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A Ghost of a Chance
gersknightlady748 Reviews | 7.46/10 (748 Ratings, 0 Likes, 135 Favorites )
After the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
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Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
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EXCELLENT!!!!!!I look forward to future chapters....10+++++
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it, the next one is in the Queue. I'm working on ch 44 now so yu will have much to read by the end :)
I'm so tickled at the way this spell is changing in response to their emotions. Her needs seem to spark a change in the limits that constrain him, and I loved it when he held her and could feel her just as well as she could feel him.Lovely chapter, and I'm looking forwad to the next update.Hugs, Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you Beth, I really think this stories not capturing many of my past fans, I so appreciate you hanging in here with me. I'm still working hard, now on chapeter 44.The story has evolved so far from its beginning but I think people will still love it if they give it a chance.I ao appreciate your review and I think you will continue to enjoy this story :)Hugs, Jeannie
Poor Severus and Hermione - make progress to be frustrated in another department. Now onward to see what Poppy can do to help!Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yep this is a hard story at the beginning for our two. I will update as soon as I get the next chapter from the beta.Thank you, I hope you will enjoy the story as it unfolds.Jeannie
Wow, I've only read Ch1 and I know I've got like 4 more, but I just wanted to say that this is great. I don't know where this is going, whether Snape is eventually going to be alive (yay) or it'll be one of this what-could-have-been stories, but I love it all the same, so far. You're great, please keep updating soon
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I so glad you found the story and left a review. I hope I hear from you as you continue to read. Chapter 5 just posted last night. This story has now 44 chapters and still its growing. It's a long process to egt each chapter posted.I think you will enjoy it as it unfolds. I have been working on it since last summer.Thank you so much and keep reading :)
Wait, so his clothes can't come off? A very odd kind of spell indeed! It must be strange to kiss an invisible person- even stranger to have sex with one, eventually. Though it's probably good that he's gone corporeal before he thought about doing more than kissing... *lemony thoughts*
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL...it was an odd idea but it will play out as the stories told. Yes making love to an invisable man might be odd but if you close your eeys is doesn't watter as long as he's solid to the touch LOLThanks for your review.
I like that the spell seemed to respond to her needs.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, yes it does :) in some ways, from a point of view.
Awesome! It's wonderful that the kiss Hermione had felt was warm. That means that when that when Severus had moved that toy horse he had changed something about his existence. I wonder if the effort to use his magic had caused his physical self to shift a bit from where he has been back to where he had lived all his life.I'm glad that Hermione has confided in Poppy, too. I hope the two of them, working with Severus, can bring him all the way back. Now that would be great!!!Thanks for this very entertaining chapter.Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Beth thank you for your kind words and review. I'm not sure he changed anything he just figured out his magical power was able to get through the barrier if he concentrated enough. Poppy is very important in this story. She cared for severus a lot.I hope you will continue to enjoyt he story as it developes. I has taken on a life of its own :)Jeannie
That was a really good chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I so glad you enjoyed it.
Very interesting start! I really am a fan of the concept, although my mind is busy as a bee trying to figure out what exactly happened to Severus. I suppose I will just have to be patient.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I hope you will read ch 2-3 now up. It's a shame it takes so long to up load each chapter. I'm already working on ch 42. I wanted to finish posting my last story Raven before starting to post this one.I hope you will continue to like the sotry and let me know what you think. Thanks so much.
Wow, such development in the chapter - well done!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I think the beginning goes so much faster than I realised. It's been a long time sicne I worked on these first chapter. The story is now 42 chapter long so far.
Hermione felt the touch of warm lips on hers, but Severus only thought about kissing her. He didn't seem to feel anything. That seems odd to me. But, then again, he only thought hard about moving the little horse. He didn't actually feel the thing in his hand. So I guess it's the same thing. Too bad he can't feel his own lips against hers.I hope they can work this out. I'm sure you'll find a way. :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
:) things change eventually. This story has evolved so much. It was supposed to be short and now it's 42 chapters and going... Yes, it is too bad he can't feel her as well. There's a sadness to this story at first.Thank you for your review.
That was so haunting, for lack of a better word, evocative. I can see the yearning in both of them.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do need eachother. Severus needs to reconnect in a human way and Hermione has kept her loneliness around her like a shroud for years.Thank you so much for your review.
Frostbitten! And he has a body! This is so cool (pun intended). ^_^
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I'm notso sure people like this story. I really hadn't intented Severus to be so un-Severus like. It has been months since I wrote the first part and I didn't rememberthings chnaged to rapidly at the beginning.
Great plot! I hope she helps him come back and take up his rightful position as headmaster.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, keep reading I think you'll find the story will make you happy. I'm writing ch 42 now.
now we're getting somewhere! at least they can communicate. i dying (pun intended) to find out what he is. great story. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I'm so glad your happy about the chapter. This was originally supposed to be maybe a dozen chapters. Its now going into 42 chapter. It continued, like life does, one thing leads to another and time passes :) Life leads from one thing to the next stage of life. cH 3 is in the Queue.
This is a very fun concept. I hope you update soon!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I will be adding ch 3 as soon as my Beta sends it to me.I'm so glad your enjoying it.
Interesting premis for a story. The first chapter got me all choked up, the way Hermione pined over him as she made herself at home in his private rooms.He already feels possive of her. I see a great love story in the making.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I hope people don't think this all too emotional. I find my Severus is much chnaged after his 15 years of solitude. He trys to be tough at times but he's really quite vunerbale.I love writing it and hope you will enjoy reading it as it unfolds.
Cool! Hermione's going to research. *giggle* Is he alive or is he memorex (to quote my uncle when I answer the phone). ^_^
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL, we will see if she actually gets to the library. hummmm I don't remember LOLThank you for your comments.
Oooh, she's popped his bubble - does this mean he has more than the 15 foot radius from his wand?Also, does that now mean he's no longer excluded from her "bathroom time" since he's obviously not as averse to her as he's tried to make it seem?Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well, we will see in the next chapter those questions get answered. Why would he want to be included in her bathroom time ...LOL No I think shes getting under his skin faster that he thought possible. Thank you so much for your thoughts and hope for the story.
Brilliant update, I am trilled to see that they now can talk with eachother. Is it only Hermione, as the keeper of his wand, that can hear him? (I am not forgetting Sybil, but she is truly seeing him, so I guess she aint that much of a fake as most people like her to be?)Severus being able to feel the floor and sitting in a chair, makes him something else than a ghost or a spirit, doesn't it?I am very much looking forward to read more.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you so much. I realy am enjoying writing this and wish I could get it to my readers faster. I'm not sure if they ever bump into Sybil again before things change. No she's not a fraud we know that fromt he prophesy :) but deffinately a crazy old broad. Yep somthing else :)Your review is so appreciated, thank you.
Great chapter. Looking forward to what Hermione finds researching.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you, I dont rememebr is she ever makes it ot the library or now...hummmm Thanks so much for your review.
He's going to have to get her past the "sir." I'm glad she acknowledged him.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL eventually, they just re-met. Thanks for reviewing :)
Love it! Hmmmm I kind of wonder if Severus is trapped between two worlds or maybe he does have some unfinished business.....so many questions and so many possible answers guess I will have to wait for the next chapter to find out what happens *GRINS*
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yep still waiting to get it from my Beta. As soon as she sends it it will go into the Queue. I'm writing ch 41 now.I hope yu will enjoy this tale as it unfolds. Thank you for the review,
Splendid chapter, m'dear. I am so intrigued and looking forward to along to see where you take this story.Thanks! Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you are enjoying it. It had taken on a life of its own.
This is a helluva starting chapter, Jeannie! Now I'm off to chapter two. 8^)Beth
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thank you! :) nice of you to leave a review.