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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
Reviews for Raven
Ooh hopefully he'll remember Raven soon andall will fall into place!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I hope so :)Thank you
Herms, TELL Severus that you want to be his anchor!! Perhaps after he views the memories? I'll be waiting. Thanks for letting Harry be okay!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your Welcome, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks so much
Oooh, exciting stuff! Finally, he's going to be whole. Wonderful stuff!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much. My sister Corgi had babies and my nephew is calling one of them
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Good job! can't wait for the next installment!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much :)
He really does need to face his past. Poor Severus.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
He will in spades. It's a hard face and a wonderful face.Thanks for your comments.
Too bad the first attempt didn't work. I'm glad he can repeat it. Hermione has the right idea. He needs to forgive himself and let go of the past. I hope he finds what he needs in what she's given him.I did enjoy, if that's the right word, their closeness as he fell apart. It was nice to see him trust her so much that he let his worst emotions show.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the next chapter is a huge growing chapter for them. I hope you will enjoy it. there are 12 more chapters to go :)
Excellent chapter. It's a shame that Severus had a impasse with Harry's healing. It just wasn't the right time. If first you don't succeed... Hermione is right, Severus needs to face his past to get on with his future, not only for Harry's sake, but for his own sake as well. My feelings would have been hurt by the comment of not having an anchor, so I can imagine how much restraint Hermione used to tamp down her emotions and offer him the solution to his troubles. :D
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
No it wasn't the right itme. He still has to come face to face with his past. If you liked this one I think you'll like the next one. There are still 12 more chapters to this story.Thank so much for your comments.
As much as I want to see this all play out, uh yesterday, I'm glad this story isn't having a quick resolution.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad you are liking all the chapters. I didn't want to hurry through the story. Change takes time. There are 49 chapters in the story. :)Thanks so much
I am tickled with the idea that Severus will sing a love song to Harry to cure him. Wont that be a shocker for Mr. potter?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL, I hope I will do it justce and you will enjoy it. It was hard to write and I think it workes out well.
I am very much entranced with the idea of "Slowly, he’s finally becoming the man he was always meant to be.” Severus the butterfly it works!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you see the necessity og the merging being slow. There is so much for Severus to accpet, realize and learn.
The merging of Raven and Severus feels so tangible. I love it
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I wanted to take time in merging them. There was a lot of changing and growth for Severus to go through.
Will Hermione stop calling him sir now that they are peers?OH HELL I knew she would slip and call him Raven. I actually winced. I hope he wont hold it against her for too long. Heh.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
That was a kick in the head wasn't it. It makes me wince too. She will eventually, she's trying to give him respect and become his friend at this point.
Praise to Minerva for attempting to focus Severus in the right direction ie towards Hermione! I got goose bumps with this line "She sacrificed Raven for you!"
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
:) Im glad you liked that line :) I appreciate your reviews.
*sniff* that was so touching. to truly heal our selves or others we must love. how beautifully you expressed it. thanks so much
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
That was a good first step for Severus. He still has a lot of skelotons in his closet to sort out.I'm glad you liked it :)
Well, you nailed the music all right. What a lovely way to realize his feelings about her and pretty much everything.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I don't know much about music :)
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Well, your insights on how feelings are expressed through music were spot on.
More please??
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
New chapters in the Queue, Thanks glad you liked it and want more.
Once again you've given us a fine chapter where Severus and Hermione are making wonderful progress in their relationship. When she helped him find the love in her heart for him, he was able to sing the healing love song perfectly. And he realized that he loved Hermione. Making love with their minds shared the whole time must have brought back of his life with Hermione as Raven. I hope so. I want them to be together, together in love!!!Good chapter!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Things for Severus go up anf down like a roller coaster ride. he thinks he's figured it out and then somehting else make shim doubt himself. But he's getting closer to finding himself.Thanks Beth,Jeannie
Aw, quite lovely! Glad to see he's accepted his feelings despite now coming to terms with it all. Poor Severus & Hermione's back to nursing him better!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well he's coming to terms with some of his feelings but there is still so much to go through. But he is making progress and Hermiones will be there for him.Thanks so much.
What a tremendous breakthrough, both for completing the spellsong and for Severus himself. There will probably be more bumps on the road ahead for him, but I think the really hard work has been done now. Perhaps now that he has accepted Hermione's feelings for him, his subconscious will allow himself to begin remembering what he went through as Raven.Loving Harry...hmm. We know he loves the memory of Lily which lives inside Harry, but he has also resented the memory of James within Harry as well. Severus will have to allow himself to truly see Harry as his own separate entity, I think, and not as a shadow of either James or Lily. Look forward to see what happens next!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
You have some good insight there. They have made progress but there is still ups and downs and as you sya bumps in the road. Loving Harry is difficult, but it also means loving himself ad he's not really there yet. He's got to believe in himself and Hermione too. Theres a long ways to go. I'm so glad you liked the chapter another ones in the Queue.
Fabulous chapter and a great way to finally bring them together! Wonderful!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
That was incredibly beautiful. And I'm so happy for Hermione. Yes, love can hurt, but the pain can be so freeing. And the music thing is lovely. I am currently listening to my 10 month old son sing random syllables to the cats. There certainly is power in music.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm no musician, but I do love to hear all kinds of music. Your right love can hurt as wel and there is so much more for severus to work out before he can be whole again.What a nice picture of your child. Enjoy every minute they grow to fast. I have nieces and nephews and now bunches of greats each one is precious.
Oooooooooooo, Excellent chapter...I'm so glad they found the gypsies...Glad Severus is thinking over what Magi said...He needs Hermione, just as much as she needs him..I am so loving this story...WONNDERFUL.. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Beckly thanks so much, your such a dear, and have been such a help and support. They do need eachother, I'm so glad you are enjoying them taking those steps toward eachother.
Sweet chapter, I think learning to sing that song healed Severus too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, There is so much more for him to go through. He has a lot to see yet and accept. This was only a first step.
Lovely chapter! The ending was so sweet. I'm intrigued as to how you will develop from here if you have enough chapters for that many updates. Again, him struggling with his feelings was palpatable.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, Severus still has a lot to work through and he must tackel each one. There is also some fun to be had later one :)