Chapter 36
Chapter 36 of 50
gersknightladyHaving fled the Wizarding World, Hermione comes face to face with her past.
ReviewedThe next day Hermione and Severus took the morning off and went to St. Mungo's together. They were quickly ushered into the director's office. It was a huge room with an impressive cherry wood desk and large leather chairs. The plants scattered artfully around the room seemed to make the office alive and comfortable. No expense was spared, and it made Hermione wonder about the man. Budgets were tight everywhere.
Severus visibly bristled at the sight of the tall, stocky, balding man. "Healer Davenport," he said tightly.
"Alishus, Severus. We are all professionals here," the man said, seeming to genuinely be pleased. "Come sit down. What brings you to my hospital?"
Severus explained about the spell and the potion. But he told Davenport he would not share it at this time.
"Why should I allow you to do this unknown procedure on one of my patients? It's an unheard of spell. I have no idea what the potion is made of because you refuse to share the ingredients with me."
Severus stood and glared at the Healer. "This may bring patients out of their damaged states and give them back their lives and return them to their loved ones. What's more important to you, Alishus, your need to know or your patients' welfare?" He could not tell him the spell came from Salazar Slytherin's book because the Healer would have assumed it was Dark magic. But Severus had detected nothing of the sort in this potion.
"You haven't changed at all, have you, Severus? You still think everything is a competition. I am concerned for the welfare of my patients. I do not want to strap a family with a relative who will be worse off. So many things could go wrong: paralysis, mental retardation. Do you think it will benefit family members to have to diaper and tube feed their relatives? With the way things are now, the patients are calm and in no further pain."
"You made everything a competition, Davenport, not I. Were you so unsure of yourself that you needed to best me at everything? You seem pretty successful now," Severus said with a sneer.
"Severus, my job at Hogwarts was many years in the past. Now, I am only concerned about the wellbeing of my patients. You need to give me some idea of what your spell entails, or I cannot let you proceed. It is a reasonable request," he said adamantly.
Hermione watched with increasing fear that they might come to blows. She could tell that Davenport was just as stubborn as Severus, and that scared her.
Severus stood and turned to go, striding away and leaving Hermione behind. Hermione stopped him at the door and whispered harshly to him, "Severus, please, this is for Neville and Harry. You must let go of whatever your past is with this man. Please do this for me and for Neville. You can do this: You are the master. You can prove to yourself and this man what you're capable of. It's not unreasonable for him to ask what you're planning to do to his patients."
Severus looked into her face and realized she was near panic that he would walk away from healing Harry and Neville's parents. She was on the verge of tears, and he hated hurting her.
"All right," he said, squeezing her hand. After they had taken their seats again, Severus explained the spell and even demonstrated a bit of it.
Davenport seemed to come alive with excitement. He was well-versed in spells and could read the nuances in the lights. "Come, I may be the director, but I must have a consensus of Healers to allow this. Give me a moment to call everyone to the boardroom."
The boardroom was different from what Hermione expected. There was no table surrounded by high-backed chairs. The room was circular, and it had a wall of windows looking into a huge greenhouse of potion ingredients. An open door allowed plants to spill into the room, making it an extended garden. Seating consisted of cushy couches and chairs positioned in a circle. There were even several Pensieves among the plants in alcoves. To Hermione's great surprise, an actual pine tree was growing from the floor and was now seasonally decorated in Christmas décor.
"Impressive," Severus admitted.
Although Hermione could see how tense he was by the way he was standing, she didn't say anything.
"Thank you, Severus. That's high praise from you," Alishus said. "We gather here several times a week to discuss our cases and to sometimes share the memories of those working on the most difficult or perplexing cases. It helps us to see what it is they see and why they have made certain diagnoses. It makes my staff more like a family."
"Yes, I guess it does." He knew there was an inherent trust in people who shared their thoughts. They were all people who were of one thought and goal. He looked at Hermione and smiled.
Healers of all shapes, sizes and races started to wander into the room. Besides Wizards and Witches there were Goblins and Fairies. Yet the lime green of their Healers' robes made them a solidified group.
"Come meet Miriam Strout, Severus. She's in charge of the Permanent Spell Damage department. She will have to give her consent."
The woman was friendly, and they had a quick but lively conversation with her. Finally Davenport said, "You will have to share the potion ingredients with her. Did you bring a sample?"
Hermione nodded, patting her robes. She pulled out the vial and handed it to the short, motherly woman.
Healer Strout took it with a sparkle in her eye. "Master Snape, your expertise precedes you. I will be happy to look at this, but I am certain that it will do what you say it does."
"My assistant Hermione Granger helped me prepare the ingredients, and I did the brewing. She was an incredible asset while I was studying the spell. I checked on her as the need arose."
"Well, Madam Granger, if Master Snape has your confidence, I'm sure the potion has been well prepared."
Hermione was distracted by a familiar figure and called out, "Firenze!"
"Miss Granger, it is good to see you again." Firenze bowed in respect. Even he wore a scarf of green tied around his waist where his humanoid and equine halves blended.
"What are you doing here?" she asked curiously.
"Firenze was a Healer in his herd," Davenport explained for him. "We are very proud to have him on our staff."
Firenze explained, "I still can't go back to the herd, and this gives me purpose."
"I'm glad; it's good to see you again, Healer Firenze."
The group was called together, and Healer Davenport explained why Potions master Snape and Hermione Granger had come. Everyone in the room listened wide-eyed as Snape explained in detail the properties of the potion and the spell. Arguments broke out as to who should be able to watch. Severus and Hermione were firm that they needed privacy to properly administer the potion and spell to Frank and Alice Longbottom. Severus agreed to allow Healer Strout to administer one dose of the potion to Alice, and Davenport would give the other to Frank. The spellbook had intimated that more than one person could be returned to himself or herself if they had a full dose of potion and had the spell performed near them.
Finally, Severus asked them to keep this conversation confidential. He didn't want the press alerted before the famous Aurors and Harry Potter were healed.
Once Severus had thanked the Healers for their time, he and Hermione left the hospital and Apparated back to Hogwarts.
As soon as they arrived at the Apparition point, Severus began walking briskly toward Hogwarts. Hermione ran after him and grabbed his hand, which, she discovered, was trembling. "Severus, what's wrong?" she asked, standing before him stopping him in his tracks.
He frowned and tried to walk around her.
"Damn it, Severus, don't shut me out. If we are going to do this, we need to do it together."
He ran his hand through his hair and looked down at her. "I didn't expect to have to have an audience...least of all Alishus Davenport."
"But you agreed," she protested, squeezing his hand.
"Yes, but you saw how Alishus is. He wouldn't have allowed us to help Harry and the Longbottoms unless he is allowed to be there. It's his hospital."
"Why do you think it was so important to him?"
"It's always been about control with him. He and I were first-year teachers together here. He taught Herbology before Professor Sprout came. He always made it a miserable experience to gather potion ingredients from his greenhouse. He still wants me to know that he's in charge."
"Are you sure? He seemed genuinely excited about the procedure. If you had a chance to see something like this for the first time, wouldn't you try your best to be included? You can be the better man here, Severus. Just ignore him. When we are in that room with Frank and Alice Longbottom, it will be just the two of us in our hearts. They will administer the potion, and you will sing them alive. I will be there supporting you every second. You won't even know anyone else is there."
He took her in his arms and held her tightly. "What would I do without you? You are my anchor. How am I supposed to feel love for people I do not even know? I am uncertain that this will work, Hermione."
"Severus? I've never known you to be insecure about your abilities. It was..." She stopped.
"... Raven who was scared," he finished for her.
"Yes, sorry." She pressed her face against his chest.
"Well, I guess we are getting closer. I am becoming someone I don't recognize."
"Is it bad?" she asked, trembling against him.
"No, not all of it. I have him to thank for you." He placed a soft kiss on her forehead.
"No, Severus. You have yourself to thank for me. He was and is you. I know that; you just have to accept it. Maybe then all the pieces will fall together for you."
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The next evening they stood in the Longbottoms' hospital room. Someone had placed a tiny Christmas tree with blinking fairy lights on the small table between the beds. Neville sat rather nervously in a chair off to the side. Hermione took her place behind him and held tightly onto his shoulders in support. Frank Longbottom lay on a bed in the center of the room, and Alice sat in a wheelchair at his side. She was folding and unfolding a shiny candy wrapper.
Healer Davenport stood poised at the head of the bed ready to administer the potion to Frank. Healer Strout was running her hands over Alice's hair, trying to soothe her. Severus stood at the foot of the bed centering himself and working to block out any distractions so he could sing the words of the spell.
Hermione waited in silence and said a prayer for him as she awaited his signal for the Healers. She tried to send him her good thoughts and saw his face relax a bit. When he opened his eyes, he looked at the Healers and nodded ever so slightly.
Neville sat up a little straighter on his chair and watched the procedure with interest. His body was taut with excitement and fear.
Davenport positioned Frank's head so that his mouth opened a bit, poured the potion down his throat and rubbed his neck to ensure the potion was swallowed without choking the patient. He then stepped back. Strout held a small glass to Alice's lips. Alice grasped it and drank it quickly and then the song began. The timber and pitch of Severus' voice filled the room. The spell of lights wove around Frank Longbottom and formed a cocoon. A second group of lights encircled Alice. She watched, enraptured, and tried to pick the lights from the air.
Severus' voice soared and then faltered. He felt the fear well up inside him and saw the colors start to gray and Frank's body start to convulse. Severus took a step back afraid he'd injured the man further. How could I care for this man who means nothing to me? Who am I to think that I could bring someone back from so long a sleep?
Alice was still working at the strands of elusive wisps of grey with her fingers.
Neville was holding himself in his chair, his fingers white with strain as he gripped the seat at his sides. He didn't want to interrupt the spell, yet he had an overwhelming desire to comfort his father.
Hermione let go of Neville's shoulders and went to Severus and took his hands. "Sing, my love, sing. You can do this. Let my love fill you. Love is all you need, Severus. Sing."
He felt her mind touch his, and he felt her love soar like a giant bird with wings of gold through his heart. It filled him up, and his voice picked up its strength and pitch. The lights of the spell flared brightly, and the weave tightened. Frank Longbottom's seizures stopped, and his body relaxed. The lights started to travel up his body and finally surrounded only his head. The timber and resonance of the song came to its final notes, and the spell lights burst in a cascade like the celebratory fireworks they had seen during spell practice. But this time, darkness fled the man's brain and dissipated into the air around him.
Alice Longbottom was already looking around in curious wonder. "What's happening?" she asked.
Neville, who had been sitting stiffly, petrified with fear, finally catapulted out of his chair and came to stand over his mother's chair. "Mom. It's Neville, do you understand me?"
"Neville, my son? It is you." She hugged him and tears streamed down her face.
Hermione saw Frank's eyes flutter. "Neville, your dad!"
Neville kissed his mom and left her side as Miriam Strout went to her knees beside her and began to whisper things to her, trying to explain what was happening, but Alice halted her with a few words. Hermione wondered what she had said.
"Dad? Dad?" Neville called. "Can you hear me? Please try to open your eyes."
Severus stood stiffly, trying to process the feelings inside him. Hermione withdrew her mind and put her arms around him and held him close.
Neville called again, "Dad, open your eyes."
Frank Longbottom's eyes opened. He looked around, and his eyes focused on Neville's face. "Who?" he whispered.
"I'm Neville, Dad. You've been asleep a long time." He brushed at the tears on his own joy-filled face.
"Neville, no, he's a baby. Alice... my wife... where is she?" Frank asked, trying to sit up.
"She's here next to you," Neville said, trying to stop the flow of tears that streamed down his face.
Miriam pushed Alice's chair closer to the bed, and Alice reached for both Neville's and Frank's hands. "I'm here, Frank." She spoke clearly and with strength.
Frank was blinking, trying to focus and understand what had happened. "Bella... trix." he stammered. "She cur... sed..." His words were slow and broken.
"Yes, Dad. You've been asleep nearly 19 years."
"Nineteen years Neville, you're a man now... my son." Tears leaked from the man's eyes and slipped down his face, drenching the pillow.
Neville leaned over the bed, hugged his father to him and placed a kiss on his father's forehead. "Dad..."
Hermione noted that Frank tried to raise his left arm to grab on to Neville. But when he tried to lift his arm, it spasmed, and he finally let it drop to the bed.
Neville hadn't noticed.
Hermione went to the door, opened it, and motioned to Luna who was waiting outside. She noticed that Severus was leaning against the wall for support. The spell had exhausted him. She rushed to his side to lend her shoulder for support.
The beautiful waif of a girl went right to Neville, who drew her close. "Dad, Mom, this is Luna. We are getting married soon."
"Luna... beautiful... need to sleep." Frank drifted off.
Neville looked around in alarm.
Alishas Davenport called, "Miriam."
The Healer left Alice's side and came closer. Neville moved back. She waved her wand over the unconscious wizard and ran a scan. "He's sleeping," she diagnosed after a moment. Everyone in the room breathed a sigh of relief. "Mr. Longbottom, your father has some paralysis on his left side. It's nothing too serious. I think that with potions and muscular manipulation, we can help that in time."
Neville nodded, unable to speak as he continued to stare into his father's face. A tug on his hand brought him down on his knees into his mother's arms.
"Neville, I've watched you for years, but I was trapped in that half existence and unable to speak. Your Luna is a beautiful girl. I'm so happy for you."
Davenport turned to Severus and came closer. "Severus, you and I haven't seen eye to eye for many years, but I have to tell you that was the most impressive spell work I have ever seen in my life. I would be proud to have you work with us on a few other cases of curse-injured patients."
Severus eyed him, amazed at how sincere the man was. That shocked him and also warmed him. "Once we have brought back Harry Potter, I will consider it. Now if you think we are done here and you can take over, Hermione and I need to leave. I need rest."
"Of course, I understand. I don't know where you got that spell, but I would love to see it and see the source."
Severus thought, I bet you would. But he said, "Alishas, if you keep the press away until after Harry is awakened, I will share the spell and maybe its source. Do we have a deal?"
"Of course! The Longbottoms will stay in seclusion. They need time to assimilate what has happened and to gather strength."
Severus arched a suspicious eyebrow. "Why the change of heart? Aren't you jealous of my accomplishment?"
"Severus, I should have explained yesterday. Your sacrifices saved my family. I owe you. Forgive me for the ridiculous, old games," Davenport explained. "There was a Death Eater raid on my family home. My in-laws were killed, but my wife and kids survived. She swore to me that she saw you miscast spells at them on purpose. I didn't believe her until the truth came out after the final battle. I owe you so much."
Severus was touched by the man's gratitude, but his exhaustion was getting more severe with the effort to remain on his feet. He only nodded gratefully at Alishus as Hermione guided him out of the room and the hospital. Severus pulled a Portkey from his pocket.
When they landed, they weren't at Hogwarts but the lair. Hermione watched as Severus slipped to the floor and cuddled a waiting Grendel. She realized the animal had been his only friend for years. As she watched the scene, more tears spilled from her eyes, and she realized that Grendel was somehow able to give Severus some of his strength. She could see the strength returning to his face as the lines of exhaustion vanished.
He reached up to draw her down to sit with Grendel and him. "This emotional overload is rather painful and wonderful at the same time," he told her softly. Severus wound his fingers into hers and held her hand tightly. His other hand was buried in Grendel's thick fur. "If you had not been there tonight, Frank might have died. I nearly lost the spell."
"But you didn't; you finished it. You saved them both from living death."
"We saved them, Hermione. I do not know what I ever did without you."
"You have Grendel," she said, soothing the animal's fur. The great beast began to purr. Hermione laughed. "He has empathic abilities, doesn't he?"
"Yes, you know I need to talk to Hagrid about him. He gave me the great beast. Maybe he knew I would need his abilities over the years. There have been times when I nearly fell into the cave here, bleeding and near death, and somehow when this big guy sat near me or licked my wounds, I healed."
"That's one of those stories you were going to tell me." She smiled. "I knew he was a comfort, but I had no idea about the rest," she said, looking at the beast with new respect and love.
He was running his hand over Grendel's fur. "I can't really live without him or you, Hermione."
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I noticed a couple of small things: you used aide when it should be aid, and timber when it should be timbre.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I appreciate the heads-up but I could not find Timber/timbre. I thought it would be where he sings Harry to live and yet it's not there. I re-read the chapter twice and it didn't jump out a me.so much for your help.Thank
It probably doesn't matter at this time, but I've noticed a lot of errors: spelling and grammar.Also, there were Indians in Romania?I am enjoying your story however.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Is he so thoughtful because he is magical or because he is Severus Snape? I can't even get my husband to initiate ad take me on a date and I've been married 33 years. Our last date was to go see the last Deathly Hallows and I planned that one. He is a loving stick in the mud.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
It looks like Grendal is rejuivinated by children. That's a wonderful idea. I hurt so bad tonight I can hardly think. I wish I had a pet like him. My feet feel like they have been held in burning coals and then put in clamps. I can't sleep and I'm dreading work, tomorrow. I have peripheral neuropathy from unknown causes. Some days are worse than others.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
A very Happy Chritstmas. Severus is 10 times more thoughtful than most guys. He bought her a wedding dress, how cute.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Very sweet.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
The cauldron ring was a brilliant idea! It is very original. And, I am so glad Xenophilius is there! I really like him and am so glad Luna gets to have her dad. I'm glad to see Moody still alive too. Too bad for the Weaselys Fred isn't here. How did you decide who to keep alive and who to leave passed away? I have no criticism on the matter, just observing and wondering about the process of deciding who to bring back into the story. Great chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Seeing Severus tonight at the ball should help Ginny understand better what Hermione sees in Severus. But she is a girl and it is normal for her not to be attracted to men old enough to be her father. I, on the other hand, have always been attracted to older men. I've been inordinately "boy/man crazy" since I was literally 5 years old. LOL. My first crush was Davey Jones from the Monkeys. Allowing Harry to see the memory of his mother and Harry's mother is extremely generous. That was very very personal. I wonder how Severus will react seeing it a second time? It changed him and gave him back his memories of Raven. He was extremely emotional afterwards. I wonder if he will be able to be OK when seeing it with Harry. I understand that he and Hermione share way more with one another than anyone else does because of Severus' special needs to see Hermione's mind and Hermione seeing his pensive memories. They are comfortable with it now, but most people would feel more like Ginny does about it. I know Severus probably wants Harry to see how much he was loved as a baby. However, Harry will also be hearing his mom say she let Severus down. He will surely have conflicting feelings about that. It won't be easy for either of them to see. I'm sure Severus wants to let Harry know that he can consider him a godfather. I totally trust Harry, but I've learned in life that you can't trust very many people with too much personal information. They are only human and are bound to veiw that information from a position of thier own self interest. They are bound to let someone down even if they are sorry later. But most of the time they aren't sorry because don't even realize how hurtful they were or don't care. Severus will need to find a happy medium regarding who he trusts his most tender feelings with. Changing the subject, I wonder what Minerva thinks about Hermione and Severus snogging in front of all the students.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Great chapter!!! Everyone is coming along quite well. I love happy stories. I don't know why sad stories get so much credit. Entertainment should take one away from the pain of real life in my opinion. I think that is why many of us got hooked on Harry Potter initially when it was still fun and magic was amazing, even though we were adults. Then it went down hill and I only kept reading because I cared about the characters and felt the need to see how she resolved so much conflict, pain and betrayal. I kept hoping for things to improve, but they only got worse. I hated the last book. I hated the ending too. She killed too many people she didn't need to kill. And especially if she had to kill Severus she did it in such an un-Snapish way. Severus Snape would have been prepared for Nagini. She'd made him too smart to die that way. She also made Hermione too intelligent to be able to stay with Ron forever. She would have grown past him, though she would always love him. They don't make a believable adult couple. Your story is 100 times better. Thank you for not letting Doby be dead. That was just too much death for me. I'm sorry Ron has to be dead, but I understand it better than killing Severus and leaving him with such an unresolved tragedy of a life. I wonder if, in her mind, he met Dumbledore on the other side the way Harry did. I know publishers make you change a story a lot. At least the result left a lot of us the drive and strong need to set Severus Snape's story right. We SS fans felt the need to make more sense of his death. I truly didn't see it coming until the last story. I kept waiting for her to reveal his truth, and I thought she would give him some closure, some compensation for his suffering. Although she showed us why he protected Harry and that he wasn't evil, which were huge questions; she left him dead in a stupid way and with only pain, pain and more pain taken to the grave. Her story left me completely unsatisfied.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Quite beautiful. I'm glad everyone got to feel Severus' song of love. This will do much to make everyone feel closer to Severus. I hope Harry can love him too. I know I said that in the last review. I know Harry is a good and kind boy with a lot of love, so I'm sure he will be able to. What about the elder wand? Breaking the edler wand was a big deal regarding Harry. I wonder if you include this in your story some how so we know he did break it, since he didn't have a chance to in this version of how he killed Voldemort. It's OK if you didn't, though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
I'm glad he found out Lily didn't hate him. It must have been terrible to watch the grief of his mother and Lily at losing him to the Dark Lord. But he must have forgiven them so that he was able to remember Raven's life and his love for Hermione. Hermione will be fine. Now he will be able to love Harry like a godson. I hope Harry can love him back.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
The idea of giving Raven's memories back to Severus is brilliant! I'm really glad he mom left him the memory necklace. I wonder how she did it without her wand. Maybe after Severus' dad was gone she got another one. It must be hard for Hermione to have not taken him back to the cave. He was very pitiful. I wonder if he is blocking Raven's memories or if it is a result of the curse. This last memory of his mom after he killed his dad was good for him. Now maybe he can forgive her. The more he forgives the other people who loved him but weren't perfect, the more he will be able to forgive himself.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
I admit I was surprised that Severus didn't finish. However, this is great story telling. It will turn out well, I think. I hope the Weasely's keep quiet. Maybe only Aurthur and Ginny should be there until Severus finishes the spell. It would be less pressure, I think. Maybe Hermione needs to give him permission to love his best friend's son. Acknowledge that he loved Lily and it's OK to keep the good memories. I understand his guilt, but Peter Pettigrew is the friend who really betrayed them to Voldemort. Severus was the one who had them hidden. When he told Voldemort the prophesy he didn't know it would be about Lily's son, did he? I can't remember. I think Lily has forgiven him. If she knew that her life and Jame's were given so that her son could defeat Voldemort, I think she would have been willing to make that sacrafice. She was fighting Voldemort too. If she hadn't died for Harry, Harry would not have been able to defeat the Dark Lord. She also helped defeat Voldemort by her sacrifice. I'm certain Severus has never looked at it that way.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Great job! Just enough angst to make it exciting but not so much as to make it too stressful for a weary soul. I'm really enjoying this story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
I don't understand why they have decided not to make love at Hogwartz until after Harry is free. What am I missing? I'm really happy about his encounter with Neville. That's a healing for Neville too. His fear of Severus has been painful. He is such a good boy. He and Luna do really match. I'm so happy for them both. The Gypsy experience was a great chapter. Thanks.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
I'm having a wonderful time reading this story. I should go to bed or I will regret it. My health requires I get enough rest or I have flare ups. At least I can go to sleep with singing heart now.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Kisses, kisses!!!! I didn't think he could keep away from her until Harry was fixed. It's all good. She needed it and he needed it now they will need eachother. I knows she made love to him even if he doesn't think he made love to her. If he was worried about her loving Ravan instead of him I think some of his worries can be laid to rest. It can only get better now. I feel it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Hermione is doing a good job.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
I suppose she can't ask him to forgive her can she? She doesn't know he stood outside the door, but she knows he kissed the daylights out of her. I think that before much time goes by she needs to sincerely apologize without being overly emotional, but say she respect his wishes if he wants to continue as if the kisses never happened. It seems like the adult thing to do. To ignore it would be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
There are too many chapters left for this not to get better. Hermione needs to somehow show him that she didn't love Raven just to get Harry back. She needs to give him the memories she and Raven made. She also needs to give him the necklace. Some careful way she needs to let him know that she read his jounals and watched the memories with Raven and that she knew all those things about him but still fell in love with him. Maybe she should write him a letter and tell him, but promise never to bring it up again unless he does first. She can promise to just be a collegue and a friend no matter what he decides. And let him know she will always love him no matter what he does. Then just be there for him. I also wouldn't say a word about Harry unless he did. After he wakes Harry, he will see that she cares for him even after he does what she wants and that she isn't just using him. I bet he can't last until the end of the potion they have to prepare. Well, at least a little of the real him will break loose I think.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
I thik I might have waited in the cave for a while in case he came back if I was her. If I was her I might wait at Spinner's End. In fact, I wouldn't be at all surprised if that is where he went. But I guess that would be invading his personal space too much. I think I might send the memories there and leave them for him in plain sight. I believe he would look at them. I would also leave the necklace with the memories and the journal. If I ddin't hear from him in a couple of weeks I would check there then back at the cave. Now that she knows where it is, she can find it again.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
I'm sure he'll get over this.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)