Chapter 15
Chapter 15 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
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Severus had just Apparated to the trees that surrounded Malfoy Manor when he heard Hermione's mental scream. It took all his discipline not to run blindly inside.
Harry had been taught the spell and was keeping him visible for now. Since Severus could not use his pocketed wand, Harry was shielding him. Harry, Ginny, Luna, and Neville furiously shot spells at the wards on the gate. The wards were strong, and fire-like sparks flew everywhere. The wards glowed red hot but held.
Severus shouted, "Harry, let the spell on me go and then try Antonitum. You must know the spell; it was in my Potion's book.
Harry fired off the spell, and the wards fluctuated. It was then that Ron appeared above the house. He flew at the edge of the wards and threw fireworks and bombs of color, blinding light, and darkness. People, presumably servants, were running here and there confused by the noise and light.
Ron dodged the spells that were being fired at him. Ginny and Luna deflected some of them, as well. It was their job to keep Ron in the air and safe.
Harry shot off another spell he'd learned from Snape's book. Though not related to potions, Snape had scribbled a number of spells inside the back cover. "Aculeatus fluminious," he cried, running forward and firing off protection spells before him.
Severus followed the younger wizard and felt the pain in his lungs from his exertion.
Then Ron lobbed something at the wards that hit them with a deafening crack, causing them to burst into sight like a bubble over the entire mansion. They watched as it ate the top of the bubble and worked its way down the sides and met up with the flames of Harry's spell. Then it was gone, and so were the wards. Ron flew into the garden surrounding the house and fired off stunning spells and body binding spells. The others ran from the trees into the gardens, and servants or perhaps friends fell in their wake. Severus saw Neville go down, but he got to his feet and kept running. Luna, small and pale as she was, seemed almost camouflaged in the pale flowers in the garden; she ran with little interference. Ginny was hit in the shoulder with a stun spell and fell. She cried out and then called, "I'm okay, go! Go! Harry saw her get to her feet, and he ran to catch up with Severus who was ahead now. Not stopping, not caring that he did not have any protection, Severus ran and dodged spells. As he went, he tore the clothing from his body until he was invisible.
"I will not be noticed," he called to Harry. He'd already told Harry this plan and the route through the house.
Harry picked up Severus' wand.
Several of Lucius' friends ambushed Harry as he came into the house. As he fought them, he saw a door open and shut at the other end of the room. He stunned the two men and followed through the door; the kitchen Severus had described was before him. A house-elf stood with her hands up, not trying to fight. He stunned her anyway and ran past her. He could hear his compatriots' fighting and their cries of pain. He prayed that everyone would be safe.
The dungeon stairs were steep and dark, but he flew down them. Invisible, Severus had the obvious advantage of surprise, but since he was naked and unarmed, he was vulnerable. Harry knew for Hermione's sake he had to keep Severus alive. But he encountered more armed wizards and had to backtrack up the steps. He hid behind a curve in the stairwell and darted out to fire spells.
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Hermione shoved Lucius as his hands groped her body, and she heard the fabric of her robe tear.
She brought her knee up and managed to strike soft, warm flesh, and he cried out and let her go momentarily. She pushed past him and ran for the door, but he grabbed her ankle, and she fell. She landed on the stone floor face first and hard enough that the breath was knocked out of her. Blood ran from her nose, and she had several broken teeth.
She clawed her way across the floor, kicking at Lucius and trying to dislodge his hand.
"No you don't, you filthy Mudblood," Lucius spat out.
He crawled up her body and held her pinned to the floor. He was stronger than he looked, and he turned her over and tried kissing her again. She fought him, biting whatever came close, and tasted his blood on her tongue. He struck her face with the flat of his hand, and Hermione saw stars. He twisted her breast, and she screamed with pain. He was attempting to force her legs open, and she knew he was fumbling to open his own robes.
"Severus!" she cried again aloud and in her mind.
She was so intent on fighting Lucius that she did not see the door open. Suddenly, Lucius was lifted off her and flung against the back wall of the cell. No sooner did Lucius hit the floor than he was plucked into the air and flung by the invisible force to the other side of the room. Lucius' wand fell from his hand, and Hermione lunged for it. "Pertrificus totalus," she screamed. She saw Lucius' body stiffen; yet it was held up. His neck was twisting in an obscene manner.
"Severus! No, please don't kill him. Please! No more killing. He's a broken, deranged man!" Hermione went to the place where Lucius hung and grabbed Severus' arm.
"Please, let him go! I need you to hold me. Please, Severus," she cried, tugging against him.
Lucius was flung to the floor, and Hermione felt Severus' arms go around her. She sagged to the floor, and he followed her. He felt the cold floor against his naked backside but pulled Hermione into his lap.
"I'm here, I'm here," he said, trying to soothe her.
"Severus, you came!" She was nearly hysterical and clutching his arms so tightly he knew he would be bruised, but it didn't matter. Every inch of him hurt already.
"Hermione, are you alright? He didn't..."
"No." She trembled. "He didn't have time." She realized that Severus must be naked, and she found herself giggling a bit hysterically.
Severus, astounded and scared, wondered, Has she lost her mind?
"I finally got you naked, and here we are in a dungeon. I knew you'd come, Severus." She sought and captured his lips for a kiss.
She exclaimed, "I love you, Severus."
Severus said, holding her tight afraid of losing her again, "I love you, too."
As soon as the words were uttered, a blinding light burst from his chest. Severus appeared layer by layer from the inside out: his heart, then lungs, then skeleton, muscle, and flesh. Each layer built itself before their eyes.
He stared at his arms, which were clasped around Hermione's body. She was looking wide-eyed into his face as he appeared.
"You're the most handsome man I've ever seen," she gushed, tears flowed from her eyes.
It was at that moment that Harry burst through the door. He came to a dead stop and stared at the naked Severus on the floor holding Hermione in his lap. He saw the blood and the torn clothing and the joyous smile on Hermione's face.
"Harry," she asked, "What are you doing here?"
At that moment, the rest of the rescuers piled in the room, pushing Harry further in. They all stood stunned. Ginny was holding her shoulder. Neville had a goose egg-sized bump on his forehead. Luna's hair was ragged, and a cut on her face bled freely.
Ron looked worn but whole. "Bloody hell, a naked Snape!"
Hermione's mouth was open with astonishment, and then she started to giggle. She started to pull away from Severus, thinking she should get her weight off him. He had to be in pain.
"Madam Granger," he said in the driest, most sarcastic voice he could muster, "do not move an inch. Potter, give me my wand," he commanded. "Now, please stop gaping at me and give us some time alone. Oh, and by all means, take Mr. Malfoy with you."
Everyone was trying hard not to laugh at his obvious discomfort as he clung to Hermione, using her as a cover.
Harry handed Severus' wand over with a snicker and got a scathing look in return.
"Fifty points from Gryffindor, Mr. Potter!" he said, but his eyes crinkled in a smile.
"Yes, sir." Harry smiled back. "Ron, help me with Malfoy. They stripped his upper robes off and dropped them by Severus. He nodded gratefully, holding Hermione closer.
Ron and Harry grabbed Malfoy under the arms and dragged him from the room. The others followed. Ginny reached out to squeeze Hermione's shoulder. She winked at Hermione as she shut the door behind them.
Hermione felt Severus sag beneath her, and she pulled away and stood, scooping up the robe as she went. She held it out, and he slipped it over his head as he struggled to get to his feet. His hands smoothed the sides, and he felt something in a pocket and pulled it out.
Hermione gasped with happiness. "My wand." She took it from his hand and held it close.
Severus raised his wand and spoke softly, and Hermione felt her nose and her teeth repair. He staggered, and Hermione said, "Severus, please sit a minute." She pushed him to the cot and went on her knees before him. "Do you need to go back to St. Mungo's now?" she asked.
"No, just let me look at you." He smoothed her hair with his hand and touched her bruised face. He bent forward and kissed her deeply and then drew her up beside him and wrapped his arms around her. "I thought I might lose you. I'm sorry Hermione. I should have gotten here sooner."
"I'm okay," she said, trembling against his side. "He didn't have time to hurt me, and I gave him a mean groin kick."
Severus smirked at her. "Remind me never to get on your bad side. Perhaps you didn't need me at all."
"Oh, I needed you. I was about to lose the fight when you got here." Hot tears burned her damaged skin.
They sat holding onto each other, each thinking what could have happened.
"How did you get the old DA group together? I can't believe Ron came, and he's not trying to tear you apart for being involved with me. He may have no use for me, but I know this has to be hard for all of them."
"Yes, but we were united in a common cause. We all love you, Hermione. I think your friends want you to be happy, and they were willing to accept the idea. Once they see you are truly happy, they will all accept me."
Hermione touched his face and kissed him again, "I suppose you really do love me, Severus. You're visible."
He smiled tenderly at her. "I suppose I do." He laughed, hugging her tightly and rocking her against him. "I was so scared, Hermione."
"I was, too," she whispered against him. "We really need to get out of here."
He nodded. "I just need to muster up my dignity. Appearing naked before Potter and the others was really quite horrible."
Hermione stood and drew him to his feet. "You were only partially naked. I covered the important parts, which by the way, looked quite impressive," she teased and saw him blush.
"Yes, you did," he grinned, embarrassed and in pain, feeling the strain of the day in his body. He literally ached everywhere. He groaned as he took a few steps. "If I didn't hurt so much, I'd pick you up and swing you around. I'm so happy right now." He groaned again.
Hermione laughed. "I'll take your word for it." She used her wand to quickly repair her robes and clean them. Then she slipped herself under his arm and let him lean on her as they made their way painfully to the door.
Outside the door Harry stood waiting patiently, wand at the ready. He slipped under Severus' arm on the other side and slowly they made their way up the long, winding dungeon stairs. When they came into the kitchen, Ginny held Severus' clothes. The room was vacated, and Hermione helped him dress. She tightened the chest brace and saw that it helped him.
The DA group was met in the entry by a group of Aurors who had taken custody of Lucius. He sat scowling, his eyes shooting daggers at Hermione and especially Severus.
"She was good, Severus," he taunted. "Mudbloods sure have fire in them."
Severus lunged at him, and his fist made contact with Lucius' nose before he was pulled away.
Lucius screamed, "This isn't over. I have another line of attack. You won't know when it's coming, but it will come. Mark my word, traitor."
Harry held Severus. "Let it go; he's just trying to get one last dig. Let's get you back to St. Mungo's, sir. We need to get Hermione checked out."
Severus had been struggling, but he stopped. "You're right, Harry. Thank you." He looked around and found Hermione being held up by Ginny and Luna.
He pulled away from Harry and held his arms out to Hermione. She came into his arms, and they kissed, in front of their whole company and God.
Ron had a scowl on his face, and Harry and Ginny stood in each other's arms grinning.
Neville and Luna watched with dopy smiles on their faces.
The company of rescuers, Severus, and Hermione Apparated back to St. Mungo's.
Antonitum: lightning bolt
Aculeatus fluminious: fire lightning
Lisa, thank you for the awesome beta job you are doing for me. You Rock!!!
Becky, thank you for your help and feedback.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)