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Morgaine's Story

1: I: Morgaine of the Lake

2: II: The Testing

3: III: The Sorting

4: IV: The Start of Term

5: V: A Light on Halloween

6: VI: Look at Me

7: VII: Ghosts from the Past

8: VIII: Saved

9: IX: Dark Magic and Dark Secrets

10: X: Mistakes Forgiven

11: XI: About to Lose Another Friend

12: XII: Goodbye for the Summer

13: XIII: And Now We're Even

14: XIV: Old Enemies

15: XV: The Harvest Feast

16: XVI: See but Not Touch

17: XVII: A Bittersweet Farewell

18: XVIII: The Girl He Once Knew

19: XIX: Like a Candle in the Dark

20: XX: New Year's Ball at Malfoy Manor

21: XXI: Found and Lost Again

22: XXII: Friends and Foes

23: XXIII: They Win Again, They Always Do

24: XXIV: Despite All Your Flaws

25: XXV: In the Arms of an Angel

26: XXVI: The Dragon and the Lily

27: XXVII: Daughter of Darkness and Light

28: XXVIII: To Those Who Fought Bravely

29: XXIX: The Most Loyal

30: XXX: Comfort and Strength

31: XXXI: Farewell, My Friend

32: XXXII: Severus Snape, Headmaster of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry

33: XXXIII: Always By Your Side

34: XXXIV: Saying Goodbye

35: XXXV: The Final Farewell

Morgaine's Story

morgaine_dulac

164 Reviews   |   164 Ratings, 0 Likes, 39 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Hogwarts Castle 93,256 Words 35 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Original Character Severus Snape Minerva McGonagall Sorting Hat Lucius Malfoy Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Remus Lupin Quirenius Quirrel Narcissa Malfoy Sirius Black Cornelius Fudge Harry Potter Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Igor Karkaroff Crabbe (Death Eater) Goyle (Death Eater) Nymphadora Tonks Other Canon Witch/Wizard Bellatrix Lestrange Lily (Evans) Potter Draco Malfoy Fenrir Greyback Filius Flitwick Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Alecto Carrow Amycus Carrow Charity Burbage Horace Slughorn Pomona Sprout Arthur Weasley Molly Weasley

A canon compliant version of the last fourteen years in the life of Severus Snape. Canon compliant but with one important difference: in this story, Severus Snape has a friend. A friend who offers him her hand in the dark and will stay by his side until the bitter end.

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Chapters (35)

Chapter 1: I: Morgaine of the Lake

Chapter 2: II: The Testing

Chapter 3: III: The Sorting

Chapter 4: IV: The Start of Term

Chapter 5: V: A Light on Halloween

Chapter 6: VI: Look at Me

Chapter 7: VII: Ghosts from the Past

Chapter 8: VIII: Saved

Chapter 9: IX: Dark Magic and Dark Secrets

Chapter 10: X: Mistakes Forgiven

Chapter 11: XI: About to Lose Another Friend

Chapter 12: XII: Goodbye for the Summer

Chapter 13: XIII: And Now We're Even

Chapter 14: XIV: Old Enemies

Chapter 15: XV: The Harvest Feast

Chapter 16: XVI: See but Not Touch

Chapter 17: XVII: A Bittersweet Farewell

Chapter 18: XVIII: The Girl He Once Knew

Chapter 19: XIX: Like a Candle in the Dark

Chapter 20: XX: New Year's Ball at Malfoy Manor

Chapter 21: XXI: Found and Lost Again

Chapter 22: XXII: Friends and Foes

Chapter 23: XXIII: They Win Again, They Always Do

Chapter 24: XXIV: Despite All Your Flaws

Chapter 25: XXV: In the Arms of an Angel

Chapter 26: XXVI: The Dragon and the Lily

Chapter 27: XXVII: Daughter of Darkness and Light

Chapter 28: XXVIII: To Those Who Fought Bravely

Chapter 29: XXIX: The Most Loyal

Chapter 30: XXX: Comfort and Strength

Chapter 31: XXXI: Farewell, My Friend

Chapter 32: XXXII: Severus Snape, Headmaster of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry

Chapter 33: XXXIII: Always By Your Side

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Saying Goodbye

Chapter 35: XXXV: The Final Farewell


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morgaine_dulac

Member Since 2008  |  52 Stories  |  Favorited by 122  |  948 Reviews Written  |  2,443 Review Responses

Born: in the glorious year of 1979, when Dio joined Black Sabbath and Peter Pettigrew started passing on information to the Dark Lord

Colours: black, green, silver

Passions: writing, cooking, baking, witchcraft

Obsessions: quite a few, chocolate for one (hi Lupin!), but mainly a certain Potions master and a blond DE.

When I am not writing alone, I co-write with my favourite Ravenclaw star_girl. Look for sevs_starsisters to find our stories.

Published writer since 2014. Original fiction is good fun, but I find myself returning to fan fiction every now and then 

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Reviews for Morgaine's Story

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10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Blessed be. This is excellent. Thanks for an entertaining read. I am enjoying it very much.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I thank you, Kyria. Both for your praise and your blessing./M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I thank you, Kyria. Both for your praise and your blessing./M

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

So very sad. But wonderful all the same. Thank you.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Thank you very much for your comments.Cheers. /Morgaine

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Thank you very much for your comments.Cheers. /Morgaine

0/10

MollysSister

THank goodness for the author's note. I was going to have to ask you what Dulcamara was!!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hihi, well, when one invents a potion, one better tells people about it.Thank you for being a uch a faithful reader and reviewer. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hihi, well, when one invents a potion, one better tells people about it.Thank you for being a uch a faithful reader and reviewer. /M

0/10

MollysSister

If only he will be as accepting of her friendship when he isnt drunk!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I actually start to wonder where I got the idea of Snape drinking that much. Sigh, I read way too much fanfiction ;-)Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I actually start to wonder where I got the idea of Snape drinking that much. Sigh, I read way too much fanfiction ;-)Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. /M

0/10

MollysSister

Well it was bound to come out sooner or later!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Yup, it was. Haven't got the foggiest how it could take everyone else so long to figure it out (in the books I mean).Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Yup, it was. Haven't got the foggiest how it could take everyone else so long to figure it out (in the books I mean).Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. /M

0/10

akasha2411

I like your story a lotCan't wait 'till the next update And once more i found a story worthy of my favorites.*sight* (I love this site, so many good story's.)And the idea that Snape's mood is affected by the moon cycle sounds a bit like female revenge, hehe (I'm a bit grumpy once in a month too so..)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Dear StefanieI take a deep bow and thank you for you kind words.About the moon: I was working with the theory that Magical folks sense the energy of the moon, but I like your point of view much better! Much more e-e-e-vil ;-)Greetings from your (almost) northern neighbour Sweden.Cheers. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Dear StefanieI take a deep bow and thank you for you kind words.About the moon: I was working with the theory that Magical folks sense the energy of the moon, but I like your point of view much better! Much more e-e-e-vil ;-)Greetings from your (almost) northern neighbour Sweden.Cheers. /M

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Exquisite. The feelings are so real. Thank you.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Dear Kyria of DelphiThank you so much. 'Mistakes Forgiven' is one of my favourite chapters, and I am very glad that you like it, too.Cheers. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Dear Kyria of DelphiThank you so much. 'Mistakes Forgiven' is one of my favourite chapters, and I am very glad that you like it, too.Cheers. /M

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Very, very good. Thanks. I am eagerly awaiting more.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I'm so happy you follow my little story. Cheers. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I'm so happy you follow my little story. Cheers. /M

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Exquisite. Just the right touch of otherworldliness.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Thank you very much! Happy you liked it.Cheers. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Thank you very much! Happy you liked it.Cheers. /M

0/10

MollysSister

How many guardians does Morgaine have?

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi againYou will see in a later chapter that Morgaine has grown up in a community of priestesses. And although her grandmother is her 'main guardian', the others would have a saying in her upbringing as well. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi againYou will see in a later chapter that Morgaine has grown up in a community of priestesses. And although her grandmother is her 'main guardian', the others would have a saying in her upbringing as well. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

0/10

MollysSister

Dumbledore and his constant manipulations make me crazy! I wish Severus would have had the time to punch him in the nose.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Ha! Finally somebody who agrees with me! I also find D's manipulations very annoying! Maybe I should let somebody punch him later in the story? ;-) Thanks once more for reading and reviewing. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Ha! Finally somebody who agrees with me! I also find D's manipulations very annoying! Maybe I should let somebody punch him later in the story? ;-) Thanks once more for reading and reviewing. /M

0/10

MollysSister

I am feeling like quite the moron for not spotting Legilimency when it was happening to Morgain.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Haha, don't,

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

. Severus didn't spot it either. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Haha, don't,

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

. Severus didn't spot it either. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

0/10

MollysSister

Oh my I am all sorts of curious to know more about how she can hear his thoughts sometimes!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Yeay, I managed to make someone curious!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Yeay, I managed to make someone curious!

0/10

MollysSister

Refresh me on the time line again please. How many years between Bill and Severus? This puts Morgain closer to Severus than I had thought. Interesting.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Severus is born in 1960 and Morgaine in 1970. So there are only ten years between them. Now, is this good or bad? Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

10 years is good. It makes it more of a reasonable jump when they get together. The ARE going to get together arent they????

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hm, well, are they?Let me play Dumbledores role for a while and say: I know more than you do and I'm not telling . So mean of me.But I am sure you have your theories.Stay tuned for the next chapter.Cheers. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Severus is born in 1960 and Morgaine in 1970. So there are only ten years between them. Now, is this good or bad? Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

10 years is good. It makes it more of a reasonable jump when they get together. The ARE going to get together arent they????

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hm, well, are they?Let me play Dumbledores role for a while and say: I know more than you do and I'm not telling . So mean of me.But I am sure you have your theories.Stay tuned for the next chapter.Cheers. /M

0/10

MollysSister

All the better to  see you with my dear...being sorted into Slytherin that is! AD was strangly calm about it all. I have a million questions! On to the next chapter

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Yeah, isn't it amazing how well Dumbledore takes Morgaine being sorted into Slytherin? Maybe, he knows more that we do...Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Yeah, isn't it amazing how well Dumbledore takes Morgaine being sorted into Slytherin? Maybe, he knows more that we do...Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. /M

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Very good. Can't wait for more.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Greetings my faithful reader!I am very glad that you enjoy the story. Keep on reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me. Cheers. /M

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Greetings my faithful reader!I am very glad that you enjoy the story. Keep on reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me. Cheers. /M

10/10

diana_hawthorne

This was a great chapter - it's really set up an interesting premise for the story.  I'm eager to find out how exactly she can hear his voice!Great job, and please update soon!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi DianaHappy to see that I made you curious.Thanks for reading and reviewing. /M

10/10

MollysSister

Now why does the new moon affect Snape's mood? I am all sorts of curious about this "bonding" that is happening between the two of them. Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Just like the nights of the Full Moon, the nights of the New Moon are times of powerful magic and people trained in magic sense this power. And, it's a great opportunity to make Snape even more grumpy twice a month ;-)Glad to see that I managed to make you curious.Thanks for reading and reviewing. /M

10/10

MollysSister

Morgaine sounds a bit like Hermione with the bushy hair and the lip biting. I like the way the POV switches through out the chapter. My fingers are crossed Morgaine passes her potions test.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hi

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Hm, I haven't actually thought of Hermione. Lip biting is a very annoing habit of mine. And the hair, well, I guess I'll give the good girl a hair cut soon ;-)Thanks for reading and reviewing. /M

10/10

diana_hawthorne

This is quite an interesting story, and I'm glad I clicked on it!I really like your characterisations of Morgaine and Severus - Severus seems quite in-character, and Morgaine seems to be quite an interesting person.Great job - I hope you post the next chapter soon!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I am also very glad that you clicked on it!And I am glad that you liked what you read.Thanks for reading and reviewing.

0/10

Mistress of Sick

Wow, this was such a beautiful story with so many elements to it. I really love all your stories but this was one of the most beautiful I've ever read. I hope you never stop writing!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

You're too kind, my dear :-)

10/10

sweetflag

Breaking me bloody heart!  Excellent! Beautiful!Going to go and blart now... don't need to type anymore.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Dear

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Re-reading this story while you read it for the first time was a great experience. I hadn't read those chapters since I posted them, and I look at them with other eyes now.I am very glad that you liked 'Morgaine's Story'. I am currently writing a sequel that will contain the answers to some questions and a huge surprise. The titl will be 'Always by Your Side' and I hope to start posting it after New Year's. I'd be honoured if you checked it out.Thank you!/M

Response from sweetflag (Reviewer)

I more than liked the story!  It was remarkably rich.  I admit that at the beginning, I found Morgaine's thoughts to be a bit obtrusive, but that is my fault as I never really enjoy reading stories in the first person.  After a few chapters, I was so immersed that they no longer seemed to bother me, and by half-way, I was looking for them, those bittersweet morsels from her as she reflected upon her past.Sequel, eh?  *checks supply of kleenex and clears diary*The honour won't be necessary, you know that I'm completely hooked... and very happily so   :)Bring in the New Year!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Dear

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Re-reading this story while you read it for the first time was a great experience. I hadn't read those chapters since I posted them, and I look at them with other eyes now.I am very glad that you liked 'Morgaine's Story'. I am currently writing a sequel that will contain the answers to some questions and a huge surprise. The titl will be 'Always by Your Side' and I hope to start posting it after New Year's. I'd be honoured if you checked it out.Thank you!/M

Response from sweetflag (Reviewer)

I more than liked the story!  It was remarkably rich.  I admit that at the beginning, I found Morgaine's thoughts to be a bit obtrusive, but that is my fault as I never really enjoy reading stories in the first person.  After a few chapters, I was so immersed that they no longer seemed to bother me, and by half-way, I was looking for them, those bittersweet morsels from her as she reflected upon her past.Sequel, eh?  *checks supply of kleenex and clears diary*The honour won't be necessary, you know that I'm completely hooked... and very happily so   :)Bring in the New Year!

10/10

sweetflag

Choice is a luxury. 

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

It sure is.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

It sure is.

10/10

sweetflag

Dumbledore was a bit like Janus; he had two faces...one that he forced himself to wear and the other that he chose to wear, and I haven't decided yet which one is which.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I cannot decide about Dumbledore either. Part of he hates him because he is using the people around him. Another part gives him credit for fighting for the greater good. Just cannot decide.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

I cannot decide about Dumbledore either. Part of he hates him because he is using the people around him. Another part gives him credit for fighting for the greater good. Just cannot decide.

10/10

sweetflag

Well... what can I say?  Nothing new.  So well written.  Shaking my head at it... at a loss of what to say... just feeling it.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Once more, I thank you.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)

Once more, I thank you.

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