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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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gersknightlady
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
Reviews for Raven
She DID have a bottle. I didnt think someone would throw away perfectly good booze. Heh. The thought of Snape pouring booze on his wounds made me shudder. I bet that really smarts.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I bet it did, well it was far fetched LOl but it worked for the story.
How pissed is Raven going to be when he realizes she doesnt have the bottle? meep
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL, guess we wait to see
I'm so glad that they're going to enlist outside help, finally--while they're both formidable intellectually, even they can't do it all alone! Hopefully having Minerva and Dumbledore's portrait on their side will at the very least be an encouragement to them, and expanded resources as well. The Hogwarts library should have some good research material, at any rate.Also like how their relationship is growing, despite their misgivings regarding the return of Raven's memories and how that may affect his personality. There may be some bumps in the road, but I know it will turn out all right! I see the next chapter is in queue... I will check back soon to read it...
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I finally decide they did net some help and moral support. They still have to face most of it together though.
I'm glad you are enjoying their grwing relationship. Hope a new ones up soon usually take 4-5 days.
This is my favorite chapter yet! I adore the clean gentleman Raven. I hope the potion they make helps.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I enjoyed him too :) sexy man LOL
YES! Going to talk to Dumbledore's portrait will surely be of help in some way. Even if he doesn't know the answer right away, he will be able to give them some information that may point them in the right direction.I was so happy that Severus and Hermione were able to talk honestly about their feelings for one another. Both deserve a chance for happiness after all the unhappiness they have lived through. Their lovemaking was very sweet and gentle, like two who are just coming to terms with the depths of their feelings would do.I'll be interested to see how Hermione goes about getting in touch with Minerva and what the Headmistress' reaction will be when she finds out that not only is Hermione alive, but Severus is too.Great chapter, dear!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I do hope you enjoy the next chapter all your questions will be answered. I'm a fan of gentle sweet not too explicit love making. Thats as far as I'm willing to go :) You can add all the details with your own mind :)
Thanks so much glad you enjoyed it.
Its so bittersweet that their roles have reversed. now she is the teacher and he is the person needing help.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yes she is, but hopefuly in time he will be able to be atleast an equal.
How truly lovely this story is. I love the way you have refrained from using overly erotic or explicit words to describe their love making - makes it sound so much sweeter and nicer in their case. I'm so glad that they've found true joy with each other; I feel sure that they have indeed become 'one whole person' in each case. And I loved the phrase 'thank you for making me human again'... :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you what a sweet review. I don't like writing really detailed sex. I think its betetr left to your own imagination. I'm glad you like the statement. I guess he felt pretyy low out there in the city. Terrible life.
thanks for the review more coming soon.
Giving one's soul to another...
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
you can't get any closer than that :)
"Thank you for making me human again." Sniff ... so beautiful.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks so much, glad you like it.
That was so lovely. I don't want to lose Raven.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I kind of like him myself, thanks so much.
What a lovely first time for our favorite couple. I just hope things work out for them once Raven regains his memory and all the baggage and complications that come with being Severus Snape.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I hope so too. That hasn't all mapped itself out in my brain yet.
Thank you glad you enjoyed their "first time."
So, back to old Dumbles, huh? :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
yep don't you like him?
That was very sweet. I am interested in reading if they talk to DD portrait .Livvy
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, glad you liked it...more to come soon :)
HM Interesting that - real posibility that Dumbledore might know something. I enjoyed Raven's reaction to the pictures in the history book - nothing like watching the warbattle rage while you're reading about it! LOL It's going to be fun to see his reaction to the portraits! Nice lemons too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
LOL glad you enjoyed that...Lemons?
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Lemons = sex
Nice chapter, this story is progressing nicely.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you glad you liked it.
This is a lovely story. I'm enjoying it very much.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much.
whoa! so that's what happened! great update. thanks
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
thanks glad yoou liked the idea :)
Thank you for another great update!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you for such a nice comment :)
wow, i can't wait to read the next chapter! maybe that is the secret message to Raven!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks hope to have another up soon, Thanks
Thanks for answering! Severus' childhood was very sad without doubt. You story is not making me sad, I find it quite touching. FF is the site calles simply "fanfiction", if you google it you will find it.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks for the information. Glad you are enjoying the story. Are you also reading my other story From Death to Life Again.
Now they are getting somewhere. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks :) glad you liked that :)
Well that explains his memory loss. Viewing his memories was heartbreaking.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Yeah even though his mother loved him I think knowing what Severus was like it still has to have a hard edge to it. Yes they have been heartbreaking. Thanks for reading.
Your story is heartbreaking. I'm impatient to read the next chapter.Is it possible to loose your memory for a moment and when you recover it not to remember the time during which you had your memory lost? Because I find it a little bit strange, but I'm not a doctor ;).Why don't you publish your story on FF? I have the impression that the stories there are validated very quickly.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Sorry you find it so sad,but I really doubt Severus had a good childhood. A recent soap had a story line where the amnesia victim could not rememeber the life she had been lving once her memory came back, but then...
What is FF? Thanks for reading.
Great chapter. The scene with Eileen and her baby was just heartbreaking./M
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
thanks, sorry it was, I think Severus had a hard life.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
No need to be sorry. It fitted perfectly.
Oh wow! So that's what happened!! Awesome chapter....
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
thanks glad you enjoyed it :)