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Potions Under Duress Raven
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Raven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 39

39: Chapter 38

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

60: Mr.

61: Mr.

62: Mr.

63: Mr.

Raven

gersknightlady

969 Reviews   |   969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 116,713 Words 63 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Poppy Pomfrey Dobby Original Character Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Alice Longbottom Frank Longbottom Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Eileen (Prince) Snape Lily (Evans) Potter Tobias Snape Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Luna Lovegood Percy Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Argus Filch Cho Chang Dean Thomas Katie Bell Kingsley Shacklebolt Lee Jordan Michael Corner Mrs. Norris Olympe Maxime Padma Patil Parvati Patil Roger Davies Susan Bones Terry Boot Xenophilius Lovegood Filius Flitwick Cedric Diggory Thorfinn Rowle

Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 39

Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 60: Mr.

Chapter 61: Mr.

Chapter 62: Mr.

Chapter 63: Mr.


About gersknightlady

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gersknightlady

Member Since 2008  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 343  |  915 Reviews Written  |  3,004 Review Responses

Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years.  I post SS/HG stories.

I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012)  It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house.  I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play. 


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10/10

ClayPotter

So love saves them once again.Now comes the moment of truth. Will Snape see what Raven sees when he looks at Hermione? Will he feel it?I anxiously await your next chapter!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

There are six weeks of potion brewing so we have some down time for them to just spend with each other.  I think thats spans a few chapters before the potions done. Glad you liked it :)

10/10

makaem

I'm almost afraid to find out whose blood is on there. And whose handprints...

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

You must have missed a chapter,  This was a blood oath that Voldemort made Snape take and those are his and Voldemort's prints.

10/10

neelix

Oh my goodness... so Dramatic, I love it!! Its Severus and Hermione meets Indiana Jones!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Glad you liked it so much.  I love Indiana Jones.LOL

10/10

I_Am

Dear Author, thank you so much! I am thrilled to see what happens next... I liked very much Raven's idea that he would be a different, less pleasant, person he is unaware of, when leaving that place, and that it would reside permanently in the body... Less pleasant for him, of course, not for us, readers, though ;)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LO looking forward to Severus, I don;t think you'll be disappointed.  Your right they will both be parts of Severus  if the potion and spell work.  Thanks so much.

0/10

slytherin_snake

  ok you can't do this to me  no more hi top cliff hangers lol    this is a wonderful story and i can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!!!!!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, glad you are enjoying it. Hope the next one will be in the next week.

10/10

MuseAmusant

Killer bugs, beetles, snakes, deadly crystal coffins... Voldemort pulled out all the stops, didn't he? Even in death he remains an unholy nuisance. But Hermione and Raven's love seems to still be enough to defeat the worst of the late unlamented Dark Lord's creations. If they succeed in bringing Raven's memories back, I do hope that Severus retains that love for Hermione... it would be so tragic for them to succeed in their quest but lose each other.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes he did and yes he has been a pain,  Yes Severus will after all have Raven inside of him as long as the potion and the spell works :)Thank so much glad you liked it.

10/10

beaweasley2

Very creepy cave. Snakes, beetles, locked in a crystal coffin... Voldemort sure wanted his privacy! I liked how Love conquered the spell, both of them. nicely done - again!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, I do appreciate all your help. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm off for vacation tomorrow. I'll be back on line Wednesday night.

10/10

rosered

Those were some terrible, menacing creatures!  Thankfully they got him out of that chrysalis without damaging either of them very badly.  What a rush!  I'm glad that the parchment has been found, but I'm saddened by what that will mean for Raven and Hermione's relationship.  I still have my fingers and toes crossed!!!  Great chapter.  :D 

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, glad the critters where menacing enough. Yes they are heading toward life changing things. Keep those fingers and toes crossed.

10/10

indigo_rose

The interesting thing about virtually all of the traps they dealt with in this chapter is that, had Severus been alone, he probably wouldn't have been able to deal with them.  It took the two of them to deal with the horde of snakes, the two of them to get all of the beetles, and Hermione's tears to undo the crystal coating Severus.  Voldemort obviously didn't think that anyone would be assisting Severus, whether they loved him or not, and based many of his tricks on the assumption that Severus would be in the cave alone.I'm bouncing in my chair to see what happens next!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL thanks so much. Your right Raven would have never made it there by himself, let alone would he have gotten even past the spider. Hermione has made all the difference. Glad you liked it. I hope you find the next chapter a bit of a respite with some very interesting information and choices.

10/10

braye27

I was so happy that the figure of Voldemort was only a memory.  Isn't it ironic that the one thing the Dark Lord didn't take into consideration when he placed the curses on this chamber was love.  When Raven and Hermione were united, hand in hand, they were protected from the green wall of light and the cursed wind that came from it.  Now it remains to see how many other curses await them, but at least they have found the parchment that is the blood oath.  I hope there aren't any curses on it.  They need to be able to destroy it before they can search for the spells that will allow Raven to recover his memories.I know he is afraid to attempt to regain his memories because he doesn't want to lose what he has with Hermione.  But I hope he will be brave enough to follow through, and I hope Hermione will be strong enough to weather the turmoil that will surely come.Thank you for this chapter, Jeannie.  It's marvelous!Hugs, Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks Beth, I'm so glad to finally get another one up. Ch 22 was such a nightmare it took forever. I've just uploaded ch 24. Maybe in a week it will be up as well. Yes, they do have to make those final decisions and it will be a hrad road to pass through.
Thanks so much for your well thought out review.
go back and look at the pictures I added to the first and last chapter of FDLA.
hugs, :)
Jeannie

10/10

Myst

Another goodie--I only have a quick minute to read but wanted to send a quick note.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much, hope you enjoyed it :)

10/10

Becky

Whoohoo.....Another chapter...Thank goodness Hermione's tears got Severus out of the encasing crystal, I was so worried..Excellent descriptions!..I hope they find the potion or spell to reverse the memory loss...Poor Severus, but I hope he will remember he loves Hermione once it is over. Can't wait till you update, This is so exciting...Squeeeeeeee!!!!!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Hi Beckly, I added your tag to the from of the story ch 1. Thank so much.
They do have afew trials to pass through still but it, I hope, will be worthwhile journey. Ch 24 is in the Queue.

Jeannie

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update, you sure knows how to make me sit on the egde of the chair:-)) I can't wait to read the next chapter, i must say that I also dread the moment Raven/Severus get his memories back, I would hate for him to hurt Hermione, to destroy the love they have built together.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Well, thanks so much, Im still working on the story so much is still unknown :)
I would think some hurts inevitable but she loves him and will be determined to make sure he knows that.

0/10

gurlimargrethe

Wow! can't wait for the next chapter

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, next chapter in the coming week I hope :).

10/10

blue artemis

I like that love was able to overcome everything.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, :)

10/10

braye27

The wards left by Voldemort to guard his lair were still powerful enough to cause Raven and Hermione many problems, but thank goodness they were beginning to weaken.  The dragon and the vampire were especially creepy.I liked the fact that Severus' Dark Mark is what allowed them to enter the last cavern.  Your description of what it was like to move through the rock wall was very well done.I think the thing that scared me the most was the image of Voldemort challenging Raven's being there because he betrayed the Dark Lord.  Hermione fainted and I nearly did, too.This was one of the most exciting chapters so far.  Well done!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Hi Beth, thanks so much for your excellent review. I'm pumped right now having come hoe from seeing HBP again for the second time. Severus looks so good in that movie. I'm glad yoou liked the chapter and the wall. It was loaned by a friend. It was the most action packed, there a bit more to come in the next chapter as well. Hope you enjoy it.
Jeannie

0/10

sunny33

Nothing is meant to be easy for those two! :)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

No its not, they've had to fight for everything they have. Much more still to go through.

0/10

kimjo2

whoa!  voldie's back?  this was a most exciting chapter. i did feel sorry for  the  dragon, tho.  thanks so  much and you are one of my favs!  smoochies forever

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I did too, that was horrible. It made me cringe to write it. Thank you so much for all the great comments.

10/10

debjunk

Oh, now what?  They got through all that to see this... what?  Apparition?  I think I'd faint too.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL glad you liked that, I deffinatley would if I thought Voldemort was waiting for me. Thanks :)

10/10

blue artemis

That was an adventure.  It read like an Indiana Jones movie! And now Hermione's fainted. 

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL poor thing that was too much in her exhausted condition. Glad you liked it.

10/10

sinbad

You did a wonderful job with the imagery.  Isn't it wonderful to have friends to give a helping hand?

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes it is, I originally thought of the spider, dragon, and Vampire beaweasely2 helped me use even more descriptive words to tell the story :)
Thank you glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

Clairvoyant

Amazing chapter.  The imagery is so vivid and scary.  Fabulous job.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much,, Im very glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

ClayPotter

An amazing chapter. Very tense. And now, another cliffy! This can't really be Voldemort -- can it?

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Hope to have the answer up soon. Glad it was exciting for you, Thank so much.

10/10

indigo_rose

Wow, gone for a little over a week and I find several chapters of this story waiting for me!    This chapter in particular was a real nail-biter, and Hermione had to face her fear of heights and flying not once, but twice.  Raven has been a real rock of support, and now it looks as though he's going to have to deal with Voldemort's shadow all by his lonesome.  Unless Hermione wakes up soon, that is!  I think this will be the real test for him, to know that he can handle danger and protect those he loves without having to lean on someone else (i.e. Dumbledore, Minerva, Hermione, whoever) every time.  Once Severus remembers himself, I think it will be easier for him to accept who he was as Raven if Raven doesn't seem weak and ineffectual in his eyes.Great cliffhanger (although if you had stopped while they were crossing the chasm, it really would have been a cliffhanger), and can't wait to see what happens next!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Hope its not a let down the next chapter has some adventures too. Raven done a greta job. Raven has his strengths and is a brave man. LOL din't want them to hang there to long but considering the difficult mess it was to get that one corrected and get all the spell stuff correct it was a nightmare. Maybe if we had cut it in half the pain would have also been cut in half LOL. Thanks.

0/10

Myst

Exciting chapter!  Nicely described.  To go through all of that and face a boggart--how cruel! :) 

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

well,maybe it shades of COS. Hope yu like the next chapter. Thanks glad you liked this one :)

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