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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
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I know it's been along time but I'm back.Yours was the first story I looked up.I love how the two men are blending together.Can't wait for more.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats a wonderful compliment. I'm so glad you looked this story up again. The story is finished and I just need to get it posted. Ch 35 should be up soon. I hope you will continue to send reviews. Thank you :)
Finding the email saying that this chapter was ready to be viewed really made my day! I'm so glad that love finally became a reality for Severus. He's been holding on to that shield of mistrust and hurt for so long, it was really something special seeing Hermione's feelings for him shatter it. Him singing the spell while looking into her eyes was over the top!Fantastic update and fantastic author's note. I'm so glad that you have completed this great story. I can't wait to see all the things you have in store for our couple. :D
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Rosered, thanks so much, I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so much. He has taken the first step to finally being happy. There si still a lot to go through. Love heals but it can take time. Ch 35's in the Queue.
I look forward to Severus awakening. How will he fare that first time waking up knowing he is in love with the person he has beside him? Anyone who has experienced such a time knows how moving it is, how magical it must be for a wizard of Severus' power. Am I reading this correctly, that the Singer must truly love the one that he is singing for? Is that why there were all those fireworks when he sang for Hermione? It will be interesting to find out what his fireworks look like for Harry, the last connection the wizarding world has to Lilly Evans. This story has been amazing. Your characterization is, not only canon (if we disregard events and just consider the people involved), but also very believable. I look forward to each chapter that comes out.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think he's going to be happy for a time but he still has so much more to face. Yes the singer has to love the person, at least feel love as he's singing it. His heart has to swell with love for those around him. Severus has a lot of deamons yet to face, Thank you so much I have tried hard. I hope you will enjoy the chnages as Severus learns much more of himself in the chapters to come.You gave me such wonderful compliments I hope I continue to deserve them :) Thank you so much
He has to love Harry. That could be a mission! :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes it can and it pproves difficult
I am very pleased with how this story has progressed since last I read. I look forward to reading more and thank you once again for writing for us :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your very welcome. I'm so glad you came back to read it.
he's slowly figuring it out. glad hermione didn't take what happened seriously. it is part of the remembering process. wonderful update. thanks muchly
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you were okay with the way things went. It was a big step toward each other.
I really like this story and can't wait for more. The plot is original and engaging, which I really enjoy. Thank you for sharing this with us and I hope you write more. Also, if you write original fiction, I would love to know. And, if you don't, you should. You have a great voice and could surely put some very good work out there.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much. What nice things to say to me. I have another hp stoty called From Death to Life Again on TPP. I also have some Forever Knight fic out there under Gersknightlady. I had started a book a few years ago but never really got much of it down on the computer and cant find the beginning now.I have been thinking abot trying to redo it and finishe it.Thanks Again
I think it's progrees! :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes it is, glad you liked it, Thanks sunny.
This was a good chapter. And yes, men most certainly do have their fantasies but, then again, so do us ladies when it comes to tall, dark Potions masters, eh!
I think this new trip to find the gypsies bodes well. As usual, I look forward to more...! :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thats for sure, The HBP photos have been so wonderful and Severus looks good enough to eat LOLThe trip will be up and coming soon.Thanks so much,
Herione's getting under his skin more and more, hopefully the trip to the Gypsy Wizards will help fuel and speed up his memory return!Well done!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Things will start to move but theres a ways to go, She is getting under his skin and so is Raven so he's being worked on double time :)
At least Hermione is being realistic about everything. He'll come around eventually. Hopefully his memories will return so he can see exactly how he feels about her.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, she is seeing it realisticly not only is she workign on hi so is Raven :) Thanks so much
excellent! I can't wait for more chapters. I hope Severus remembers soon.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much. Just finiahed the story with ch 49 so theres a lot to look forward too.
This was well done. I like that you have them going out and about again, this time with Severus in full command of himself. It will make a nice contrast in the story and within Hermione. Congrats again on a job well done!Sara
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks Sara, I'm so glld you are enjoying it. 16 chapters to go :) Yes Severus knows who he is but he also had to deal with Raven, now a solid part of him.Jeannie
I hope that their love making will fuel Severus' recall of his memories of Hermione when he was Raven. He can never forget what it was like to be with her in his bed, to feel her in his arms, to make love to her.Perhaps their journey to find the Gypsies to learn of their music will give Severus the insight to perfect the spell that will cure Harry.In chapter 19 when Hermione and Raven were with the band of Gypsies, an old woman had pulled Hermione aside and warned her of the dangers that lay ahead of them as they sought Voldemort's lair: “The place you search for is evil, and you must beware. Love can be lost there, lives changed, futures unknown, good, bad, it is what you make it.”Perhaps they will find this same band of Gypsies, and the old woman will say something that will help Severus to recall his memories of loving Hermione before he became only Severus again and lost his connection with Raven.I can't wait to read your next update. This one was fabulous!!!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think they need to learn to love eachother before he remembers don't you think. After all Severus is a different sort of "animal" LOL. He needs that reassurance that she can love "him".Thanks so much, Beth the story is now done, finsihed ch 49 a few days ago.
Wonderful as always... there is a Cher song I think of when I think of Gypsie Wizards and now the tight escapes me.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
"Gypsies Tramp amd Theives we hear it from the town they call us Gypsies Tramps and Theives,,but every night all the men will come around and lay their money down.... well something close to that LOLLove that song...Thanks hope you enjoy the next chapters.
Yay for Minerva! And I am so glad Hermione understand that even if it was "just sex," she is still getting under his skin and digging in deeper. Hang in there, Hermione! Thanks for updating.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Glad you liked the chapter. Yep shes under his skin but then too so os Raven :)
Whoo... finally, some between the sheets action. I love that Severus is a different sort of lover! Great update. Can't wait for their little journey now!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL glad you enjoyed that it was too long in coming for my liking too, but I wanted to be true to severus, let him be him and just not magically turned to a loving Raven sort of Severus.They are getting closer :)
As long as Hermione is willing to admit that sex with Severus doesn't equal love, she will be fine. If she crosses that line, she will be heartbroken.I'm so excited that they are going back to see the gypsies. Great update. :D
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I thnk it took her a few heart stopping moments to realise that, but then just being with him was a huge step. Or him being with her to be more exact was a big step for them. They will make some changes soon. I wrote ch 49 a couple days ago the stories finished now :)Thanks Rosered.
I think what happened will work to Hermione's advantage. Severus will not be able to forget what happened easily and he won't want to. It will become the fuel of his fantasies. I wish Severus would look at Raven's diary. He left some memories, too, didn't he?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, he did leave some memories, the diary will come when he's ready to see it. I think Severus needs to know he can be loved first.Yes Hermiones now a part of him, and he may think it was sex onlly but we all know part of him loves her with all his heart. :)Thanks for the review
He had a willing woman wanting to stay in his bed, it would be difficult for most men to not give in. But it may be a reminder of something more.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, I agree. He has her under his skin now LOL
when she called him raven and he left i cried with her. glad to see him integrating so well. too fast and it could be overwhelming. it's just right. thanks muchly for the wonderful update.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
A good observation there. He will have bumps in the road here and there. He's got years of pain stored up inside.Glad you liked it Thanks,:)
Good job! You've captured Severus right down to his socks. It seems that fear of being hurt again like he was by his father's abusive behavior, his mother's inability to defend him as a young child, the constant torment at the hands of the Marauders when he was a student. and last but not least, Lily. has left him with no desire for emotional attachment. For Severus, caring has always brought pain.I don't see him changing just yet. Until his fear of losing what Raven had built with Hermione becomes greater than his fear of losing her love, I don't think our Potions master will be able to find the courage to delve into Raven's journal or his mother's memories. I've always believed that the term "coward" had no place in a description of "Severus the man" except in this one area of his life. Over the years he has come to equate "loving someone" with eventual heartache and disappointment.On the other hand, Hermione has always had a loving and giving nature, and I pray that she doesn't give up on Severus. Given enough time to sort out his feelings and explore this duality that is Raven/Severus, I have great hope that he will come to integrate these two sides of himself. It's kind of like having a multiple personality except that instead of neither personality being aware of the other, both Raven and Severus are keenly aware of each other.Severus' treatment of Hermione at the end of this chapter was heartbreaking to see, but I don't think he can get to where he needs to be right away. The old Severus is calling the shots right now, and he's not ready to get to know Raven any better than he does just yet.Where has Severus gone? What does the have to do that he had to leave so quickly? Please let Hermione be all right. Please let Minerva and Albus help her to weather this difficult time ahead.Great chapter, Jeannie.Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks Beth, Severus is having toruble acceptiion that which is now inside himself. It's gona take some time. Right now he's trying to hide inside that sheild he spent most of his life behind. For Severus right now running is self preservation. Hermione does have a support system never fear. Hope the next chapters up soon. I worked to fix some problems today and think I'm on y wya now to getting new material down for ch 37.
Thanks so much,
Jeannie
I've just been playing 'catch up' on this story & am entralled by the 'twist' you've given it. I must admit I thought that 'Raven' would just simply take over Severus rather than vice versa (how naive is that!) But I also feel sure that this nicer character is still part of Snape and will re-emerge in time!This is a very different story and I have loved seeing how you have 'grown' as an author as you've been writing it. I really look forward to seeing where it goes now ... :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
That was Naive LOL. Of course Severus has to come back. He is who raven was, but Raven lives inside. Will Severus be able to accept what he can give him or will he reject it, thats the next question. Thanks so much for your compliments. I appreciate them so much.
More to come soon. Working on Ch 37 now :)