. Hermione will be fine. Now he will be able to love Harry like a godson. I hope Harry can love him back.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
The idea of giving Raven's memories back to Severus is brilliant! I'm really glad he mom left him the memory necklace. I wonder how she did it without her wand. Maybe after Severus' dad was gone she got another one. It must be hard for Hermione to have not taken him back to the cave. He was very pitiful. I wonder if he is blocking Raven's memories or if it is a result of the curse. This last memory of his mom after he killed his dad was good for him. Now maybe he can forgive her. The more he forgives the other people who loved him but weren't perfect, the more he will be able to forgive himself.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
I admit I was surprised that Severus didn't finish. However, this is great story telling. It will turn out well, I think. I hope the Weasely's keep quiet. Maybe only Aurthur and Ginny should be there until Severus finishes the spell. It would be less pressure, I think. Maybe Hermione needs to give him permission to love his best friend's son. Acknowledge that he loved Lily and it's OK to keep the good memories. I understand his guilt, but Peter Pettigrew is the friend who really betrayed them to Voldemort. Severus was the one who had them hidden. When he told Voldemort the prophesy he didn't know it would be about Lily's son, did he? I can't remember. I think Lily has forgiven him. If she knew that her life and Jame's were given so that her son could defeat Voldemort, I think she would have been willing to make that sacrafice. She was fighting Voldemort too. If she hadn't died for Harry, Harry would not have been able to defeat the Dark Lord. She also helped defeat Voldemort by her sacrifice. I'm certain Severus has never looked at it that way.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Great job! Just enough angst to make it exciting but not so much as to make it too stressful for a weary soul. I'm really enjoying this story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
I don't understand why they have decided not to make love at Hogwartz until after Harry is free. What am I missing? I'm really happy about his encounter with Neville. That's a healing for Neville too. His fear of Severus has been painful. He is such a good boy. He and Luna do really match. I'm so happy for them both. The Gypsy experience was a great chapter. Thanks.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
I'm having a wonderful time reading this story. I should go to bed or I will regret it. My health requires I get enough rest or I have flare ups. At least I can go to sleep with singing heart now.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Kisses, kisses!!!! I didn't think he could keep away from her until Harry was fixed. It's all good. She needed it and he needed it now they will need eachother. I knows she made love to him even if he doesn't think he made love to her. If he was worried about her loving Ravan instead of him I think some of his worries can be laid to rest. It can only get better now. I feel it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Hermione is doing a good job.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
I suppose she can't ask him to forgive her can she? She doesn't know he stood outside the door, but she knows he kissed the daylights out of her. I think that before much time goes by she needs to sincerely apologize without being overly emotional, but say she respect his wishes if he wants to continue as if the kisses never happened. It seems like the adult thing to do. To ignore it would be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
There are too many chapters left for this not to get better. Hermione needs to somehow show him that she didn't love Raven just to get Harry back. She needs to give him the memories she and Raven made. She also needs to give him the necklace. Some careful way she needs to let him know that she read his jounals and watched the memories with Raven and that she knew all those things about him but still fell in love with him. Maybe she should write him a letter and tell him, but promise never to bring it up again unless he does first. She can promise to just be a collegue and a friend no matter what he decides. And let him know she will always love him no matter what he does. Then just be there for him. I also wouldn't say a word about Harry unless he did. After he wakes Harry, he will see that she cares for him even after he does what she wants and that she isn't just using him. I bet he can't last until the end of the potion they have to prepare. Well, at least a little of the real him will break loose I think.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
I thik I might have waited in the cave for a while in case he came back if I was her. If I was her I might wait at Spinner's End. In fact, I wouldn't be at all surprised if that is where he went. But I guess that would be invading his personal space too much. I think I might send the memories there and leave them for him in plain sight. I believe he would look at them. I would also leave the necklace with the memories and the journal. If I ddin't hear from him in a couple of weeks I would check there then back at the cave. Now that she knows where it is, she can find it again.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
I'm sure he'll get over this.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)