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Hilltop Cottage
neelix734 Reviews | 7.3/10 (734 Ratings, 0 Likes, 195 Favorites )
After the war, Hermione needs a break. A small house provides her with more than just the sanctuary she craves.
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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
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Reviews for Hilltop Cottage
aww! I can't belive that bitch Alicia is doing this to Snape and Hermione... Good going neelix.thumbs up!
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
lol... Not sure everyone agrees with you there but thank you anyway!
Sigh. I don't know how much more of this I can take, actually. I may just give up reading until your story is finished.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
I sent you an email honey xx
Oooo, Alicia needs to take a long walk off a short pier!
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Yes... or we should steal a wand and hex her into tiny bits. That works for me, too!
hitting on a girlfriend's man? that's against the code of the coven. i'm going to be very interested to hear her answer. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Damn right it's against the code! She deserves to be severley punished!
That bitch won't survive a second if I ever lay my hands on her. Honestly she's so jealous that Hermione bested her and has a wonderfully family that she'll want to detroy everything. Or is she just a plain real bitch? *angry sigh* Now I know why there is still ten chapters to go. They will need this at least to clear everything she's said. Of course she couldn't insinuate doubts were they communicating a bit more... *return to sulk and plan murder in my settie*
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
lmao... she really is a cow,
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
. You wait...
Wow, awkward. I can't believe that Alicia, who is supposed to be Hermione's friend, actually had the nerve to make a pass at Severus. Looks like she's not much of a friend. She doesn't know about the engagement yet, does she? Although I don't think that would matter much to Alicia.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
There is more going on than Hermione is aware of at the moment - it will all make sense.
Alicia doesn't seem like the good friend Hermione thinks she is. But at least she figured something out. Animagus illnesses. Brilliant!
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
lol... she's brilliant, or I am? *looks for more praise*Seriously, I'm glad you're still reading - even I feel this has been going for ages!
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
You, of course, silly!
I'm liking the whole illness caught while in animagus form. That never even occurred to me. You could have even dangled it right in front of my face, and I would have never caught on, I was so concentrating on getting Severus and Hermione back to good.And I certainly didn't see Alicia coming in to interfere. Any chance that she is just that friendly with everyone she meets? Yeah, I didn't think so. Still, I'm pleased that Hermione was in tune enough with Severus to pick up on the fact that there was trouble. I think they have had all the drama they can handle for awhile, and I have confidence that they will be careful in how they handle all things from now on. This Alicia character doesn't scare me for a minute! Well, maybe just one minute *bites nails*
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Don't chew too much - they have learned from the past so all will be well, I promise.
It looks like Alicia Maines is after Hermione's man. I don't blame Hermione for confronting her, she needs to get this straightened out soon.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
There is more to it that you know at the moment - keep reading x
I just don't understand. She hadn't done anything reprehensible, just squuzing his hand to reassure him. Of course he is not used to close contact, people usually avoid to touch him. Still, I don't really understand his reaction.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
The whole exchange was a flirtation, and Snape picked up on it very quickly. Sorry it wasn't clear for you.
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I really thought Hermione had already freed him from his big stick in his arse. I imagine it was too profundly stuck. *sigh*
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
mmm... Not sure what you mean - He's angry because Alicia, who says she is Hermione's friend, tried to hit on him. He loves Hermione but he now doesn't trust her friend, hence his not wanting to be around.I think he will regret his decision to leave them to their girly chats.
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I konw you're the author so you must know better. But for me, Alicia wasn't flirting and he misinterpreted things. And you're probably (surely in fact) right: he shouldn't have let them alone for that long.
Good for Hermione. Alicia is apparently not as good a friend as she thought.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Fairweather friend maybe? I'll let you decide!
hoooboy, can't wait to see what's next.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
It's all kicking off, that's what...
Animagus illness-Never crossed my mind, good job Alicia!
Hitting on Hermione's man-never crossed my mind,either (I'm not stupid!). Bad Job Alicia!!
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Yes. She's a dark horse. More intriuge awaits...
*sigh* a lovely family scene. thank goodness they cut to the chace. wonderful update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
It had to happen that way. I couldn't wait to get them back to normal!
Beautiful! After all they put each other through, this beautiful scene was much deserved.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing their reunion and wanted to make it realistic. It's comfortable, like putting on an old pair of socks!
Oh, that is about the sweetest thing I've seen in a long time. Them being so domestic, like the real family they were meant to be. I am pleased to see that there are no assumptions, no speaking in code, or whatever they were doing before that allowed for such hurt feelings and misunderstanding. They are just saying what they want, plain and simple, and that is what is going to ensure them a long, happy relationship this time around. You've made my night a little brighter with such long awaited happiness.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
I'm very pleased that you liked this - this time around, no playing games, no hiding their emotions. Mind you... he still hasn't told her he loves her....
Awwww! Thank you so much! This is so very sweet that they spend a normal morning like any average family. I know ther are a few more chapters (they really should start to cure Minerva + they now have a wedding to organize) but it could end there and I'd be very happy. Of course I'm more than eager to read more! (in case it gives you bas ideas *wink*)
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Don't worry - the story is complete at chapter 50 so we have a way to go yet :)
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
And I hope there won't be too much mayhem until then...
Sigh... all is finally right with the world. And now I want a bacon sandwhich. Thanks a lot!
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
hehehe... they're delish, aren't they??? Glad you're still reading xx
That was sweet.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Hope it was sweet and not twee - I wouldn't want to fall at the final fence :D
I love this chapter it may be my favorite so far, they are so sweet together. What a darling family.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
I know, they're very cute together.
Wonderful chapter, so glad they are back together, well worth the wait.I just have to say I love this story it has been so much fun , I have enjoyed every chapter and can't wait for more.
Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it so far x
Oh, yeah, a trip down memory lane should do the trick.
Yes, Severus is getting his family back, if anyone can do it he can.
Thank goodness that's cleared up.