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Hilltop Cottage

1: Prologue

2: One

3: Two

4: Three

5: Four

6: Five

7: Six

8: Seven

9: Eight

10: Nine

11: Ten

12: Eleven

13: Twelve

14: Thirteen

15: Fourteen

16: Fifteen

17: Sixteen

18: Seventeen

19: Eighteen

20: Nineteen

21: Twenty

22: Twenty-One

23: Twenty-Two

24: Twenty-Three

25: Twenty-Four

26: Twenty-Six

27: Twenty-Five

28: Twenty-Seven

29: Twenty-Eight

30: Twenty-Nine

31: Thirty

32: Thirty-One

33: Thirty-Two

34: Thirty-Three

35: Thirty-Four

36: Thirty-Five

37: Thirty-Six

38: Thirty-Seven

39: Thirty-Eight

40: Thirty-Nine

41: Forty

42: Forty-One

43: Forty-Two

44: Forty-Three

45: Forty-Four

46: Forty-Five

47: Forty-Six

48: Forty-Seven

49: Forty- Eight

50: Epilogue

Hilltop Cottage

neelix

734 Reviews   |   734 Ratings, 0 Likes, 196 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica General Potions Under Duress 80,954 Words 56 Chapters Complete
Filius Flitwick Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Original Character Severus Snape

After the war, Hermione needs a break. A small house provides her with more than just the sanctuary she craves.

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Chapters (50)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: One

Chapter 3: Two

Chapter 4: Three

Chapter 5: Four

Chapter 6: Five

Chapter 7: Six

Chapter 8: Seven

Chapter 9: Eight

Chapter 10: Nine

Chapter 11: Ten

Chapter 12: Eleven

Chapter 13: Twelve

Chapter 14: Thirteen

Chapter 15: Fourteen

Chapter 16: Fifteen

Chapter 17: Sixteen

Chapter 18: Seventeen

Chapter 19: Eighteen

Chapter 20: Nineteen

Chapter 21: Twenty

Chapter 22: Twenty-One

Chapter 23: Twenty-Two

Chapter 24: Twenty-Three

Chapter 25: Twenty-Four

Chapter 26: Twenty-Six

Chapter 27: Twenty-Five

Chapter 28: Twenty-Seven

Chapter 29: Twenty-Eight

Chapter 30: Twenty-Nine

Chapter 31: Thirty

Chapter 32: Thirty-One

Chapter 33: Thirty-Two

Chapter 34: Thirty-Three

Chapter 35: Thirty-Four

Chapter 36: Thirty-Five

Chapter 37: Thirty-Six

Chapter 38: Thirty-Seven

Chapter 39: Thirty-Eight

Chapter 40: Thirty-Nine

Chapter 41: Forty

Chapter 42: Forty-One

Chapter 43: Forty-Two

Chapter 44: Forty-Three

Chapter 45: Forty-Four

Chapter 46: Forty-Five

Chapter 47: Forty-Six

Chapter 48: Forty-Seven

Chapter 49: Forty- Eight

Chapter 50: Epilogue


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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.

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Reviews for Hilltop Cottage

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10/10

breastlady

BTW: What the hell is the 4.5 stars for? This is a 5 star chapter if I've ever read one and I've read scads of SS/HG sex! It was sweet and exactly what should be expected with 2 virgins. I contest who ever didn't give you enough stars. 

10/10

breastlady

If I was Hermione I would immediately put a Fedelius charm on her house.  Why does he care that she was with Severus rather than traveling?  Is he such a girl that his feelings are hurt that she didn't let him in on her secret or is he jealous that Severus knows something about her that he doesn't know? He has Ginny and Hermione had no one and he knows that. Was Severus' howler from Harry too or was it from Minerva?

10/10

breastlady

I know? You're allowed to say that after the initial, "I love you too."  I will try to forgive him based on the fact that he hasn't had anyone say that to him before. ...I know. Well, at least she got that through his thick head.

10/10

breastlady

I'm very glad you got them over that quickly and didn't drag it out for days!  I hope to Merlin that Severus is thoroughly convinced now that Hermione loves him and isn't going to leave him.

10/10

breastlady

Go get the idiot and make love to him until he sobs! Note to self; Let Severus know when I'm going somewhere so he doesn't think I've left him again. 

10/10

breastlady

I see a misunderstanding careening towards us with break neck speed.  Damn! Severus thinks she went home because she doesn't want to be with him, doesn't he.  What mischief awaits Hermione in Diagon Alley when she probably runs into people who have been worried about her.  I hope this isn't too painful. I don't feel well today. 

10/10

breastlady

What a good guy.  Always thinking of others and looking out  underdogs. No matter what he thinks about himself, he is a do gooder.  I'm sure he would wince at that phrase and snarl at this review.  BTW: The part about the bridge and the trees and the rivers was vivid and I could hear the thunder of the water and feel the droplets on my face. I could imagine the trees reflected in the window and little bits of sunshine sneaking through the leaves of the trees. Very well written. 

10/10

breastlady

What a blessing! Don't we all wish we had a secret cottage to go to? I do! Sorry her greatgrandfather died alone.  There must be potions for depression. Hermione has it in spades and who could blame her. I'm hoping something starts going her way soon.  I have a feeling it will.  

10/10

pearl city princess

It makes me wonder how long Alicia has been planning on making some sort of trouble for Hermione.  I hope Severus and Hermione can now see what Alicia is up to.  Can't wait for the next update.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I think Hermione will be wondering about that, too!

0/10

liviconnor

Ah, so we see further motivation for Alicia's meddling- not lust for Severus, but bitterness and envy.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  Every time I see a new update, I have a happy little squeak.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

ahh, bless you! Hopefully the next chapter wont be long x

9/10

SituationalExtrovert

Oh, come on!  TOO SHORT!!  I am hoping that now Severus and Hermione can at least figure that Alicia is stirring up trouble out of revenge.  I am enjoying this very much; you have a lovely turn of phrase.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Blimey!!! Do you want blood? If you think these chapters are too short you should read my earlier stories! LMAO - actually don't. I'd get too much abuse!I hope the next chapter is more fulfilling...

0/10

surlapont

I'm new to this site and this story, but I'm hooked - this is great. Can't wait for more.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks so much - I know you're going to love TPP! happy reading x

10/10

blue artemis

Alicia really is a bitch.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Oh, that she is.

10/10

HBAR

Yay!  Maybe an absurd sentiment, but this could have been a bad conversation.  It is great that it happened in the presense of Alicia so that she knows where they both stand, and can't twist what was said later to each of them because they all heard the same thing.  Also great that Barnabus was there because it might have gotten more heated if there wasn't a stranger present.  I think that when they cool down and think about what the other has said, this fight won't go on too long.As for Alicia, I do feel some sympathy for her with losing her funding and department, but if she were really a good friend, she would have confided in Hermione, and if she wasn't willing to stay, then come back with her and have her put in a good word with her employer.  She is just baggage that Severus and Hermione don't need.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. I know what you mean - and it had to happen in front of Alicia because she has been playing games with them through spite and jealousy - It will come good in the end, but Alicia hasn't reckoned with the strength of Severus and Hermione when they pull together.

0/10

draegon_fire

Well, now that they got that out of the way. I think Severus will go after her. Hopefully, when they talk things out, they'll realize that everything they were just fighting about was caused by Alicia. I think I see where Alicia's attitutde toward Hermione has stemmed from. Hermione won the award that Alicia herself was after. And because Hermione won it, and Alicia's department is being shut down as a result, she is now insanely jealous of Hermione, and probably vowed revenge.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

That about sums it up - well done!All will be well, I promise.

Response from draegon_fire (Reviewer)

It's good to see I was right.

0/10

cmwinters

Please give me Barnabus Speight's address, that I might send him flowers, or chocolate, or gooshyfood, or something. ;)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Oooh, interesting! What's gooshyfood?You can send flowers and chocolates courtesy of me at 1 Neelix House, Neelix Street, Neelix, County Neelix.

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Ahhh, there's a comic on the internet called Two Lumps, about two littermate Russian Blue cats, Ebenezer and Snooch, and they call the soft canned cat food "gooshyfood".

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

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10/10

snitchette

Well, at least they are communicating and with their clever minds there shouldn't be a misunderstanding for too long.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

That's right. They will work it out.

10/10

countrymouse

WHY, oh WHY did you stop HERE?It's 4th of July, come on--you HAVE to give us some FIREWORKS here!Either from Severus and Hermione hexing the fool out of Alicia, or creating fireworks between themselves together--or BOTH---but.........sheesh.(Threatening to send you a PM of Elvis singing "Don't Be Cruel", so it can run around and around in your head and drive you crazy until you update---I can be mean, too---BWAhahahaha....)(you wonderful author, you)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lmao!Firstly, the next chapter is in the queue and I can't determine when it will be posted. It does contain fireworks, though. Secondly, being a Brit, the 4th July wasn't really on my radar! Sorry...!Happy Independence day, though x

0/10

lemmiwinks

ahh at least that confusion is getting worked out! love this story, great job!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks so much. Bless you for reviewing x

10/10

debjunk

Well, not the best way to get things out in the open, but it'll do.  Severus better run right after her, like yesterday!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. he's hardly going to let her run away agian, he's only just got her back, after all!

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

Good!  I'm glad he's learned something.  :D  YAYAY

10/10

Dungeon_Butterfly

Awww poor Severus and Hermione :( and stupid Alica. Can't wait to read more! Hopefully our couple will have a really happy ending :)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks for reading - it will all work out, promise!

0/10

thedoughymatron

I'm always excited to see an updated chapter but this one is beautiful! *sigh*

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks so much. I aim to please... eventually!

10/10

snitchette

*major loud squeal of delight* I AM SO HAPPY! I had a very long and tiring week ,and THIS is the icing on a delicious cake. Thank you so much!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Happy days! It's lovely when you get an update after a rubbish week so I'm glad the timing worked!

10/10

pearl city princess

Oh no, Snape was in the picture, how could she have missed that?

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

She wasn't looking for him, I imagine - it's like one of those funny pictures where you have to squint to see the image!

10/10

pearl city princess

I really like this Snape, he is almost friendly but with just enough snark to be believable.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thank you so much - you can't go through life being horrible to everyone. he does have SOME manners... in my world, anyway!

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