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Potions Under Duress Raven
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Raven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 39

39: Chapter 38

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

60: Mr.

61: Mr.

62: Mr.

63: Mr.

Raven

gersknightlady

969 Reviews   |   969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 116,713 Words 63 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Poppy Pomfrey Dobby Original Character Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Alice Longbottom Frank Longbottom Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Eileen (Prince) Snape Lily (Evans) Potter Tobias Snape Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Luna Lovegood Percy Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Argus Filch Cho Chang Dean Thomas Katie Bell Kingsley Shacklebolt Lee Jordan Michael Corner Mrs. Norris Olympe Maxime Padma Patil Parvati Patil Roger Davies Susan Bones Terry Boot Xenophilius Lovegood Filius Flitwick Cedric Diggory Thorfinn Rowle

Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 39

Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 60: Mr.

Chapter 61: Mr.

Chapter 62: Mr.

Chapter 63: Mr.


About gersknightlady

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gersknightlady

Member Since 2008  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 343  |  915 Reviews Written  |  3,004 Review Responses

Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years.  I post SS/HG stories.

I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012)  It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house.  I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play. 


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10/10

rosered

Maybe it is for the best that Hermione feels the separation from Raven now while he is regressing in order to prepare herself for the inevitability of Severus' personality becoming dominant and possibly forcing Raven's out completely.  She has to be beside herself with grief at not being able to say goodbye to the lover and friend she has come to love and trust.  The only bright spot is the chance that they may have found the spell to heal Harry.  Very sad, but satisfying chapter!  :D

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Hope you like the beginning of the next chapter. Looks like your all for Severus to be back. Well this is the potion/spell chapter coming up let me know what you think. Thanks so much for all your comments.

10/10

debjunk

Now that was a surprise. I've mixed feelings on what may happen.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

The next chapter is the long awaited one :)

10/10

MollysSister

I wish they would have had a camera to take a picture of date night. it sounds just lovely

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Didn't think of that. Can't even say they will always have their memories. Will they, that is yet to be figured out :)

10/10

braye27

When I read the part where Raven was dressing for the dinner he and Hermione were planning, and read that he was looking "forward to the evening as any young man might on his first date," I knew that he had begun to revert to childhood.  How sad for both of them.  I don't know how Hermione will manage to brew the potion for three more weeks and watch over a petulant child... whom she loves with all her heart.  This will not be an easy time.  Will she be able to complete the potion?  Will she have to "correct" the child Raven has become?  Will he be sullen?  Will Severus remember his love for Hermione and who he was as Raven?This chapter leaves so many questions to be answered!  I'm looking forward to seeing how you resolve this dilemma.Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yep, it started and it escillated to
the end. Yes it was sad for both of them, hope you will like the moments in the next chapter and what finally happens as the potion is taken. Thanks, Beth.

Jeannie

10/10

Sampdoria

First of all let me thank you for another great update! Then I must admit that a part of me want to hide and not read the next chapters due to hating for Hermione to get hurt by the one(s) she loves. While my heart are breaking due to her having to face the rest of their stay with a Raven who have lost himself and thus their relationship, knowing that she will never get Raven back, what she will get is a Severus who most likely will break her heart and stamp on the remains of her selfesteem, makes me both dread the next chapters and craving them at the same time. I just cross my fingers that you won't give us  a Severus who behaves so badly that I won't forgive him, no matter how much Hermione loves him. This is a gem of a story and you write it so well, one should take great pride in managing to stir emotions like you do here:-))

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much, what kind words you have given me. Yes, there is a lot of pain and just maybe lots of joy as well in time. Severus has never been a kind man has he. I don't think he will change too soon unless Raven works his way into who Severus is. I'm glad that it has made you feel so much. I have loved writing it.

0/10

gifarlme

poor Hermione!  looking forward to your next chapter!!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much. :)

10/10

I_Am

Thank you for this update! Voldemort definitely hasn't foreseen the possibility that Severus would bring someone with him... Poor Hermione... A man whom she loves turning into (petulant?) child... Oh my...

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL Yes, I guess he has become a petulant child. But she will handle it all, it's not easy what she faces. But she is strong. Thanks

10/10

MuseAmusant

Poor Hermione. It sounds like things will be pretty rough for awhile, but I hope it's all worth it in the end. At least they found something to help Harry. I can only imagine what he would have thought of Raven. I think Raven was the man Severus was meant to be... maybe he needs to go through all this for Severus to become whole for the first time in his life?

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

You know Harry would have loved Raven and visa versa, too bad they don't egt to meet each other. You have made a very good observation there :)
Thanks so much.

10/10

Becky

OH NO! Poor Hermione, Oh I hope the potion is sucessful and Raven gets his memories back and that when he is Severus again, he will remember what he as Raven shared with Hermione..Their Love and caring for one another...Well done!!  What a wonderful surprise to wake up to this morning! I LOVE IT!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

, I hope that you will like the next one, this is it! There is so much more to go...its in the Queue.

10/10

blackaces924

ooooooh!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL hope that meant you liked it.

10/10

mimmom

Oh man, fun's a coming!  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  I love this story.  Poor Raven.  I hope he remembers himself eventually

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

This next chapter is it, I think you'll like it. Thanks :)

10/10

sinbad

Sweet chapter, lets hope they can break the spell with out any more problems.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it, the potion's not with out its drawbacks, oope you like the next one :)

10/10

blue artemis

Poor Hermione.  At least now that she knows she can be considerate of the child.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes, she can and she does do the best she can.

10/10

MollysSister

So for the next 6 weeks there will be no more communication to the outside. Minerva is going to go out of her head! 

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I guess she must be, sort of forgot about her. opps.

10/10

MollysSister

THat would be so wonderful if the magic worked on Neville's parents as well! My fingers are crossed.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Mine too, I really hope the whole thing works out. Got to get writing again. I'm stuck right now and on vacation :)

10/10

braye27

OMG!  What an evil Potion the Dark Lord dreamed up for Severus.  I am just thankful that he has Hermione to brew the potion for him.  I'll bet she will have a time of it trying to brew the potion and take care of Raven as he reverts to a child while the brewing is going on.Six weeks in that cavern!  It seems like their bravery and their fears will be tested time and time again.  A lot can happen during that time as they oversee the making of the potion and try to explore the various nooks and crannies in this darkest of caves.  I'm sure Voldemort has left many traps for them!This is another great update, Jeannie.Hugs, Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I'm glad you liked that. The brewing will be tough and they spend some time just for themselves. I hope yu enjoy the chapters even though they may not be what you imagine :) Thanks so uch Beth.

10/10

blue artemis

Six more weeks.  They probably feel like their life together has an end date.  But I do hope it will work out for them.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you there is a deffinate point in which changes are set to happen. I too hope it works out since it's not all yet written :)

0/10

kimjo2

wonderful update.  thanks so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Your welcome stay tuned :)

10/10

Becky

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......Oh wonderful...I love this chapter!!  Glad they are being careful in the cavern, and I'm glad Severus/Raven has Hermione there to help him if the results of brewing are to lose oneself and become childlike...Well done! Can't wait for another chapter....Whoohoo!!!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks so much glad you liked the chapter, there will be one or two (I think) till the potion is ready and then the future is less certain for our lovers.

Response from Becky (Reviewer)

Gasp...OH NO!!!!  You mean Severus doesn't remember, OH NO no it can't happen! sniff!!!!  LOL!!!  I know you will work it out for our couple....

10/10

Sampdoria

Another wonderful update, thank you! Their love for eachother is so deep and magnificient, there is no way Severus will be able to forget it or deny it, he just won't be allowed to do so!!!As always looking forward for the next update:-))

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you so much, Yoour words are evry kind and and I hope you are right. There would be so much for Severus to adjust in his life, will love win out...stay tuned. :)

10/10

MuseAmusant

All the comforts of home, indeed. At least Hermione and Raven ought to be nice and cozy while Hermione brews the potion. And then comes the fun part. Knowing Voldemort, I can't imagine taking that potion will be the most pleasant experience in the world. Particularly considering how unpleasant Severus' life was, both as a child and the Death Eater/spy. Good thing Hermione will be there for him every step of the way. :-)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes, she will be there for him through thick and thin. Severus Snape as never been a nice man. He may not respond well to the whole idea :) But Hermione won't give up.

10/10

rosered

I feel for Raven and Hermione even more than I did before.  The lengths that they have gone and the dangers that they have faced in order to have a chance of bringing Severus' memories back to him has strengthened their relationship in a way that merely spending time together could never have done.  They deserve the six weeks worth of lemons.I'm glad that the parchment has been destroyed and that Hermione is going to brew the potion for him.  Still have my fingers and toes crossed.  Lovely chapter!  :D

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, yes they had a lot to go through and there is still a lot to deal with. But our Hermione is quite a fighter don't you think :)

0/10

kimjo2

that was exciting and terrifying at the same time!  leave it to voldie to be a lousey loser.  faboo update.  thanks so much

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks so much, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I hope a new chapter will be up by the end of the week.

10/10

debjunk

Great spells! And now we get to the answer.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks hope you enjoy their time in
the cave.

10/10

MollysSister

I thought the creepiest part of this chapter was them going through that thick wall. It made the claustraphobic in me jump out and scream!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Sorry, you found it hard  to deal with, it was an amazing idea , not mine though.  :)

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