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Potions Under Duress Raven
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Raven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 39

39: Chapter 38

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

60: Mr.

61: Mr.

62: Mr.

63: Mr.

Raven

gersknightlady

969 Reviews   |   969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 116,713 Words 63 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Poppy Pomfrey Dobby Original Character Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Alice Longbottom Frank Longbottom Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Eileen (Prince) Snape Lily (Evans) Potter Tobias Snape Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Luna Lovegood Percy Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Argus Filch Cho Chang Dean Thomas Katie Bell Kingsley Shacklebolt Lee Jordan Michael Corner Mrs. Norris Olympe Maxime Padma Patil Parvati Patil Roger Davies Susan Bones Terry Boot Xenophilius Lovegood Filius Flitwick Cedric Diggory Thorfinn Rowle

Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 39

Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 60: Mr.

Chapter 61: Mr.

Chapter 62: Mr.

Chapter 63: Mr.


About gersknightlady

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gersknightlady

Member Since 2008  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 343  |  915 Reviews Written  |  3,004 Review Responses

Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years.  I post SS/HG stories.

I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012)  It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house.  I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play. 


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10/10

blue artemis

Eileen kind of bothers me here.  I agree with Severus, what kind of mother asks that of her son.  But I can see Hermione's point that she loved him.  Oh, well.  That was a good chapter.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Though I've never lived through an abusive situation, I have seen movies etc. It seems common for the women to totaly give up their identity and follow what the man says even though they might be capable of fighting for their freedom. She is in a sick situation. Thanks, :)

10/10

lilashannah

Holy,What a sick childhood.Poor Sev.Can't wait for the next chappy.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I think we can more understand why Severus was such a loner and so introverted. Why he was so angry all the time. His life was hell. Thank you posting it tonight, should be validated in 3-4 days.

10/10

braye27

I felt so sorry for Raven when he viewed this next memory.  It has to be extremely frightening to think of the things he might see, and seeing them makes him both angry and sad.  He had to have great courage to make the decision to view the memories.  Thank goodness he has Hermione to help him deal with the aftermath.It was a blessing that he was there to stop her from waking from her nightmare and running helter-skelter through the darkness of the cave.  There is no telling what would have happened to her.Together they make a formidable team, and together they can work through the problems they encounter as they pursue their quest to rid Severus of the curse that Voldemort put on him through the Dark Mark he bears and to help Harry recover from the problems he suffers as a result of the connection he shared with the Dark Lord.This chapter hinted at the struggles they have ahead of them once Raven remembers all of Snape's memories:  “You are the only good thing in my life. I promise never to hurt you.”Hermione pressed herself against him. She knew he might not be able to keep that promise, but it was good to hear.Hopefully their love for each other and their determination to be together will give them the strength they will need to overcome the problems they will face.I really liked the description of the cave they found, and I did a little on-line searching to learn more about the marvelous caves in the area they are searching.  Nice work!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you I'm glad you felt so much for Severus. I wanted people to see why he's so bitter and hateful as an adult yet he has that heart of gold in the sacrifices he made for Lily and Harry.

I'm glad you like the way I have been writing this story so much. I really appriciate your long reviews. I am worried I won't be able to fulfil everyones expectations.

This story has been a joy to work on. I may have to do some special holiday shorts in the future :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Another great update, it is always a joy to find a new chapter to this story:-))

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much, i]I'm trying to get a new one up at least once a week.

0/10

sunny33

How big are those caves? Sounds like wonderland down there! :)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I've been in a few caves and they are wonderous. They can extent for a long ways.

0/10

kimjo2

sad, so sad.  such a painful life.  if it wasn't for harry he'd be better off living as raven.  wonderful update.  thanks so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Severus is a tragic character. So much sacrificed and no thanks.

I think he should stay Raven, too. Now why did Harry have to be injured and need his help, darn him LOL.

Thank you for reading

10/10

MollysSister

she watched the young woman soothe and heal the older man with her love  That is just the most perfect line. Its exactly what she is doing with her love!!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate your comments.

10/10

makaem

Poor Hermione.  It must feel awful to know that helping Harry may result in losing the Raven personality.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes, it is, hard for both of them. than so much for reading and reviewing.

0/10

kimjo2

wonderful update.  thanks so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

You very welcome :)

10/10

sinbad

Very nice, I liked Raven's admission about how Minerva felt like a mother.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I'm glad you liked that. I'm a sucker for soft scenes.

10/10

blue artemis

He should tell Minerva.  That was sweet.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you maybe he will some time. Mind if I borrow that Idea?

Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)

No, not at all, borrow away!

9/10

Sevvy

 I love that they are sharing this journey together and I also like the fact that they are quite happy that their relationship has been noticed. I imagine that they are going to need all the strength they can get from their shared new-found love in the upcoming chapters! :-)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank, glad you are enjoying it. Yes I think your right, they will need eachother.

10/10

I_Am

I anticipate greatly the upcoming journey! Mountains... Romania... What a setting for them!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I hope I'm up to your expectations. I'm getting quite crazy trying to keep it all straight LOL.

Glad you like the story so much.

10/10

lilashannah

Thank you! I need another Ravin chappy to make my day!!! I am glad Hermione isn't tell Ravin too much abut his past. He may not want to change back. Great as always 5 out of 5.I give it more if I could.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I think he's already very reluctant to go through with it all but he knows its necessary. Thanks so much for such a high rating, I appreciate it :)

9/10

June W

yipes.  all the work involved on finding the cave and it may not even have ANYTHING of use to them.  yet they have to find it.  I wonder if they can get help from Romanians wizarding community -- show them the Pensieve memory of the cave (if any).  thanks for the new chapter!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Interesting observations too bad I didn't think of that :) Glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

debjunk

I hope the memories he left will help him and be a comfort to him.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I think the one will be. Not sure Severus is capable of making anyone feel good. Maybe he just wants them to know important info for their journey to be a success. Thanks for the review.

10/10

beaweasley2

I was so hopeing that he'd remember more. Ah well. Two is a good start. A box of memories, eh. Good choice. And Minerva will help get them started on their journey. Willl they see all the memories bfore leaving or just a few?  When a patient wakes up from Anesia, there is confusion. That who they are has to meld with that which they had been. It's a difficult time. Some revert back, some do not. coma patients that wake up and have slow recall also experience this, but Raven has a totally different personality than Snape had. It will be interesting to see how you handle it.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I don't think hes' able to remember more because of the spell that is preventing him. The fact that he finds anything familiar is kind of a miracle. They will see some of the memories. I'm finding it hard to keep all the details in my head when writing something new and I keep haivng to go back and adjust things. Guess thats something else the journal ugh... I do expect that Severus will have some difficulty integrating what Raven is and was. We will see. It's not yet written :) It will be interesting lol. I hope I'm up to it, thnaks for the review

10/10

braye27

It was so very like Severus to have stored his memories and left a journal to help him regain his memories.  The moss sample may turn out to be an important clue in finding the right cave.  I can't wait to see how this journey turns out.  Thank you for a great update!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

It helped them narrow down the areas. Severus left them a journal of the caves that he had mapped out and had yet had a chance to explore. So far its been fun, I hope people will enjoy it.

Jeannie

0/10

sunny33

At least Severus had planned well in advance! :)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

If Severus is anything he's a survivor. I'm sure he thought of everything. His life had to be lived by taking in to account tiny details just to stay alive :)

0/10

kimjo2

i loved the way you wrote albus...would that he was like that.  this was a superb update.  thanks so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

You know I think the first Albus was like that. I just have never liked the new one. The first one had just a wonderful gentle twinkle in his eyes. Of course the books make Albus harder as time goes on. I think they all had to do things they didnt want to.

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks

10/10

ClayPotter

Ah, the journey. I take it that this will be part 2 of the story?This is fun. I'm glad you are sharing it with us.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I finished chapter 22 a little while ago and they are still on the journey :)
I'm so glad you are enjoying it.

10/10

Maddie

The plan was six months, then an owl? Wow, he could have been killed in the streets by then.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Sorry I know it was lame. Sorry to disppoint you.

Response from Maddie (Reviewer)

Don't take my comment as negative criticism on your plot. I was thinking it was the lack of care for Snape's well being we expect from Dumbledore.  I was NOT disappointed. You are writing an engaging story.

10/10

Maddie

I think the transition from friends to lovers was beautifully handled. It was time. They do seem to complete each other.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, I was hoping it wasn't too fast. I think they are wonderful together :) Thanks for enjoying the story.

0/10

luna_lovegood

I really love this story! I can only imagine what anyone would think when they are told to use the Floo for the first time! :) Lovely

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

ne sure can't forget the look on Harry's face LOL Thanks so much glad you like it.

10/10

lilashannah

AHHH!!! Why did you stop at a cliffy? You evil ,evil thing you!!Lol. I love the story,it's so well written and everybody comes to life. I want more,no,I need more so hurry and post!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Sorry LOL thanks so much :) The next chapters already in line for the correction process. I'm glad yoou are ejoying it so much.

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