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Potions Under Duress Raven
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Raven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 39

39: Chapter 38

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

60: Mr.

61: Mr.

62: Mr.

63: Mr.

Raven

gersknightlady

969 Reviews   |   969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 116,713 Words 63 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Aberforth Dumbledore Poppy Pomfrey Dobby Original Character Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Alice Longbottom Frank Longbottom Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Eileen (Prince) Snape Lily (Evans) Potter Tobias Snape Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Luna Lovegood Percy Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Argus Filch Cho Chang Dean Thomas Katie Bell Kingsley Shacklebolt Lee Jordan Michael Corner Mrs. Norris Olympe Maxime Padma Patil Parvati Patil Roger Davies Susan Bones Terry Boot Xenophilius Lovegood Filius Flitwick Cedric Diggory Thorfinn Rowle

Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 39

Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 60: Mr.

Chapter 61: Mr.

Chapter 62: Mr.

Chapter 63: Mr.


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gersknightlady

Member Since 2008  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 343  |  915 Reviews Written  |  3,004 Review Responses

Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years.  I post SS/HG stories.

I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012)  It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house.  I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play. 


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10/10

indigo_rose

Glad Hermione told Severus about her teaching position during their first real conversation together since she accepted.  That way, he can't think that she was keeping it from him and trying to trick him.  Of course, she's still getting a bit of the cold shoulder from him, but that's more because he's running scared than anything else.  He's all too willing to believe that anyone at all is more important to other people than he is, including his own amnesiac persona!  It's very sad that he cannot believe that he is worthy of anyone's affection or even kind regard.  Minerva just needs to keep on giving him some Tough Love, and keep her foot in the emotional door so Hermione has more of a chance to squeeze through!Can't wait to see how things continue to develop!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes, he is running scared and he may for another chapter or two but it will get better. He is having some trouble thinking that Raven is himself. It's like a different man had the life he's always dreamed off. One he's been to afraid to even voice to himself.

Thanks so much for all your kind words and thoughts on the story.

0/10

Myst

And it continues.  Thanks for another chapter!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes, it does continue, I'll be starting ch 43 this week, Getting close to the end. Thank you !

10/10

Becky

Love it, Love it..I see Raven is slowly making his way into Severus' emotions...great chapter, slowly Hermione is getting through to him...I'm glad!Looking forward to more! Whoohoo!!!  WELL DONE!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks,

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The enxt one see's a little more inside Severus head.

10/10

Zigflorian

Wow that was great!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, glad you liked it.

10/10

GryffKat

Squeeee!!!! You are genius! Your team is genius! I love this story. Hurray for a great chapter

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I'm sure my "team" of Alphas and my wonderful Beta thank you too. Each and every one of them has been a wonderful help to help me fine tune my ideas.

10/10

braye27

Stubborn as usual, Severus will torture himself with denial until the moment comes that he can no longer bare to be apart from Hermione, and from the things he told Minerva, I think that process has already begun.  Each time he sees her, his heart is calling out to him to let down the barriers he has used to protect his heart for all these years.I can tell from the things he said while he and Hermione were talking about brewing the potion that he sees her differently than he did when he was her teacher.  I hope Hermione will be able to hold her tongue until the time is right, but I do think that sooner or later she will have to spell out to him exactly how much she loves him and how he, as Raven, loved her.Another great chapter, Jeannie!  Thank you.Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Beth, You got it right, Severus is runnign scared and having a hard time controling "Raven's" desires and feelings. I think he does see Hermione as a collegue now. One he can respect and work with.

Yes the next chapter has it good part's and it's difficult parts but it's all a part of the growing up,Severus has to do.

Thank so much for your review.

10/10

makaem

It feels like things are starting to change for the better. The conversationi with Minerva was wonderful.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you. Yes, there was progression and a bit more to come...:)

10/10

neelix

Oh, I loved this chapter! Severus's conflicted emotions were described so wonderfully, and the angst between them both made me want to see her throw herself at him regardless!I am so excited about the next chapter I can't tell you!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I'm glad you saw so much in the chapter, I thoought people would be a bit dissapointed in the lttle progress it makes. But it's necessary. I think the next one will bring us a bit closer to a changing Severus.

10/10

June W

I'm glad Minerva spoke so bluntly to him.  Thanks for updating!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you! hope to have another up soon, I'm about to start Ch 43 now :)

10/10

blue artemis

I hope he starts to listen.  She is quite willing to love Severus.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes, she is. I think it will get through his thick hide eventually :)
Thanks for your comment.

0/10

sunny33

Well, that's progress! :)

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Yes, Severus is changing and letting things come more aturaly to him.  Thank you.

10/10

debjunk

Slowly he's getting it. I'm glad Minerva had a small part in it too. She definitely told him what for. I hope he truly listens. That actually went better than I had expected!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, I'm glad you like it, things are gona get going real soon, hang in there. More Hermione and Severus coming up :)

10/10

debjunk

I don't know about forgiving Albus, but I do hope he forgives himself!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I hope so , :)

0/10

kimjo2

hope is glimmering thru the gloom! i like albus way better dead than i did alive. and how wise is minerva, just like her namesake. splendid update. thanks muchly

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story. I'm not familiar with Minerva's name sake :( There is hope looming.

Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)

She was the roman goddess of wisdom.  the greeks called her athena.  her symbol was the owl.

10/10

mimmom

very good.  I can't wait to read more.I thought the word "gawd" was a bit odd.  Usually that is used to be a bit silly and this was not a silly moment.  Not to mention that both Hermione and Raven had some Christian tendencies and most of the people who spell Gawd that way do it as an exaggeration that mocks Christians.  I'm not Christian, I'm atheist and I do occaisionally spell it that way so it doesn't offend me , it just kind of doesn't fit the story.  Anyway, it's a minor point that I happened to notice.  I still LOVE LOVE LOVE the story.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Sorry, I spelled it that way becasue I didn't want to use God's name in vain. I guess I go back and forth on that. Wasn't aware it was naking fun of. Maybe I'll find a different word altogether next time. Thanks for poiting that out.

Glad you are enjoying the story.

10/10

MollysSister

Minerva is a wise wise woman!! And the MVP of the chapter! Woot!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks I think, not sure what MVP means but glad you liked it :)

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

Oh sorry about the lingo! MVP is a sports thing, its stands for Most Valuable Player.

10/10

MollysSister

Was that a swoon there at the end! Oh Hermione one baby step forward with Severus and then 3 back. Makes me wish for Raven again.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL, give them time they will start to move forward soon.

Thanks :)

10/10

sinbad

Heartbreaking, and yet ended on a more hopeful note.  Well done.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

It's gona get better soon, needed a few chapters to let Severus be Severus. Thank you so much.

10/10

indigo_rose

Ah, even as a portrait Dumbledore just can't stop meddling!    I'll bet the Hat really wanted him to go to Slytherin when he was Sorted, but he said no.  I just hope that Sev doesn't feel like his future's been trapped all over again when he finds out about Hermione after having signed the contract.  I have no doubt he will take it out on her, especially if part of him feels happy about the arrangement.  Hermione will need to be tenacious and thick-skinned, but I'm confident she'll make it.Figures Severus would get a kick out of still being able to frighten the students!  It will be fun to see if he regrets his decision of taking back Potions after seeing how far behind the classes are from where they should be, or if it will just reassure him that he made the right choice after all.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Oh Albus will forever meddle. His reaction was fun to right. LOL Remember he's also fighting with what he wants inside :).
There is some mention of his classes later but the main story doesn't much touch their teaching portion's of the day.

Yes, he did enjoy freaking the kids out. LOL

Thanks so much for the review

10/10

makaem

Albus has a lot of faith.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

And he's usualy right :)

10/10

neelix

Great chapter! Now we just need to get them back together!

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thank you, I know chapters with out them arn't much fun but it was necessary to progress the story. There will be more of them soon. More interation. I don't think you'll be disappointed.

10/10

I_Am

Thank you so much for Albus' reassuring words ;) *****, as usual...

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

LOL are you making a joke? Some people don;t like him much. I'm not sure I like JKR verosn of how he ended either but I love my Albus.

Thanks :)

0/10

FANDJIO

There will be a long and difficult way before Hermione wil find Serverus Snape 'heart In this way, the story is more real It's a good job Thank you

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

She does think so, but remember Raven is part of him now.

I'm so glad you liked it, thanks :)

10/10

blue artemis

Albus is still meddling.  But I do see some hope there.

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, there always hope :)

10/10

braye27

Oh, Jeannie, you're breaking my heart.  Hermione is so heartbroken, and I hope she can master her emotions and hurt feelings long enough to become Severus' friend.  He misses her so much now that surely it's only a matter if time before they can find their way back to the love they knew when it was Raven who was present.Severus misses her so badly he can't sleep.  To make matters worse, ever since he read what Raven wrote in his journal about how Firewhiskey had taken their life away, he couldn't drink anymore.I'm glad that Severus signed the contract that Minerva offered him, and hope he will not be too angry when he finds out that Hermione will be teaching at Hogwarts.  Maybe Severus will need Hermione's help with the book of spells, and that will be a gateway to rekindling the love.Great, angsty chapter!Beth

Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)

Thanks, Sorry there had to be some real transition time here. Severus has to come to terms with the possible changes he could come across inside himself. Yes, he misses her, but I'm not sure he's ready to admitt it to himself.Yes he does have a very strong reaction in the next chapter :)Thanks so much for your review.

Jeannie

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