Chapter 16
Chapter 16 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
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They all landed on their feet in front of St. Mungo's. Once inside the door, nurses and healers who had been put on alert by Barnamais Hookineye surrounded them.
Poppy and Minerva were still there and came forward. Severus sagged against Poppy, and two nurses commandeered him and took him back to his room. Poppy and Hermione followed.
The others were taken to exam rooms to be checked over and healed of their bruises and cuts. Ginny's collarbone was broken from the stun she had received, but it would heal quickly.
Severus was striped, cleaned, dressed in a hospital robe, and placed in his bed.
Hermione refused to leave him, so she was checked over as another bed was brought into the room and she was tucked in.
Severus would be okay, but he needed additional days in the hospital. Hermione was bruised and traumatized. Finally, when everyone cleared out of their room, she snuck out of her bed.
"Are you in pain, Severus? Can I sleep with you?" she asked.
He reached out for her. "I was waiting for you." He used his wand to combine their beds, and she crawled into the big bed and his arms.
They both sighed as she settled against him. She was trembling as he held her. "Let it go, Hermione, cry. I'm here, and I can take it. I'm sorry I didn't get there sooner. I'd like to tear Malfoy apart with my bare hands."
"I was so scared for you. You're not healed, and I worried you'd die trying to get there. Thank you for asking Harry and the others for help, Severus." She let hot tears spill from her eyes, and she cried, trembling against him for some time. It felt good to let her fear go and release some of her anger and shame.
Severus held her and stroked her hair and thanked God that she was safe.
"It's Harry's job, and he would have never forgiven me if I hadn't let him help. The others just sort of showed up. I think Poppy or Minerva alerted them."
"I was so afraid Lucius would take from me something that I'd been saving just for you," she said against his neck.
"You're a tiger; you fought him off and gave us the time we needed," he said, trying to comfort her.
"I was so close to losing," she cried, clinging to him.
"Tell me how to help you, Hermione. I don't have any clue how to deal with your pain."
"Just hold me; all I need is your arms around me," she cried.
He held her tightly. "I think we need to try to talk to Draco. I need to find out what he really thinks about today. I need to know if he's sympathetic or stands with his father, and we need to know what will happen to Scorpius. We need to be aware. That boy is young enough to be turned if someone takes an interest in him. Lucius has done a good job of poisoning him so far. But it may not be too late to make him see that hatred only brings man's downfall."
She stopped crying and scrubbed at her face with her fist. "Do you think he would allow help? It's a good idea, Severus, but I have my doubts. That boy is dangerous."
"Don't worry, I will have you protected, and we will search out Draco. Minerva thinks he's changed. We must try to end this before it escalates. Voldemort was also an angry young man."
Hermione trembled more violently in his arms. I can't go through an adulthood like my childhood. Severus, promise me we will disappear into some backwoods life. I can't spend my life battling evil."
"I can't promise you that. Freedom from evil is worth fighting for. Do you really think you could stay on the sidelines hiding, Hermione? You're a warrior. Would you honestly sit back and hide when good people are in danger?"
"No," she muttered in shame.
"That's my girl," Severus said, hugging her to him a little more firmly. "Now sleep. No one can bother us here. Malfoy's in Azkaban by now."
"I don't want to live my life afraid," she said.
"I will make things right, Hermione. Let me heal first, and then we will see what we can do." He gave a shaky laugh. "I can always sneak up on Scorpius and Obliviate him."
She laughed nervously. "That's a good idea, Severus. He can be Lockhart's roommate."
Their laughter helped cut the tension, and she relaxed. She snuggled in and eventually fell asleep.
Severus lay there thinking for a time. He vowed he would do just that, if the boy would not listen to reason. There were ways to alter his brain and not take all that he was like Lockhart. Severus only hoped that he could connect with the part of Draco that used to respect and care for him. Severus slept.
Severus was sitting up in his bed the next morning and Hermione was taking a shower when there was a knock at his door and Harry slipped his head inside. "May I come in?" he asked.
Severus nodded. "Of course, Mr. Potter."
Harry came in and looked around.
"She's in the shower. Did you come to see Hermione?" he asked.
Harry held out his hand to Severus, and Severus cocked an eyebrow but shook it.
"I'm happy to see you alive, sir. I didn't really get a chance to talk to you yesterday. It was a very fast and furious day."
Severus indicated the chair by the bed, and Harry sat, crossing his legs. He leaned back and seemed at ease. The boy had grown into a confident man.
"I understand. Thank you for coming."
"I will always be available to help you and Hermione, sir," he said. His eyes conveyed his sincerity. "I was able to talk to Madam Pomfrey last night, and she told me about why you're still here and what you've gone through. Do you know who was behind this?"
"Dumbledore, I'm almost certain. He's an arrogant bastard and still pulling my strings."
Harry tensed and sat up a bit straighter.
Severus laughed. "I do, however, have to thank him for Hermione. I would not have gotten to know her otherwise. I really do love her, Harry. Can I call you Harry? We should be on a first-name basis."
"Yes, of course, Severus." Harry sat back. "I've done my share of loving and hating Dumbledore over the years. I suppose he had to do what was necessary. I guess the secrecy is what pisses me off. Maybe if he had explained it all to us."
Severus shook his head. "The connection in your head to Voldemort made the secrecy necessary, Harry. In that, his hands were tied. I guess, in retrospect, I can understand why he kept things from me as well. But I still will go see him when I am better and give him a piece of my mind," he said with a growl.
Harry smirked. "He's just going to look down at you with that damn twinkle in his eyes. The end justified the means with him. He will see that you have love in your life, and he won't care how you got there."
Severus nodded. "You're right, of course. Are you okay with Hermione and me?"
Harry nodded. "It's a shock, and I can't say it isn't. But with the age difference dealt with, I'd say she has her own mind, and she has been knocking around the world with only a career in mind and no happiness. If you make her happy, Severus, then I can see no problem here."
"And Weasley," Severus asked, "will I have to keep an eye on my back?"
"No, Ron's gone back to his life. I think it bothered him to see Hermione so happy with you. He left so he would not interfere. He gave up his right to her years ago, and he knows there is no going back. I'm sure he wants so see her happy as well." Harry did not give credence to the nagging doubts in his mind. He'd seen the look of hatred on Ron's face.
"Good," Severus said, relaxing against his pillows.
"Sir, what will you do about Scorpius? Minerva told me what happened," he explained.
"I'll try to reach him and try to work with Draco to help the boy see right and wrong. If all else fails, Hermione and I talked about memory alterations and Obliviation. I will not have her in fear of her life," he said adamantly, his fist holding a wad of the covers on his bed. "I will do whatever it takes."
Harry nodded with a rueful smile. "Call for me, and I will help you if it comes to something drastic. Hermione deserves happiness and peace of mind."
The door to the bathroom opened, and Hermione came out dressed in a robe and rubbing her hair with a towel. "Harry!" she said, dropping the towel and coming to a now standing Harry to give him a hug."
"I was hoping you'd come by to say hello today. When do you have to go back to work?"
She used her wand to dry her hair and went to sit on the bed, winding her fingers into Severus hand.
Harry watched them smile at each other and was pleased to see the same gentle look in Severus' eyes as was in Hermione's. This man had changed so much. Had he changed, or was this the man his mother had called her best friend as a child?
Harry had forgiven Severus years ago. He'd come to terms with the memories Severus had given him. He'd realized the sacrifices the man had made for him. He'd agonized over his treatment of the man for several years after Severus' "death."
Severus pulled Hermione against him and said, "Harry, your son Albus is a fine, young man. He seems a chip off the old block."
Harry gulped with emotion and said, "Thank you, sir. That's high praise coming from my nemesis."
Severus grinned at him. "We have all been given second chances at life. I'm just getting started a bit later. A blessing in disguise," he said. "I would be much older now without the stasis charm."
"Maybe Dumbledore has bestowed a number of blessings on you," he said, smiling at Hermione.
"Oh, so you figured that out, too," Hermione said.
Severus nodded. "I was going to talk to you about it when we got home."
To Harry he said, "I agree." He brought Hermione's fingers up so he could kiss them. "I will take very good care of her, Harry," he promised.
Harry nodded. "I hope it does not entail any more physical risks like you have taken already. I'm sorry if it was a breach of confidence, but Poppy did tell me what had happened to you both. I'm now over the shock of you two being together."
"I'm glad," Severus said quietly. "You are being a gentleman about it all."
"I learned years ago to trust Hermione's judgment of people." He stood. "Well, I have been given leave to stay here a few more days, so I'm going to go spend some time with my wife and visit Albus. My assignment will last only a few more weeks, and then I will come back to this area for work." He looked at Hermione who had been very quiet. "Are you okay?" he asked concerned.
"I will be," she said. "I know Severus will take care of me. He's risked his life a number of times for me already. Now that he's free of the spell we can get on with our lives..."
"...together," Severus finished for her.
"I certainly hope so." She blushed.
Harry went to her side of the bed and hugged her. "They sure have relaxed their rules around here. I didn't know they made double hospital beds."
Severus and Hermione laughed. "They don't." Severus waved his wand.
"I see." Harry laughed and then came and shook Severus' hand. "I hope that we will get a chance to talk sometime soon."
"Count on it, Harry. It is good to see you. I hope that we can be friends," Severus said sincerely.
Harry said, "I hope so, sir." He nodded to Hermione and then turned away and left the room.
Hermione buried her face in Severus' shoulder. She cried, and he held her, stymied as to the reason, but he decided to just wait to see what was wrong. She would tell him when she was ready.
Hermione fell asleep and left Severus to wonder what was up. He finally decided it was the whole day, both good and bad, so he just held her and let her sleep. Finally he fell asleep as well.
*****
Two days later they were released. They'd had visitors every few hours. Most of the group of old DA members had come back to see them, and Severus had enjoyed the conversations with his former student's very much. Was it because they were all adults on a more equal standing? Hermione continued to be elusive and quiet, letting him do most of the talking.
As they walked into their rooms at Hogwarts, Severus watched Hermione walk around and touch her things. "It's good to be home," she said quietly.
"Yes it is." He came and placed his arms around her, drawing her close for a long kiss.
Hermione let him kiss her but drew away, smiled wanly at him, and went into the bathroom and closed the door.
Severus felt his heart skip a beat, Something is very wrong with her. Lucius' attack has changed her. The last few days she'd slept close, sometimes crying, sometimes just hanging on, but there had been no teasing or sexual advances even when he warded the door for privacy.
Hermione finally came from the bathroom. "I'm going to go to my classroom and see what kind of work the students have been doing." She didn't wait to see if he would object but tucked her wand in her sleeve and left.
He went and sat on the edge of the bed. They were no longer tied together. He could go where he wanted, but he didn't want to be anywhere but where Hermione was.
Lisa, you are doing an awesome job. I really appreciate all your hard work.
Becky, thank you for your enthusuastic opinions and help.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)