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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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gersknightlady
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
Reviews for Raven
I'm enjoying their getting to know one another. It's nice to see him healed and eager to move along. Oh, I know you could go either way with this, but I hope he remembers this part of his life when and if he gets his memory back.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
All four reviews I just read have the same opinion, I hope he does too. We will have to see, sometimes these things just write themselves LOL.
Thanks.
more kissing, please! wonderful update. thanks so much
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, I'm sure ther will be more kissing.
hope you update soon. This is a really good read. Keep up the good work.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Glad you like it, hope to have more up soon :)
thank you for another great update! This is one facinationg story, I just adore the plot and it is always a trill to get a new chapter!!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I love writing it. More soon.
nice job - love how you are moving this along - can't wait to see what is next!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, appreciate your review, more soon :)
I am glad Raven is smiling, It is a lovely sight, and I am worried that he will not smile anymore when he is Severus Snape again. Not in the beginning at least.Cheers. /M
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, no probably not at the beginning.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
But then I hope that he will realise how much good he has done. And I hope that this will outweigh the rest.Have a lovely weekend. /M
I liked the chuckle over Hermione’s reaction to the kiss. I think she’s wrong, just because he gets his memory back doesn’t mean that Raven will disappear. What it will mean is that Raven will have to come to terms with the man he is and the man he was. He will have to face everything that he obviously ran from and wanted to avoid (subconsciously).
His reaction to the healing of his scar was priceless. I think I read it twice cuz it was so sweet.
I’m really enjoying this piece, and look forward to more.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm really enjoying your reviews You give me a lot to think about. I'm glad you ejoyed the scene. I'm a little bogged down right now working on Chapter 18. Trying to make it interesting but feeling like Im failing at it. email me: nickismom1228@aol.com
great chapter, glad to see Raven is doing magic again! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, its in the line up for validation.
Oh I hope he does not regain his memory only to end up hating Hermione. His affection for her is so spontaneous and seems so innocent, like a new being come to life.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
we will have to see. Its not written yet :(
He is very innocent, he doesn't have all of Snapes bagagge.
Thanks
I think I'm going to miss Raven when Snape returns. I like him.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I like him very much too, But Snape will also not be bound by the rules of his old life.
thanks
What a beautiful concept. I hope that Raven or Severus remembers all he has been through with Hermione while healing and recovering his magic. I think they are both being given some beautiful gifts to be able to get to know each other in such an unguarded fashion.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Your very preceptive. I love the character (was originally going to call him, Ink...bit some how Raven took on a life of his own.
Thanks,
Jeannie
Response from irishredlass (Reviewer)
I think the name is actually very appropriate it reminds me of Poe's poem "nevermore, nevermore"
here's hoping he doesn't lose his memories of THIS time when he regains memories of the past. would Hermione send a Patronus to Molly? thanks for updating!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I hope he doesn't either, it's still int he process of being worked out. Molly will in time get a message.
Thank you,:)
Whilst I can't help but feel glad that Severus will hopefully get his memory back I, like many others, am worried that this could be the beginning of the end for their 'relationship'; please tell me it won't be! I'm so looking forward to reading more of this! :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There so much more for them to do and learn don't get discouraged.
Thanks so much,
I can perfectly understand why Hermione wants to protect her heart. She must be both worried and hopeful that he will find his way.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think it will be hard to resist him as he is, don't you.:)
Thanks
This is getting pretty scary now for both of them. It appears things can only go downhill from here. I'm not sure I agree with Hermione's willingness to take away Raven's piece of mind. Severus Snape will have little reason to smile when he gets his memories back.Regardless, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Why do you think it will go down hill. There's so muc more to this adventure.
Thank so much, hope to have more up soon.
Response from ladyljd (Reviewer)
I was thinking that Raven becoming Snape again will not turn out well for Hermione ... but I look forward to being proven wrong!
Oh that kiss was the perfect ending to this chapter. I think 'Raven' is much nicer for the loss of his memory.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much.
lovely update! it makes sense that his kinetic memory would take over for preparing ingrediants. thanks so much and i look forward to more.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, hope to have ch. 8 up real soon.
It appears Raven cleans up well. However, I wonder what will happen when his memory returns? Will he be disgusted he is with Miss Granger?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Guess we both have to wait to find that out. :)Thank you for the review.
I hope you aren't setting Hermione up to have her heart broken.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Would I do that??? I love romance :)
Oh good lord, Raven aquired a pet!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Look that way LOL...your funny since you've had a sneak peak.
awww, raven and Hermione. they'll be good together. can't wait to read more!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Glad you like it, thanks so much for the comments
Oh Jeannie! I love this chapter. The things Severus told Hermione about what it was like for him when he woke up not knowing who he was or why he was in so much pain made me wince. How awful it would be to find yourself in such dire straits and have no memory of who you are or what had happened!
Finding his potions laboratory was so cool. I had to laugh when he realized that lizard eyes would be part of the healing potion he would have to take. He really has become "too much of an ordinary human." I hope they will be able to complete the potion soon and he can get some relief from the pain. And then there is the matter of the memory restore potion. Of course they have to try to get his memory back, but maybe after he gets over the shock of remembering all the things that have take place in his life, he will see his way clear to hold onto those aspects of Raven that are good and kind.When he kissed Hermione softly and thanked her, I wanted to cheer and clap! Wonderful chapter, dear, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for our hero and heroine in future chapters!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Im really enjoying your reviews. Thanks again. Glad you like the difficult scenes as well as the fun ones :)
Jeannie
"Check back soon ... The next chapter is in queue." Oh, I certainly will! :) Thank you! :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Glad you are enjoying the story, I need to get writing working on ch 17 now. :)
Hmm. Keep him amnesic and nice vs restore his memory, and his snark. Just as well there is Harry to consider.:)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes, we wouldn't want to leave Harry the way her is would we. :)