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Raven
gersknightlady969 Reviews | 7.71/10 (969 Ratings, 0 Likes, 308 Favorites )
Having fled the Wizarding World Hermione comes face to face with her past.
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
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Journey? Ooooo... this sounds like a thrilling adventure is in the wings!Hermione's and Raven's return to Hogwarts could not have gone better. It must have given Raven a great sense of relief to be able to hear from Dumbledore's own mouth that he held absolutely no animosity toward him for killing him.“Of course not, son. It was I who asked the terrible task of you. We both had to make horrendous choices and sometimes carry out terrible deeds to get through that war. I know what I asked of you broke your heart.” A twinkle returned to his eye. “I see you have a lot of support now.”I loved how Minerva and Albus reacted to Raven and Hermione's obvious feelings for one another. This is a good omen, I think. Despite the older couple's surprise, they gave every appearance that they were glad the younger couple had such a close bond.Marvelous chapter, Jeannie! Simply marvelous!Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
So far the journey is quite a ride, I'm working on Ch: 22. I think your right about Raven's meeting with Dumbeldore. He was horrified that he'd killed his only friend. I'm glad you enjoyed the interactions with the older characters.I think those two have lived for Hogwarts most of thier lives and they think of all those kids as their children, expecially the ones that don;t have caring parents.
Thanks so much glad you enjoyed it :)Jeannie
yay! they finally got together. wonderful update. thanks so much
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much :)
And the plot thickens... This story has been a very good read, I'm enjoying it a lot.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you glad you are enjoying it, more up soon :)
I'm so glad that he was able to 'meet' up with Dumbledore and that the old wizard was able to reassure him over his death. Bit by bit Severus is starting to be put back together again I believe. I'm now far less worried than originally about him actually getting his memory back; I think by the time that happens he will have actually become 'Raven' who surely is just his true self any way!BTW: I love the idea that Severus made perfume for Minerva McGonagall when he was Potions master - wonder what he called it? Think Poison has already been done but, then again in his current persona as 'Raven', I guess it would be something much lighter and sweeter - 'Angel' maybe!! :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad you are relaxing and just enjoying the ride. I don;t think you will be disappointed. I sure hope so, It's still a work in progress.
I never thought about a name for the perfume. That's something to think about. :)
I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much.
I'm guessing he won't find getting his memories back to be an easy thing. I really like this version of Snape, I hope some of it sticks around.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I think your right. I'm gllad you like Raven, I like him very much too :) Thanks for the review.
What a sweet chapter -- hope and forgiveness and a glimpse of more adventures to come. Perfect!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you for the kind words. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Another brilliant update! I am just so totally in love with this story, it really makes my day to see an update!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm so glad you love it so much. I love writing it. Hope to have the next chapter up soon.
*sigh* I have been following this story since the first chapter - please excuse me for not leaving a review after each and every one. I love the idea of Snape losing his entire memory, giving room to his true, unspoilt self before he remembers to be a bastard again. And I am very much looking forward to this journey you are hinting at.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you so much for posting this time. I really love hearing from the readers. Very well thoought out character analysis. :) Hope you do enjoy the adventure. I'm in the middle of it and I'm writing ch:22
Ah, good, Severus has forgiveness and Raven a sense of release. I loved Minerva's responce to seeing him.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm so glad you liked those two scenes. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
It is good that Raven no longer carries a heavy burden for Dumbledore's death... Waiting for journey ;) *****
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm glad you are relieved. I'm working on Ch: 22 and they are still on the adventure :)
phew! that went better than I expected. Minerva was wise in clearing out the portraits until her visitors arrived, and I'm glad Raven let her hug him. it will be good for Hermione to have help with restoring Raven's memory and paying for expenses. thank you for the new chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I'm not sure he even thought about it before she grabbed him :). But it was touching. I thought it was time they had a bit of support. They needed help and I couldn't think of two people more able to help them. Thanks.
Journey? Sounds interesting. It also sounds like there will be an end and it will be a favorable ending.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Every story has an end, but there is so much more to write before we know if it will be a good one :)
Thanks for reading.
Journey?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
A journey to find the answers they need.
This is a nice choice you've made here. Now, I'm looking very much forward to Raven recovering his memories. I'm even managing to like your Dumbledore here. Well done.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thank you, the Dumbeldore in my mind is much nicer that the real one I think. I've always liked him but I'm seeing more of a cruel side to him in the movies. Maybe not cruel but hard. I hope you will enjoy their adventure.
Minerva is going to flip out when she hears from them. I wonder if it would be so bad if Raven never gets the Snape memeories back?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Would we really want all that was Snape gone. He had some great qualities of sacrifice in his makeup. I would say Minerva is in for a shock. :)Thanks so much.
Just stumbled upon your story tonight; Read it all in one sitting. It's lovely and I can't wait to see where you are taking it. Keep up the good work
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Wow thanks so much. Glad you are enjoying it. I post a new chapter as fast as I can. Im working on ch. 21 now.
HOLY SHIT Snape did guess what would happen to him!! I have goose bumps I tell you. Love where you are going with this.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks so much. Glad you like it.
Brilliant Elieen!!! What a legacy to leave to her son. I am impessed with her cleverness
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Thanks, I hope I can do her justice with a few more memory trips for them.
Thanks :)
Isnt that just like Severus to keep an accounting of the good and bad things he did. As if God did keep track of deeds on a scale.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
thats an idea, its a good thing God doesn't that grace is free.
That was honorable of Hermione to point out she has been doing all the leading. I do hope when Raven gets his memories back he wont be to terrible to her?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I really hope he won't either. I haven't gotten there yet :) But we do have to see a bit of the old Severus don't you think.
I feel like they are well on their way now to helping not only Raven but hopefully Harry as well.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
I hope they will eventually, I still have a way to go to get there.
Is there a house elf hiding out there to help them? ((hopes))
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
Maybe eventually who knows, good idea :)
I didnt even notice the way he was speaking till Hermione pointed it out LOL!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
That is funny LOL.
This is so sad seeing the depths Snape has sunk to. I do hope she can help him.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Raven)
It was sad. But thats what Hermione does, she helps people and house elves :)