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Hilltop Cottage

1: Prologue

2: One

3: Two

4: Three

5: Four

6: Five

7: Six

8: Seven

9: Eight

10: Nine

11: Ten

12: Eleven

13: Twelve

14: Thirteen

15: Fourteen

16: Fifteen

17: Sixteen

18: Seventeen

19: Eighteen

20: Nineteen

21: Twenty

22: Twenty-One

23: Twenty-Two

24: Twenty-Three

25: Twenty-Four

26: Twenty-Six

27: Twenty-Five

28: Twenty-Seven

29: Twenty-Eight

30: Twenty-Nine

31: Thirty

32: Thirty-One

33: Thirty-Two

34: Thirty-Three

35: Thirty-Four

36: Thirty-Five

37: Thirty-Six

38: Thirty-Seven

39: Thirty-Eight

40: Thirty-Nine

41: Forty

42: Forty-One

43: Forty-Two

44: Forty-Three

45: Forty-Four

46: Forty-Five

47: Forty-Six

48: Forty-Seven

49: Forty- Eight

50: Epilogue

Hilltop Cottage

neelix

734 Reviews   |   734 Ratings, 0 Likes, 196 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica General Potions Under Duress 80,954 Words 56 Chapters Complete
Filius Flitwick Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Original Character Severus Snape

After the war, Hermione needs a break. A small house provides her with more than just the sanctuary she craves.

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Chapters (50)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: One

Chapter 3: Two

Chapter 4: Three

Chapter 5: Four

Chapter 6: Five

Chapter 7: Six

Chapter 8: Seven

Chapter 9: Eight

Chapter 10: Nine

Chapter 11: Ten

Chapter 12: Eleven

Chapter 13: Twelve

Chapter 14: Thirteen

Chapter 15: Fourteen

Chapter 16: Fifteen

Chapter 17: Sixteen

Chapter 18: Seventeen

Chapter 19: Eighteen

Chapter 20: Nineteen

Chapter 21: Twenty

Chapter 22: Twenty-One

Chapter 23: Twenty-Two

Chapter 24: Twenty-Three

Chapter 25: Twenty-Four

Chapter 26: Twenty-Six

Chapter 27: Twenty-Five

Chapter 28: Twenty-Seven

Chapter 29: Twenty-Eight

Chapter 30: Twenty-Nine

Chapter 31: Thirty

Chapter 32: Thirty-One

Chapter 33: Thirty-Two

Chapter 34: Thirty-Three

Chapter 35: Thirty-Four

Chapter 36: Thirty-Five

Chapter 37: Thirty-Six

Chapter 38: Thirty-Seven

Chapter 39: Thirty-Eight

Chapter 40: Thirty-Nine

Chapter 41: Forty

Chapter 42: Forty-One

Chapter 43: Forty-Two

Chapter 44: Forty-Three

Chapter 45: Forty-Four

Chapter 46: Forty-Five

Chapter 47: Forty-Six

Chapter 48: Forty-Seven

Chapter 49: Forty- Eight

Chapter 50: Epilogue


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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.

Work with teenagers.

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Reviews for Hilltop Cottage

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10/10

BulletTimeScully

Wow... I was totally not expecting that! What a 180! In a great way though! I wonder how they'll handle all the new-found publicity... will it be too much? I hope not! Great update, as always!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

There had to be a clash of reality at some point, I think! Thanks for the review, I'm pleased you liked it.

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad they don't feel awkward the morning after. And Harry and Minerva will just have to cope with it. This isn't that bad after all.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

No, it's not that bad. Update should be soon!

10/10

Pagemistress83

I love this fic, Beautifully written!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Oh, thank you very much, what a nice thing to say!

0/10

kittyperry

Very beautifully written. That was just so tender.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks you so much. I wanted it to be real but full of emotion.

0/10

debjunk

Oh, so Han Solo of him!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

That's what my reviewer on Ashwinder said too! I didn't understand it, now I do... thanks! lol... it  was unintentionally!

10/10

HBAR

Well, RL has to take priority every now and then.  Welcome back.  I'm so glad that things went as smoothly as they did.  I think you did a nice job writing this scene so that it was believeable to the fact that they don't have a lot of collective experience, but yet didn't feel awkward.  If they keep practicing, they will get even better ;)  Thanks for the update!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks! I wanted it to feel real and a bit fumbly!

10/10

snitchette

First of all I'm so glad you're glad. What an amazing chapter. It was so sweet. I'm just sad he didn't tell her his love.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... This is Severus Snape we're dealing with - we're lucky he took his boxers off! It will happen I think, but there are more hurdles coming.

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

LOL ! I think you may have a point there. But with the bxers on it would have been very difficult to perform.

0/10

Elizabeth

I've waited so long for this chapter, and you didn't disappoint. It was very steamy. I am looking forward to more, I want to see what their next obstacle will be in their relationship. I assume it will become public knowledge soon that they are together. I cannot wait to see how they react.And the last line...does he love her or does he not know how to express himself? I'm sure you'll answer all that as the story progresses.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... are you a Seer,

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

??? Wait for the next chapter and you'll see what I mean. In response to your questions, both, I think.

10/10

blue artemis

That was quite sweet.  I like that you included the awkwardness of having done that before. 

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I wanted it to feel real, so I hope that came across.

10/10

Becky

Beautiful, wonderful, I love it...I actually squeed when the notice that this was posted came in...Well done, Whoohoo!!!!!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

awww, thanks for being so enthusiastic for my story xx

Response from Becky (Reviewer)

I adore this story, I am saving each chapter so I can read it again and again....

10/10

BulletTimeScully

Oh! Beautiful and sexy! It was well worth the wait! :)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

ahh, thank you so much! I'm glad you thought so x

10/10

mimmom

Ohhh, dear.  What a mess.  I love it.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. thanks! And thank you for leaving me such lovely reviews x

10/10

mimmom

Oh no, poor severus thinks she's gone for good.  Silly boy.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Well, he's incredibly insecure and would think, well, why would she want to stay with me?

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

Yes, he's had very little evidence in his life that anyone would want to be around him and nobody he could trust.  Of course this is why I love Snape fanfic.  So many of us want him to have something good, a chance at a good life.

10/10

kittyperry

Yey, let's find a bed indeed. Go Hermione. I'm glad she made the decision to confront him.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

She wouldn't let it lie, not after everything they'd shared so far.

10/10

mimmom

Ohh, I can't wait for the next chapter!  I'm glad the misery didn't last long.  Severus gets things in his head and you just don't know where you'll end up.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I know. And you just know it still won't be an easy ride, don't you?

10/10

snitchette

Yeah !!GO Hermione!! Go kick his arse for jumping too quickly on wrong conclusions! He deserves no better!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... definately!

10/10

BulletTimeScully

Damn Lily for making Severus so insecure! I love the contrasting emotions between the two of them: Hermione is happy and excited, Severus is furious and heartbroken. I can't wait to see what happens when she gets to his house! Great chapter... update soon!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks. I hope you find the update as intruiging!

0/10

kimjo2

hooboy.  i hope they get this straightened out!  great update.  thanks and happy new year smoochies

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... don't worry - you know how I am with happy endings!

10/10

kittyperry

I do hope this means she's off to confront him.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Confront, or comfort, I guess... It depends if he's still got PMS when she gets there!!

Response from kittyperry (Reviewer)

Oh dear, Severus with PMS - that is funny. I can't wait to read your next chapter. I love this story.

10/10

keske

uh oh...this is going to be very very bad ~hides behind a shrub with a camera!~

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lmao... ahh. So it's you then...!

Response from keske (Reviewer)

who me? why...uhhhhh NO! officer! i'm hjust your friendly neighborhood garden photographer! Ms Davis has LOVERLY shrubberies this year!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Sure. Next you'll be telling me you don't work Freelance for the Daily Prophet... Don't worry - I won't tell Severus!

Response from keske (Reviewer)

daily prophet, you say? why not me! i work for the Metropolis Daily Planet...oh hey clark! how are ya? lois get eaten by godzilla again...too bad...oh hey, Sev's gunna argue with mione again...i'm taking bets!

0/10

Karfinwen

yay insecure angsty severus!is it terrible that i enjoy that side of him?i do request that you fix this unfortunate little misunderstanding with all due haste, of course.this is a great story.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... yes, I love that side of him too! And of course, Hermione will kiss it all better!

10/10

Sirius Girl 08

Can I please just give Severus a hug?  Sure, I would end up looking at the business end of his wand should I try (especially at the moment), but, gah, way to pull on my heart strings!  I just hope they can sort this all out, and quickly!  Hermione is going to need to pretty tough though to get through to him cos I have a feeling he is going to be beyond furious when she gets there. Great chapter, and I'm excited the next one is already in the queue :-) xXx

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

You could try the hugging thing by all means but on your own head be it! Beyond furious would be a pretty good way to decribe what happens next, you know! Thanks for reading x

10/10

HBAR

Well at least she has the sense to do something.  I mean, she is going to find him, right?  I hope she gives him hell for  being such a complete idiot.  But she also ought to give him a small break.  He is kind of inept at these things.  It is just going to take practice and some serious  boosting of his self esteem.  But she is a go-getter, and if she wants him, she'll have him.  Even if the chase is full of pitfalls.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I don't need to add anything to what you've just written! lol... you'll see. Next chapter is almost up!

10/10

countrymouse

Oh what a horrible place to stop this chapter!  I was hoping for her to confront him NOW.....and now I have to wait till next chappie (sulks).Please make the next one twice as long for us, to reward us all for patiently waiting?

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I think the next chapter is longer, not sure - I just stop when it feels right!

10/10

beaweasley2

Well, she had a nice day getting prepared for her evening - too bad it was all for naught. How was she to know he's brooding over a miscommunitaction. Poor Severus, it's not at all what he thinks and is miserable for it. I hope I know where Hermione is going, cuz that will be one hell of a chapter if I'm right. 

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Well, it's not going to be pretty, sadly! But I have high hopes!

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