Chapter 54
Chapter 54 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
Hermione's mouth dropped open when she realized where they were, and she saw Severus was just as astonished. They were in the high branches of the most magnificent tree either of them had ever seen. "Where are we?" she whispered in a hushed voice.
Severus said with wonder of a boy in his voice, "I asked Darby to arrange for us to spend our Bonding night in a wondrous place. Minerva assured me he knew a place that was safe and pleasant.
They stood on the flat branch of an enormous, ancient tree that stood several hundred feet tall. The branch was at least ten feet wide, and smaller branches had woven themselves into living railings. Behind them were cabin-sized rooms. Woven branches formed doors, windows, the walls and roof. Fairy lights danced and hundreds of fireflies flitted around the branches of the tree, and colors like Muggle Christmas lights blinked here and there as the creatures moved around. On other branches were more rooms with warm lights coming from their windows. Music, soft and unearthly, sang from the leaves themselves. Severus slipped his arms around Hermione's waist and pulled her against his body. "Shall we explore a bit?"
"Yes, please. This is amazing. Where do you think we are?" she asked, not knowing where to look first. Amazing birds and animals moved about the tree, gathering food and playing, scampering here and there. There were squirrels in brilliant blues and greens, birds the color of fire, and animals she didn't even have names for.
"We're in some elf-enchanted land, I think. I have never heard of such a tree." He took her hand, and they walked along the branches and climbed stairs to the other rooms on the vast tree. There was an amazing bedroom, with a canopied bed of woven vines, leaves, and flowers. A room for bathing had water coming from the trunk of the great tree, a pool of smooth carved wood. The toilet and sink were also wood. Everything was living and enchanted into shapes for their use. Severus speculated that once they were gone these things would change back into limbs of the tree until the next visitors came. Another room held furniture for relaxing, and they found a library of amazing books. There was a kitchen with a private dining room that looked out over a meadow they could barely glimpse below. Another had a hammock as its only feature.
As the last of the evening light faded, the twinkling lights all over the tree became even brighter and more beautiful. The music got louder, and a branch swung into view with a flat space for dancing. A tray of snacks and glasses of wine appeared on a railing. Severus, who was starving, helped himself to a few of the little cakes and found they were quiches.
He fed Hermione one, and she fed him a few of the purple grapes that appeared. He drew her close and pulled her onto the dance floor, and they danced slowly to the enchanted music, kissing as they moved. Severus' hand was touching her bare back, and his fingers moved up into her hair. She giggled at a thought and then said, "Severus, please take off the suit. I want to see you in the Bonding gown alone."
"Hermione, really, I'm sure it's not a pretty sight," he told her.
"Please," she begged, her large, brown eyes full of love.
He nodded and produced his wand, and with a wave, the shirt, jacket, and pants vanished, and he stood only in the gold sandals and white robe and sash. She reached up and smoothed his hair.
"You look amazing, Severus...like a Greek god."
"And you are my Queen. Come, my wife, it's time for bed. I cannot wait any longer."
"You just want out of this outfit," she laughed.
"Yes, I do," he teased, "but I also want you out of your gown as well, my dear."
"Well, in that case ..."
Severus bent and picked her up, swinging her into his arms. Hermione's arms went around his neck, and he carried her up the wooden stairs to the bedroom. He set her on her feet and then pulled the strap on her shoulder off, and her dress fell to her feet. He next tugged the long white slip down over her hips, and she stepped out of it. She stood in the white teddy and garter, stockings, and sandals. Next he went to his knees and carefully untied one long, golden strap and freed one leg, then the other, slipping the sandals from her feet. Then he ran his hands over her laced legs and her thighs, kissing her laced stomach and thighs until her legs trembled with desire for him. Slowly, he unhooked the garters and then rolled the stockings down each of her legs. Hermione stood looking down at him with her hand caressing his raven black hair. He stood, and Hermione tugged at his shoulder buttons, pulling his sleeves apart and untying the sash. They joined her gown on the floor. Severus stood in his golden sandals and white boxers, and Hermione bent to untie his sandals, caressing his muscled legs. He pulled her to her feet, and he claimed her mouth, his tongue gently tasting her and sliding over hers. He stood only in white satin boxers and she in her strapless lace teddy. His hands slid down her sides to her hips and then up over her breasts. He could feel the hard nubs of her nipples through the thin fabric. He began pealing it down her body, and his lips trailed along her body, taking one nipple into his mouth and sucking gently then nipping at the tip until she moaned with pleasure. Her hands were busy pushing his boxers down over his hips; then she heard them settle to the floor. It took Severus about two more seconds to free her from the teddy, and they stepped away from the garments toward the bed. The cover was now folded back, and white satin sheets greeted them. They really didn't think how things worked. The tree seemed to know their needs.
Hermione slipped into the bed, pulled Severus with her, and said, "Please, Severus, I want you now. We have our whole life for play."
He looked at her desire and nodded. She opened herself to him, and with a little guidance he thrust into her, burying himself deep. They both gasped with pleasure. Something had changed, and they were much more in tune with each other. They didn't even have to initiate Legillimens; they were already connected mind, body, and soul. This was better than plain Muggle sex. It was Wizarding bonded sex, and it was amazing. Hermione could feel what he felt, each and every nerve that she stimulated with her body against his, he felt and she saw that he felt every touch of her pleasure from his skin as he did. He began to move, and she wrapped her legs around his body. Her fingers gripped his buttocks, pulling him tightly into her with each of his thrusts. Their feelings magnified tenfold, and they could not contain the cries of pleasure that rang through the leaves and branches of the huge tree, and it shuddered with them. Their bodies arched against each other, straining for deeper contact. They threw their heads back as they climaxed. The pleasure was so intense they both lost consciousness for a moment; in the back of their minds, they were floating in darkness together. It was so warm and so nurturing they felt wrapped in the hand of God.
Hermione and Severus were laying entwined when they returned to their senses. Words were not necessary as they still could hear each other's thoughts and feelings. Yet they whispered to each other at the same time, "I love you." They drifted off into a blissful sleep, and the quilted top of leaves and flowers covered them.
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Hermione woke laying half over Severus' chest. She could feel one of his hands idly curling a strand of her hair over his finger and letting it slide off and then gently repeating the action over and over. Warm sunlight filtered through the open windows of the bedroom. Birds were singing, and a gentle breeze rustled through the leaves, making sounds like faint wind chimes.
She raised her face and found that his eyes were still closed. She kissed his lips and felt him respond in a sleepy, soft, lazy way. But the corners of his mouth slipped into a smile as she pulled back, and his eyes opened slowly. "Good morning, Hermione."
"Good morning, Severus." She laid her cheek back against his chest. "This is heaven."
He smiled and caressed her hair. "It is."
"How long do we get to stay?" she asked.
"I asked Minerva for a week," he said.
"Hmmm," she sighed. "That sounds wonderful." She laughed lightly and said, "We have had many days off this year. It's not really a good precedent for my first year."
"She understands, and she's happy for us. She and Poppy will probably be making plans for the baby while we are gone. It's going to be a new experience for Hogwarts. I don't think a married couple has ever taught there in their child's early years."
Hermione ran a finger around his nipple and watched it tighten into a hard bud. She moved to take it into her mouth and then hummed against it as she teased it with her tongue. She felt him take in a swift, deep breath, and he let out a soft moan of pleasure.
"Hermione, why don't we go take care of our morning ablutions and then bathe in that huge tub? We can pick this up in there."
She nodded, slipping away and drawing him with her. In the bathroom they took turns relieving themselves, and Hermione found the tub already brimming with warm water.
"This tree or invisible house-elves think of everything." They slipped into the tub and washed each other with soft cloths and soap. Hermione loved having his legs locked around her as she scrubbed them. She loved the feel of his muscles and the dark hair that covered them. His feet and toes were long and well formed. She ran her hands over his legs as his hands came up behind her and soaped her stomach in slow, lazy circles and then slipped over her breasts. She could feel his hard shaft against her back, and she pressed gently against it and heard him groan. His hand slipped lower, covering her thatch of soft, curly hair, and she pressed against his hand. He slipped a finger in, running it over her soft folds. He pressed his lips against her neck and nipped her. She pushed against his legs, raising herself in the water, and he slipped into her from behind. Their movements were slow and gentle, and it didn't matter that it took them some time to build to a climax. They just closed their eyes and let their needs take over. Severus used his fingers to help her climax. One final thrust, and they fell over the pinnacle. Hermione collapsed back against his chest, and Severus wrapped his arms and legs around her.
Later, as they sat cross-legged on the bed and ate a breakfast of scones and tea, Hermione told Severus about a tree house her dad had built for her.
"There was a large tree in the backyard when I was a child. My dad built this tree house up inside the tree. It had the trunk of the tree right through one end and a trap door through the bottom. It was a big fig tree, and my dad fastened bicycle training wheel stirrups up the side of the tree so I could climb up the tree and into the little house. It had windows that hung down when they were open. The top over the part without the three was camouflaged with leaves painted on canvas. I spent many hours up there reading."
Severus smiled and said, "There's a surprise." He feed her a cube of cheese. "It sounds like fun. I would have given anything to have a refuge like that."
She reached over and squeezed his hand. "I'm sorry your childhood was so terrible. I'm truly glad you found Lily to help you through it."
"She and I did find a space under a weeping willow for a time when we were young. It became our fort. Its branches hung over us like a canopy. It was a place I would run and hide in when my dad was in a fit of temper. But it was also a place of fun. We went one day and found a drunken homeless man had moved in, and he was a mean one. We never went back."
"My tree cracked in half and fell to the ground in a wind storm a few years ago. I sometimes go by the house just to remember my parents. The people that live there must have loved the little house because it was rebuilt in a corner of the back yard, and the stump of the tree is still alive and has small branches. I'm glad it's not gone for good."
"I'm glad your memories are good ones." He leaned forward and gave her a gentle kiss.
"It was a lifetime ago. I was always between worlds there. I think as I got older my parents became concerned and a bit afraid of the things I could do. We grew apart. My life with you, now, is the happiest I've ever been."
"You know it's the same for me, Hermione. Sometimes I wonder when the brick is going to fall from the sky and snuff me out. I never felt I deserved to be happy."
"Severus, you earned this happiness. Just accept it, and don't tempt fate to take it away. I'd crawl back into that bubble with you if I could guarantee us happiness."
"No one can do that." He put the tray aside and gathered her into his arms. "But we will certainly take every bit of happiness together we can find." His hand covered the swell of her stomach. "I am still terrified about the baby and also very excited."
"Me, too, Severus. Me, too. I was harboring a terror about letting house-elves take care of the baby, but I no longer feel that way. Our child will be in excellent hands when we are working. Look at the wonder of this magical place. They can certainly care for one tiny baby if they can harness the power of this realm."
"There is only a few months left of this school year. Then I will work with Minerva during the summer. She wants to tell me things she says I wasn't told about the school when I was headmaster for those brief months so many years ago...secrets only a true headmaster is allowed to know." Severus lay back against the pillows.
"...and maybe a headmaster's beloved wife," she teased him.
"Hardly! I think there are vows that go with the job. But then again, we are no longer at war, and I believe many of the castle secrets were secrets that would help us defeat Voldemort."
"Well, I guess you will find out." She sat next to him and asked, "What do you think we should give Scorpius and Albus to do next? We don't want to keep them idle."
"I have thought about it while I've been doing rounds. I think they should take on one of the hard cases at St. Mungo's. They have a unique way of building a potion from nothing. They can hear a description of the symptoms and understand what needs to be done and then work their way back to create that potion."
"They are brilliant. I hope that Lucius will really encourage Scorpius and not divert him from this path."
"I really think he will try to be encouraging. Maybe now that he's back home, he can appreciate more what he has. I truly would like to see Lucius become the wizard he was meant to be before Voldemort poisoned him. He was such a brilliant young man with amazing powers of empathy and gifted insight."
"I'd like to see that man, too. It's going to be hard for our society to accept him after his Death Eater activities."
"They accepted me back." He got off the bed and stood by the railing to look out over the vast tree.
Hermione slipped out of the bed and said, "Yes, they did. But you were a proven a spy for the Order, and he was not."
"I'm not sure if my association with him will help him or harm me," Severus ventured aloud.
"I guess you will find out. I want you to help him. I see now that what he did to me was blind pain. He was grieving for a bondmate. Knowing now the power of this connection, maybe we can understand having that torn away."
"Yes." He gathered her close. "Why don't we ask this tree to take us to the top so we can see where we really are?"
"Oh, gosh, I'm doing okay with having the tree around us like a shelter, but you know I hate tall, open places." She trembled at the thought.
"Oh come on, Hermione, give it a try. I won't let you go." He laughed, not really understanding her terror of open heights. A small, caged platform tethered by vines was swinging into view, and a door opened for them. Hermione gripped Severus' hand tightly but gave him a shaky smile and stepped into the cage with him. It rose very slowly up through the branches that parted to give it space. Hermione forgot her fear as she saw the world spread before them. The meadow they'd glimpsed below was only a small part of it. There were blue and purple mountains and a waterfall that looked at big as Niagara Falls flowing over cliffs. In a jungle some distance away, amazing birds flew lazily above them. "Severus, do you think it's real...not just an illusion?"
His voice was low with emotion at the beauty. "Does it matter? Magically enhanced rooms are just as real. I'm sure if we left the tree and walked to the falls it would feel and be as real to us."
"Of course," she said as she snuggled closer. "I would rather go back to our room and enjoy some more physical exertion there." She laughed.
"As would I, my wife. Back we go then." The little cage began to slip down toward their rooms.
Hermione's tree house mentioned above was a real tree house in my back yard. It stood in that fig tree 45 years before coming crashing down a couple years ago while I was away on vacation. My nephew rebuilt what he could salvage for my nieces and nephews to play it. It was reborn.
Thank you, Lisa, for your amazing beta work. You really are a trooper.
Becky, thanks for reading and finding small things to fix before Lisa gets the chapters. Angela, thank you for pre-reading as well and for your support.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)