Chapter 7
Chapter 7 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
These characters are not in any way mine. I am borrowing them to tell this story. Please leave reviews if you like the story.
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Poppy had Hermione practice the motions for the spell first: twirl left three times and then a quick stab. She had to have the twirl of the circle just the right width and height.
After six or seven tries, Poppy said, "Now speak the spell very carefully: Reproba Tergum. Say it on the third circle and finish as the stab is completed. Let's try in this direction first. A ghostlike shroud will appear, but there will be no form underneath."
"Why wouldn't others know about this spell? Harry might have gotten caught many times when he was a kid if someone had aimed it at him," Hermione said.
Poppy looked quite pleased with herself and then said, "Because I invented it. Dumbledore told me about Harry's invisibility cloak shortly after returning it to him. He wanted me to be able to locate Harry in case he was injured while wearing it."
Hermione looked at her with interest. "I would be very interested in the theory behind the spell."
Poppy smiled. "Perhaps we can discuss it once we set Severus free."
Severus' voice came dryly from the area left to them. "If you two are finished gabbing, I would like to see a bit of myself."
Poppy laughed. "Sorry, Severus, you poor dear."
"Poor dear, my ass. Just make me visible, old woman," he said grumpily.
"You seem impatient, Severus," Poppy teased.
"Invisibility has its drawbacks."
"Well come on then. Hermione, give the spell a try and see it you can get the shroud to appear."
Within four tries, Hermione had the shroud appearing. It seemed to hang like an old sheet ghost before them, color running like a rainbow around it, seeking a form that was not there.
Poppy said, "Good, good. Now, try undoing it. Use the same motions, but say, Reproba Tergum Laxo."
Hermione tried the reverse spell, and the shroud vanished.
"Good!" Poppy exclaimed, clapping her hands. "Now, I think you're ready. Severus, stand right here." She reached out and encountered his arm and pushed him into position. "Okay, Hermione, give it a try."
"This won't hurt if it doesn't work, will it? I don't want to be permanently wrapped in that thing."
"It's not shrink-wrap, Severus. It will dissipate after a bit if it doesn't find a form it can grab on to," Poppy said, stepping away.
Hermione took a deep breath and quickly fired off the spell. The shroud appeared and then seemed to fold into all the nooks and crannies that were Severus Snape. They took on the color and form that was his body, clothes, and flesh. There he stood, translucent but actually visible like the ghosts of the castle. Hermione ran to him and felt and saw arms go around her. She gazed up into his face. She had never seen such a tender look in Severus Snape's eyes before. It was a look she had only imagined him having for her.
"Hermione," he said as he bent to kiss her tenderly.
Hermione felt her eyes tear up. "Severus," she said softly as she moved back just to look at him. He was a bit thinner. His hair and his face were just as she'd remembered him that last day in the Shrieking Shack. He was a bit disheveled, and his clothing a bit worse for wear from the final battle. She stepped back and reached up to caress his cheek and saw him turn to kiss her palm. It was wonderful.
They heard a sniff behind them and turned to see Poppy brushing tears from her face. "It's good to see you, Sev," she said.
Severus regarded her with affection and held out his hand to her. She came and was enveloped in a group hug.
After a few moments she broke away and said, sniffling, "Now get out of here. I need my sleep."
Severus smiled down at her. "Yes, Poppy, thank you."
"Thank you," Hermione echoed, giving the woman a hug.
Then she turned to Severus and said, "Sorry, but I have to make you invisible for the trip back to our rooms."
He nodded as she released the spell, and he faded from view.
Poppy warned her. "Do not keep the spell active for more than an hour. Eat well and drink plenty of fluids to keep your body in balance if you plan to use the spell a lot. You need to keep up your energy level. Eat every two hours. The spell will burn up your reserves fast."
Hermione nodded, and Severus looked worried. "We will use it sparingly, Poppy."
Hermione had that determined-to-use-it-a-lot look on her face, and they stared at each other for an unwavering minute before she smiled. "Come on, let's let Poppy get to bed."
Poppy ushered them out the infirmary door and called after them, "Tell Minerva tomorrow."
"Yes, Poppy," they said in unison.
The halls were deserted this time of night, and Hermione and Severus walked slowly arm in arm back to their rooms.
"This is progress," Hermione said as they locked and warded their door.
She moved away from Severus and pointed her wand at him. "Reproba Tergum."
Severus was smiling at her when he appeared, and he held his hands out to look down at his own ghostly appearance.
"Well, it's a bit scary but better than nothing."
Hermione came to him and hugged him around the waist. "It's really good to see you." She raised her face for a kiss. "You look as handsome as I remembered."
He smirked at her. "So, not so handsome."
"Yes, you are Severus; you're a very good looking man. So your nose is a bit crooked; I like it."
"It's a gift from my drunken father. It's the only thing he gave me that lasted," he said bitterly.
She laid her cheek against his chest. "I'm sorry."
"Come on, Hermione, you need a quick snack. You've hardly eaten anything, and Poppy warned you not to use too much energy with this spell."
Hermione got out some cheese and bread from the kitchen, and Severus watched as she ate the small meal. When she was finished, he said, "It's late, and you need to rest. You're still pale from the flu. You need to get to bed."
She groaned. "Please, I want to look at you a little longer."
"I'll tell you what, you get ready for bed, and we can lie facing each other for a bit. When the candle burns down, you will cancel the spell. In the dark, it makes no difference if I'm visible or not."
She nodded and pulled away. Going into the bathroom, she quickly got ready for the night.
When she came from the bathroom, Severus had lit one candle by the bed.
She crawled into the bed, wearing the cotton nightgown, not caring if he saw a little leg or her bare arms and chest.
Severus said, "You are beautiful, Hermione."
She smiled, "Thank you, Severus. Now we must figure out a way to liberate you from these clothes." She ran her fingers over the buttons of his frock coat.
"You brazen hussy," he teased her, leaning forward to give her a long, deep kiss.
She laughed. "You have no clue how much you turn me on."
"Turn you on? Well, I guess I can decipher that, but it's a crude way of saying it."
"The generation gap," she snickered, yawning. It had been a long day, and she still wasn't strong from her night of illness.
"Please," he said, "let the spell go, and go to sleep. We have many nights to be together."
Hermione nodded and touched his face, trying to memorize him for her dreams. Then, moving away, she brandished her wand and let him fade, "Reproba Tergum Laxo." The candle went out, and she slid into the bed and into his arms, feeling the warmth of his body against hers as she went to sleep.
*****
Monday morning during Hermione's third hour, she had a prep period with no students. She and Severus went up to Minerva's office.
The old witch let Hermione in and asked her, "Would you like a cup of tea?"
Hermione nodded.
Severus glanced at Dumbledore's portrait and found it empty. He was glad. He did not feel ready to face the old man, yet.
"Come sit. I will summon a house-elf with some crumpets." She called, "Tinky."
There were two chairs there, so Severus took the one closest to the wall as quietly as he could. Hermione sat next to him.
A little house-elf popped in. "Yes, Headmistress?" he asked with a deep bow.
"Tinky, can you bring us some tea and crumpets? Some of those little lemon ones, I think."
When the house-elf had gone, come, and gone again, Minerva looked into Hermione's eyes. "You have something to tell me?"
Hermione nodded, "I went back to the Shrieking Shack when I first arrived in Hogsmead." She pulled Severus' wand from her sleeve. "I found Professor Snape's wand in a crack in the floor."
Minerva's eyes got wide and then sad. "I always hoped he'd escaped. Not really died. There was no body. He wouldn't have left his wand behind."
"No, he didn't leave it behind. Minerva, brace yourself," Hermione warned. "He was still there, trapped. I didn't know it then, and I brought the wand to Hogwarts with me."
"What do you mean trapped?" The old woman sat up a bit straighter. "What... what are you telling me?"
"It might be better if I show you." Hermione stood and drew her own wand out and brandished it."Reproba Tergum," she said, pointing at the chair.
Severus took his ghostly form. "Hello, Minerva," he said, softly.
The old witch paled even more than her usual pallor. "Merlin! You've become a ghost. But why didn't you come here immediately?"
Severus said, "I'm not a ghost, Minerva. I'm trapped inside a spell. My wand held me prisoner in the Shrieking Shack. Somehow this spell I'm under keeps me within sixteen feet of my wand."
"I... I can't believe this," she sputtered, placing a wrinkled hand against her cheek.
Hermione went to her and squatted next her chair, taking the old woman's hand in hers. "I'm sorry, I didn't know how else to tell you. Poppy insisted you know."
"Poppy knows?" she said, staring at Severus. The old witch was shocked more by the smile in his eyes and face than anything else.
"I took him to see her last night. She gave me this spell to use to see Severus. He was invisible till then."
"You're under an invisibility spell? Why don't you look any different than you did fifteen years ago?"
"It seems to be a stasis spell, as well. I haven't aged." Severus reached out a hand.
"Lucky for you," she said with her old, dry humor. Minerva glanced at Hermione, and she nodded at her. Minerva reached out her shaky hand, and Severus took hers. She shifted her fingers over his, feeling his hand and his solidness, and her eyes got wider. "Tell me," she said, not wasting words.
Once the story was told, Hermione and Severus headed back to her classroom. Minerva made them promise to come to dinner on Saturday.
The old woman had been so moved that she had retired to her rooms for a nap after they left.
******
The week was long for Hermione, and she found the work challenging. Severus was in the classroom a great deal, but he always remained silent. Sometimes that was difficult, but he managed it.
At lunch, Hermione would lock the door and make him appear. She would crawl into his lap at her desk, and they would just talk as she ate her lunch. She never got tired of the crinkle around his eyes and the amused look on his face when she sat in his lap.
She sometimes took a short nap to rally her strength for the evening, resting her head on his invisible shoulder. He, of course, slipped into sleep, as well, but he never dropped her. He hounded her to eat every two hours, and she reluctantly did, fearing she would gain weight.
Friday, the last period of the day, Severus was sitting at the desk, watching as the students were finishing up their potions. He'd been distracted this afternoon, thinking of the weekend they would spend together. Suddenly, a blue spark caught his eye, and he found himself rushing toward Hermione who was standing beside the cauldron of a seventh-year. He grabbed her, pushing her behind him, and shoved the student away as the cauldron exploded.
Repoba tergum: False skin
Repoba tergum laxo: False skin undone
Lisa, thank you so much for your many hours of beta work. It is very much appreciated.
Becky thank you for your support.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)