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Potions Under Duress Raven
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Raven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 39

39: Chapter 38

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

60: Mr.

61: Mr.

62: Mr.

63: Mr.

Raven

gersknightlady

969 Reviews   |   969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 116,713 Words 63 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Poppy Pomfrey Dobby Original Character Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Alice Longbottom Frank Longbottom Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Eileen (Prince) Snape Lily (Evans) Potter Tobias Snape Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Luna Lovegood Percy Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Argus Filch Cho Chang Dean Thomas Katie Bell Kingsley Shacklebolt Lee Jordan Michael Corner Mrs. Norris Olympe Maxime Padma Patil Parvati Patil Roger Davies Susan Bones Terry Boot Xenophilius Lovegood Filius Flitwick Cedric Diggory Thorfinn Rowle

Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 39

Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 60: Mr.

Chapter 61: Mr.

Chapter 62: Mr.

Chapter 63: Mr.


About gersknightlady

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gersknightlady

Member Since 2008  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 343  |  915 Reviews Written  |  3,004 Review Responses

Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years.  I post SS/HG stories.

I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012)  It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house.  I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play. 


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10/10

blue artemis

That was quite poignant.  I feel like they do, actually.  I like Raven, and I hope Snape doesn't lose him.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much, I hope he doesn't either.

10/10

braye27

Another great chappie!  I can understand Raven's fear of Snape not remembering him as he is here with Hermione.  All he knows about his former self is that he was feared and disliked by many who knew him, but maybe they will be able to find some members of the Order who knew the hard working, noble wizard who did the things no one else could do to insure the downfall of Voldemort.I think the talk they had about making decisions and working together was time well spent.  Now Raven knows how much Hermione cares and that she worries about "losing" him, and now that she knows he wants to be able to retain the man he is now, they can make the choices about what to do together.I'm looking forward to their "treasure hunt" in Spinner's End, and hope they find some good surprises to help them on their quest.  I can hardly wait for your next update!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank yo so much for all your kind thoughts. I'm glad you liked their talk and working together. I want them to begin to become equals. Snape needs to feel in charge at times and not led around by the nose.

10/10

braye27

Perfect, Jeannie.  I wonder if Raven thought anything he read in the book felt familiar?  I know he will eventually have to come to terms with the wizard he used to be and the things that happened, but I hope he will not forget the man he became between the first and second wars.  He will need Hermione's help to know the truth about himself because "Writers never got everything right."

I very much like the way he expresses his growing affection for Hermione... the kisses are to die for!  And  I loved his reaction when the pain went away and seeing his wound healed. 

When he was able to relax and perform Wingardium Leviosa flawlessly, I cheered!  He even thought to ask her about doing the spell without his wand.  I have to think he is beginning to have a bit of recall, even if it is subconsciously.  LOL!  "Like a child riding a broom for the first time."  I would have loved to have been able to see his face.  What fun!

This was a wonderful chapter!  Thank you.  Now I'm off to read the next one.Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I'm glad you liked the kisses, baby steps first and then leaps later.

Thanks so much for all your kind thoughts, you write the best indepth reviews. :)

9/10

beaweasley2

LOL Hangover are a b!tch when you don't have the right potions!  I hope it's good to be home for him.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I really am not around drinkers, not sure I adressed that in the next chapter LOL. But your right they must be.

10/10

Maddie

It must be terrible to not remember your own identity.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

It would be, thanks for your comment.

0/10

debjunk

I'm surprised the Apparition didn't jog his memory too.  But I am glad that he had a little memory.  I wonder if he's dreaming of the Slytherin snake or Nagini.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Good question wish I'd thought of that :)

Thanks

10/10

braye27

Little by little as Severus learns about his past, he seems to find accepting that Hermione can do magic more and more plausible.I can't wait to see what happens next!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, hoping to get 6 up soon :)

10/10

braye27

Severus has suffered so much, and now he has come to rely on alcohol to manage his pain and his sadness.  He and Hermione both have their work cut out for them, and it will be a long haul, but I think they can help each other!Good chapter!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank for commenting on each chapter I really appreciate it.

10/10

braye27

Raven!Severus is in such pitiful circumstances.  I'm happy that Hermione found him, but she really has her work cut out for her if she cannot jog his memory.  Perhaps returning to Spinner's End will the catalyst he needs to remember!Well done!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

It's not so easy keep reading :) I'm working on Ch 15.

Thanks,

10/10

braye27

Oh nooooooo!  Please tell me he didn't leave.  She'll have to hurry back before he gets to far.  Hopefully she will find her wand where she left it!  With magic, she'll be able to help him, and he can help Harry.  This is getting good!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL nice to see someone get into a story. I've enjoyed writing it so much.

Thanks

10/10

braye27

Great beginning!  I'm looking forward to what awaits our hero and heroine.  It can only get better!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

thank you :)

0/10

morgaine_dulac

This is slowly but surely becoming one of my favourite stories. And mind you, I am not a big fan of SS/HG./M

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Kewllll I'm honored :) Hope you continue to enjoy it.

0/10

mom7knox

nice job - enjoying the interplay between them - keep up the great work!!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, I'm loving the writing :)

10/10

Jullsy

Oh, yes, he is only human. He has feelings and he is even jalous :).Keep going like this.If you are already on chapter 15 why don't you post more often? This chapter was qhite short I red it in 1 min.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

The process to get from Beta through the validation takes time, You can only post 2 chapters at a time and then there are correction to make and after thats done they validate and post the chapter. Plus there atre many many other writers in line to have chapters posted. Since I'm posting two stories at the same time (the other which is done) It's taking time.

Thanks for reading, glad you like it.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

The process to get from Beta through the validation takes time, You can only post 2 chapters at a time and then there are correction to make and after thats done they validate and post the chapter. Plus there atre many many other writers in line to have chapters posted. Since I'm posting two stories at the same time (the other which is done) It's taking time.

Thanks for reading, glad you like it.

0/10

sunny33

Well the accommodation is improving! :)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

:) yep

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for a great update, I loved that Severus had some memory of his past, even more pleased that Raven had something to call his own:-))

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. I hope to keep it coming :)

8/10

Sevvy

This continues to be good; it's very different. My heart goes out to Severus (and Hermione too for that matter.)  I really hope his memory will start to return soon, although right at the moment I guess he's a 'nicer' version of his former self in many ways - certainly from Hermione's POV - and I can't help but wonder if all hell will break loose once he does get all his faculties back! :-)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Getting his memories back may take some time and since it's not written, it up in the air for both of us. :)

Glad you are enjoying this so much.

Thanks

9/10

neelix

Ahh... this is brilliant. I think he will start to remember more now he's home, but I hope he doesn't turn on Hermione when he memory fully returns!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Things may not be so easy. We will both have to wait to see how it works out :)

Thanks so much

0/10

StarryEyedNoOne

Yay! He's cooperating :-)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL glad you are enjoying the story....more ot come.

0/10

snapefan2007

great chapter!  i can't wait to read more! so glad severus had a memory of that snake!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

He did didn't he...hummm have to go adjust what I wrote today :)Thanks

0/10

GryffKat

My new favorite story. Thanks for the update.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you ! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm working on Ch 15 right now.

0/10

kimjo2

perhaps things are comming back.  sad his reaction to the news of his parents.  great update.  thanks so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, more to come soon :)

9/10

sinbad

So pitiful, I feel so sorry for Severus.  I hope he can regain his memory.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

He's got a long road ahead...
Hope you keep tuning in.

10/10

June W

yay. they are in a real house instead of shack and box!  now for some real food and hopefully some healing potions.  thanks for updating.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Glad you enjoyed it, Thanks

0/10

snapefan2007

i really can't wait to read more!  this is great!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, Im so glad you are enjoying it.

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