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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
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When Severus finds out that Hermione will be working at Hogwarts and that Minerva had him sign the contract but neglected to inform him of that minor detail, he's sure to smell a setup. Will Hogwarts survive the resulting explosion? ^-^
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
:) I think you will find out in the next chapter. Stay Tuned.
Thanks for the review.
great chapter. can't wait for the next one. hopefully will be soon since other stories are updating 3 to 7 chapters in one day.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
If they are doing that on TPP then they have an inside road I don't have. I can ony load one chapter at a time. Then I have to wait till they check it then I have to make corrections. I was told there is a four day wait between chapters of the same story. So not sure how someone can get that many updated in one day.
Thanks so much I'm so glad that you enjoy the story.
Severus coming back voluntarily gives me hope. I'm glad Dumbledore's portrait will go with Minerva, although I can imagine the Board would want it eventually. Thanks for updating!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Well that was an off handed remark. One can hope severus will chnage his mind like Dumbeldore says. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Well... he signed the contract. That's a step in the right direction, right? Or will he explode when he realizes Hermione will be teaching there as well? Poor Hermione, missing Raven and being mothered to death at the Burrow. Maybe being around the Weasley's will help her heal her heart. Great chapter! :D
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, yes Severus will be ticked when he finds out. I hope yoou enjoy the scene. Hermione doesn't stay there too long. She needed to reconnect with her friends.
I'm so glad you liked the chapter
Oh I can't wait for Hermione to get back to the castle!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL she'll be back soon Hang in there.
This is getting really good. As well as the first part was written, I was really aching to get the real Severus Snape back! I'm looking forward to seeing how the two of them come back together!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much, I hope you continue to enjoy Severus :) I'm working on ch 40 now :)
Oh, poor Hermione.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yep, its a rough one for her.:)
There is something to be said for physical memory, but I feel so bad for Hermione. Although he did call her Hermione, so there is some hope.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
There always hope :) Raven is inside, he is a part of Snape now.
Thanks,
So cold. THat was so hard. I hope Severus will really take Raven's words to heart. Poor Hermione!Livvy
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yeah but I think every one needed to see Snape as he was. The Snape we have all come to love LOL. Raven is now a part of him.
Poor Hermione! Months and months of working with a loving man only to see him disappear. And in his place, a man with his face but not his heart, someone who would assume that he was, once again, only being used. I hope, in time, Severus will find Raven somewhere within himself.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Hang in there is a lot more story to go. Yes, Severus Snape is back but Raven lives inside now.
Ack! He better read Raven's book of memories, perhaps when Hermione is asleep. And his mother's necklace of memories. Yikes, I hope you update again soon. Thanks for this new chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I will be putting the next chapter in the queue today, Maybe by next week it will be ready. Glad it's keeping you on edge, that was it's purpose LOL relax. This is a romance.
more please as soon as humanly possible. Its getting rather tense!!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I will put the next chapter into the queue today, Hope by early next week it will be up. I'm so glad you liked it.
Love to see the old Severus back, even though he's a bit out of it concerning Hermione. Looking forward to seeing how he handles this new/old life.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I think he will feel more now, I don't think he's gona like it at first :)
Well, it's sad, but it was bound to be rocky, especially at first. I am glad you decided to bring him back, though. It would be nice if they could integrate his memories a bit, though I suppose that's what the journal's for. :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Hang it there, Severus has to get his barrings. I am working on chapter 34 so there is a lot more to go :)
Thanks so much for the review.
Yeah, he's back--and exactly as he should be. Now for the fun parts of the transition because we KNOW you aren't going to have him leave forever into the moonlight. . . .. .
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL you got that right...it will be fun and hard and ...well its not all written yet sigh.
OMGoodness, Poor Hermione...Please tell me Severus reads the diary, and will remember....I hope they can help Harry restore his memories..Well done, Excellent chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Wow that was a short review for you. Hope you will like the chapters that are comng up. thanks for your kind words. I was hoping everyone would enjoy this one and they did though it makes a few people crazy LOL.
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Made me crazy, Severus was back to his old gruff self, and I wanted to smack him...I really felt sorry for Hermione, after she hugged him and kissed him and he pushed her back...But at least he likes the way she felt in his arms even if he doesn't understand it...As for my previous post, I had my hubby reading over my shoulder! LOL..YES Mr. Nosy!!!Sorry it was so short, but I loved the chapter!!!
Ok, I admit that Professor Snape had to return, maybe... And I guess that the situation with Hermione migth come as a big shock to him, and we know how well Severus handle unwanted shocks. But, I have very little leway for a grown mans issues, despite all he has gone through it is about time he grows up: That includes to treat Hermione with some decorum of respect, no matter if he doesn't remember Raven, and it includes to stop punishing a child for its fathers sins. From day one he has treated Harry with a hatred that was irrational and childish. Punishing Harry for deeds done by people Harry never knew, both the bullying from James and Sirius, but also for Lily not loving him as he did her. Hermione deserves better than a man such as that, I am quite tempted to wish for her to walk away from him while telling him to seek her up if he ever grows up....I love this story, and I am very much looking forward for the next update (but I will have a box of rotten tomatoes to throw at Severus if he doesn't behave:-)))
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad your happy with Snape being back. It was inevitable don't you think. He has to be a whole person. Yes, Snape has a lot of issues. I'm so glad you love the story. It has been such fun writing it.
wow - Severus was Severus and not Raven. Poor Hermione...hopefully she can knock some sense into him and bring Raven back. I need another chapter as well
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes. he was. He had to come back eventually, but he still has Raven inside. Another up soon. 4 days rule between chapters.
That was unexpected... I hoped that Severus would at least associate Hermione with something close and warm, but , oh, we'll see; maybe he will gradually reveal his other self... Read the journal and look into memories left for you, Severus; it's an order! LOL I am an emotional girl... Waiting for another excellent chapter, dear author!!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Really, he had to come back eventually don;t yoou think. There was a couple of tiny moments there when he wished she would hold him longer. He has a lot ot assimilate :)
Thaks you so much another one up by next week.
I think I want the next chapter already?*grins*You've put everything in place, so now it is all up to Severus. Sounds like things may get rough for a bit, but I have confidence in Severus coming around at the end.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL glad to hear it. New chapter into the queue today. You got the right idea there. It won't be easy. Thanks so much.
I think your going to kill me by prolonging this story lol it's great can't wait for the rest!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL sorry hang in there. I'm glad you are enjoying it so much. New chapter in the queue today.
It couldn't be so easy, could it?Nice Professor Snape, by the way. Though I wish he could have remembered . . . oh well.Great story!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
was that easy. Weeks of brewing, all thethings they went through. Ravens digression. Nothing was easy. Now Snape is back and he's not a nice man. But Raven is there too. Thanks so much.
This is so odd. He hasn't ingested the potion yet, but he is already reacting to it? How? Just from the fumes? and if so, then why isn't Hermione also feeling its effects?I must admit I am a bit confused. But the circumstances do make for a very interesting twist.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
It was explained that one effected by the curse would have adverse reactions to the brewing process, yes in effect the fumes would changed him, make him grow younger and younger mentally. Hermione is not effected becasue she iis not cursed.
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)
Interesting combination of romantic, frustrating and scary things going on in this chapter. The combination of which melded surprisingly well.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you! Really glad it worked for you. It did have a lot in it. On to the potion next.
how painful. she may loose him twice. superb update. i'm so glad he saw that memory of his mother. thanks so much
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I wanted Raven to see at least one fully positive one. :)