Chapter 50
Chapter 50 of 50
gersknightladyHaving fled the Wizarding World, Hermione comes face to face with her past.
ReviewedOne minute Hermione was riding away on a horse safe in Severus' arms, and then they were suddenly in the snow. She was wrapped in a thick white fur cloak, and the entrance of the lair was looming in front of them.
She laughed when she saw Grendel at the entrance; he was wearing a top-hat on his head and a bow tie around his neck, both magically held on by a spell.
Severus swung down off the back of the horse and reached up to her. His hands slipped around her waist as he helped her off the horse. She realized her feet were now clad in thick, soft leather boots.
She looked at Severus with surprise and pleasure, and she was stunned by the look on his face. He looked so very happy. His eyes sparkled with glee as he held out his hand and led her to the entrance.
Grendel bowed low, and if that beast with all his teeth could smile, Hermione swore he just had.
She hugged his neck, "It's good to see you, Grendel." He licked her face and then headed into the cave. They followed. Hermione was wondering why Severus hadn't just used a Portkey to transport them into the lair when her mouth dropped open with a gasp.
"Severus!"
The many crystal formations shone like diamonds. There were candles floating throughout the cave, lighting the beauty of the crystal. Colors of the rainbow glanced off everything, making it a virtual world of color and light. The candlelight also warmed the cave, sending gentle, warm breezes around them like soft, warm blankets. Severus helped Hermione out of her beautiful fur cloak; with a wave of his hand, he created a small dance floor for them that was like a frozen pond. He took her hand as soft music played, and they danced slow and close, their bodies a single entity moving in sync to the music.
Grendel yipped and they turned to look at him fondly. He was dancing to the music with happiness.
Severus turned Hermione's face back to his, their lips met, and they kissed gently. Their hands caressed each other's faces, shoulders, and backs. Severus finally slipped an arm around Hermione, and they walked slowly through the cave. It was no longer the cold, lifeless cave it had been. Hermione could hear water before they came to a pond with water coming from a wall above, creating a waterfall. It was a replica of the pond she and Raven had swam in, with thick rich plant life around the rim and flowers blooming.
"Oh, Severus, it's wonderful. How did you do all this and when? You've been busy all week."
He squirmed a little. "I asked Dobby to help. I described what I wanted, and he made it happen. I wish I could have done it myself."
"It doesn't matter; you had it done. It comes from your heart," she whispered against his lips and gave him a soft, warm kiss.
"Come, we will bathe tomorrow in this pond; there is more to see," he said as he took her hand and led her further into the cave.
Grendel walked before them like a guide. He was so excited with the changes in his home that he bounced here and there, unable to hold in his happiness. There was a forest of trees next and pathways through the greenery. Rails lined the edge of a deep chasm, making it safer to pass by. The air was warm, fresh, and clean with flowers and real fruit trees, making it like a Garden of Eden.
"You are a romantic at heart. This is too much," she said, hugging him to her.
Finally they reached the wall with the hidden door.
Severus said, "Press your hand to the wall, Hermione."
She reached out and touched the wall. This time the wall shimmered, and a large oak door formed. Severus grabbed the doorknob and pushed the door open.
Hermione gasped. The inside was no longer a rough cave with boxes, treasure, furniture, and potion ingredients. Instead it was like a luxury hotel room in some posh resort. There was a living room with thick, warm carpet and a fireplace with a white, fur rug in front of the roaring fire.
When Hermione glanced at him seductively, Severus felt himself harden from her look. He took her in his arms and kissed her, his tongue dancing with hers a moment, and then he dragged himself away.
"Come see the rest, quickly!" he said with a laugh. "I can hardly contain my need for you, my wife."
Hermione turned to Grendel, gave him a pat on the head and whispered to him, "Guard duty."
Grendel bowed again and then went happily through the heavy door that closed behind him. He was quite happy to go frolic in his new jungle.
Severus cocked an eyebrow at Hermione. "You don't want to see the rest of the place? The bedroom is magnificent and so is the bathroom."
"Later," she whispered against his lips. "I want you now, Severus."
He bowed, swinging his hat off his head and letting it fly across the room. Neither of them saw it land. Severus guided Hermione to the soft thick white rug before the blazing fire, and they fell laughing with the joy of just being fully and completely married. He kissed her with such desire that she felt weak as she pressed herself against him. Severus' lips found her neck and then her shoulder, and he kissed a path over her bare shoulders and slipped the straps of her gown down her arms.
Hermione's hands worked to push the coat way from his shoulders and arms, letting it slide off behind him. She quickly undid his shirt and pressed her lips against his chest. Trailing her tongue around one of his nipples caused him to shiver, and Hermione smiled against his skin as he groaned with pleasure.
Severus loosened her hair letting it fall in cascades over her bare shoulders. He buried his hands into her hair and held her lightly against him as she kissed her way over his chest. Feeling her hands at his belt, he helped her undo the buttons there and then he pulled her dress over her head. His hand cupped one of her breasts gently and he kneaded it, thumbing the nipple into a hard little nub. Hermione pressed herself harder against his hand. As their tongues danced alternately with kisses on each other bodies and their fingers caressed each other almost reverently. With a flick of Severus fingers the rest of their clothing vanished.
Severus let her down gently, and followed her, covering her body with his. His lips went to her breasts, she buried her fingers in his thick, soft hair and held his head gently against her, urging him on. Her leg curled around him on one side, her foot caressed his leg. She could feel him rock hard against her thigh, and she slid her hand along his chest and down to his stomach until her fingers closed over the hard shaft. He drew a deep breath against her breast, moving his hips to press against her hand.
One hand slid to his neck and down his back, as she urged him to join her. She called out with her mind and found his thoughts there ready to join hers. She felt wrapped in such incredible warmth and love. She sent her love to him in return and knew that his eyes stung with tears. Full, complete overwhelming love was still hard for him to fathom. Then he moved and slid inside of her, a quick full stroke that filled her and caused her to groan with pleasure.
He began to slowly move in and out, drawing nearly all the way out before thrusting deep into her once again. Her legs wrapped around him, and she held him tightly against her as her hands traced over his back and then his buttocks as they moved, drawing him in and out. As she felt herself climaxing, she cried out his name, and he called out hers as they fell over the top.
They clung together and lay side by side with their legs entwined, their arms holding each other close. "Mrs. Snape, you're amazing," Severus whispered to her.
"Mr. Snape, so are you," she whispered lovingly as she kissed him again.
They cuddled together for a while, both exhausted from the days events.
Severus called, "Accio cape," and Hermione's white, fur cloak covered them in a cloud of warmth as they drifted off to sleep.
Hermione woke wrapped in unbelievable warmth, comfort, and contentedness. When she opened her eyes, she found Severus' face inches from hers. She kissed the tip of his nose softly, and he stirred, opening his eyes.
"Come," he said, smiling at her. Getting to his feet, he extended his hand and led her through the room to the bedroom door. Inside was a room with a four-poster, king-size bed that had thick bed posts carved with intricate designs. The posts held up a beautiful canopy. The bed was the show piece in the room. The wood was dark and heavy. The bedside tables, even more intricately carved, were mirrored. There was a fireplace along one wall. Lamps designed like Muggle electric lamps lit the room with soft candlelight. There were lounge chairs and wonderful shelves of books along the walls on the other side of the massive room.
"All the comforts of home," she called, pulling from him, running to look at the spines of the books. She looked like a naked wood nymph. "It's wonderful," she murmured, trying to take the splendor in.
She looked back at him, and he took her breath away. He stood tall and proud, not even trying to hide his nakedness. His body was strong and tight: broad chest, arms thick with muscles, narrow hips, and long legs with muscles all in the right places.
She left the books and walked over to him, drawing him against her.
"It's all so perfect and wonderful."
"You don't mind that we didn't go to a real resort or private island?"
She took his face in her hands pressed herself against him and slid her foot up his leg. "You won't hear me complain, Severus. This is wonderful. I only needed a private place to be alone with you. This is perfect, and I got to see Grendel. I can't tell you how cute he looks in that hat." She laughed. "He's like a person now. Like a family member."
"He was my only family for years," he whispered and a tinge of sadness colored his voice.
"I know, my love, and he's so wonderful. I'm glad you had him with you."
He picked her up and carried her through a door across the room. Inside was a midnight blue, marble bathroom with a deep, Jacuzzi-style tub so big it was like a small pool with steps and he walked with her right into the pool.
It felt heavenly. He took bottles of soaps and shampoos and shampooed her hair and washed her body with a soft sponge. She in turn did the same thing for him. They laid against one side of the pool and kissed occasionally and talked.
Severus told her, "I couldn't imagine my life would turn out like this when I was digging in trashcans less than a year ago. Sometimes, I feel so blessed that I can hardly contain the emotion, and I do not want to cry all the time." He leaned against her shoulders as she leaned on the edge of the Jacuzzi. She'd braided her hair up out of the way. He bent and pressed a kiss against her shoulder.
"Severus, crying doesn't make you weak in my eyes; it makes you stronger. I know you have a million tears inside you that were not shed over the years. You stuffed them all inside, and it's okay to feel. A lot of what you are feeling is happiness, and it's okay to cry when you're happy, too."
"Sometimes the emotion will not be denied." He let out a low, reluctant, nervous laugh. "I have a horror of really breaking down in front of Harry and begging him to forgive me for the way I treated him all those years."
Hermione turned in his arms and put her arms around him. "Let that go, Severus. He already has forgiven you. You both have finally begun to heal. If you have to ask forgiveness of him, he will understand and not think less of you. I think he's already beginning to love you. He sees you so differently now. He's a man now, and he's let go of the childish anger he had. This is the life and the happiness you both always deserved."
"Deserve... I doubt that, forgiven and a gift from God is more like it," Severus admitted.
"You really have embraced faith in God haven't you?" She led him out of the tub, and they slipped into thick robes and went to sit cross-legged on the bed.
"Yes, Hermione, I have. Harry's, Lily's, and Grendel's sacrifices have only given me glimpses of the love God had for us." He took her hand and kissed her palm. "You loving me is the icing on the cake. I am a forgiven man. Jesus lives in my heart, Hermione."
"Thats good," she said, "becasue he lives in mine, too."
Severus drew her down into the bed, lying on his back his pulled her across his chest and kissed her. "Hermione?" he asked after a long quiet minute, looking up into her face.
"Yes, Severus," she replied, looking into his dark brown eyes.
"Do you want to have a baby someday?" he asked, almost afraid that she didn't.
Hermione felt her heart beat in her throat. What did he want her to say? Yes or no? She took a deep breath and said, "Yes, Severus. Nothing would make me happier than to give you a child."
He kissed her and said, "If it's a boy, I'd like to name him..."
They whispered together, "Raven."
The end...or perhaps the beginning of many more adventures to come.
I most want to thank Lisa, my beta. Her steadfast work and dedication to my stories has been such a blessing to me. She has hung in here for me, probably close to a year now. She even wants to beta more of my work. For that I am very grateful. Thank you so much, Lisa. The completion of this story would have never happened without you.
Becky, I want to thank you for your many kind words, encouragement, and support. The Quibbler page is wonderful, also the wedding and honeymoon manip frames and captions. The special effects on the "dance" manip is perfect.
beaweasely2, I want to thank you for teaching me so many things during the first three-fourths of this story. You helped me to improve my writing a great deal, and I learned about punctuation, too. I was a difficult student.
I hope you all enjoyed the manips I did for the last couple chapters. I thank you, all, for the many reviews and thoughtful comments.
TPP Ladies, you put up with a lot from me. I appreciate your help and patient. Thank you SO much. We made it to the end!
I have written a "five years" in the future One-Shot. It should be up soon following Chapter 50.
I am only borrowing these characters. No infrigement of JKR's rights intended.
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I noticed a couple of small things: you used aide when it should be aid, and timber when it should be timbre.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I appreciate the heads-up but I could not find Timber/timbre. I thought it would be where he sings Harry to live and yet it's not there. I re-read the chapter twice and it didn't jump out a me.so much for your help.Thank
It probably doesn't matter at this time, but I've noticed a lot of errors: spelling and grammar.Also, there were Indians in Romania?I am enjoying your story however.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well, if there are a lot of errors they have slipped by the TPP ladies. If you want to send them to me I can run them by them and see if they can be fixed. The chapters go through quite a stringent process. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I assume you loved that chapter. LOL I'm glad.
Is he so thoughtful because he is magical or because he is Severus Snape? I can't even get my husband to initiate ad take me on a date and I've been married 33 years. Our last date was to go see the last Deathly Hallows and I planned that one. He is a loving stick in the mud.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure. I think once Severus Snape loves and is loved back. I think the whole world would open for him.Well at least hes loving. It could be worse :)
It looks like Grendal is rejuivinated by children. That's a wonderful idea. I hurt so bad tonight I can hardly think. I wish I had a pet like him. My feet feel like they have been held in burning coals and then put in clamps. I can't sleep and I'm dreading work, tomorrow. I have peripheral neuropathy from unknown causes. Some days are worse than others.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm sorry you are in pain. Its been a week or so since you wrote this. I hope your health has improved. I went on a nice vacation and am now back. I hope things are better now. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
A very Happy Chritstmas. Severus is 10 times more thoughtful than most guys. He bought her a wedding dress, how cute.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL yes, he has become quite considerate. Love has opened up his world.
Very sweet.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) might have to go look at the chapter since youdidn't give me clues LOL
The cauldron ring was a brilliant idea! It is very original. And, I am so glad Xenophilius is there! I really like him and am so glad Luna gets to have her dad. I'm glad to see Moody still alive too. Too bad for the Weaselys Fred isn't here. How did you decide who to keep alive and who to leave passed away? I have no criticism on the matter, just observing and wondering about the process of deciding who to bring back into the story. Great chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Not sure how I chose who lived and who died. I didn't like Freds death anymore than the others but I had to leave some war casulties and I guess he was one of the first so I left it that way. I really didn't think it out much.Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Seeing Severus tonight at the ball should help Ginny understand better what Hermione sees in Severus. But she is a girl and it is normal for her not to be attracted to men old enough to be her father. I, on the other hand, have always been attracted to older men. I've been inordinately "boy/man crazy" since I was literally 5 years old. LOL. My first crush was Davey Jones from the Monkeys. Allowing Harry to see the memory of his mother and Harry's mother is extremely generous. That was very very personal. I wonder how Severus will react seeing it a second time? It changed him and gave him back his memories of Raven. He was extremely emotional afterwards. I wonder if he will be able to be OK when seeing it with Harry. I understand that he and Hermione share way more with one another than anyone else does because of Severus' special needs to see Hermione's mind and Hermione seeing his pensive memories. They are comfortable with it now, but most people would feel more like Ginny does about it. I know Severus probably wants Harry to see how much he was loved as a baby. However, Harry will also be hearing his mom say she let Severus down. He will surely have conflicting feelings about that. It won't be easy for either of them to see. I'm sure Severus wants to let Harry know that he can consider him a godfather. I totally trust Harry, but I've learned in life that you can't trust very many people with too much personal information. They are only human and are bound to veiw that information from a position of thier own self interest. They are bound to let someone down even if they are sorry later. But most of the time they aren't sorry because don't even realize how hurtful they were or don't care. Severus will need to find a happy medium regarding who he trusts his most tender feelings with. Changing the subject, I wonder what Minerva thinks about Hermione and Severus snogging in front of all the students.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I adored the Monkees when I was a kid. I got to see them last year in Bakersfield on their last tour together. Davey was so full of energy and danced all over the stage. He was a joy to see again.Thats was a huge step for Severus, sharing the memory. True people who haven't shared someoes thoughts might think it an invasion. Ginny doesn't know the love and trust they have developed for eachother.Maybe she would think "its about time" LOL... But then shes a propper o'l biddy. (said very fondly) :) I honestly don'tremember how I wrote it.
Great chapter!!! Everyone is coming along quite well. I love happy stories. I don't know why sad stories get so much credit. Entertainment should take one away from the pain of real life in my opinion. I think that is why many of us got hooked on Harry Potter initially when it was still fun and magic was amazing, even though we were adults. Then it went down hill and I only kept reading because I cared about the characters and felt the need to see how she resolved so much conflict, pain and betrayal. I kept hoping for things to improve, but they only got worse. I hated the last book. I hated the ending too. She killed too many people she didn't need to kill. And especially if she had to kill Severus she did it in such an un-Snapish way. Severus Snape would have been prepared for Nagini. She'd made him too smart to die that way. She also made Hermione too intelligent to be able to stay with Ron forever. She would have grown past him, though she would always love him. They don't make a believable adult couple. Your story is 100 times better. Thank you for not letting Doby be dead. That was just too much death for me. I'm sorry Ron has to be dead, but I understand it better than killing Severus and leaving him with such an unresolved tragedy of a life. I wonder if, in her mind, he met Dumbledore on the other side the way Harry did. I know publishers make you change a story a lot. At least the result left a lot of us the drive and strong need to set Severus Snape's story right. We SS fans felt the need to make more sense of his death. I truly didn't see it coming until the last story. I kept waiting for her to reveal his truth, and I thought she would give him some closure, some compensation for his suffering. Although she showed us why he protected Harry and that he wasn't evil, which were huge questions; she left him dead in a stupid way and with only pain, pain and more pain taken to the grave. Her story left me completely unsatisfied.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your emotia cons are so entertaining LOL. I was cringing about the mob but see it's not directed at me wheew.I agree with you the cannon books leave a lot to be desired. Why did Harry have to lose every one and everything that he loved. Even his owl. Its a wonder Ginny and Hagrid surived.I also agree with you one the HG?RW pairing. It has never worked for me. I hated having them together at the end. They were polar opposites and would have never stayed together.I think allof us who wrote HG/SS fic found the books lacking. That's why we write... we need to give him a better ending.
Quite beautiful. I'm glad everyone got to feel Severus' song of love. This will do much to make everyone feel closer to Severus. I hope Harry can love him too. I know I said that in the last review. I know Harry is a good and kind boy with a lot of love, so I'm sure he will be able to. What about the elder wand? Breaking the edler wand was a big deal regarding Harry. I wonder if you include this in your story some how so we know he did break it, since he didn't have a chance to in this version of how he killed Voldemort. It's OK if you didn't, though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm not sure when I wrote this how aware I was of the elder wand. I don't think it's included in this story at all. The fnal moview came after, sure I'd read the books but since it was such a different take on the end it wasn't included.
I'm glad he found out Lily didn't hate him. It must have been terrible to watch the grief of his mother and Lily at losing him to the Dark Lord. But he must have forgiven them so that he was able to remember Raven's life and his love for Hermione. Hermione will be fine. Now he will be able to love Harry like a godson. I hope Harry can love him back.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the memory seemed necessary tohelp free Severus from his past and give him some freedom to embrace his future.I hope Harry can too. :)
The idea of giving Raven's memories back to Severus is brilliant! I'm really glad he mom left him the memory necklace. I wonder how she did it without her wand. Maybe after Severus' dad was gone she got another one. It must be hard for Hermione to have not taken him back to the cave. He was very pitiful. I wonder if he is blocking Raven's memories or if it is a result of the curse. This last memory of his mom after he killed his dad was good for him. Now maybe he can forgive her. The more he forgives the other people who loved him but weren't perfect, the more he will be able to forgive himself.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you found some things to like in this chapter. Maybe she really did have some wandless magic or she did get another one (good observation that I missed).opps I got ahead of my self. I'm supposed to be in the teen chapters.
I admit I was surprised that Severus didn't finish. However, this is great story telling. It will turn out well, I think. I hope the Weasely's keep quiet. Maybe only Aurthur and Ginny should be there until Severus finishes the spell. It would be less pressure, I think. Maybe Hermione needs to give him permission to love his best friend's son. Acknowledge that he loved Lily and it's OK to keep the good memories. I understand his guilt, but Peter Pettigrew is the friend who really betrayed them to Voldemort. Severus was the one who had them hidden. When he told Voldemort the prophesy he didn't know it would be about Lily's son, did he? I can't remember. I think Lily has forgiven him. If she knew that her life and Jame's were given so that her son could defeat Voldemort, I think she would have been willing to make that sacrafice. She was fighting Voldemort too. If she hadn't died for Harry, Harry would not have been able to defeat the Dark Lord. She also helped defeat Voldemort by her sacrifice. I'm certain Severus has never looked at it that way.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it was a shock to him and it starled him enough to make him lose his concentration spoiling the spell. He will come back. No I don;t think he thought at first it would be Lily's son. I don;t think he would have told Voldy if he had known it. I think Lily has too. Your right she would have given her life for the cause. I never thought of it that way either and so we see they were more alike than we thought.Thanks so much for the thoughts and the review.
Great job! Just enough angst to make it exciting but not so much as to make it too stressful for a weary soul. I'm really enjoying this story.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don;t like a lot ofnangst either and I hate dragging things out. I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story. If my favortie of all the ones i've done.
I don't understand why they have decided not to make love at Hogwartz until after Harry is free. What am I missing? I'm really happy about his encounter with Neville. That's a healing for Neville too. His fear of Severus has been painful. He is such a good boy. He and Luna do really match. I'm so happy for them both. The Gypsy experience was a great chapter. Thanks.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well hey I really don;t know why i amde that decision. Being un-Married and it being a school for children is probably the reason. Maybe they just need it to be more formal. Finish up what they set out to do and then see where they stood with eachother. Who knows This was written years ago lol.I'm glad you liked the Gypsies.
I'm having a wonderful time reading this story. I should go to bed or I will regret it. My health requires I get enough rest or I have flare ups. At least I can go to sleep with singing heart now.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad it's making yur life happy but don;t jeprodize your health it will stillbe there the next day. But I know what you mean Ive been awake late hours reading good fics.
Kisses, kisses!!!! I didn't think he could keep away from her until Harry was fixed. It's all good. She needed it and he needed it now they will need eachother. I knows she made love to him even if he doesn't think he made love to her. If he was worried about her loving Ravan instead of him I think some of his worries can be laid to rest. It can only get better now. I feel it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes Kisses, you know a man and his needs. But she had the same needs. It was a chnace to connect and show him she can be with him as well. Thats she want's to be with him and it's now all Raven. Thanks for hanging in there :)
Hermione is doing a good job.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you I'm glad she is :)
I suppose she can't ask him to forgive her can she? She doesn't know he stood outside the door, but she knows he kissed the daylights out of her. I think that before much time goes by she needs to sincerely apologize without being overly emotional, but say she respect his wishes if he wants to continue as if the kisses never happened. It seems like the adult thing to do. To ignore it would be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well I'm not sure what scene yur talking about but it will get worked out. She's alot younger and also insecure and some times her youth can get the better of her. She can be immature.
There are too many chapters left for this not to get better. Hermione needs to somehow show him that she didn't love Raven just to get Harry back. She needs to give him the memories she and Raven made. She also needs to give him the necklace. Some careful way she needs to let him know that she read his jounals and watched the memories with Raven and that she knew all those things about him but still fell in love with him. Maybe she should write him a letter and tell him, but promise never to bring it up again unless he does first. She can promise to just be a collegue and a friend no matter what he decides. And let him know she will always love him no matter what he does. Then just be there for him. I also wouldn't say a word about Harry unless he did. After he wakes Harry, he will see that she cares for him even after he does what she wants and that she isn't just using him. I bet he can't last until the end of the potion they have to prepare. Well, at least a little of the real him will break loose I think.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There is a lot of fear in the man and insecurities. He can't beleive someone can love him and he has to have his time to come to terms with what Raven and Hermione had. Give him some time. He want's someone tolove him for who he is and he just has to see she can be the one.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Oh dear what happened here LOL
I thik I might have waited in the cave for a while in case he came back if I was her. If I was her I might wait at Spinner's End. In fact, I wouldn't be at all surprised if that is where he went. But I guess that would be invading his personal space too much. I think I might send the memories there and leave them for him in plain sight. I believe he would look at them. I would also leave the necklace with the memories and the journal. If I ddin't hear from him in a couple of weeks I would check there then back at the cave. Now that she knows where it is, she can find it again.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she can. But she's afraid right now and waiting it out to see what will happen. I think she would act soon if nothing happens. He would only toss her out on her ear.... he needs time.
I'm sure he'll get over this.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a good attitude :)