Chapter 57: Epilogue
Chapter 57 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
Well, we have come to the long-awaited end of A Ghost of a Chance. I hope you enjoyed the story. It was a long labor of love to get it all posted. I started posting at the beginning of 2010. I believe most the story was written by then or at least two thirds of it. I have really enjoyed working on it.
This is the last chapter. Please leave a review even if you haven't before, and leave one even if you have. I have so appreciated all the reviews left by faithful readers, who have made themselves known, and the occasional ones left by someone touched by a particular scene.
Now onto the final chapter...
Hermione bore down: The pains were coming quite regularly and very quickly, and she barely had time to catch her breath in between them. She could see Severus’ concerned face swimming in and out of her view as the tears ran from her eyes. She felt him dab them from her face with his fingers. He was pressing kisses to the back of her head. She knew she was practically breaking his fingers; she was clutching his hand so tightly. She could see Poppy’s face over the swell of her stomach, between her knees.
She felt Severus, who was sitting behind her as he pressed against the upper part of her stomach, as Poppy instructed them to push. Hermione let out a scream as she felt the baby’s head crown and then the relief as the baby slipped from her body. She was sobbing, and she thought she heard Severus sobbing as well.
Poppy stood, and she had a bundle in her arms. She moved to Hermione’s side and laid the baby down on her stomach. “She’s beautiful,” Poppy said. “She’s perfect in every way—right down to her 10 tiny toes.”
“Severus, look at her. She’s beautiful,” she sobbed.
He reached over her and let one of the baby’s soft, golden curls slide over his finger. Then he threaded his fingers into his wife’s and said, “Thank you, Hermione. I thought the birth of our two sons could not be topped, but she’s perfect. She looks like you, and you’re the greatest love of my life.”
“What will you call her?” Poppy asked as she covered Hermione and the baby with a warming charm.
Hermione grinned at her as she held the baby close to her. “Her name is Poppy Minerva Jean Snape.”
“Oh.” Poppy’s face crumbled.
Severus moved out from behind Hermione, settling her back against a thick pile of stark white pillows. He put his arms around his mom. “Poppy, you have been so important to my life. I doubt I would have survived to get to that damnable bubble if it hadn’t been for you.” He held her till she stopped crying and pushed him away to go back to bustling around Hermione.
Hermione grinned at Severus as he came to place a kiss on her lips and caress the soft skin of his new daughter's cheek. “Severus, call the boys in and Minerva; well, let them all in. I know Harry and Ginny will be out there with their brood.”
Severus grinned. “It’s quite a brood, isn’t it? Your extended family is as much mine now as yours.” He kissed her forehead and then headed for the door of the infirmary. When he opened it, he was sure there were hundreds of people. Nearly every existing Weasley stood there. He thought wryly that the red hair would blind him. Then he could see scads of students, staff, house-elves and maybe the minister himself. He felt a tug at his heart that all these people cared for Hermione and him now.
“Harris Scorpius Severus and Edward Albus Wolfgang, front and center.” A tall seven-year-old stepped up front. He was nearly the spiting imagine of his father. He had ebony, shoulder-length hair and deep, intelligent eyes, but there the likeness ended because Harry was a Quidditch player. Sometimes he was allowed to practice with the teams. Severus placed a hand on his shoulder; he was a credit to his namesake, Harry Potter, who stood there among the adults waiting with expectant faces. “Edward Brian Wolfgang, where are you?” A smaller five-year-old came out from behind Ginny Potter. Severus knelt next to the boy, who had short curly golden-reddish hair. His eyes were like looking into Hermione’s. “Boys, Mum is doing great. Do you want to come meet your sister…” He glanced at Minerva, who stood leaning on a silver, cat-headed cane. “… Poppy Minerva Jean Snape?” The crowd broke out clapping.
Minerva smiled, and a tear slipped down her wrinkled cheek. Harry placed an arm around her, ready to help her into the room. “Unhand me, you whelp,” she teased. “I’m not dead yet. I can make it on my own steam.”
Harry, now in his mid-40s, grinned at the woman who was probably pushing 100. “I just bet you can, you stubborn, old woman.”
Minerva was an honorary great-grandmother in the Potter family now. She loved it when he teased her. “Congratulations, Severus,” she said as Severus stood.
“Thank you, Harry. Give us five minutes, and then you all come and see our new daughter. She’s beautiful.”
Harry nodded. Even after all these years, the love and joy in Severus Snape’s eyes stunned him. Harry turned away and started to organize the crowd.
Severus went slowly, waiting for Minerva to hobble along with them. She took a chair that Poppy had placed for her on the left side of the bed. The boys climbed onto stools that Poppy had conjured by the bed. Hermione smiled at them and folded back the pink blanket so they could look at their new sister.
Edward said, “She’s very small, Mum. She’s not gonna be able to play with me at all.”
Hermione reached out to squeeze his hand. “No, not just yet; but she’ll be walking in a year.”
“A whole year!” the boy whined.
Severus saw his older son grin. “I waited for you to get bigger, sport. I guess you’ll wait for Poppet.”
“Poppet?” Severus asked, looking at Poppy.
Poppy grinned. “Sounds good to me. I was called Poppet in grade school.”
Hermione grinned. “Poppet.” She caressed the head of her tiny baby.
The door opened at the other end of the room, and people crowded in, anxious to look at the baby. Harry, who was guiding them, was cautioning his children, “Just look, no touching.” Severus moved with the boys to the head of the bed, and Harry and Ginny came first. They kissed Hermione and gazed at the tiny baby. They had four children of their own. Albus and James had twin sisters, Lily and Molly.
Severus looked over the crowd of faces and saw two he hadn’t seen for a few years. He broke away from his family and enveloped the two tall men—one blond and one redhead. “Scorpius, Albus, it’s great to see you. I can’t imagine one tiny baby would pull you away from that lab of yours.”
“We had to come, Uncle,” they said almost in unison. They went to the bed with Severus’ hands still at their backs. Each pressed a kiss to Hermione’s forehead and gazed at the baby. Hermione stared into the faces of two men. They were so grown up. She looked into her husband's eyes and saw his pride. They couldn’t be more his sons than the two boys she had birthed.
One by one people came, and the room filled with everyone gazing at the baby. Molly and Arthur were still going strong. Their 30 plus children and grandchildren filed quickly by. Many of them were Hogwarts students. Then came a tall red-haired man with a blonde wife. Severus gave him a stern look and then grinned, sticking out his hand. “Ron, I’m glad you could make it. Susan, it’s good to see you again.”
Hermione found herself misty eyed. The two men in her life who’d had problems with each other had managed to become friends. It had happened when Ron had really fallen in love and had married Susan Bones. They had a little girl now. Things were finally, completely, right.
Faces of students and many others, like Luna and Neville, who was now the Herbology professor at Hogwarts. Draco came through with Pansy as well. There were so many, but Harry herded them through and then sent everyone to the Great Hall for a special dessert prepared by the house-elves for the occasion of Headmaster Snape and Madam Snape’s new baby.
Finally, Harry helped up Minerva, who still lived in the castle, and they walked out of the infirmary, leaving the Snapes and Poppy alone.
One more face stood expectant at the door, and Hermione saw Severus’ face light up.
Lucius gave her a gentleman’s bow and asked, “May I take a peek at the new baby?”
Hermione held out her hand to him, and he smiled and stepped close. He placed a chaste kiss on the back of her hand. He’d proved over and over since his release from Azkaban that he was different and that he could be trusted. They had developed a close friendship.
“She’s beautiful, Severus, Hermione.” He raised his hand and then looked at Severus. Severus nodded, and a soft white glow appeared from Lucius' hand, bathing the baby in a special blessing.
Lucius had become a Healer at St. Mungo’s three years ago. One day Draco had been in a terrible accident. Using the strength he once used for evil, Lucius had turned it around and had saved his son, healing his wounds. It had changed his life. He was now known now for his strength and power for good.
Poppy stood watching the light bathe her granddaughter and felt more content than ever. So many things had happened in the last eight and a half years. So many hard times had turned the Wizarding world into a place of growth, prosperity and peace. She knew it was mostly because of the ability her son had learned: the ability to forgive and forget. Severus Snape was and had everything she had ever desired for him.
Lucius turned and said, “Thank you for letting me see her. She’s a strong baby and will have strong powers. I’m going to let you get some sleep, Hermione. I will come back to visit in a week.”
Severus hugged Lucius to him. “Thank you, brother. Look at us. We have families we can be proud of—families who work for the good of our world. Did you ever think…”
“No, never, Severus, but the peace in my heart is complete. I’m going home to talk to my wife.” He gave Poppy’s arm a squeeze before leaving the room.
Poppy said, “I’m going to go get some tea. Hermione, try to sleep. You can place the baby in this crib.” She waved her wand, and the chair Minerva had been sitting in turned into a little bed attached to Hermione’s bed. “Call me if you need me, but you’re old hands at this.”
Severus leaned down and kissed Hermione’s forehead, then moved to her lips. She lazily sighed and said, “Severus, could our life get more perfect?” She was still caressing the baby’s curls. “Help me get her to latch on.”
Severus picked the baby up and held her close for a moment. He placed a kiss on her cheek. “She’s so beautiful. It’s going to be hard to get used to all the pink.”
Hermione laughed as she bared her breast, and he held the baby up against her nipple. The baby latched on and they watched her suck greedily. “She’s like her father,” Hermione said and then grinned devilishly at him.
Severus threw his head back and laughed; the sound startled the baby but she went on sucking with relish. “You just wait till we find some time alone, in a few weeks. I will give that baby a run for her money. I’m a breast man through and through.”
Hermione smiled at him as she wound her fingers in his and sighed with exhaustion.
“Hermione, would you mind if, once you fall asleep, I take her up and show her to Albus? I won’t be gone more than 20 minutes. I’ll have Poppy come in and sit with you.”
She took hold of his hand. “Of course not. I wouldn’t have it any other way. Albus will be tickled pink.” She felt her eyes slide closed, and then she opened them to find Severus smiling at her with such love. This man was so different, and yet the differences had come over years of learning and growing in their love and their lives.
The baby had pulled away and was sleeping. Severus went and moved the baby to her little bed and sat with Hermione as she slipped into sleep. He could not fathom how he deserved the life he had now, but he was blessed and grateful for it. Severus Snape had many, many good friends. He played with the children, and he headed the school with strength and love. People loved him.
He stood and summoned Poppy, who picked the baby up and placed her in his arms. She watched as he left the room. She turned to Hermione and smiled at the sleeping woman. Then she took a chair next to the bed and let herself doze off.
Severus placed a warming charm on his new daughter and walked to the gargoyle who once guarded his office. It no longer kept the way locked. It stood opened and grinned at him as he passed with the baby. Severus rode the stairs upward and then walked through the open door of his office. There was a soft clapping, and he saw that the people in each portrait were trying to get a look at the new baby. It had become a ritual of his to bring each new baby up and show Albus. He held the baby up and turned slowly, letting them look. Then he stood before Albus, whose eyes were bright with mirth. “Severus, she’s beautiful. How’s Hermione?”
“She’s sleeping. She did so well—no problems. Poppy’s watching her. Albus, this is Poppy Minerva Jean Snape. Poppet, this is my dearest friend, Albus,” he said sincerely.
“Hello, Poppet,” Albus said, beaming down at the baby’s face.
Severus looked up at Albus. “Thank you for the bubble, Albus. Thank you for my life.”
Albus could only nod as tears streamed down his face. “You’re welcome, son.”
Severus nodded and then turned to head back to the infirmary. He glanced back and said, “Thanks, Dad.” He did not see the smile that broke out on Albus face nor hear the standing ovation Albus got from his peers.
Severus returned to the infirmary and bid Poppy good night. He placed the baby in her little bed. He used his wand to enlarge the hospital bed and crawled in, gently pulling Hermione close.
Hermione woke for a moment and snuggled against him. “I’m glad you’re here now. I can really sleep.”
“Do you know how much I love you, Mrs. Snape?” he asked.
Hermione smiled sleepily and said, “As much as I love you, Mr. Snape.”
“God truly has blessed us.”
“Yes, he has. Now sleep, my love. There will be only a ghost of a chance that we will get any sleep in the next six months.” With that Poppet started wailing, and Hermione and Severus laughed as they reached for her.
Lisa, what a ride this took us on. I have been so blessed with your continued beta work on all of my stories. I don’t know what I would have done without your steadfast help. Thank you SO much.
Thank you, TPP, for all of your help. Writermerrin has corrected many chapters. There have been a few other ladies, and I appreciate their help and patience.
Angela and Becky, thank you for pre-reading this story and for your feedback. I don’t think you ever found anything wrong with it, other than a few spelling errors or missing words. Your encouragement has kept me going.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)