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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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gersknightlady
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
Reviews for Raven
I'm loving Grendel! What a great idea for Severus to have a hidden retreat for himself complete with a pet companion. And it's really nice to know he had a place to escape from the madness from time to time. It's just odd to see he selected a similar location to the DE's and Voldemort himself. This was a sweet chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when we get our Severus back. Raven is nice but I miss the power and complexity of Severus Snape. I hope we get to see him soon.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad you liked Grendel. Yes they are a bit similar but I think Severus' lair is quite a bit higher in the mountains like in a frozen waste land that no one lives even near. I envision Voldermort's Lair on lower mountains where there would actually be seasons even though its a remote area.
I don't think you'll be too disappointed, I hope :)
More soon.
Very interesting, Snape did a good job protecting himself.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, Raven did. He's worked on a group of specific spells dictated by Severus diary. I don't think he knew too many others :)
Thanks.
Wonderful update as usual, this is one magnificient story!!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, thats a wonderful review. Id say close to 15 more chapters or more to go :) I'm working on 32 now.
I love Grendel.great chappy..So glad the made their ownPensieve for Sev..Need more so post soon..5/5
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, I love Grendel too. He's kind of like the terrible creature in the new Star Trek movie but with big puppy dog eyes. Chapter 22 is rather long and hopefully a roller coaster ride.
Hang on to your seat.
hope to have it int he Queue in a day or two.
I hope Raven can be integrated into Severus. Because I'm going to miss him quite a bit if he is gone. I love Grendel
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I love Raven too. I'm going to miss him when this story is done. Glad you like Grendel(read my preview review reply). Thank you for reading :)
OMGOSH, OK In tears now...I love this chapter, and I do hope Severus remembers his time with Hermione when he was Raven.. Oh I can't wait until you update again...I love it! Well done...
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, I'm so glad that my writing can bring such responses from you. You also touch me with all your well thought out reviews. The next chapter is very long and hopefully a roller coaster ride :)
They share such a sweet love. I can only now hope for a 'Happy Ever After', I guess!I loved the idea that Severus dried himself and Hermione with a soft piece of muslin ... and then carried her off to bed - I think I floated dreamily on that thought for quite a while! :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Sigh, I'm so glad you liked the love scene. I write them for myself too. (of course I add a little more imagination in my head)I'm just not one for writing graphic sex. This is such a wonderful story. Im glad it floated into my head. It's a priviledge to share it with others.
That was sooo good! The word imagery and the creativity of the cave and Pensieve memories were just incredible. Very nice ending, too. I can't wait to see what happens next!Livvy
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks so much, I'm glad yoou are enjoying the story so much I hope to have another chapter posted by the weekend, but then again its a holiday weekend so maybe next week. It's a nice long fast moving chapter.
oh my god... I'm nervous for them too. However, I have faith you won't let their love die.. and might even make Severus a happy bunny too!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad you have faith in me. I won't really say much more than I love romantic stories too :) relax.
The next chapters long and exciting, I hope.
Grendel sounds fascinating. A typical gift from Hagrid.So now it seems that their journey is almost at its end. I am on the edge of my seat as to what they will find in Voldemort's cave. It was a good idea for them to store a few memories. Snape may need those to be convinced of his love for the "insufferable know-it-all."
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks so glad you liked Grendel. The jouney to find the lair yes, but we are far from the story's end. I'm writing chapter 32 right now :) Don't want to give anything away so I'll leave it at that :)But your right they might help.
*sigh* that was so lovely! thanks so much
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you :) glad yoou enjoyed it.
I think we're all scared for them. I especially like Severus/Raven's childlike attitude. It would be ashame for him to lose all of that.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
You know you just gave me a thought, Hermione is going to have to learn to love Severus too. Right now, if Raven's no longer there she will have to love Severus if she want's to stay with him. Thanks for the review.
I really like hearing Minerva's thoughts on Sev's past and what ment to her.It makes her seem human.I always thought of her as a cold fish.It's nice to see her show some warmth. I am really hoping that you see your way clear to mix both Raven and Sev together. Thanks for the great up date,it always makes my day to read a new chappy! once again 5 out of 5!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked that. I presonaly hope it works out that way too, but these stories have a life of their own so we both have to wait to see :)
Thanks for such a high rating I'm humbled.
Hopefully they can find Severus without losing Raven! :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I hope so too Sunny, thanks so much for all your reviews.
Oh, if Raven lost his memory, that would be almost tragic for the couple... Keep updating, please... *****
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Chapter 18 is with the Beta right now hope to have it added soon. Thanks so much.
Their relationship continues to be so sweet; it just makes me smile to think of it! I'm also very glad that Minerva approves so much and has confided in Hermione of both her affection for Severus and of how she will back her if and when 'Raven' gets his memory back.Keep up the good work on this lovely story! : -)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank yoou, I am working hard to egt this story wrapped up this summer. I'm so glad you are enjoying it. Its fun to write.
I was a little behind on my reading and I just now read the last three chapters. This story really pulls at the heart strings. Raven shock over seeing himself in the penseive was a great scene. The task of finding Voldemort's lair appears insurmountable. Then there is the worry of will Raven's persona be remembered. You are doing a wonderful job with building the drama and suspense.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I appreciate yoour thooughts on the story. I hope that I can continue to bring you a story that you will enjoy.
Your writing is so sad and hopeful at the same time. Love it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well thanks you. I've aways seen Snape as a rather tragic character. One who deserved so much more to his life. I'm glad you are enjoying Raven.
This is such a lovely chapter. I love the way Raven and Hermione both want to insure that in some way he will remember his present life and his feelings for the witch now in his arms. The Ursilor Cave is a beautiful place and was perfect for their first venture into the caves to get the feel of them. I so happy that Minerva is happy for the two of them and the love they obviously share.I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what they do next.Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much. I'm so glad yoou are enjoying it. I'm afraid future chapter caves might be a little less identifiable. Research is not my strong point LOL. I want very much for Raven to be remembered too. I hope that I can do the idea justic.
Always Harry. Sigh.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Sorry if thats disappointing to you but that what HP is all about. Harry. Believe me Raven will be well care for.
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
Not disappointed, but it IS always Harry. It makes a whole lot of sense with your premise, and I'm glad there is a way to cure him, but I'm also glad you say that Raven will be well cared for.
I adore your story so much - what a wonderful, gripping plot.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much,what a kind review :)
I love caves, the rock formations... and the creatures that live there - like exploring another planet. I would have had just as much fun as Raven in their first cave.But they must be so very careful. When they do find Voldemort's cave, I'm sure the booby-traps and pit-falls will await them at every turn!Interesting story line. I hope Raven retains some of his tenderness, or Snape realizes that he can bring out his tender side now that Voldy has been defeated, when they finally give Snape back his memories.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I've always loved the idea of caves but have only been in a few caves with tours. They will be very careful. I hope Raven retains some of who he was too. I've yet to write that chapter. It's a mystery to me too right now :)
Thanks so much for reading and for the review.
Wow! The passion between them is palpable even without the dramatic descriptions! Brilliantly done!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much. I'm gone over Hermione and Snape. They are even on my cell phone screen :)I just love Raven. I feel privilaged that he asked me to write his story :)
How nice that Minerva will support the relationship. Hopefully Severus will be able to integrate both personalities with minimal difficulties.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
We will both have to wait to see. I haven't writen that part yet. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Raven is near and dear to my heart.
so sad. but if anyone can heal him, hermione can. thanks so much
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think she can. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Your welcome :)