Chapter 29
Chapter 29 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
Hermione stood when Scorpius dashed past her. His face was red from crying, but there was a smile on his face and lightness to his features she hadn't seen before. The frown that had always been there was gone.
Hermione looked up at Severus hopefully as he came from his office. He had a smile on his face, and he took her in his arms and held her close.
"I think we finally got through to him," he murmured, and he then told her a bit of the memory he had shown Scorpius.
Hermione held him close, thankful that the memory viewing might be at an end. She had seen the stress it had put on Severus. She could see a streak of silver in his hair. She wondered if he had noticed it.
"I'm happy for you, Severus. I know this has been hard on you."
Taking her hand, he said, "Let's go eat."
They left the classroom and headed for dinner. The halls were alive with students walking in the same direction, and they caught sight of Albus and Scorpius ahead talking animatedly.
Hermione squeezed his hand. "It looks like we have created some friends."
Severus nodded, thinking about what Harry might say. Harry hadn't been thrilled about his son being partnered with a Malfoy, but he had told them he trusted their judgment and knew the wizarding world would only work with all branches of wizards working together. There were still houses at Hogwart's, but the students intermingled more now and often sat at different tables. The separation was mostly for the Quidditch games.
Hermione watched Severus wolf down great amounts of food and was relieved that he had his appetite back. He hadn't been eating much since the lessons with Scorpius had started. She noticed Scorpius was actually sitting with Albus at the Gryffindor table. Their heads were together as they scribbled away on a piece of parchment and stuffed food into their mouths.
"I think you'd best announce the contest tomorrow before Albus and Scorpius tell. The other students may call foul if they realize they have a head start," Hermione told Severus.
He nodded between bites of food. "I'm sure you're right, my dear. Sorry, I am just famished tonight."
"Is food all you want?" she asked with a devilish glint in her eye as she trailed a finger over his hand.
He stopped eating and stared into her eyes. Seeing desire there, he suddenly was more than ready to be done with his meal.
"I have an insatiable appetite when it come to you, my dear," he whispered, wishing he could nuzzle her neck and give her a kiss.
"I have reserved the prefects' bathroom for us tonight," she informed him. One of her hands under the table was sliding up his leg, getting closer and closer.
"Hermione," he hissed. "Please, if you don't cease, we may have to wait until the room clears."
She laughed aloud and everyone at the staff table looked their way.
Severus blushed furiously.
Minerva gave them a stern look that said, "Behave."
Poppy was watching with a fond smile. She was happy to see the change in Severus tonight. She hadn't had much time to talk to him, but she had known of his plan to help Scorpius.
Mortified, Severus took Hermione by the hand and as they stood, murmmering, "Good night, everyone. Hermione and I have work to do."
He saw that no one believed them as they made their way out of the room and had no doubt the students would also be talking about them. He realized as they stepped into the hall, and he planted a steamy kiss on Hermione, that it didn't matter in the least. He didn't care what people thought. They were, after all, newlyweds.
"What time did you reserve it for?" he asked impatiently.
She grinned at him. "I think we could go now. Everyone else is eating." She took his hand, and they hurried through the hall and up a few flights of stairs.
They entered the room and gazed at the bathtub. It was more like an indoor swimming pool. Severus locked and warded the door. It was, by far, one of the nicest bathrooms in the castle. Its many faucets, rich gold fixtures, and stained glass windows made it sheer heaven.
They didn't really talk but stripped and slipped into the warm water. Hermione swam a few laps just to warm herself up. Severus watched her appreciatively. A glimpse of a breast here or buttock there made the view especially pleasurable.
He dove under the water and caught her. She laughed as he captured her against his chest. She let him tease her lips with his before she slipped away again.
She was so like a girl at these times. She loved teasing him and loved to see the smile play across his face. He was so unlike the man she'd know as a child, yet he had barely aged from that time. She was thankful that she'd caught up physically and mentally with him.
"Hermione, come here," he called, cricking a finger at her.
She laughed, swimming to the other side of the bath. "Catch me if you can." She dodged him as he lunged across the bath. She let him chase her for a while as she bounced, swam, and dove away from him.
When the frown on his face began to grow, she swept up under the water, vanishing, and came up before him. She flung herself in his arms and bathed his face with kisses.
"You little minx." He kissed her until she was gasping for breath, and she let herself sag against him with pleasure.
"Severus, I love you so much. I wake each morning, and when I realize I'm not dreaming and you're really there beside me, I just thank God. I can't imagine life without you." She smoothed back his wet hair from his face. She could feel he was hard against her stomach. She slipped her hand down to caress him.
"Hermione," he groaned, "I can't imagine my life without you either." His fingers were caressing her breasts.
She urged him to the side of the pool and slapped her hand on the edge. "Sit up here, please."
He looked at her curiously and did as she bid him.
Hermione got her wand from the side of the pool where her clothes lay. She warmed the spot where he was sitting and placed a warming charm around him.
His eyes were enormous as she stood before him in the water and ran her hands up his legs and knees. She took the thick shaft in her hands and teased him until he was rock hard. She then bent and ran her tongue over the head.
"Oh Merlin, Hermione, that feels amazing." He caressed her hair as she took him deeper into her mouth and began to bob back and forth. He buried his hands in her hair and gently guided her back and forth.
Hermione heard his breath get short, and then he pushed her back and slipped into the water. Lifting her, he guided her to place her legs around his waist.
He let her down over his thick shaft, and she threw her head back as he wrapped his hands around her legs and gripped her thighs. She placed her hands on his shoulders to help raise and lower herself onto the thick shaft, and they began the age old dance of bringing each other to fulfillment. Their cries echoed through the cavernous room. Hermione slumped down against him, burying her face in his neck as he cradled her in his arms.
"You are amazing, my beautiful wife," he said, kissing her again. Then, resting back on one of the sitting areas, he just held her and let the warm water sooth them both.
Later they made love again, conjuring a thick pad to lie on at the waters edge. They dressed each other and then walked slowly back to their rooms.
*****
The next day, Hermione and Severus laid out the plans for the contest to all their fifth-year students. They told them they would have to work in pairs. They needed to write up their theory for a potion, explain what it was supposed to do, and create and execute the potion. Reports were due in four weeks. Potions would be brewed in class the week after.
Hermione concluded, "You will make appointments for practice on your potions after school. There will be a schedule set up depending on how many students are participating. Sixth and seventh years will also join in on this project. Theories will be due by the end of the week. You will need to make a list of the equipment and the ingredients you will need for your potion. Professor Snape will be in his office after dinner for one hour every night so you can ask questions. He has vast knowledge of potion making and will be able to explain the properties of the ingredients. I would ask that you make very sure your ingredients do not have any volatile properties. I think we've had enough explosions for one year."
The students laughed uneasily. No one wanted to see either of his or her teacher's hurt, including Scorpius. Her words had made him duck down a bit and get red. He knew he had to talk to her. He had not yet apologized, and he was dreading the task he knew was necessary.
Class was out a few minutes later, and he waited till every one left and then came forward. "Madam Snape, may I speak to you?"
Hermione looked up from her desk. Severus, who had been putting a cauldron on a shelf, looked toward the boy as well.
Hermione stood and waved the boy forward. "Of course, Scorpius, come forward. You may sit if you like." She waved at the chair in front of her desk.
Scorpius came but stood before her. "Madam Snape, I want to apologize for my actions. I was wrong. My grandfather was wrong. I thought he was right. I thought he loved me, but I was mistaken."
Hermione said, "Your grandfather does love you, Scorpius. He's just messed up, now. He cannot get over the past. It has poisoned his soul."
Scorpius nodded. "I will never try to harm you again. You have my word."
Hermione came and held out her arms, and the boy threw his arms around her and cried.
Severus watched from the side; his own tears blurred his view.
Hermione looked over Scorpius' head and smiled through her own tears as she stroked the boy's hair. "You go on to your next class, Scorpius. If you want to talk more, please come back. My door will be open to you anytime."
Scorpius backed away, taking a swipe at his face with his sleeve. He smiled and then turned and nodded to Severus before hurrying from the room.
Severus came to Hermione, who was trying to dab at her own tears.
"You okay?" he asked as he took her into his arms to give her a tight hug.
"Yes, I think it's alright now," she said, accepting a kiss before pushing him away. "I don't want to have students catching us snogging in the classroom."
Severus nodded, his eyes twinkling with some extracurricular thoughts as he glanced toward her (his old) desk.
She blushed a bit, guessing his thoughts. "You keep that thought in your head, dear. Now go off and do your rounds. I can hear the students coming."
He gave her a smirk and a peck on the forehead and headed off.
*****
Severus stopped into the infirmary to see what Poppy was up to and found her making a list of potions that needed restocking.
"Severus, it's about time you stopped by," she said a bit annoyed. "I know you're a newlywed, but you have time on your rounds for a visit now and then."
"Sorry, mom," he said, giving the older woman a kiss on the cheek.
She looked up at him. "Are you really going to continue to call me mom?" she asked.
"Do you mind? There's no one alive that deserves that title, in my life, more than you."
She giggled nervously. "I'd like that, Severus."
He gave her a hug. "I see you have a new list for me. Is there anything complicated?" he asked with hope in his voice.
"Skele-Gro, some liver purifier... I wouldn't mind having some Acromantula antidote. I know Hagrid still goes in to visit Aragog's children, but they seem less and less accommodating. I can't talk him out of going."
"I would need a sample of the poison," he told her.
She smiled and got a small vial from the shelf. "I thought you might." I asked Hagrid to get some the last time he was there. It's only a few weeks old and should be well preserved. I put a stasis charm on it."
Severus held the little bottle up and eyed the inky black contents; he resisted the shudder that wanted to run through his body. He didn't like spiders much either, but he'd never told anyone that. Being a spy, and therefore an actor, he was able to control his body's reactions to likes and dislikes.
"Did you know Minerva offered me her position when she retires at the end of the year?" he asked her, changing the subject.
"Yes, she mentioned it. She's happy that Filius stepped down and let you take the job. She knew she was asking a lot of him. This new job will help you feel better about yourself."
Severus stared at her a moment. She'd seen his weakness in not being able to adjust to having less of a job than Hermione. "You know me well," he admitted. "I think Hermione is relieved as well. I should be happy for her accomplishments, and I am very proud of her, but it's hard to walk out of 'my' room everyday and leave her to teach what should be my classes."
Poppy reached out to squeeze his hand. "Maybe one of the other classes will open up after a time and you can teach before Minerva leaves. Why don't you contact St. Mungo's and see if they need your expertise. You could use my lab if you like any time."
Severus bowed to her wisdom. "Alright, I will. I do need something to keep me busy when Hermione's grading papers or working with students. I will have a little more to do now with the contest." He told her about the contest and his tutoring after school.
"That's a wonderful idea, Severus. We do have some very smart children, and who knows what they might come up with. Please let me know if I can be of help."
Severus nodded. "I'd best get on with my rounds. If was nice to see you, Poppy. Thanks for the talk."
"Severus, I'm here most of the time. Come by anytime. This weekend is my weekend off. Why don't you and Hermione come for dinner on Saturday at the cottage. You can spend the night and relax a bit. I have friends I can visit to give you some private time. We need to talk about the wedding."
Severus smiled. "I'd like that, but I'll have to check with Hermione. With the contest commencing, we may need to be close by. Oh, Hermione thought the Easter week would be a good time for the wedding, here at Hogwarts. The weather should be good, and we can do it out in the garden. That should give you at least a start to come up with decoration ideas."
Poppy rubbed her hands together with relish, and her eyes glowed. "It will at that." She then asked seriously, "Are you sure Hermione's okay with me helping. I don't want to overstep my bounds and be a meddling mother-in-law."
Severus gave her a rare all-out laugh. "She welcomes your help. I don't think you will ever fit the bill of a meddling mother-in-law."
Poppy looked at him with amazement. "Severus, it's wonderful to hear you laugh...even to see you smile so much. Marriage agrees with you. Now go on with you and get to work, son." She handed him her list.
He grinned, took the list, and stuffed it in his robe pocket. He liked the sound of 'son' coming from her mouth. "I'm off."
Poppy watched as he walked away with a light step. He'd slunk around...slithering in and out of rooms, barely looking at anyone...ever since she could remember. Severus Snape in love was a joy to behold. She turned back to her work.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)