Chapter 8
Chapter 8 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
This story become very adult in later chapter. Minors, please do not read this story.
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The force of the explosion caught him mid-chest, and he screamed with agony as the molten potion splashed over him. He fell to the floor, trying to brush the liquid off, and his hands came away with pieces of his garments and skin.
Hermione heard his screams and struggled to her feet.
"Severus!" she screamed.
She turned to her stunned students and said, "Jacobs, go get Madam Pomfrey. Run; do not stop until she comes. Tell her to bring potions for burns."
"But who's burned? Who's screaming?"
The children were all looking around wildly.
Hermione ordered, "Out all of you, NOW!"
They turned and fled their angry teacher.
Hermione brandished her wand and said, "Reproba Tergum."
Severus lay there. His eyes were wild with pain, and his chest was an angry wound of clothing and burned skin.
"Oh, God, Severus." She was on her knees next to him.
"Pain." The word was squeezed out of his mouth through clinched teeth.
Hermione ran to her storeroom and grabbed a pain potion. She was just emptying it into Severus' mouth when Poppy ran into the room followed by Minerva who was moving faster than Hermione thought possible.
"What happened?" the old witch questioned. She stood trembling as she watched the mediwitch work.
Poppy gaped at the horrible wounds that greeted her eyes, and she bent immediately to make a quick diagnosis and send a cooling charm over Severus. He had his eyes clinched closed, and his lips were clamped together to stop the screaming.
The pain medication was finally kicking in, and Severus felt himself start to slip into unconsciousness. He squeezed Hermione's hand to let her know he realized she was there. Then, thankfully, the darkness took him.
Poppy used his unconsciousness to place him on a stretcher and levitate him before her to the infirmary.
Minerva stayed behind to speak to the children who lined the halls.
"Is that a ghost?" one student asked.
Then others chimed in: "Can ghosts be hurt?" "What's going on?" "Hey, that looked like Severus Snape. I read about him in Hogwarts: A History."
Hermione stayed at his side, staring at the white apparition that was Severus. His skin, even without color, looked like an angry, horrible wound.
"What happened?" Poppy asked as she transferred him to a bed and set up a sterile field around him.
"I don't know. I thought he was at my desk. Suddenly, the cauldron I was near sparked. I was about to dive out of the way when I felt shoved. It blew up right next to him."
"What is the potion?" she asked as she used tweezers to extract the pieces of cloth from his flesh. "I'm going to keep him under until the healing can start. These burns are third degree at best. Help me get the rest of his shirt off."
"It was menthol, green tea, and honey. We were making your cough syrup."
Carefully they worked to cut away the shirt and gently remove the pieces that had melted into his skin. Hermione worked, refusing to cry, knowing the tears would burn him even more should they fall on him. She caressed his right cheek, as the other one had an angry burn across it.
Poppy nodded. "He shouldn't get infection from that. The honey was so thick it stuck."
Hermione's voice shook, "Why didn't the spell he was incased in stop this?"
"The shield must have failed. That would mean another layer is gone. It's a very odd spell," Poppy said as she used her wand to clean the rest of the wound. Then she troweled a thick healing paste over his chest, his left cheek, and up and over the bridge of his nose. She finally sighed and stepped away. "I have done all I can. He's strong, and he will heal. The worst should be over by the morning."
Hermione sat down next to the bed.
Poppy said, "You need to let go of the spell. You're exhausted. He will sleep, and I will place a ward over him to let me know if he needs me. You need food and sleep yourself."
"I won't go," she said stubbornly, gripping Severus' hand.
"Alright, but you need to sleep, and it's best if he sleeps, too. Take the bed next to him. I'll have Darby bring up some food, and you will eat and then sleep. Now let go of the spell on Severus."
Hermione leaned in and kissed his cheek. Then she pulled her wand and said, "Reproba Tergum Laxo."
Severus faded from view. Hermione used her wand to move the bed up against his bed, and then she crawled in and held on to his hand.
Poppy smiled sadly at her. She was such a young woman, and she had it bad for Severus Snape, held in a twilight world.
Darby appeared with a stew, and Hermione sat on the edge of the bed. It was awkward because she would not let go of Severus' hand. The food was eaten, and Hermione finally slipped into an exhausted sleep.
Minerva came in quietly and watched the young woman sleeping. Poppy used the spell on Severus so she could see him for a few minutes as she checked him over.
"Will he be alright?" Minerva asked.
"I think so, unless the spell he's under interferes. So far I've not seen evidence of that. His lungs were protected from the steam. The burns are on the skin and top layer of flesh."
Minerva said, "It boggles the mind that he's here. He spent years trapped in that rundown place. I doubt anyone's gone there since he 'died.'"
"You know, Minerva, the layers of this spell seem to be responding to situations involving Hermione. I find that odd. He's put his existence on the line for her a few times, and layers are breaking down. Granted this time he got hurt by it, but the other two times he was just trying to help, or Hermione badly wanted him to be here. It's tied to them..."
"...because of their feelings," Minerva finished for her. "Voldemort wouldn't have done that."
"No but who?"
Minerva got a nasty gleam in her eye. "I will look into it," she said tersely, turning quickly and heading for the door. "Please let me know when he's awake."
Poppy's eyebrows rose, but she didn't say anything. She knew when Minerva had a bezoar up her butt. She laughed. "I'd hate to be the object of her wrath."
She pulled up a chair and resigned herself to a long night.
******
Minerva stormed into her office. "Albus, you get front and center, NOW. I'm not requesting, I'm demanding!"
The old wizard moved into his portrait and sat in the invisible chair. "Minerva, what's wrong?" he asked.
"You know damn well what's wrong. You did this didn't you?" She pointed a finger at him.
"Minerva, what are you going on about? What have I done?"
"You trapped Severus in this God-awful situation. That boy is down in the infirmary fighting for his life."
"Severus? Severus Snape? He's been dead many years," he said with that damnable twinkle in his eye.
"Dead, my eye. YOU did this! You trapped that poor man in that bubble for 15 years. Fifteen years! I want to know why. After the hell that man went through, he deserves happiness. Why would you do this to him?"
"I did it for his happiness," Albus said with his age-old smile.
Minerva sputtered, "How...can...this be for him. He's in agony down there."
"It was not my intention that he be injured during this growing period in his life."
"Then what was your intention?" Minerva asked, crossing her arms and staring daggers at him.
"I knew Hermione fancied him years ago. I saw that she admired him and wanted his approval. She is the only woman I have even known that could challenge the man and rival him in knowledge. They compliment each other. She was, however, too young. Severus never would have taken to her at her age. This places them on a more equal standing, her being Muggleborn and all."
"But you were dead. How did you manage this?" Minerva asked.
"I placed a spell on Severus' wand before I forced him to take my life. If I owe him anything, it's a life of happiness...don't you think, Minerva? I knew that if anyone went to the place Severus 'died,' it would be Hermione. I used some old magic to bind her to him. One of her tears was attracted to his wand. I did not know how long it would take, but I knew one day she would come back here to take her place on our staff. We are home to her. When she returned, she would go back to the place of his death. I gambled that she would see the wand. One way or another, Severus wouldn't have been harmed. The spell had a life of 20 years, and then he would have been released to continue on a life of his choosing."
"This layered thing, it's monstrous. He was horribly burned tonight."
Albus sat up closer to the front of the frame. "Will he be alright?"
"Yes, Poppy's worth her weight in gold. You need to release him."
"No, I cannot. There are conditions on each layer. He has to give of himself willingly. He must realize that he can love and that someone else can love him. There can be no early release."
"He could have DIED getting through this last layer. He's an invisible man, Albus. If Poppy weren't a proficient healer, she would not have known a spell to make him visible for a few hours at a time. She would have been working in the dark."
Albus looked quite pleased with himself. "I did steer her to that years ago, didn't I?"
"I'm going to tell them." Minerva glared at him.
"No, you can't. They have to break through these layers on their own. If they are to truly find each other, love must be the guiding factor."
"Albus, you've done some damn fool things in your life, but this one beats all. I have a staff member with a 'ghost' living in her quarters. Now the students know he's there."
"It will all work its way out, you will see. Two people who have never had real happiness will find it. Give it some time."
******
Hermione became aware as early morning light filtered through the many stained glass windows in the infirmary. She sat up and looked down at Severus who was visible at the moment. The heavy salve was gone, and he had smooth-looking skin on his chest. He was nearly healed. There was only a bit of scarring. She called to him, "Severus?"
Severus heard her voice from far away and struggled to open his eyes. He recognized the effects of drugs to keep him asleep. He finally pried his eyes open and found himself looking into Hermione's eyes.
She ran her fingers down his uninjured cheek. "How are you, Severus? Are you in pain?" She looked earnestly into his eyes. "I'll get Poppy."
"I'm here," the old witch said, pulling herself out of her chair. "I was just going to check on him."
She came over and ran a scan over Severus. "The healing is going very well. It's unlikely you will have much scarring," she told Severus, "but you need to lay very still for the remainder of the day. Your new skin is thin, and it will tear if you move too much."
Severus smiled up at Hermione and then closed his eyes and let himself sleep.
Hermione stared down in his peaceful face and realized how much he'd come to mean to her. She could not imagine a future without him in it. Would he eventually feel the same way? Would they be able to free him of this spell and let him live his life? Layers had already pealed away. What had Poppy said? By her accounting, there were two layers left. But what else would it cost Severus to be free of them? This one could have killed him. She stroked his face and kissed his forehead. She heard Poppy say, "Reproba Tergum Laxo," and she watched him fade away.
Severus slept most the day. Toward evening, he was able to sit up. They tried food, but he still couldn't eat. It was just by some miracle that the pain potions had worked. But then again potions were not like Muggle pills. Potions soaked into all tissues by osmosis. Though it was easiest to ingest a potion, the simple fact of getting it into Severus mouth had allowed him to have benefits of the pain potion.
Hermione stayed by his side most of the day. It was Saturday, and she didn't have to teach, but this was not how she had imagined this weekend with Severus.
Toward evening Poppy checked him over. "You can go back to your rooms. I think it's wise not to wear any clothing on your chest for a day or two. Restrict your activities as much as possible. You may bathe if you so desire but with cool water only. Put on soft, cotton clothing if you need warmth. Try not to use a warming spell or get to close to the fire for a few days. Your skin is going to be very sensitive.
Hermione sighed with relief. She was looking forward to her bed. Severus swung his legs over the side of the bed, and Hermione took his arm as he slid to the floor. He was a bit unsteady. His head still fighting off the drugs Poppy had given him for the pain and sleep, but he didn't complain. Magical medications were far better than Muggle medications. He would have been in torture for months in a Muggle hospital with the burns he had experienced less than 21 hours earlier.
"Thank you, Poppy," he said, kissing the old woman's cheek. "This place could not survive without you."
"Oh, go on with you," she said, her cheeks pinking up. "Once I'm gone, another mediwitch will do as well or better."
Hermione hugged the healer to herself for a long moment. "I will take good care of him. I will call you if there are any problems. Thank you."
"No thanks necessary, Hermione." She said to Severus, "You're like my own. We take care of our own, don't we?"
Severus nodded. "Yes we do." He cupped the woman's face with his hand and let his fingers trail gently over her chin. "Now make me invisible, ladies, so I won't scare the children with my half nakedness."
Hermione laughed and said, "Reproba Tergum Laxo."
Holding on to Hermione's arm, he turned and guided Hermione out of the infirmary.
Their progress was slow, and they walked carefully. The halls were empty. "This damn castle is rather drafty, isn't it?" he said, shivering.
Hermione hugged his arm closer. "I wish we could have used the Floo, but Poppy wasn't sure you'd do well with the harsh entrance."
"It's good to be free of that place. I've spent way too many hours in that place or under her care. That woman has patched me up so many times, Hermione, you can't imagine."
Hermione moved a bit faster with him, wanting to get him into a warmer environment. She'd asked Darby earlier in the evening to start a fire in the room so that it would be warm when they got there.
Finally they reached their rooms. Once the door was locked and warded, Severus sank gratefully into the bed.
"Hermione, do you mind sleeping behind me? I'm not sure I can take even the touch of your silk nightgown tonight."
She smiled. "Of course, Severus. Anything you need."
Severus smirked. "I'm not sure how I appear to you, half naked. I'm sorry if it's not a pleasant sight."
She slipped in behind him and pressed herself up against his back. "You can't imagine how good it is to see you without that shirt and cloak on." She pushed his hair aside and pressed some little kisses against the back of his neck. She slipped her arm over his arm and threaded her fingers through his.
Severus smiled and asked, "So, you like what you see?" His voice was husky with desire.
"Very much," she said.
He brought her hand up to kiss her fingers. "As much as I would like to respond to that challenge, we'd best wait till tomorrow night. Poppy's orders." His deep sigh conveyed his own sadness at having to wait to explore their feelings further.
"Sleep, Severus. Sleep," she soothed him. "We have lots of time."
If there at been an observer, they would have seen a beautiful, young woman spooning a pale, handsome ghost...beautiful and tragic in its own way.
As Hermione fell asleep, the spell faded. It now appeared as if she were alone.
Lisa, your doing an awesome job. I could not do this without you.
Becky thanks for your support and help.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)