III: The Sorting
Chapter 3 of 35
morgaine_dulacA canon compliant version of the last fourteen years in the life of Severus Snape. Canon compliant but with one important difference: in this story, Severus Snape has a friend. A friend who offers him her hand in the dark and will stay by his side until the bitter end.
ReviewedAuthor's note: Thanks to JKR for some wonderful characters. Thanks to Daedalus Plum for beta reading.
Chapter III: The Sorting
Severus was the first of the teachers to arrive in the Headmaster's office where Dumbledore was standing by the window, evidently amused by something he was watching on the grounds below.
'Ah, good evening, Severus,' Dumbledore greeted the Potions master and beckoned him to join him. 'I just let Fawkes out for his evening flight. It looks like he has made a new friend.'
Severus peered out the window and caught sight of the Phoenix flying in and out of a veil of mist that kept changing colours, and he had to step closer to the window to see who was making the colours change. It was Morgaine.
She was lying on her stomach on one of the stone benches, the setting sun causing her chestnut hair to shine in a warm, golden-red tone. And every time the Phoenix disappeared in the mist, she made the colours of the mist change with a flick of her wand. She seemed to be having just as much fun as the bird. Severus imagined hearing her laugh. If her laughter was anything like her smile, it must simply be adorable.
Then he frowned. Why on earth was he thinking about how the girl's laughter sounded? How had this thought come to enter his mind?
Dumbledore seemed to notice his confusion. 'An enchanting little witch, isn't she, Severus? Her great-grandmother had the same powers.' He smiled mysteriously.
Severus scowled and turned away, secretly wondering if Dumbledore would think it inappropriate if he asked how he had come to father a child. But before he could even decide whether to ask or not, there was a knock on the door. The other teachers had arrived to discuss Morgaine's abilities.
'My dear colleagues, welcome.' With a sweeping motion, Dumbledore pulled up chairs for everyone. 'Do make yourselves comfortable.'
Then he walked towards the door.
'Aren't you joining us, Albus?' McGonagall wondered.
'Alas, no, my dear,' Dumbledore replied. 'I am dying to find out how it feels to run through coloured mist.' And without any further explanations, the he left the office.
Severus observed his colleagues from his place by the window. Despite the Headmaster's mystical answer, nobody seemed to besurprised. They were all used to him being a little peculiar at times.
'Well then, we all know what we are here for,' McGonagall started. 'We have all tested Morgaine over the last two weeks. I for one think that she has done a wonderful job, and I do not object to her admission to our school.'
Professor Sprout burst out in praise: 'I simply love this girl! Her knowledge of plants is so extensive. I do hope she will be sorted into my House.'
Professor Flitwick agreed and was, if possible, even more pleased with the girl's achievements than Sprout was.
Severus, however, was not. Why do they have to be so annoyingly positive? he wondered silently. He for one would keep his praise to himself. Certainly, Morgaine had done her homework well, and to be completely honest, he was impressed by her skills. But he didn't deem it necessary to share his thoughts with his colleagues. They seemed all rather smitten by the girl anyway, and he had no intention of contributing to that.
'Well, your verdict?' Dumbledore asked as he re-entered his office. He didn't seem to have noticed that his white beard was tinted with green and blue specks. Or maybe he just didn't care.
'Gifted, simply gifted,' Professor Sprout exclaimed.
Severus raised an eyebrow. This woman had absolutely no idea about how to restrain herself. The girl had certainly performed well, but this was no reason to flip out like that. Thankfully, McGonagall was showing more self-control.
'She is curious and willing to learn,' she said. 'I think the only thing she'll need is a bit of tutoring in the beginning.'
Dumbledore nodded. 'And what do you think, Severus?'
'I agree with Professor McGonagall,' Severus replied in a sober voice. 'The girl has potential.' He didn't deem it necessary to say more.
Dumbledore nodded again. 'Then I think we should let her know.'
He opened the door and beckoned Morgaine to enter his office. She looked serious, and Severus noticed a flicker of insecurity in her eyes. And again, she was chewing her lip. Severus frowned. Why did this habit of hers annoy him so much?
Professor Sprout couldn't hold herself back. 'Welcome to Hogwarts, Miss duLac, welcome.'
Morgaine's face lit up with a smile, and she turned to look at her great-grandfather.
'Yes, welcome to Hogwarts, my child. You have done well.' Dumbledore gave her a quick hug. 'Tonight, you will sleep in your House dormitory. But for that, you will need to be sorted first.'
McGonagall had already taken the Sorting Hat from its shelf. Everyone looked excited. Everyone but Severus, that was.
What a no-brainer, he thought as McGonagall put the Hat on Morgaine's head. With her brains, the girl would do well in Ravenclaw, but considering her family tree, she would undoubtedly be sorted into Gryffindor.
He had barely finished his thought when the Sorting Hat announced its decision.
'Slytherin!'
Severus raised an eyebrow in surprise. Had he just heard right? Had Dumbledore's great-granddaughter just been sorted into Slytherin? How had that happened?
He was not the only one who was surprised. He noticed that his colleagues looked slightly taken aback as well. Only Dumbledore was smiling as he took the Sorting Hat from Morgaine's head.
'You will do well, my child.'
Morgaine nodded, but there was a sceptical look on her face. Obviously, she had not expected this decision either.
Then Dumbledore turned to Severus. 'Severus, as her Head of House, I put Morgaine into your charge. I expect you to help her in any way you can. May I now ask you to escort your student to her dormitory?'
Severus inclined his head in acknowledgement and then turned on his heels, wordlessly beckoning Morgaine to follow him.
They went down the stairs without either of them saying a word, and it was not until they had arrived in the Slytherin common room that Severus turned to look at his new charge. There still was a puzzled look in her eyes. And she was chewing her lip again.
'You should really stop that annoying habit of yours,' Severus hissed at her.
The girl flinched, and Severus realised at once that his words had sounded unnecessarily harsh. Hence he tried to find something else to say. 'It is not good for your teeth.'
Morgaine raised an eyebrow. Then she grinned. 'Not good for my teeth, sir?'
Severus felt himself blushing, and swiftly turned around and strode towards the door that led to the girls' dormitory.
Not good for your teeth. What a stupid thing to say, he thought, inwardly rolling his eyes at himself. But the comment had made the girl smile, and he had to admit that he liked her smile.
In the girls' dormitory, he pointed towards the bed closest to the wall.
'Your belongings have already been brought down. Make yourself comfortable and rest,' he instructed. 'You will meet me tomorrow morning for your first tutorial, and I want you to be in a good condition. My office, eight thirty sharp.'
Morgaine nodded, and Severus gazed into her eyes. He could see that she was still trying to figure out what had happened up in Dumbledore's office. But there was something else in her eyes, the same look she had had in his classroom earlier that day. A look that suggested that she was waiting for something, that she had something to tell him. Severus couldn't quite put a finger on it, but this look made him edgy. And he quickly turned to walk towards the door.
'Have a good night, Miss duLac.'
And without looking back, he left the dormitory.
He retired to his private chambers where he, with a flick of his wand, lit a fire in the fireplace and then poured himself a glass of wine.
This had certainly been a strange day. When Morgaine had entered his classroom on Thursday afternoon, all he had seen was a young girl from whom he hadn't expected much. But she had proven to be knowledgeable and eager to learn more. And now she was suddenly a Slytherin. Severus shook his head. Dumbledore's great-granddaughter in Slytherin. He still couldn't really believe it.
His eyes fell on the phial containing the Headache Potion Morgaine had brewed in the afternoon. How could she have known? Sure, that he had been suffering from headache wasn't the most difficult thing to figure out. But how had she known which potion he usually brewed? And why had he all afternoon had the feeling that she was looking at him?
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Slytherin. I had been sorted into Slytherin. Was this good or bad? I didn't know what to think. From what I knew, there had not been a single dark witch or wizard who had not been in Slytherin. And now, I had been sorted into this House, too.
And if the reputation of Slytherin House wasn't enough to make my skin crawl, the Head of House certainly was. I felt nervous whenever I was close to Severus Snape. Not really uncomfortable, just a little uneasy.
He had been observing me from the very first moment. I felt his eyes following me, scrutinising my every move. I had never seen eyes like his. Looking into them was like staring into the depths of an enchanted lake. You can stare for ages and never find out any of its secrets. Severus Snape's eyes were just the same. Once they caught you, you could not turn away. You stare and stare, trying to read them, but never getting anywhere. And they stare back at you, right into your very soul. And I didn't know what the wisest choice was: to avoid his gaze or to bravely return it. I had felt his eyes on me all afternoon, but whenever I had looked up, he had had his back turned to me.
And then there had been this whisper. At first, it had been nothing more than an undefined murmur, insignificant and at the same time annoying like a buzzing fly. Over the hours, the murmur had become more distinct: it had turned into a whisper, and then I had recognised his voice, alluring and scary at the same time.
My mind told me to turn away and ignore both his eyes and his whisper. But my heart came to choose otherwise.
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Well done. What a truly wonderful journey of friendship and of love. Beautifully written. Raw, emotional and very honest. He was in character to yet it felt otherworldly to see things from his perspective. I loved her, what a wonderful new character. Thank you for sharing this story!!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you for reading Morgaine's Story. For me Morgaine will always be the OC no other can live up to, and eventhough I've been writing original fiction for seven years now, I am yet to write a love as true and forgiving as the love between Morgaine and Severus.If you're interested to know how Morgaine will fare after Severus demise, I recommend reading Always By Your Side. You're in for a surprise or two if you do.
Is she 16? Or 17? I wasn't quite sure.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Neither am I. XD I'm afraid I messed up the mathematics several times during this story. I one of the next chapters, Dumbledore says that she's 'just seventeen summers'. That would mean she turns 17 in October and is 16 in this chapter. But as I said: I'm quite convinced I made a mistake or two somewhere and can't guarantee that I've corrected them all.
My, oh my. He kissed her. I didn't think he had it in him but I am so glad he did. At the beginning of the story I wondered if we would eventually learn that Severus was her father and their connection would be a platonic love. But now I don't think so anymore. Great story so far.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
He surprised everyone, including the author of the story.
Oh, so she can only hear him at certain times. Very interesting. This story has me riveted. I am really enjoying it!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
During some days and nights, magic is stronger than during others.
She can hear his thoughts, but why only him?
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
With the words of River Song: spoilers. :-)
Talk about a truly nerve wrecking situation for a 14 year old girl. I would have been so nervous in her situation.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Ooooooh! You've started reading my very first fic, my first true love, the OC that still haunts me. I very much hope you'll enjoy the story. (Bare in mind, it was my first. I hope my writing has improved since.)
*speechless*
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
It's not really goodbye...
This. Was. Perfect. Gosh.. I am actually humming a romantic song... pathetic me!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
You big softie, you. :-)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Lol. I am not! Honestly I like to think of myself as the most unromantic girl (or woman, whatever) on earth... I'm always busy making comical interpretations of romantic scenarios! Now when someone brings out the reluctant romantic in me, THAT'S something. Which you did!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I think a medal is in order ;-)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Ah, sure! ;)
There you go, ripping apart the remnants of my heart!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
More tissues, more chocolate. I have to admit, I still go back to this story when I need a good cry.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
I've already joined the Back-To-This-Story-When-I-Need-A-Good-Cry club. We are sure to meet there! :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I'll bring the choccie.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Yum! Thanks. I'll bring some roshogolla. Or maybe shrikhand, in honour of the Patil twins! :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Sounds exciting.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Tastes even better!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
What is it?
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Both are Indian desserts. Roshogolla is a spongy, syrupy ball made of chhana (fresh unripened curd cheese) from Bengal (my home state).. And shrikhand is a yoghurt with saffron, cardamom, pistachios, etc, popular in Maharashtra (the Patils' home state... Patil is a Maharashtrian surname!) I can assure you that both are very tasty and my personal favourites... Even if a bit high-cal!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
You had me at high-cal. :-)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Haha! But then, chocolates are high-cal too! ;)
"How many people can point out the exact moment they fell in love?" I couldn't resist my tears reading this... You brought out the reluctant romantic in me!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
*hands over tissue and chocolate* There there ...
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Honestly, I like to think of myself as a fiercely independent woman with no time for nonsense like romance! You suddenly jerked me out of my reverie!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Imagine thinking exactly that and suddenly realising that you're WRITING romance!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
That's EXACTLY what happened to me. I was listening to an ultra-romantic track, Aayat, from a Hindi movie, when the plot of the crazy romance (?!) which I'm now writing came to my mind. Hell, my colleagues will have a heart attack if they ever read this and learn that I was the one writing it!
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
However, I still maintain that I am basically quite unromantic in real life.. At 24, I'm gloriously single and have hardly ever been in the mood to mingle! Romance, provided it is intense enough, does move me though, which I have reluctantly come to realise.
I was waiting for something like this right from the time Remus was first mentioned in the story. Then, just when I started imagining that Remus was nothing more than a guest appearance, off you went. BANG! Poor Morgaine!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Poor everyone involved. I never wrote it down, but I thought a lot about how Remus must feel in this story. Morgaine is very dear to him, and he knows how rough Severus can be. He wants Morgaien to be happy, but he can see the risks she's taking. What kind of advice is a friend to give in a situation like that? (Wonder how much chocolate they ate!)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Now may I look forward to a oneshot on the Remus POV? :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
If I only had the time...
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Ah, you will, some day! RL can be ruthless, I know that so well!
What a wonderful way to make them even!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I still remember my beta-readers comment: "Did she just? Oh sh*t she did!" :-)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Haha!
Hi! The quest for the ghost story led me here... and I just ended up reading twelve chapters all at once. Phew! While I hate to interrupt my reading here owing to the RL high tide, I'll be right there. You just have me hooked, Ms Dulac (Ah, both the Ms Dulacs, that is.. the lovely author and the intriguing character!)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Oh, the memories. This was the first fic I wrote, and Severus/Morgaine is still my favourite SS/OC. They still haunt my dreams.
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
And now they will haunt my dreams too!
Love the depiction of the staff, the back story and the loneliness of his solitaire, sacrificial role... so wonderfully, terribly sad!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Love re-reading this story with you. :-)
So bittersweet, Severus attending Dumbledore's funeral in his own special way; poor Morgaine, the doubt and frustration, and loss!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I'm glad Lupin was there for her. But the again, he always was.
Enjoy their back story tied in with canon events on this fateful night... and Morgaine's loyalty and decision to be there for him!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
As this was my first fic, I was sooooo afraid I'd make canon-mistakes. Nice to see that all my hard work is appreciated now :-)
Such a bittersweet scenario, lovely handling of Severus' Patronus and acknowledging both his and Morgaine's pain... and love, as well as reminding us via Morgaine that Sev would not be the man he is without his undying loyalty *sigh*!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I struggled so much with this chapter. Glad I got help from Memory and Trickie with it.
Love Morgaine's heart, one of solid gold and strength rarely found, as equal as her ability to be loyal and love against all odds - the perfect match for her loss, her beloved Severus
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Naw, that was a very nice thing to say. Thank you!! And thank you for reading this story again. Means a lot!!
Touching remembrance of the last hours from Severus' and Morgaine's point of views; knowing there's a sequel helps the open wounds:-)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I sometimes wonder why I have been so cruel to my two most favourite characters ...
The air is so heavy with the foreboding events to come, one can feel their dread and endurance of the dubious future
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I had forgotten all about this chapter :O
Another great moment in the chain of events to highlight with their backstory filling in the gaps - lovely; I'm with Sev regarding the loss of Black - nothing, but appreciate that Morgaine was there to help comfort Remus who feels the loss, as well as her healing and sharing herself with Severus:-)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I read OotP in a book club. There were two groups, those who mourned Black's death and were terribly upset and then those who hoped he'd go to hell. I was totally blasée. I think they didn't like me there :P
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Hahaha! I'd have proudly stood in front of you and taken all of the tomatoes being thrown at us;-) I won't even start to rant about SB - yes, him being the born provacateur against Sev, but also, why... oh forget it - getting all riled up and need to prepare for Monday morning; Bella did him in--moving on(I know, I'm terrible...aways grumpy Sunday evenings with the work week ahead - excuses, excuses - hehe!)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I feel you pain!
A powerful turning point for Morgaine, as well as for Severus and all others - great chapter!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you, once more, for re-reading this story. It's a pleasure to be on this journey with you.
Sweet chapter, powerful in its slower, intense dynamics; the fear of loving and rejection, again, and again - just won't quite go away...
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Those two are both so afriad of admitting their love for each other. Neither wants to get hurt or hurt the other. They're wasting so much time...
Great chapter - love the emphasis on the reaction (and Morgaine helping to care for Sev) of the other DEs to Snape; the nasty jealous bullyboys that they are venting their frustration on him given the chance. Dynamic setting and planting the seeds for how Dumbledore will use Morgaine, as well as Lucius.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
And when I wrote this, I didn't even know that I was going to write a sequel. The muse works in mysterious ways some times.
I am loving this story...let me tell you! You write such passionate, emotional scenes..it blows me away! The end of this chapter was simply amazing! :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you very much! This is my first story and my "baby". I am very glad you're enjoying it and hope you'll like the rest as well./M