Poor Hermione is still just a girl to him. She would be to an old hag like me too. I would have said she's just a kid. Poor Severus. He was doing just fine. Now this. However, we know that this is going to be good for him in the end. The only question is how annoyed with Hermione is he going to be before he gives in to the invevitable?

That wasn't so bad.  Good start to a friendship. Now that she is aware that Severus is still protecting her. What can she do for him. Well, she could let him share her garden, for one thing. They could do a little rain dancing together out there in the gargen to help get the herbs watered. And then have a wet tee shirt contest!

You are a true gentleman, Severus. Bless you for wanting to protect Hermione's privacy. I hope the meet up won't be too hard on the two of you. You don't know it yet, but the rest of us all know you belong together.  I'm fancinated neelix! Can't make myself go to bed.

Yessss! The horrible, wonderful Snape lives, Hermione! Sorry, Severus. You are totally busted. Well, lets find out if you get yourselves into a mess or help eachother out. By the way, the walk sounded beautiful. I've been to water falls like that. Your description provided a vivid picture. Snape must have seen her and made a break for it. 

I'm filled with anticipation of this long tale. I like it's start. I've enjoyed other stories you've written. So when I saw your name while browsing, I thought, I know that name. If I remember correctly, I really liked this author. I went to your account page and saw that like myself you are an Alan Rickman freak on top of loving SS/HG.  I have a feeling I'll love this stroy. And so let us begin!

I loved this story!  Heartwarming and enchanting!  A perfect blend of romance, love, and heat ;) !Looking forward to more!

I'm not much for happy endings; it's not in my nature, but I just love your writing style. I wonder what canon Severus will think when he sees himself building sand castles . It's hilarious what fan-fic writers make the poor old wizard do  .

what a fantastic story.   loved the revenge on the manipulative bitch (in both senses of the word!) and the happy ending.  thanks for sharing your time, talent, and vision.  mucho smoochies!

I'm glad I found your story. I had a lovely read. Your descriptions of Severus' and Hermione's insecurities and incorrect assumptions made the story very realistic.

Yep! They both deserve to unwind and wriggle their toes in the sand after all that. What a lovely family unit they make - maybe a planned sibling for Donovan?Thanks for a great tale, well told.

Aww, I loved that last line!  Thanks for a wonderful journey. 

Well done! I thoroughly enjoyed this - thank you for sharing!

What a precious ending, just perfect for such an adorable story, thank you for sharing it.

What a precious ending, just perfect for such an adorable story, thank you for sharing it.

A big enourmous AWWWWWWWW! I've loved this story from the very first word. I've been happy with them and for them. I've also been sad and angry, relieved and happy again. You gave them the perfect ending possible and I can't thank you enough. I will miss them greatly but I know every good story must have an end. At least they're happy. Thank you thank you so much for sharing.

Yes, that was the point.  Lovely.  Thank you!

Awwww!!!! What a perfect ending to this story. It has been such a pleasure to read. Severus finally got the life he so desparately wanted. In that way, he's the richest man alive. I look forward to reading anything else you decide to write in the future.

And THANK YOU for creating this journey for us, and for inviting us to come along!Fanfiction is my escape, and "escaping" in the world of Hilltop Cottage has been delightful and wonderful.Neelix---I look forward to your next adventure for us!

Aw, what a sweet end to a nice story.  A bit dissapointed that my prediction for a second pregnancy was off, I really thought Luna knew more than she was letting on... knowing when Hermione was pregnant the first time around.  Very sweet!  I'm glad they had a happy ending, finally. :)

Absolutely perfect!  I'm generally more wordy, but there is nothing else that needs to be said.  Thanks for sharing this story, and giving them the happily ever after that they deserve.

Aww, sweet chapter after all that angsty yuckiness.  :)

I love this story I'm so glad to see and update.  It was wonderful.

Yay!!! Finally updated! It was in queue forever it seems. I'm so glad that Severus and Hermione have their relationship completely back to the way it was. I think they now have a deeper understanding of each other, which will only make them stronger. I still can't wait to see what happened to Alicia, especially when she learns she was set up.

They can be so cute sometimes *deep sigh of contentment*. Although I wonder what happened to Alicia and her stolen spell.

I'm happy for them.