Chapter 13
Chapter 13 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
This story becomes very adult in future chapters. Minors, please do not read this story.
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Hermione woke when the little elf popped into the room with a loud crack. She thanked him, and then he was gone after collecting the lunch dishes and leaving her a small basket of food to take with her.
Hermione climbed out from the warm covers and pulled a robe on. She found a note with the lunch basket.
Hermione,
Severus is doing well. He's been asleep most of
the time you have been gone. Please take your time.
Poppy
She took a little longer dressing, making sure her hair was smoothed down and her makeup was perfect. She wanted to look good for Severus. She returned to the hospital through her own Floo, not wanting to bother Minerva as it was getting late.
She entered Severus' room and found Poppy spooning broth into his mouth. She was laughing, as it wasn't easy, and she had spilled some of it down his neck.
"Old woman," he was saying grumpily, "you can grow bones, but you can't feed a sick adult."
"Don't you 'old' woman me. I've got more years coming then are behind me, you mark my words, ungrateful wretch."
Severus chuckled at her, and Poppy giggled like a schoolgirl.
Hermione smiled and moved into the room, greatly relieved to hear the banter. "Hey, what's going on here?"
Severus turned the little ol' innocent me look on her. "Poppy's trying to drown me in broth," he complained with laughing eyes.
Hermione came and placed a kiss on his forehead. "Maybe a straw would be a better idea." She set the picnic basket and knapsack she'd brought with her down by the chamber.
"You look beautiful, Hermione. I missed you," he said, his eyes glued to her.
She smiled and reached out for the broth. She conjured up a straw and held it for him to sip through."
"Well," Poppy said with feigned indignation, "I see I'm no match for Muggle inventions. I'm going to go home and go to bed." She smiled warmly at them. "You do look better, Hermione. I'm glad you slept an extra hour. Severus slept most the time you were gone anyway." She gave the young woman a hug. "Now you see that he gets those pain meds without fail for the next 24 hours at least. Do not take no for an answer."
Hermione frowned at Severus. He gave her a sheepish look, so she didn't comment. "I'll make sure," she said with determination.
Poppy said, "Call me if there is anything I can do. I will come again tomorrow and spell you for awhile."
She gave Severus a kiss on the cheek and then swept from the room.
"She really loves you, Severus. You're like her son, as if you were her blood."
"Hummm," he agreed.
"Finish this broth," she ordered. They were silent as Severus finished up.
Hermione set the bowl aside on the little bedside table and took a napkin and wiped his mouth. Then she bent down to give him a hungry kiss. Severus kissed her back with relish.
He sighed as she moved back. "I can't wait to get out of here." His desire was plain.
Hermione blushed. "I can't wait either. But even when you get out of here, sex won't be high on your list for a few days. You're going to be as weak as a newborn kitten." She blushed again. She pressed her cheek against his, wanting to feel his skin against hers.
"I know this may be easy for me to say since you're the one going through all this hell, but I'm grateful to whomever sent you on this course. Otherwise, I would not have you here to love."
"I agree," he said quietly, really feeling that in his heart. His heart soared at her mention of love, but he couldn't make himself say the words back.
She moved back to look into his eyes. "One more layer, and you will be here in the flesh. You're so handsome already in your ghostly appearance. I can't imagine the flesh-and-blood Severus before my eyes." Her lips stole another kiss from him.
"I look forward to being seen," he said, kissing her back. "This is damn frustrating...not even being able to touch you on my own."
"You heard the Healer. You should be out of this thing tomorrow and into a normal bed. I think I can squeeze into it with you. I'm not going to leave again," she promised stubbornly.
"I might be here for days...maybe as long as a week, Hermione. You will take breaks and shower," he stressed. "Be reasonable: As a Potion's master, I have a strong sense of smell."
Hermione swung at his nose as if she would slug him but barely grazed it. "Are you saying I stunk before I left?"
"No, not at all. But you could... You might if you don't take breaks." He frowned at her.
"Alright, alright, I know you just want me to rest. I understand that, Severus. But if I can sleep here next to you, won't you let me stay? I'm sure they won't mind if I use your shower."
"We will see," he said. He was mostly concerned about keeping up appearances for her sake. If the pain got bad like it had before, it would wear him out to have her fussing over him.
Hermione settled into the chair Poppy had vacated. She took a book from her bag and read to him until he fell asleep.
Hermione sat back in her chair and let herself doze, but she continued to listen to Severus' breathing pattern. She went back in her mind to what Poppy had said, and she realized Severus had been keeping up appearances for her earlier. She had to make him understand that she didn't mind if he showed his pain. It was not weakness in her eyes. His body would heal in time; she realized he had pain and discomfort.
Suddenly Severus woke with a fit of coughing, and she watched with horror as blood seeped from the corners of his mouth. "Severus," she cried. His eyes were wide with fear.
The wards went off, and the room was suddenly full of Healers and nurses. One pushed Hermione back against the wall.
Hermione stood in the back watching; her eyes were wide with fear, and her fist was stuffed in her mouth.
They worked with their wands and potions for nearly 20 minutes before stepping back from him. Healer Hookeneye came to her.
"It's alright; he will be okay. The coughing was so rough a few blood vessels broke. Blood got into his lungs, and he was unable to breathe very well. We have repaired the damage, and the potions will ensure it doesn't happen again."
Hermione sagged against him, and he was kind enough to pat her on the back, giving her some emotional support. She then pushed away, going to stand over Severus and look down into his face.
He smiled weakly up at her, but he did not try to speak.
She didn't speak either but pressed her lips to his cheek. She ran her fingers through his hair, massaging his scalp with her fingers. He closed his eyes with a smile on his face and fell back into a deeper sleep.
Hermione stood at his side nearly thirty minutes and then sat back in her chair and drew out a different book to read from her knapsack. The night passed with occasional visits from Healers. Hermione and Severus talked for a few minutes between his pain potions, but mostly he slept. Hermione dozed in the chair, which she had transfigured into a lounge. She had a soft blanket with her and a pillow.
She woke to find him awake and ready for the breakfast being delivered. She changed the lounge back into a chair and put her blankets way. "I'll feed him," she told the nurse. The woman nodded and left her to it.
She asked as she put some eggs on a fork. "Severus, how are you this morning."
He smiled. "Much better. I hardly feel any pain right now." He took the bite she offered and chewed it very carefully before swallowing. "That's good. I'm starving."
"That's a good sign," she said, giving him another bite. They didn't talk much until the eggs and a little creamy tea was gone.
Hermione read to him most of the morning. She took a shower in his bathroom before lunch, and Poppy came to sit with him while she went for a walk to stretch her legs and to the cafeteria for some lunch.
St. Mungo's was not like Muggle hospitals. There were nurses' stations and patient rooms, but there where also plants everywhere, which made the halls look like gardens. Many of the plants had healing properties, and staff members harvested the ingredients for the potions that were made onsite. There were also many varieties of flowers just for the simple beauty and restfulness they brought to people. She passed a man clipping leaves from a tall, tree-like plant, and he looked familiar to her. "Neville?" she asked in astonishment.
Neville Longbottom turned to her. "Hermione, it's good to see you." He reached out to hug her briefly. He smelled of fresh herbs and spices.
He was tall, straight and had a bit of grey at his temples. His face was lined with laugh lines, and his eyes were bright with happiness.
"What are you doing here?" she asked.
"I work here. I maintain the gardens and gather the potion ingredients," he explained, clipping a few more leaves from the tree.
"How wonderful for you. I know how much Herbology meant to you back in school."
He nodded. "I've been here for 5 years. I like my job very much." He glanced down the hall in the direction she had come from. "Why are you here? Is someone ill?"
She took his arm and led him to a bench surrounded with flowers. "I know I can trust you with this information. Sorry, this might be a shock, Severus Snape was injured, and I am staying with him here."
Neville's face paled. "Proff..f..essor Snape is here, alive!"
Hermione laughed. She briefly told him how she had found him and what had happened since.
He said dumfounded, "That's astonishing."
She confessed, "I have grown to love him, Neville. He's a very different man freed from his obligations to Voldemort and Dumbledore."
He was speechless for a time. "You love him?" he finally stammered.
"Yes, I love him as a woman loves a man," she said, covering one of his hands with her own.
"That's hard to imagine," he confessed.
She laughed. "It is, isn't it? Because of the stasis, we really aren't that far apart in age anymore. Maybe seven years. We love the same things. We can talk about anything. It's really quite refreshing."
Neville confessed, "I never thought you'd marry for that reason." He looked down at her hand entwined with his.
Hermione knew he'd had a crush on her when they were young. "Did you marry?"
He smiled at her. "Yes, you'll remember Luna Lovegood."
"Luna! She's such a lovely girl, and very earthy." She smiled.
"Yes, we have our own herbal store and own green houses," he said with no small amount of pride. He added, "... and twin nine-year-old boys.
Hermione gushed, "I'm so happy for you, Neville. Please say hello to Luna for me. We really should try to get the DA members together. A reunion of sorts. I was off continent so long getting my Potion's credentials. I love being back at Hogwarts."
"We did have some good times, didn't we?" he said, letting her hands go.
Hermione stood. "Yes, we did. I'd best be getting on to the cafeteria. Poppy's sitting with Severus. Please go say hi."
Neville's eyes got big, and he gulped.
Hermione laughed. "I promise, he's different. I'm sure he would love to say hello. In any case, I will be back in his room in 30 minutes. Come then if you need moral support."
Hermione left Neville and went to the cafeteria and got herself a sandwich and a drink, which she carried back to Severus' room.
There was a room full of healers when she got back. She tossed her food down by the little sink and called, "What's wrong? What's happening?"
Poppy disengaged herself from the crowd. "Hermione, it's okay. They are preparing to move Severus to the bed." She pulled Hermione close to keep her out of the way.
Hermione noticed then that there was a bed in their room. They were helping Severus into a hospital gown. Then with gentle hands they picked him up and moved him to the bed. Hermione caught his smiling face through all the arms, and she relaxed against Poppy's body.
When they moved away, he was lying against the pillows; the bed was elevated so that he was half sitting.
Healer Hookeneye came to her. "He's doing very well. The potions have healed a good 75% of the damage already. I think he needs to spend a few more days here, and then he can go back under Poppy's care." He squeezed Hermione's and Poppy's arms and then left. A few others checked to make sure Severus had everything he needed, and Hermione saw two nurses exchange the visible spell.
"Thank you, so much," she said as they passed by on their way out of the room, pushing the chamber between them carefully. Hermione went to him, and he held his arms out to her. She laid her upper half across his chest carefully, trying to keep her footing on the floor. They both sighed.
Poppy called to them, "I'm going back to Hogwarts. Call me if you need me."
They said simultaneously, "Thanks, Poppy."
The medi-witch smiled and left.
Hermione's face was buried in his neck, and she pressed kisses there.
Severus breathed in her scent and caressed her hair with one of his hands. "It's good to hold you again."
"I'm so glad you're free of that thing." She stood, pulled her wand, and transfigured the bed into a full-size bed. Then she crawled up beside him as he looked on in amusement.
"You know, Severus, since I'm no longer on a 15 ft. tether, why don't you keep your wand. I know you may not be able to handle it for long. But I can fashion a sleeve that will hold it to your gown." She fashioned the sleeve and placed his wand with him.
He seemed to relax a bit. It had been like having an arm missing not having the wand close. "Thank you," he said, kissing her.
She lay within his arms; her face was against his left shoulder. "Are you in pain?" she asked.
"No, I have been taking my meds like a good little boy." His voice was full of sarcasm.
Hermione placed a kiss on his chin. Her hand roamed over his chest, giving him a light massage. "I can't wait to get you home. These people have been wonderful, but..." She let her voice trail off.
He kissed the top of her head. "I know what you mean." He voice was deep and husky.
She giggled. "Typical man, thinking with his..." A throat being cleared stopped her, and she looked up to see a very pale, yet blushing, Neville standing over them.
Lisa, you are doing amazing beta work on my stories. Thank you so much.
Becky, thank you for your support and enthusiasum.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)