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Potions Under Duress Raven
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Raven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 39

39: Chapter 38

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

60: Mr.

61: Mr.

62: Mr.

63: Mr.

Raven

gersknightlady

969 Reviews   |   969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 116,713 Words 63 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Poppy Pomfrey Dobby Original Character Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Alice Longbottom Frank Longbottom Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Eileen (Prince) Snape Lily (Evans) Potter Tobias Snape Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Luna Lovegood Percy Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Argus Filch Cho Chang Dean Thomas Katie Bell Kingsley Shacklebolt Lee Jordan Michael Corner Mrs. Norris Olympe Maxime Padma Patil Parvati Patil Roger Davies Susan Bones Terry Boot Xenophilius Lovegood Filius Flitwick Cedric Diggory Thorfinn Rowle

Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 39

Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 60: Mr.

Chapter 61: Mr.

Chapter 62: Mr.

Chapter 63: Mr.


About gersknightlady

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gersknightlady

Member Since 2008  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 343  |  915 Reviews Written  |  3,004 Review Responses

Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years.  I post SS/HG stories.

I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012)  It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house.  I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play. 


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10/10

livvy6

"I don't want to go alone." That was so lovely. He is so unlike the Snape we know. I can see why he would want not to be his "old self" again!Livvy

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you glad you like the story

10/10

neelix

Ooh... interesting! can't wait to see more of the memories!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much, the next chapter is also a memory.

10/10

Jullsy

I want more, I want more, I want more...

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You
I get them up as fast as they can Validate the chapters :)

10/10

Sampdoria

I really like this Raven/Severus of yours, you are doing such a good job with both Hermione and Severus, making this one really wonderful story!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you soooo much. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. more up soon.

10/10

azulkan2

Love this fic.  Glad to see it updated.  Looking forward to the next part.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Than you so much for reading the story and enjoying it :)

10/10

braye27

Finding these memories left to him by his mother is such a wonderful thing.  Now he knows she loved him.  Even if his father was a total bastard to him, his mother loved him with all her heart.  Thank goodness for this – it's about time Raven found out something good about himself.With each passing day, circumstances are bringing Hermione and Raven closer.  Closer and mind and in spirit.  It's is wonderful to see their caring for each other growing.Very neat chapter!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks Beth, I love Your reviews. You pput such thought into them. Not all the memories will be easy but he will know that his mother did love him.

Jeannie

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Another truly lovely chapter.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much,

10/10

I_Am

What a lovely chapter! *****, as it usually is.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you thats very kind of you.

10/10

Maddie

Very moving. Raven's thoughts raise an enticing path for his new life. However, will he be able to lead his desired simple, peaceful life with Hermione?

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thats the huge question. He does eventually need to reconect to his old life. But he will have choices even then, we can only hope his choices make us all happy it the end. :)

0/10

snapefan2007

i can't wait to read the next chapter!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

thanks you, hope it will be up in a few days.

10/10

neelix

ahhh, how lovely - they're growing closer!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

:) glad you enjoyed that, thanks

0/10

mom7knox

I don't blame him - the cabin sounds ideal!  Nice job - thanks for your work!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Cabin? Don't remember a Cabin. I'll have to go look. Thanks so much.

Response from mom7knox (Reviewer)

he he - this is what happens when I don't wait for nap time for kidlings to read - clearing, I meant clearing :-)

10/10

debjunk

She finally addressed her grief.  I'm glad Raven was there for her while she did.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, he can be a great comfort can't he. One should be so lucky, sigh.

10/10

braye27

In this chapter Raven learned things about himself both good and bad.  I wish he had the knowledge to realize all the good he had done when he had made the decision to work for the Light.  Reading from Snape's journal, all he would have learned was the bad things he'd done and that he had felt relief when Dumbledore had accepted him back.Hermione's grief had been bound to come to the surface one day, and seeing all the familiar placed of her childhood had breached the dam she had put in place to contain her emotions.  I'm glad that Raven was there to comfort her.  I don't know what will have to happen for him to consider going to Hogwarts to see if he can talk to Albus' portrait, but if that were possible, it may give them the help they need to brew a memory restore potion to help him.Great chapter!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I'm really glad you are enjoying this story so much. Your thoughts are well thought out and... well you must be reading my mind. Next chapter will be up soon. I've started to write ch: 20 now. :) Still a lot more to tell.

Jeannie

10/10

sinbad

I love Raven, it is obvious you put a lot of thought into his character.  It was also nice to see that he wishes to be neither Raven nor Snape.  I look forward to seeing how he will develop.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I love him too, he kind of writes himself. I can't imagine not having him around forever :) You don't think he's too weak of a character? I want the child/man that's Raven to grow up as well. Find his own strengths.

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

No, I don't think he is too weak.  He strikes me as a man searching for his identity; although Hermione's is the more strongly written of the two I still think Raven is developing nicely.

0/10

sunny33

Although the forest brought back memories, it probably did her a lot of good to let it all out. :)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I think so, thanks :)

10/10

lilashannah

Holy Moly!! You made me cry...I can't wait untill the next chappy. this one seemed to take so long.I know how Hermione feels.My Mom passed away 8 years ago and it took me forever to let it out.Raven is starting to grow as a person with depth.I can't wait to see how you tie this all together.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Sorry, I lost my mom a few days after 911. I know how you feel. It didn't hit me till New Years eve. I'm with you the ends not written. So I can't wait to see how I tie it all together too LOL. I really appreciate your thoughts.

10/10

Jullsy

This chapter is so nice. I like your story very much. Keep going.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

You'll be happy to know I'm working on ch 20. Tryig to stay way ahead of the posting. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

10/10

I_Am

Thanks! *sighs* My reading is definitely too quick... Ah... Looking forward to next chappies!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Sorry they are short. I had never psoted one before and don;t know what the standard chapter size is. I'm making them about 4 pages each. Glad you like the story.

Response from I_Am (Reviewer)

Oh, no! Don't apologize, please. There are many people that are very happy that you share your stories with us, and it is just the policy of the site that drives me crazy!

10/10

blue artemis

Sad but cathartic.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you,

8/10

Sevvy

I really like the fact that they can find such comfort with each other.  This continues to be such a sweet, refreshing story.  I just hope nothing's going to happen soon to put the damper on things! :-)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I hope to continue to build their characters and relationship. Thank you so much. Relax :)

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Such a lovely picture. And I am not even a fan of SS/HG!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank YOU!! Maybe I can make one of you yet LOL.

0/10

morgaine_dulac

I am also a little afraid that we will lose Raven, I like him. But as you said to another reviewer, I will sit back and relax./M

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Don't streess I'm glad you will continue to read. Thanks so much

0/10

snapefan2007

Raven is very sweet... i like him... I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Hope they find the memory activator!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I like him very much too. working on Ch 19 now :) we have a ways to go.

10/10

beaweasley2

I hope that they find something that helps. I'm really surprised, disgruntled a bit about Hermione insisting, and Raven for that matter, that Raven will be 'lost' once Severus 'returns'. That just seems off to me. Why wouldn't Hermione, who has medically knowledgable parents know about amensia? And if she knows about Amnesia, wouldn't se see this as a case of simple memory loss. Or are you setting us up for a transferance of personalities? It would seem that once Raven 'remembers' everything, past and presant would combine - he would be flooded with the knowledge of who he was, what he was and yet still rememeber what happened to him as Raven. There might be a void, a black spot of what happened between the shack and when he woke up in his box - but that would be normal and logical.So, their growing feeligns for each other - I can understand her fear - in that I can see where when he 'awakens his memories,' when his past comes backto him - Severus Raven Snape might turn from her as a redicilous girl who helped him come back to himslef. Thus developing a reawakening of why he and she have these feeligns that don't jive with the person he was, or is now, kind of thing. But the Raven part of his personality, the time he lived as Raven would still be a part of who he becomes.   Neither would be lost - only a melding of who he is and a deep inner search of who Severus Rave Snape wants to be.Unless, Hermione knows something and we are left in the dark. IF she knows that his memory loss from Nagini's bit would divide him magically, like two Snape's in a Time-Turner fic - once the two Snapes collide, combine, meet - a effect happens - one is consumed by the other, one absorbs the other and the second on ceases to exhist?Very curious.   But I wonder, will they give into this attraction before Raven discovers Severus Snape and merges with him?

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Your worrying too much, just sit back and enjoy. It is a very complicated thing. If Snape remembers he's gona pull back a bit, he built that tight shell around himself for many years. It's gona be up to those around him and Raven with-in to convince him he's worth being loved.

Thank so much for alll yoour care and help. I really really appreciate your thoughts.

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