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A Ghost of a Chance
gersknightlady748 Reviews | 7.46/10 (748 Ratings, 0 Likes, 135 Favorites )
After the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
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gersknightlady
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
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Well done, This is excellent, and I can't wait to see what happens next..Whoohoo...
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you :) sweet of you to leave a review.
Wonderful, wonderful beginning, I am so loving this story so far, have bookmarked it, can't wait for more...
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you :) I'm so glad you like it :)
Oooh, this is really good! I can't wait to learn how Severus ended up in this situation while everyone believed him to be long dead. Is he trapped between life and death, or caught in some kind of invisible stasis of a sort? I am so hooked!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Interesting idea you got there. You might have hit it on the nail. LOL I'm so glad your hooked. We got a long way to go :)Thank so much for the review.
Nicely started, looking forward to reading more!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you hope to have the next chapter Validated tonight or tomorrow :) TThank you so much for the review.
Lol so she throws a paddy like a child lol I can see severus getting brassed off with that.
I love the fact he has a mother type figure. And Hermione really should stop blaming things on insects lol! First bee's then flies.
Seems like he is starting to like her. I wonder maybe they are soul mates.
Nice to see he still has some snark lol. Seems he is connected to her. I wonder why she felt such love for him when she barely knew him.
Lovely first chapter and very intriguing. I wonder if he is connected to his wand or Hermione herself.
What a handy, clever spell to give him form!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, Hope you continue to make comments as your read. :)
I really like the interaction between Hermione and Snape, very realistic. And Poppy is so sweet, it's nice that you made a history between her and Snape.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, Poppy is very important to severus in this story you will see her time and time again. I'm very happy you are enjoying the story.
Ahh! This is such a fascinating story, I am absolutely hooked!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I'm so glad youve foud the story and are making comments. Enjoy. The story is 55-56? chapters long. Its been written for a good year and I am working to post as quickly as the process will allow.Thank you for your review.
o.O WOW! I didn't even think that you would put another twist in here! I LOVE this story!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying the story, there is a lot left to go about 24 more chapters at least.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying the story, there is a lot left to go about 24 more chapters at least.
oh my god! I had a feeling there was something sinister going on when Molly said Arthur was sick. Ooh how scary. I can't wait to read more!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well thank you, I consider this section the weakest part of this story I'm glad you like it. I hope it continues to keep you interested.
Annnnd here's another problem for Hermione and Severus to solve. <grin> I can understand how someone would not notice changes if they see someone every day. My sisters commented on our mother's changes this last two weeks while we were in CA. They hadn't seen her in two years and I live with her. ^_^
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yeah got to keep those problems coming for a bit. This story kind of took on its own life. It was never intended to go far past the bubble but it just kept growing. I hope you will enjoy whats coming up. Yeah I can understand that I lived with my mom till she passed. I always thought she looked pretty good even when she was ill. For a woman of 81, she still had half her hair black (salt and Pepper).
An interesting turn of events.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you hope you will enjoy it.
Excellent. A beautiful chapter. I really liked the conversation between Harry and Severus, it is very nice to see them acting as adults. This story has been excellent, the thought and emotion in each of the chapters brings it all to life. Thank you. I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you so much you made my night. I always hope that if Severus was around that Harry would show him the respect he deserves. You gave me some great compliments. I hope the story continues to engage you.
Thank goodness Severus was there to see Arthur's and Molly's problem before it actually caused their premature death and alert someone to it in time.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, it was good that he was there. Hopefully with the help of many others he will be able to come up with an answer.Thank you for your comment.
Ooo the plot thickens..... Fab Chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank youf or your comment. I'm glad you liked the chapetr :)
It is hard when you see someone every day.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yeah I think so. After reconnecting with a group of young men recently that I ran around with back in the 80's I can tell you it was a shock. the weights the gray hair the no hair. LOL. But I can tell you its was wonderful to reconnect and to know they thought of me too.
I enjoyed reading this story. I thought I would never forgive JK for killing Severus and leaving to rot in the shreiking shack, but if Severus can find healing in forgiveness perhaps I should consider it as well! The only thing that bothered me throughout the story was Hermione's title. It was always Madam Granger or Madam Snape instead of professor. She did the work and deserves the title, darn it. Severus being constantly referred to as professior when he was no longer teaching while Hermione was almost always madam even by her colleagues struck me as wrong every time. Other than that, it was a pleasure to see Severus in love :-)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Your right about Hermione's title. Somehow I got it in my head that they called the female professors Madam and no one corrected me right away. I may find time one day to go fix all that.I'm so glad you enjoyed Severus being in love. I'm kind of fond of that senerio. It's why I write HG/SS fic. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Your right about Hermione's title. Somehow I got it in my head that they called the female professors Madam and no one corrected me right away. I may find time one day to go fix all that.I'm so glad you enjoyed Severus being in love. I'm kind of fond of that senerio. It's why I write HG/SS fic. :)
Thank you for such a hopeful chapter. Wouldn't it be wonderful if the boys are successful in their potions project? Yes!I loved the weekend at Poppy's cottage. She is such a wonderful "mum" to Severus. I like to think that's how their relationship would have been, as well.Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, it would be. I enjoy the relationship that Poppy has with severus too. Thsoe scenes kind of write themselves and I enjoy re-reading them as much as anyone.It would be ncie to think Severus had that support during his life dispite his mistakes.Jeannie
Awww! great chapter! i loved it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Brutal. Hope Scorp. stays good for good. 10 out of 5 stars. :) Great chapter "Cheers!"
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes it was, sorry about that. I'm glad you liked it so much. You put a big smile on my face. hugs :)