Chapter 9
Chapter 9 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
This story becomes very adult in future chapters. This chapter begins the more mature aspect of this story. Minors, please do not read.
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Hermione woke alone, and she panicked.
"Severus!"
She felt across the bed and it was empty. She climbed out of the bed and was about grab her wand to fire off the spell to reveal Severus when the bathroom door opened and a towel walked out.
She was stunned, and then the idea of it all made her laugh. He obviously had the towel wrapped around his waist.
He smirked. "Laugh all you want. But this is an improvement, Hermione. It means I can wear clothes. You will know where I am. With gloves and some makeup, I can at least appear half human."
Hermione came to him and reached out, and he took her hands.
"That's wonderful, Severus. It will make things easier."
"If I want to disappear, all I have to do is walk out of the clothes," he said seriously.
Hermione stared at him and then realized he was teasing.
"Not unless you want to find yourself butt naked in one of the halls," she warned.
She moved closer. It was a bit odd talking to a towel, but her wand was on the bedside table.
"How's the chest," she asked, bending forward, encountering skin and placing a kiss on his clavicle. She smiled when she heard him suck in a breath.
He smelled of soap, and his skin was warm and soft. She gently placed her palms against his chest. His skin felt firm, and there was even a light sprinkling of curly hair. His arm went around her, and he drew her close, taking her lips in a deep kiss. Hermione pressed herself against him.
He pushed her back to look down into her face.
"Are you sure you want to go here this soon? We hardly know each other, and you can't even see me. I'm a man, Hermione, one who's been living in a bubble for years. You're a beautiful woman, and I want you. I do not know love; I've never really been in love. I only had infatuations as a youth."
Hermione drew back. "Severus, let me cast the spell. I need to see you."
He nodded and then stepped back when he remembered she couldn't see him. "Of course."
Hermione retrieved her wand and cast the spell, "Reproba Tergum."
When Severus came into view, his hair was still damp, but he looked so good to her. His chest was healed, and the burn on his face gone. She smiled at him.
"I'm going to use the loo, and I will be back in a few minutes. Please wait for me in bed. Get under the covers so you don't freeze."
She raced past him and closed the door behind her. She used the loo and then her wand to cleanse herself, instead of taking the time for a shower. She brushed her teeth and then headed back to the room.
Severus was still only a ghostly apparition sat in the bed. He looked a bit concerned as she crawled into bed, but he reached out and drew her to him.
"Severus, what's wrong? Are you scared?" she asked, placing a kiss against his chest.
"Not scared, no, concerned, yes. I still have two layers of the spell on me. What if ..." He hesitated, not wanting to actually voice the concern.
"...it doesn't work," she finished for him. "If that happens, then we'll improvise. We may not be able to bring you to fulfillment here, but there are other ways to pleasure me...as I'm sure you are aware."
Severus smirked. "I think I can figure it out," he said, relieved that it wouldn't matter to her.
She said, "I can give you lots of pleasure as well." She began to move over his chest, placing kisses along his body. "I can touch every inch of your body and reconnect you with the land of the living." Her hands slowly moved over his arms, chest, stomach, and lower. "You have been denied physical pleasure for a long time. I find immense pleasure in just lying against you and feeling your kisses and touch. I know it's the same for you."
He pulled her on top of him. "Easy for you to say," he said dryly and saw worry crease her forehead. "I'm teasing. You're right. It is very pleasurable."
His voice was low and sensual, and she closed her eyes as he ran his hands over her silk gown and body. They kissed a while, their tongues dueling and lips bruising with their desire for each other. Severus finally slipped his hands under her gown, and she sat up, straddling him, as he pulled it over her head and tossed it away.
She grinned down at him and then leaned down, framing his face with her hair.
He placed his hands on her hips and slid one up her side until he cupped one of her breasts. The pleasure was so exquisite that he closed his eyes.
"You're so beautiful, Hermione."
Hermione ran her hands over his body, trailing kisses everywhere and making sure he felt as much as she did. She kept her eyes closed as he did, letting touch and taste guide her as she mapped out his body with her hands.
To Severus' dismay, they discovered it didn't work. The internal part didn't work...only his outside flesh was sensitive...and the spell still encased him. Yet, he enjoyed Hermione's hands on his skin and body; she made sure she touched him everywhere.
He found extraordinary pleasure in Hermione's body. It was satisfying to tease her with his fingers and his tongue until she cried out with pleasure, shuddering to completion several times before wrapping herself around him and falling asleep in his arms. He saw himself fade away, and he smiled as he slipped into sleep beside her, thinking he'd never, in his life, been more content in such a difficult situation.
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They woke later in the afternoon, and Hermione had a simple meal of meat, fruit, and bread.
Severus and Hermione looked thorough her bags and selected clothing for him to wear. Hermione cleaned all of his things and returned them to normal size. When he was dressed, he looked like a dress form standing in the room.
His robes, from before the war, were a bit loose, but not unattractively so. Yet Hermione used her wand to make them shrink to fit him perfectly. They played around with make-up, but it was just creepy.
Finally they decided to go with the spell if he was out and about. The children would have to be told. She figured Minerva had told them something already. Hogwarts students never batted an eye at ghosts, so they would just have to get used to the man encased in a spell. With real clothing and the ghostly appearance, it was odd.
"Maybe a hooded robe," Hermione suggested. She altered Severus' outer robes to include a hood, and that did help. The gloves made him look scary, too, but they decided that was best until the children where told at breakfast the next morning that he would now be able to walk among them, with Hermione. Neither she nor Severus wanted to see him left in hiding anymore.
Severus tried to pick up his wand, but it got very hot, and he wasn't able to hold it. So Hermione would have to keep it.
The progress they had made so far, even if they didn't know why, made them feel like Severus would eventually be free.
Monday morning arrived, and Severus and Hermione prepared to go to breakfast. Minerva had agreed to talk to the students, and she knew that Severus was pretty nervous about coming with her. They headed out early, hoping not to meet any students. But a few moved against the walls when they went by and stared after Severus and Hermione. The whole school knew there was an invisible man, who felt pain, living with Madam Granger.
Those who saw them followed them to the Great Hall.
Hermione held onto Severus' arm and laced her fingers through his gloved hands. She'd removed the palms of his gloves so he could feel his palm against hers.
As they approached the table, Hagrid moved down one seat, giving Severus a place to sit. He and Snape had never gotten along, and he was silent other than nodding greeting and saying, "Professor Snape."
Severus said, "Hagrid." His hooded head dipped.
Minerva came a bit earlier than usual, and Poppy did, too. They took seats next to Hermione. Word must have gotten around because students started filling the hall quite quickly, and soon they all sat watching the robed figure at the head table with expectant faces.
Finally Minerva got up and took her place before the pedestal. "Good morning, students. You will have noticed we have a special guest. You are all aware that there was an unusual occurrence in Madam Granger's classroom last week. Because of the cauldron explosion, our guest was injured. Through Madam Pomfery's excellent skills and care, he has recovered. I know you are all listening to rumors about our guest, so I will tell you exactly what's happening here."
"It's true: Professor Severus Snape has returned to Hogwarts. Madam Granger discovered that an odd spell had been placed on our Professor Snape years ago, and it's only now breaking down. Because Madam Granger found him, it seems they are now bound together. Professor Snape cannot move more than 15 ft away from Madam Granger." She thought it best to not share the information about the wand's involvement. It was possible that Snape still had enemies. "Professor Snape is solid, only invisible. A certain spell gives him a ghostlike outline. I would ask all of you to give the professor your utmost respect. His appearance is a bit odd because he's able to wear clothing and still has an invisable and/or a ghostly appearance. Professor Snape, will you please remove your hood?"
Severus stood, reached up, and removed the hood. There was a gasp as for the moment he did not have the spell on. Hermione stood and cast the spell without speaking too loud; she did not want the students to learn the spell. There was a collective gasp as Severus came into ghostly view.
Minerva continued: "For now, you will see Professor Snape in Madam Granger's company for obvious reasons. If I were you, I'd avail myself of the professor's knowledge of Potions should you have questions and Madam Granger is too busy. However, I would caution you about personal questions that pertain to the war. That is a taboo subject for the time being. As you will recall, Professor Snape was a spy for the Order and as such is a war hero who sacrificed much to spy for Albus Dumbledore, former headmaster of this school. He deserves our utmost respect. Now enjoy your breakfast."
No one saw the nasty glare a few Slytherin students gave Severus...or the balled fist Scorpius Malfoy shook.
After that morning, Severus was free to walk among the students. He found that they didn't seem to mind him much, and it felt good to go about the day's business with Hermione. Little had changed in the running of the school. That in itself was a comfort to him. He had no doubt that the Muggle world had taken leaps and bounds since he'd been sealed up and nearly forgotten.
One afternoon after class he looked up to see Albus Potter waiting till the last student left the room. The boy took a deep breath and came forward, "Sir, may I speak to you?" he asked bouncing back and forth on the balls of his feet nervously.
Severus glanced at Hermione, and she was watching him, her eyes begging him to be nice.
"Of course, why don't you come sit with us by the desk," he said.
Hermione stood and came to hug the boy. "It's good to see you, Albus."
"You too, Aunt Hermione," Albus said.
"Aunt?" Severus asked.
"Well, Harry is like a brother to me. The kids in the Weasley family all call me Aunt."
Severus nodded as the boy took a chair.
He sat on the edge and leaned toward Severus. "Sir, do you know I was named after you?"
Severus nodded. "Poor you." He smirked as the boy squirmed.
"I'm very proud to have your name, Sir. My father told me all about you...about how he'd misjudged you most of his life, well all his life, until it was too late to ask you to forgive him. You know, sir, I'd never seen my father cry. He cried as he told me how you died."
"Did he now?" Severus said, suddenly moved. "I cannot fathom that, Mr. Potter."
"My father has great admiration for you. I would like your permission to Owl him and tell him you are here at Hogwarts. I'm sure he will come when he can."
Severus squirmed a little. His problems with Harry had happened only weeks ago in his mind...not years. He had thought about all this during the days he'd sat invisible in the classroom. Hermione had proven to him that life could be exciting and that the past was, just that, the past. He'd already vowed to seek Potter out one day after Hermione had told him that Albus was, in fact, Albus Severus Potter.
He looked now at the boy. "Of course you may tell him. Tell him I look forward to having a conversation. Tell him I think he has a fine son."
Albus gave him a wide smile. The boy looked very much like Harry had as a child, but he had a shock of red hair and a sprinkling of freckles. Severus willed himself not to shudder as he suddenly realized that the boy was a blend of Harry and, in a way, Ron Weasley. Yet he could see as well that Albus was a good boy and a concerned human being. He'd already noted that he was quite intelligent and enjoyed Potions very much. He'd even seen that the boy, if taught correctly, could be quite gifted in Potions.
Albus stood. "Thank you, sir. I hope that we will have a chance to talk about Potions one day soon. I have some ideas I would like to discuss with you."
Severus stood and reached out and shook the boy's hand. Albus nodded to Hermione. He still had a huge grin on his face as he turned and practically ran out of the classroom.
Hermione had come to hug him close to her. "Thank you, Severus. That meant a lot to him."
Severus kissed her forehead, "It meant a lot to me, too," he said, staring toward the door the boy had exited from.
After that the classroom became a much more interesting place to be, and Hermione begged him to assist her. He had smiled down at her, knowing she was very capable. But the idea of having something to do gave him such pleasure that he could not say no. So he would wander her half of the classroom, helping students by making suggestions as they worked. He could always tell when Hermione was watching him, and he would look up to see her smiling at him. He started winking at her, something he never, ever had done in his life.
There were a few days that week when Hermione couldn't maintain the spell for long. Severus became invisible. It took a few hours, but soon students were talking to him without the spell as if he were normal.
One night, as Hermione and Severus locked and warded their rooms, Severus stripped off his robe and inner heavy garments. Hermione sagged into the couch. "I'm so tired," she said, as she drew her feet up and tucked them under her.
Severus came and had her move down so he could sit under her head and shoulders.
Hermione snuggled up into his lap and fell asleep. He sat holding her as she drifted, stroking her hair, until he felt himself sleep, too.
Neither was aware that down in the Slytherin common room a plan of revenge was being plotted by one bitter boy who had been told all his life that Severus had robbed his father of his shinning moment and his grandfather of his honor. His family, once prominent and rich, had fallen on very hard times. The mansion was in disrepair, and even Scorpius' clothing was second hand. He endured the torture and hate dealt out to him by fellow Sytherins. He'd always hated the name Severus Snape, and now he would take revenge on his father and grandfather's destroyer. If he couldn't reach the man himself, he would use Granger, the Mudblood, as revenge. Didn't this school need to rid itself of her, she who had bested his father on a number of occasions. He, Scorpius, would show the wizarding world what a Malfoy could accomplish.
Lisa, your beta work is very much appreciated. I know I work you really hard. Thank you so much.
Becky, thank you for all your support and all the tiny things you find before I send the chapters to Lisa.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)