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Potions Under Duress Raven
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Raven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 39

39: Chapter 38

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

60: Mr.

61: Mr.

62: Mr.

63: Mr.

Raven

gersknightlady

969 Reviews   |   969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 116,713 Words 63 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Poppy Pomfrey Dobby Original Character Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Alice Longbottom Frank Longbottom Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Eileen (Prince) Snape Lily (Evans) Potter Tobias Snape Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Luna Lovegood Percy Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Argus Filch Cho Chang Dean Thomas Katie Bell Kingsley Shacklebolt Lee Jordan Michael Corner Mrs. Norris Olympe Maxime Padma Patil Parvati Patil Roger Davies Susan Bones Terry Boot Xenophilius Lovegood Filius Flitwick Cedric Diggory Thorfinn Rowle

Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 39

Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 60: Mr.

Chapter 61: Mr.

Chapter 62: Mr.

Chapter 63: Mr.


About gersknightlady

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gersknightlady

Member Since 2008  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 343  |  915 Reviews Written  |  3,004 Review Responses

Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years.  I post SS/HG stories.

I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012)  It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house.  I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play. 


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10/10

Jinxie

Ooh hopefully he'll remember Raven soon andall will fall into place!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I hope so :)Thank you

10/10

June W

Herms, TELL Severus that you want to be his anchor!!  Perhaps after he views the memories?  I'll be waiting.  Thanks for letting Harry be okay!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Your Welcome, I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  Thanks so much

10/10

neelix

Oooh, exciting stuff! Finally, he's going to be whole. Wonderful stuff!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much.  My sister Corgi had babies and my nephew is calling one of them

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

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0/10

AlanaVawn

Good job! can't wait for the next installment!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much :)

10/10

blue artemis

He really does need to face his past.  Poor Severus.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

He will in spades.  It's a hard face and a wonderful face.Thanks for your comments.

10/10

debjunk

Too bad the first attempt didn't work.  I'm glad he can repeat it.  Hermione has the right idea.  He needs to forgive himself and let go of the past.  I hope he finds what he needs in what she's given him.I did enjoy, if that's the right word, their closeness as he fell apart.  It was nice to see him trust her so much that he let his worst emotions show.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, the next chapter is a huge growing chapter for them.  I hope you will enjoy it.  there are 12 more chapters to go :)

10/10

rosered

Excellent chapter.  It's a shame that Severus had a impasse with Harry's healing.  It just wasn't the right time.  If first you don't succeed...  Hermione is right, Severus needs to face his past to get on with his future, not only for Harry's sake, but for his own sake as well.  My feelings would have been hurt by the comment of not having an anchor, so I can imagine how much restraint Hermione used to tamp down her emotions and offer him the solution to his troubles.  :D

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

No it wasn't the right itme.  He still has to come face to face with his past.  If you liked this one I think you'll like the next one.  There are still 12 more chapters to this story.Thank so much for your comments.

10/10

Myst

As much as I want to see this all play out, uh yesterday, I'm glad this story isn't having a quick resolution.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I'm glad you are liking all the chapters.  I didn't want to hurry through the story.  Change takes time.  There are 49 chapters in the story.  :)Thanks so much

10/10

MollysSister

I am tickled with the idea that Severus will sing a love song to Harry to cure him. Wont that be a shocker for Mr. potter?

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL, I hope I will do it justce and you will enjoy it.  It was hard to write and I think it workes out well.

10/10

MollysSister

I am very much entranced with the idea of "Slowly, he’s finally becoming the man he was always meant to be.” Severus the butterfly it works!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I'm glad you see the necessity og the merging being slow.  There is so much for Severus to accpet, realize and learn.

10/10

MollysSister

The merging of Raven and Severus feels so tangible. I love it

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I wanted to take time in merging them.  There was a lot of changing and growth for Severus to go through.

10/10

MollysSister

Will Hermione stop calling him sir now that they are peers?OH HELL I knew she would slip and call him Raven. I actually winced. I hope he wont hold it against her for too long. Heh.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

That was a kick in the head wasn't it.  It makes me wince too.  She will eventually, she's trying to give him respect and become his friend at this point.

10/10

MollysSister

Praise to Minerva for attempting to focus Severus in the right direction ie towards Hermione! I got goose bumps with this line "She sacrificed Raven for you!"

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

:) Im glad you liked that line :)  I appreciate your reviews. 

0/10

kimjo2

*sniff*  that was so touching.  to truly heal our selves or others we must love.  how beautifully you expressed it.  thanks so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

That was a good first step for Severus.  He still has a lot of skelotons in his closet to sort out.I'm glad you liked it :)

10/10

makaem

Lovely.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, glad you like it :)

10/10

debjunk

Well, you nailed the music all right.  What a lovely way to realize his feelings about her and pretty much everything. 

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I don't know much about music :)

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

Well, your insights on how feelings are expressed through music were spot on.

0/10

DarkLove

More please??

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

New chapters in the Queue, Thanks glad you liked it and want more.

10/10

braye27

Once again you've given us a fine chapter where Severus and Hermione are making wonderful progress in their relationship.  When she helped him find the love in her heart for him, he was able to sing the healing love song perfectly.  And he realized that he loved Hermione.  Making love with their minds shared the whole time must have brought back of his life with Hermione as Raven.  I hope so.  I want them to be together, together in love!!!Good chapter!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Things for Severus go up anf down like a roller coaster ride.  he thinks he's figured it out and then somehting else make shim doubt himself.  But he's getting closer to finding himself.Thanks Beth,Jeannie

10/10

Jinxie

Aw, quite lovely!  Glad to see he's accepted his feelings despite now coming to terms with it all.  Poor Severus & Hermione's back to nursing him better!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Well he's coming to terms with some of his feelings but there is still so much to go through.  But he is making progress and Hermiones will be there for him.Thanks so much.

10/10

indigo_rose

What a tremendous breakthrough, both for completing the spellsong and for Severus himself.  There will probably be more bumps on the road ahead for him, but I think the really hard work has been done now.  Perhaps now that he has accepted Hermione's feelings for him, his subconscious will allow himself to begin remembering what he went through as Raven.Loving Harry...hmm.  We know he loves the memory of Lily which lives inside Harry, but he has also resented the memory of James within Harry as well.  Severus will have to allow himself to truly see Harry as his own separate entity, I think, and not as a shadow of either James or Lily.  Look forward to see what happens next!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

You have some good insight there.  They have made progress but there is still ups and downs and as you sya bumps in the road.  Loving Harry is difficult, but it also means loving himself ad he's not really there yet.  He's got to believe in himself and Hermione too.  Theres a long ways to go.  I'm so glad you liked the chapter another ones in the Queue.

10/10

neelix

Fabulous chapter and a great way to finally bring them together! Wonderful!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

10/10

blue artemis

That was incredibly beautiful.  And I'm so happy for Hermione.  Yes, love can hurt, but the pain can be so freeing.  And the music thing is lovely.  I am currently listening to my 10 month old son sing random syllables to the cats.  There certainly is power in music.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I'm no musician, but I do love to hear all kinds of music.  Your right love can hurt as wel and there is so much more for severus to work out before he can be whole again.What a nice picture of your child.  Enjoy every minute they grow to fast.  I have nieces and nephews and now bunches of greats each one is precious.

10/10

Becky

Oooooooooooo, Excellent chapter...I'm so glad they found the gypsies...Glad Severus is thinking over what Magi said...He needs Hermione, just as much as she needs him..I am so loving this story...WONNDERFUL.. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Beckly thanks so much, your such a dear, and have been such a help and support.  They do need eachother, I'm so glad you are enjoying them taking those steps toward eachother.

9/10

sinbad

Sweet chapter, I think learning to sing that song healed Severus too.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, There is so much more for him to go through.  He has a lot to see yet and accept.  This was only a first step.

0/10

Myst

Lovely chapter!  The ending was so sweet.  I'm intrigued as to how you will develop from here if you have enough chapters for that many updates.  Again, him struggling with his feelings was palpatable. 

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, Severus still has a lot to work through and he must tackel each one.  There is also some fun to be had later one :)

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