Chapter 22
Chapter 22 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
Finally, in this chapter, Severus goes to talk to Draco.
When Hermione arose the next morning, she was alone. She had known that Severus had early hall duty, but waking alone in their bed was shocking. He had not woken her to say goodbye. Was he still upset with her? She turned toward his pillow and found a red rose lying across it, which made her smile. He had left his love after all, but she still couldn't stop the sinking feeling that she had somehow damaged their relationship with her careless words.
She bathed and dressed and headed to the Great Hall for breakfast. Severus was already sitting in his chair. He rose, took her hand, placed a chaste kiss on her cheek, and then held her chair out for her.
"Severus, I missed waking with you. It seemed like the life had gone out of our rooms. Thank you for the beautiful rose."
"I did mention I had early hall duty." His voice was very like his old self, formal and non-familiar, and it brought tears to Hermione's eyes.
Hermione said, "Yes, you did." She turned away to add food to her plate...food that she found she couldn't eat.
Severus could hear the strain in her voice and he thought, Now what did I do? She told me it was okay to be my grumpy old self, and now she's hurt by it.
He reached over and took her hand. "Hermione, neither of us are hungry. Let me walk you back to the classroom." He stood, and Hermione nodded. He took her hand, and they walked out of the Great Hall, not noticing the concerned looks on everyone's faces.
In the corridor, Severus slipped his arm around her and drew her close. He kissed her deeply and said, "I missed waking with you, too. But it was so early and we'd had such a long weekend I wanted you to get as much rest as you could. If you wish, I will never leave our rooms again without a goodbye."
Hermione clung to him and said, "I'm sorry, Severus."
"What for, my love?" he asked. Apparently, marriage was going to be a bit harder than he had thought.
"For last night." She sniffed, and he fished a handkerchief out of a pocket in his robe and handed it to her.
"You already apologized," he replied. But he knew it wasn't all right yet. He didn't know how to fix it right now.
"You're still hurt," she cried.
"Yes, Hermione, I am still hurt." He figured honesty was the best policy. Another half-truth or a falsehood would only damage them further. "But I will get over it, and you must know that nothing you say will ever make me not love you with all my heart." They reached the classroom, and he locked the door behind them.
He turned and took her by the arms and tilted her chin up to look into his face. "If you have some reservations about me, if you have some tiny part of me that you do not trust, I will earn that trust back."
His face was hard, and yet Hermione could see the fear in his eyes. He was scared!
"Severus, I do trust you. I do. I don't know where that came from. Look at what you have done for me. You've endured so much pain...I didn't realize how much. You have the right to hurt and be frightened that Scorpius might hurt you again. I guess women don't realize that men can fear further torture. It made my attack from Lucius seem trivial."
He took her by the arms and peered down into her face. "Nothing about what happened to you was trivial, Hermione. You have a right to feel fear, rage, and pain. We can get through this together."
"I feel guilty that I didn't see that you have a right to mistrust that boy. I will not ask any more of you than you can take. If you feel something more is needed to ensure your safety and mine, then do it," she tried to explain.
Her words made Severus feel a bit better. She would let him choose. He also knew he would allow Hermione time to help the child. He would try not to give in to tactics practiced before the war. This was a new era and a new life. If it was to be different, then he would have to try to make it different by his actions. He would try forgiveness for now. He would try to encourage and work with the boy, but he would not for a second relax around him."
"This is our new life together. I will try for a time. But if I see one more thing out of line from that boy, I will not risk either of us again."
Hermione nodded and held on to the front of his robe. "Agreed." She tugged him till he bent, and they kissed again. She buried one hand in his hair while the other one went down his back and squeezed a buttock.
"Woman," he said when the kiss broke off. "If you do not cease, I will be forced to cancel your first class and take you back to bed."
She sighed. "We are newlyweds. That's what they do: shag themselves senseless."
He grinned. "They do, do they? Well, sadly, we have jobs, and the hordes will be banging down your door at any minute." He kissed her again and slipped his hand down her back to squeeze her buttock. "Now we are even," he said as she groaned against him.
She giggled, and it made his heart feel even lighter. They would get through this. It would be all right again.
"Be gone with you then," she laughed. "I'll see you at lunch."
Severus kissed her again and then unlocked and opened the door. "Tonight," he promised her.
He left the room and went out of the building to the gates at Hogwarts and Apparated to the Ministry. He'd asked Minerva if he could go to see Draco. He had made an appointment with Draco early that morning. He supposed he should have mentioned it to Hermione before he left. But the moment of frivolity between them had felt so good he hated to destroy it. It would only make her worry."
He walked through the huge main entrance. It hadn't changed much. He found people stopped to stare at him. The public had gotten wind of his return. This was his first appearance in wizarding society other than the hospital.
He saw a few former students heading his way. He turned to glare at them, and they turned away. He smiled to himself: He still had it.
He found the department Draco worked in and was shown into his office.
Severus was surprised by Draco's appearance. He was tall and broad shouldered now, but his eyes looked haunted and his face was gaunt.
"Draco." He came forward and extended his hand.
Draco stood with a weary smile on his face. "Uncle Severus," he said. His handshake was firm, and he held on until Severus drew him into a hug and felt the man hold on a bit more than was necessary. Time didn't change much. The "boy" still needed support, and he hadn't had much from his father in years."
Severus pushed him back gently. "Are you alright?"
Draco ran his hand through his short hair and shook his head. "I'm at a loss as to how to deal with Scorpius." He stepped back. "Please have a seat. I am sorry for the pain he caused you. Merlin, Uncle, you don't look any older than the last time I saw you. I have more grey hair than you do."
Severus was pleased to see that Draco still cared about him. That was going to go a long way with this situation. "With a son and a father like yours, I've no wonder you're going grey." He leaned in toward Draco. "I'm sorry about your mother's death and that your father felt so betrayed. It was the only thing that would save all wizarding kind from a terrible reign of terror."
Draco nodded. "I know. I don't think it was your betrayal that twisted my father; it was mother's death. Father really wasn't a hardcore Death Eater. He only wanted power, and he became disillusioned by the horrible things he was asked to do. My father loved my mother more than anything in existence. When she died, he lost his mind. He needed someone to blame, and your name just fit in that slot."
"Life was difficult for us after the war," Draco continued. "We lost a great deal, and it made him more bitter. I had to work, and Pansy does, too. We didn't realize how he was poisoning our son. Scorpius had nothing to compare the knowledge to, and so he took his beloved grandfather's word as truth." He got up and paced the room. "I have tried to explain to him, and Pansy has tried. But we fear it is too late. He will not listen to us."
Severus stood and went to stand eye to eye with him. "Draco, I will not sugarcoat this for you. I mean no disrespect to all you have gone through, but I cannot allow Scorpius to hurt Hermione or me again. It's a miracle students haven't been hurt as well."
"I heard you were with Granger. How did that happen?" Draco asked, suddenly afraid to hear what Severus might wish to do about his son.
"She found me. I will tell you about it. Let me finish talking about Scorpius first." He looked into Draco's face. "I proposed to Hermione that we alter Scorpius's mind and relocate him in a different life."
"What? Surely there is another way." Draco, who was already pale, turned ghost white.
"He is my only child, my only son, Uncle," he pleaded. He sat at his desk and covered his face with his hands. "He was once a gentle and kind boy."
Severus was surprised the man didn't threaten him but seem to take his word as law.
"You would allow me to do that without a fight?" Severus said a bit forcefully.
"Scorpius will end up like father, dying in Azkaban. I do not want to see this happen, and Pansy and I have talked about just this sort of thing. Uncle, is there no other way?"
"Draco, with your permission, Hermione and I wish to try to reach him. I want to try kindness at first, with encouragement. If he responds, I will not alter his thoughts. But I will be keeping a close eye on him. I want to show him what life was like when I was a Death Eater. Let me share with him some of the horrors of the times your father and I shared. If he does have a kind heart under the anger that now seems to rule his life, maybe we can find him and turn him back."
Draco sat up and shot Severus a hopeful look. "You would do that and the Mu.... Granger will agree. I'm sorry, Uncle," he said, having received an angry glare that had stopped his words. "Old habits and bad habits are hard to break."
Severus nodded. "I do understand. I should inform you that Hermione Granger is my wife, Madam Snape."
"What!" Draco exclaimed, gobsmacked. He actually grinned at him. "You work fast, Uncle."
Severus stood. "Circumstances brought us together, and it seems right."
Draco stood and held out his hand over the desk. "Congratulations, Uncle."
Severus shook his hand and squeezed it as well, and then the men sat down again. "Thank you, Draco. I will do my best for Scorpius." He went on to tell Draco how Hermione had found him and what had happened since. Finally he stood. "Hermione and I will be having a wizarding bonding for our friends. I would be honored if you would attend."
"I would like that, Uncle. Please give Hermione my regards."
"I will let you know when we have decided a time." Severus turned to open the door and then turned back. "Draco, I am proud of you for taking the higher road here. Send me a binding contract for permission to take your son under my tutelage. Have Pansy sign it, as well. I want there to be no question upon what has been agreed upon today." He then swept from the room.
Draco watched after him with a bit of hope in his eyes.
******
Severus returned to Hogwarts and made a couple rounds before meeting Hermione for lunch. He sent Darby to ask her to come to their rooms for lunch and had the house elf bring them food there.
Hermione came in with her eyes glittering with desire. "Severus, couldn't you wait for tonight?" She came forward with a seductive air.
Severus groaned. He'd been so happy about Draco's cooperation that he'd forgotten about their teasing this morning and how Hermione might interpret the invitation. He had no desire to make her angry again.
She saw the look in his eye and stopped. "I thought we were okay this morning."
"Come, Hermione, eat some lunch. I probably should have told you I was going to go see Draco this morning, but I enjoyed our...."
"You what! You left here with out telling me?" she accused.
"I'm sorry. As I was saying," he said a voice that was a little louder and deeper, "I was so enjoying our banter this morning that I didn't want to make you concerned."
"Well," she said, "you're in one piece. I don't see any blood, and I'm not your keeper. I would appreciate it if you'd tell me where you're going if you're leaving here, but I won't demand you do. I know you value your freedom as much as I do." She picked up one of the sandwiches and took a bite.
Severus sighed. He sat down and told her about his conversation with Draco.
Hermione reached out squeezed his hand. "I'm happy with your progress. Severus, I know you're doing this for me. I know it could put us in danger, but I feel this is right. We are teachers because we care about children and want them to learn and grow to be good, respectable, productive witches and wizards. It seems like giving up on Scorpius is the wrong thing to do."
Severus took her hand pulled her around the small table and sat her in his lap. "You're right; that's what teachers are supposed to do. I wasn't a proper teacher. I didn't care about the students when I was here. For me, teaching was a job necessary to be Dumbledore's stooge. I hated teaching."
"You seem to enjoy it now." She ran a finger under the edge of his hair and tucked it behind his ear, and then she kissed a path over his cheek.
"It's because I see how much you enjoy it. The student becomes the teacher... Hermione, we must be in class in 20 minutes." His breathing was becoming uneven as her hands were moving over his body and undoing his belt.
"There's enough time," she whispered, releasing him. When she found he was already hard and extended, she pulled her robes up and vanished her knickers. He helped slide her down and over him. Their bodies rocked back and forth on the chair, and it creaked with their combined weight. Their cries rang out at the same time, and she slumped against him with her arms wrapped around his neck. "Oh, Merlin, Severus, you are amazing."
"I'm not as amazing as you are...or beautiful. You're making all my teenage fantasies come true, one by one," he murmured against her forehead.
"Well," she said, grinning at him, "you will just have to tell me about those. But turn about is fair play. If I make one of yours come true, you have to make one of mine come true."
Severus stood her on her feet, cleaned them up with his wand, and replaced her knickers. He put on his robe and kissed her flushed forehead. He said, "Come on, let's go be nice to the hooligans."
The class was waiting at the door, and Hermione waved them all in. "Sorry, Professor Snape and I had some business to conclude." Hermione caught Albus's blush. That boy was too smart for his own good.
"Today Jake will work with Albert, Rosie with Allison, and Albus with Scorpius..."
"What? I'm not working with him," Scorpius complained. "He's a Potter, and my family hates Potters."
"Then you will receive a zero for the day," Hermione said to him. "You can do this. You're brilliant, and you can learn to work with others. It's a quality that will aide you in the world of business."
Scorpius' grades were excellent, and Hermione knew the thought of getting a zero might convince him to work with Albus.
He didn't speak but nodded and went to the station where Albus was standing. Albus looked at her in concern, but she nodded to him.
She continued to name students and partners. When everyone was divided up, she put the recipe up on the board, and she and Severus walked around the room, carefully monitoring the students.
That was the beginning of the rehabilitation effort for Scorpius Malfoy.
Lisa, thank you so much for your fine beta work.
Becky and Angela, thank you for pre-reading and for your comments.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)