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Hilltop Cottage

1: Prologue

2: One

3: Two

4: Three

5: Four

6: Five

7: Six

8: Seven

9: Eight

10: Nine

11: Ten

12: Eleven

13: Twelve

14: Thirteen

15: Fourteen

16: Fifteen

17: Sixteen

18: Seventeen

19: Eighteen

20: Nineteen

21: Twenty

22: Twenty-One

23: Twenty-Two

24: Twenty-Three

25: Twenty-Four

26: Twenty-Six

27: Twenty-Five

28: Twenty-Seven

29: Twenty-Eight

30: Twenty-Nine

31: Thirty

32: Thirty-One

33: Thirty-Two

34: Thirty-Three

35: Thirty-Four

36: Thirty-Five

37: Thirty-Six

38: Thirty-Seven

39: Thirty-Eight

40: Thirty-Nine

41: Forty

42: Forty-One

43: Forty-Two

44: Forty-Three

45: Forty-Four

46: Forty-Five

47: Forty-Six

48: Forty-Seven

49: Forty- Eight

50: Epilogue

Hilltop Cottage

neelix

734 Reviews   |   734 Ratings, 0 Likes, 196 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica General Potions Under Duress 80,954 Words 56 Chapters Complete
Filius Flitwick Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Original Character Severus Snape

After the war, Hermione needs a break. A small house provides her with more than just the sanctuary she craves.

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Chapters (50)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: One

Chapter 3: Two

Chapter 4: Three

Chapter 5: Four

Chapter 6: Five

Chapter 7: Six

Chapter 8: Seven

Chapter 9: Eight

Chapter 10: Nine

Chapter 11: Ten

Chapter 12: Eleven

Chapter 13: Twelve

Chapter 14: Thirteen

Chapter 15: Fourteen

Chapter 16: Fifteen

Chapter 17: Sixteen

Chapter 18: Seventeen

Chapter 19: Eighteen

Chapter 20: Nineteen

Chapter 21: Twenty

Chapter 22: Twenty-One

Chapter 23: Twenty-Two

Chapter 24: Twenty-Three

Chapter 25: Twenty-Four

Chapter 26: Twenty-Six

Chapter 27: Twenty-Five

Chapter 28: Twenty-Seven

Chapter 29: Twenty-Eight

Chapter 30: Twenty-Nine

Chapter 31: Thirty

Chapter 32: Thirty-One

Chapter 33: Thirty-Two

Chapter 34: Thirty-Three

Chapter 35: Thirty-Four

Chapter 36: Thirty-Five

Chapter 37: Thirty-Six

Chapter 38: Thirty-Seven

Chapter 39: Thirty-Eight

Chapter 40: Thirty-Nine

Chapter 41: Forty

Chapter 42: Forty-One

Chapter 43: Forty-Two

Chapter 44: Forty-Three

Chapter 45: Forty-Four

Chapter 46: Forty-Five

Chapter 47: Forty-Six

Chapter 48: Forty-Seven

Chapter 49: Forty- Eight

Chapter 50: Epilogue


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Reviews for Hilltop Cottage

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10/10

debjunk

Can't wait!

I loved his musings on his own, especially about Lily. I really think he'd have realized all of that and it would have been more guilt than love by the point he was at.

OK, that made little sense, but it's kind of late. You get my drift... hopefully.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

YES, I totally get what you meant. I always thought that his feelings for Lily were Guilt rather than LOVE.

10/10

blue artemis

I feel so sorry for him that he has decided she is his first friend, but I'm glad they have found each other.  The Chinese Food sounds good.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Well, now he has the time for a friend. During the war, he couldn't really trust anyone - not even Dumbledore.

10/10

HBAR

I just love this story!  The emotions are all right for their situation.  They are a bit nervous, as they should be when embarking on a relationship which is very important to them.  But they have fallen into a nice friendship which is bound to be a solid base for something more.  There are no extreme emotions, and it feels very realistic.  I married  young and so have not had the experience of adult dating (thank God!) but this feels exactly how I think it ought to go.  I am looking very forward to the point when this story well and truly earns it's rating, but, slow and steady wins the race as they say.  I think the garden issue might win her some points.  Hopefully he pays her back well ;)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thank you so much. I really wanted to write something that felt real, although we do drift into the realms of Wizarding Britain later on, which is probably inevitable I think.

10/10

makaem

Yeah, a date!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I know... sweet, isn't it? lol... Think it will go to plan? Nah, me either!

10/10

pookah

I am glad she wants to share her garden with him.  What a nice chapter to read on this rather dismal day.  Thank you for the update! *Looks around for the chinese take-out menu!*

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... I'm ruining diets everywhere!

10/10

kittyperry

A really lovely chapter. I'm so glad I read it after my dinner, which included a wonderful Indian style roast chicken from the take-away place at the top of our street.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

mmmm... I miss a good Indian take away. Yum!

10/10

BulletTimeScully

Nice chapter! How sweet of her to make a place for him in her garden! I can't wait to see how he reacts! :)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Glad you're reading, thanks for the review x

10/10

snitchette

And such a nice flame it is. Can I be the frog that catch the moth? Because he must the most delicious moth I've ever see... or tasted *wink*I'm glad they are going along so well. I'm sure they'll have a wonderful friendship and, given time, a bit more.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Yes. More than a bit more, I imagine. Won't be long before the next chapter is up x

10/10

BulletTimeScully

Very good so far! Drunk!Hermione is hilarious! I loved the interactions between her and Severus and I loved the scene when he found the newspapers... omens of things to come! :)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. thanks! Drunk!Hermione is really me.. that's just what I would be like! Glad you're enjoying it x

0/10

GryffKat

Hey! I haven't read the chapter yet. I will read it tonight in front of the fire with a nice vodka on the rocks with a lemon twist. I can't wait. What a great way to end the week. Cheers.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

That sounds like a great plan. So tell me, what did you think?

10/10

beaweasley2

Aw, it was almost like a quiet night between flames, a... er, friends!  It was cute that he came back with a hangover potion.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. the sparks will be flying before long, don't worry!

10/10

mimmom

Yay!  He brought her hangover potion.  They do seem to have some things in common.  I hope they can help each other.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Drinking and Potions are always a good starting point! Next chapter is in queue!

10/10

mimmom

  This is very good.  I like reading about what is going on in their heads.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thank you very much, I am so glad you're enjoying it.

10/10

mimmom

Oh no, indeed.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

mmm.. poor Severus :(

10/10

mimmom

I like this Snape.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks. I like him too. I want to keep him!

9/10

mimmom

oh my!  Well, this is intriguing.  Can't wait to read the next bit!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. hope you're enjoying it...

9/10

sregner

Men with camera's,,,pfft!  They all want to take pictures of us when we pass out...my husband thinks it's hilarious.  Lovely story and we are starting to see that little bit of break in the "professor and student" relationship.  Carry on

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks! I will. Next chapter is queued. And men... meh. They're just NOT funny! Except after a bottle of expensive wine!

Response from sregner (Reviewer)

Well....there is that

10/10

thisisbobbyjo

Thanks for another excellent chapter! I'm really looking forward to more of this. They've got me giggling for sure!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks! They make me laugh too... it gets very messy very quickly, as you can probably imagine!

10/10

peppermint

Ohhh. First of all, Hermione being an Extreme Makeover fan is hilarious. That show truly is a guilty pleasure, LOL! And the last line is perfection. Just beautiful.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thank you so much,

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

. I just figure that Hermione is a normal person most of the time!

10/10

blue artemis

I really liked that.  And I like that he keeps coming back.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... he won't be able to leave her alone now, I think!

10/10

debjunk

Loved it!  I loved that she got drunk and he found those newspapers.  And I totally love that she's his flame and he's the moth. 

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Bless you! I love it too!

10/10

HBAR

Yay, action here we come!  Well, maybe not that kind of action yet, but they are making progress.  Really liked this chapter.  Wouldn't Snape absolutely hate Ty Pennington!  I love that they didn't have to have much conversation, but could sit comfortably and watch TV while drinking wine.  The Snape of her school days would have probably left her on the floor, and definitely would not have come back the next day with a hangover potion.  Apparently, he found her drunken giggle fit more endearing than annoying.  Need more story quickly please!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I tried to think, if this was me, and a guy I knew called around with wine, what would we do? Watch Extreme Makeover, of course! lol... and yes, he really would hate Ty!

10/10

braye27

Awesome!  This chapter is the perfect blend of thoughts carrying the thinkers to the destination each wanted.  I was delighted when Severus thought of her as a flame to his moth.  Yes, she is his flame, and something tells me that instead of drawing him to self destruction, she will be the candle to light his way... and he will light hers.I loved seeing Hermione getting tipsy enough to break out in giggles the night before, and I'm so thrilled that Severus came back to bring her a hangover potion.  Yes!!!  Now I hope she will show him the garden she is working on.  How great would it be for the two of them to work together on a garden?!?!  Together they could create a lovely potions garden and build a solid foundation for their friendship... and more.  8^)  They could build some wonderful memories to keep the cold at bay on a lonely night. I adore this story and was thrilled to see you had updated it!!!  I had checked the other site earlier in the day and didn't see an update, so when I found you here, I couldn't believe my good fortune!  Thank you for sharing this marvelous story!*Hugs you*  Beth

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thank you so much for a lovely review, Beth. The garden does play a part, actually. Watch this (green) space.

10/10

makaem

Wonderful, as always.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thank you so much x

10/10

mikimoto

A moth to her flame?  I understand the attraction but isn't it nearly always fatal for the moth?  And the flame couldn't care less about the moth...

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I think he feels that being involved with her in any way is probably not good for him. Good point though, perhaps not the best phrase to use!

Response from mikimoto (Reviewer)

Actually, I think it is an excellent phrase.  It captures that compulsion that over-rides our reason.  A moth can only answer "because" when you ask him "why?"  He has no other reason.  Whether or not all of the accompanying characteristics are true about Hermione (that she is uncaring, that she will hurt him in the end) isn't relevent because this is how Snape feels; it doesn't need to reflect reality.  And really, how often do feelings actually reflect reality?

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