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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
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That was quite poignant. I feel like they do, actually. I like Raven, and I hope Snape doesn't lose him.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, I hope he doesn't either.
Another great chappie! I can understand Raven's fear of Snape not remembering him as he is here with Hermione. All he knows about his former self is that he was feared and disliked by many who knew him, but maybe they will be able to find some members of the Order who knew the hard working, noble wizard who did the things no one else could do to insure the downfall of Voldemort.I think the talk they had about making decisions and working together was time well spent. Now Raven knows how much Hermione cares and that she worries about "losing" him, and now that she knows he wants to be able to retain the man he is now, they can make the choices about what to do together.I'm looking forward to their "treasure hunt" in Spinner's End, and hope they find some good surprises to help them on their quest. I can hardly wait for your next update!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank yo so much for all your kind thoughts. I'm glad you liked their talk and working together. I want them to begin to become equals. Snape needs to feel in charge at times and not led around by the nose.
Perfect, Jeannie. I wonder if Raven thought anything he read in the book felt familiar? I know he will eventually have to come to terms with the wizard he used to be and the things that happened, but I hope he will not forget the man he became between the first and second wars. He will need Hermione's help to know the truth about himself because "Writers never got everything right."
I very much like the way he expresses his growing affection for Hermione... the kisses are to die for! And I loved his reaction when the pain went away and seeing his wound healed.
When he was able to relax and perform Wingardium Leviosa flawlessly, I cheered! He even thought to ask her about doing the spell without his wand. I have to think he is beginning to have a bit of recall, even if it is subconsciously. LOL! "Like a child riding a broom for the first time." I would have loved to have been able to see his face. What fun!
This was a wonderful chapter! Thank you. Now I'm off to read the next one.Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad you liked the kisses, baby steps first and then leaps later.
Thanks so much for all your kind thoughts, you write the best indepth reviews. :)
LOL Hangover are a b!tch when you don't have the right potions! I hope it's good to be home for him.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I really am not around drinkers, not sure I adressed that in the next chapter LOL. But your right they must be.
It must be terrible to not remember your own identity.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
It would be, thanks for your comment.
I'm surprised the Apparition didn't jog his memory too. But I am glad that he had a little memory. I wonder if he's dreaming of the Slytherin snake or Nagini.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Good question wish I'd thought of that :)
Thanks
Little by little as Severus learns about his past, he seems to find accepting that Hermione can do magic more and more plausible.I can't wait to see what happens next!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, hoping to get 6 up soon :)
Severus has suffered so much, and now he has come to rely on alcohol to manage his pain and his sadness. He and Hermione both have their work cut out for them, and it will be a long haul, but I think they can help each other!Good chapter!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank for commenting on each chapter I really appreciate it.
Raven!Severus is in such pitiful circumstances. I'm happy that Hermione found him, but she really has her work cut out for her if she cannot jog his memory. Perhaps returning to Spinner's End will the catalyst he needs to remember!Well done!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
It's not so easy keep reading :) I'm working on Ch 15.
Thanks,
Oh nooooooo! Please tell me he didn't leave. She'll have to hurry back before he gets to far. Hopefully she will find her wand where she left it! With magic, she'll be able to help him, and he can help Harry. This is getting good!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL nice to see someone get into a story. I've enjoyed writing it so much.
Thanks
Great beginning! I'm looking forward to what awaits our hero and heroine. It can only get better!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
thank you :)
This is slowly but surely becoming one of my favourite stories. And mind you, I am not a big fan of SS/HG./M
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Kewllll I'm honored :) Hope you continue to enjoy it.
nice job - enjoying the interplay between them - keep up the great work!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, I'm loving the writing :)
Oh, yes, he is only human. He has feelings and he is even jalous :).Keep going like this.If you are already on chapter 15 why don't you post more often? This chapter was qhite short I red it in 1 min.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
The process to get from Beta through the validation takes time, You can only post 2 chapters at a time and then there are correction to make and after thats done they validate and post the chapter. Plus there atre many many other writers in line to have chapters posted. Since I'm posting two stories at the same time (the other which is done) It's taking time.
Thanks for reading, glad you like it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
The process to get from Beta through the validation takes time, You can only post 2 chapters at a time and then there are correction to make and after thats done they validate and post the chapter. Plus there atre many many other writers in line to have chapters posted. Since I'm posting two stories at the same time (the other which is done) It's taking time.
Thanks for reading, glad you like it.
Thank you so much for a great update, I loved that Severus had some memory of his past, even more pleased that Raven had something to call his own:-))
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. I hope to keep it coming :)
This continues to be good; it's very different. My heart goes out to Severus (and Hermione too for that matter.) I really hope his memory will start to return soon, although right at the moment I guess he's a 'nicer' version of his former self in many ways - certainly from Hermione's POV - and I can't help but wonder if all hell will break loose once he does get all his faculties back! :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Getting his memories back may take some time and since it's not written, it up in the air for both of us. :)
Glad you are enjoying this so much.
Thanks
Ahh... this is brilliant. I think he will start to remember more now he's home, but I hope he doesn't turn on Hermione when he memory fully returns!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Things may not be so easy. We will both have to wait to see how it works out :)
Thanks so much
Yay! He's cooperating :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL glad you are enjoying the story....more ot come.
great chapter! i can't wait to read more! so glad severus had a memory of that snake!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
He did didn't he...hummm have to go adjust what I wrote today :)Thanks
My new favorite story. Thanks for the update.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you ! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm working on Ch 15 right now.
perhaps things are comming back. sad his reaction to the news of his parents. great update. thanks so much
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, more to come soon :)
So pitiful, I feel so sorry for Severus. I hope he can regain his memory.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
He's got a long road ahead...
Hope you keep tuning in.
yay. they are in a real house instead of shack and box! now for some real food and hopefully some healing potions. thanks for updating.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Glad you enjoyed it, Thanks
i really can't wait to read more! this is great!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, Im so glad you are enjoying it.