Morgaine's Story
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A canon compliant version of the last fourteen years in the life of Severus Snape. Canon compliant but with one important difference: in this story, Severus Snape has a friend. A friend who offers him her hand in the dark and will stay by his side until the bitter end.
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morgaine_dulac
Member Since 2008 | 52 Stories | Favorited by 122 | 948 Reviews Written | 2,443 Review Responses
Born: in the glorious year of 1979, when Dio joined Black Sabbath and Peter Pettigrew started passing on information to the Dark Lord
Colours: black, green, silver
Passions: writing, cooking, baking, witchcraft
Obsessions: quite a few, chocolate for one (hi Lupin!), but mainly a certain Potions master and a blond DE.
When I am not writing alone, I co-write with my favourite Ravenclaw star_girl. Look for sevs_starsisters to find our stories.
Published writer since 2014. Original fiction is good fun, but I find myself returning to fan fiction every now and then 
Reviews for Morgaine's Story
This was reccomended on Potter Place and I thought I'd have a look. I like your first chapter; it's well-written. But, But, But.... I made the mistake of reading your chapter summaries. I think you reveal too much. I feel disappointed after having read them, like I do when a book review or movie review reveals too much of the plot. I really encourge you change those chapter summaries so that they intrigue but do not tell too much of the tale, or to delete them altogether.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you,
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
, that was a really good tip and I will go and check my summaries immediately!Thank you for taking the time to read and leaving a note. It's much appreciated. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you,
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
, that was a really good tip and I will go and check my summaries immediately!Thank you for taking the time to read and leaving a note. It's much appreciated. /M
I enjoyed your story very much, although I didn't like your ending much better than Rowling's. I would like to read more of Morgaine and Severus.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Hi!I have to admit that I had my doubts about killing Severus. I'd really like to see him and Morgaine to 'live happily ever after'. Unfortunately, I had chosen the ending already in the epilogue.A friend of mine recommended writing a alternative ending to the story. Just might, one day.I am glad that you enjoyed the story. Thank you very mch for reading it and for leaving a final note.Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Hi!I have to admit that I had my doubts about killing Severus. I'd really like to see him and Morgaine to 'live happily ever after'. Unfortunately, I had chosen the ending already in the epilogue.A friend of mine recommended writing a alternative ending to the story. Just might, one day.I am glad that you enjoyed the story. Thank you very mch for reading it and for leaving a final note.Cheers. /M
I clicked on this chapter with trepidation, knowing I would probably be bawling throughout the whole thing. Of course, you did not disappoint. I usually don't like reading stories where the hero dies, but your prologue prepared everyone for what was to come. I went in with my eyes open.I don't know what to say. You're story was so beautiful and wonderfully written. You really dug deep into the character's feelings, especially Severus' and gave us a look into his life and feelings that was sorely lacking in JKR's rendition. Of course, her story was about a school boy hero. There wasn't really much time or place for in-depth development of too many other characters.Thank you for a marvelous story. I'm really glad I ignored my usual dislike of sad ending stories and read this. It was worth every word.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Dear DebraI am very glad that you read and enjoyed the story. Even it it made you bawling in the end. (I have a knack for making people cry. Ask any of my students. Oh, I'm digressing...)I thank you vary much for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. Keep your eyes open, I have the feeling that I am not really done with Severus and Morgaine just yet.Cheers. /M
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Sweet!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Dear DebraI am very glad that you read and enjoyed the story. Even it it made you bawling in the end. (I have a knack for making people cry. Ask any of my students. Oh, I'm digressing...)I thank you vary much for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. Keep your eyes open, I have the feeling that I am not really done with Severus and Morgaine just yet.Cheers. /M
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Sweet!
Reading this story has been like reading Romeo and Juliet. Or, more properly I suppose, West Side Story. Every time, every single time, I expect it to end differently. I expect some last minute miracle to give the star-crossed lovers their chance to live happily ever after. Poor Morgaine, what will become of her now?
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Wow, having my story compared to Romeo and Juliet and West Side Story is high praise indeed. Thank you!Hm, poor Morgaine, what will become of her now? I have my plans for her. Keep you eyes open.Thank you very much for reading. I hope you enjoyed it.Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Wow, having my story compared to Romeo and Juliet and West Side Story is high praise indeed. Thank you!Hm, poor Morgaine, what will become of her now? I have my plans for her. Keep you eyes open.Thank you very much for reading. I hope you enjoyed it.Cheers. /M
What a sad but lovely ending.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you.The story got sadder than I had planned in the beginning, but the ending seemed somehow 'right'.Thank you very much for reading. I hope you enjoyed it./M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you.The story got sadder than I had planned in the beginning, but the ending seemed somehow 'right'.Thank you very much for reading. I hope you enjoyed it./M
Lovely reunion, but heartbreaking that they cannot be as carefree as they deserve. Now Morgaine understands, and so do we, what Severus had gone through before as the Order's spy. You brought out the pathos in Severus very well.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you very much.Stay tuned for the next - and last - chapter :-(/M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you very much.Stay tuned for the next - and last - chapter :-(/M
Another marvelous chapter, I'm surprised that the Order is trusting of Morgaine. But this may cause others to look at Snape's actions under a different light.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I really hope that Lupin is putting in some good words for Morgaine. Or maybe the Order 'trusts' Morgaine as they once 'trusted' Snape: they were told that she/he is trustworthy. And Morgaine is after all Dumbledore's great-granddaughter.Thank you very much for reading and leaving a note. Makes me very happy to know that you are enjoying this.Stay tuned, the next chapter's in the queue. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I really hope that Lupin is putting in some good words for Morgaine. Or maybe the Order 'trusts' Morgaine as they once 'trusted' Snape: they were told that she/he is trustworthy. And Morgaine is after all Dumbledore's great-granddaughter.Thank you very much for reading and leaving a note. Makes me very happy to know that you are enjoying this.Stay tuned, the next chapter's in the queue. /M
And again, Dumbledore let it happen. That says it all, doesn't it? Found and lost again is right. Will these two ever get together. I assume they will, but it's like they're writing a roller coaster.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
He is not only headmaster, he is a puppet master, too, out dear Dumbledore.You'll just have to go on reading to find out if S and M will get together, won't you. But I am sure you will.Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
He is not only headmaster, he is a puppet master, too, out dear Dumbledore.You'll just have to go on reading to find out if S and M will get together, won't you. But I am sure you will.Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. Cheers. /M
These two are having their share of ups and downs. Mrogaine needs to tell Severus what she's up to.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Isn't it amazing! Two fairly intelligent adults, totally incompetent when it comes to communication. It's pathetic ;-) Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Isn't it amazing! Two fairly intelligent adults, totally incompetent when it comes to communication. It's pathetic ;-) Cheers. /M
That ending was incredibly sad. She was very selfless to let him have his 'freedom.' However, I think he would have rather been tied to her forever.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Maybe 'giving Severus his freedom' was not as easy as Morgaine thought. Maybe they are tied to each other. Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Maybe 'giving Severus his freedom' was not as easy as Morgaine thought. Maybe they are tied to each other. Cheers. /M
Too bad she has to return to Iceland. Would she choose not to if she had a choice?
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
What do you think? You've known Morgaine for a while now. It would be interesting to read your thoughts. Cheers. /M
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
I think she has a strong sense of dedication to those she loves, so even though she would not choose to return to Iceland, she does. Hopefully, what she learns there will be useful in the future, especially with stupid, full of himself, Lucius now in the picture. (What's not to love about him, right?)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
How did Dumbledore put it so nicely? 'Once she had taken someone in her heart, she will never let them go again.' Severus might just have made a friend for life.Yeah, dear, dear Lucius. Sigh ... couldn't resist adding him to the story. He makes such a goody baddie :-)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
What do you think? You've known Morgaine for a while now. It would be interesting to read your thoughts. Cheers. /M
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
I think she has a strong sense of dedication to those she loves, so even though she would not choose to return to Iceland, she does. Hopefully, what she learns there will be useful in the future, especially with stupid, full of himself, Lucius now in the picture. (What's not to love about him, right?)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
How did Dumbledore put it so nicely? 'Once she had taken someone in her heart, she will never let them go again.' Severus might just have made a friend for life.Yeah, dear, dear Lucius. Sigh ... couldn't resist adding him to the story. He makes such a goody baddie :-)
Dang, she really screwed him up.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Ha, brilliant comment!Thanks for taking the time to leave a note. It made me very happy to see that I have five new reviews. Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Ha, brilliant comment!Thanks for taking the time to leave a note. It made me very happy to see that I have five new reviews. Cheers. /M
Ah, too bad they didn't speak of what they felt. Dumbledore's such a great actor, you know? He pretends to care and ensnares you into his plot. And you never know it means death until it's just too late. Although I enjoy stories where Dumbledore is seen in a fatherly light, I think this Dumbly is much more in character to his 'real' self.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Yeah, good old Dumbledore: puppet master, control freak, you name it.Thanks for reading and leaving a note. And the stars of course :-) Cheers./M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Yeah, good old Dumbledore: puppet master, control freak, you name it.Thanks for reading and leaving a note. And the stars of course :-) Cheers./M
Excellent chapter. Characterisation is exquisite. This is progressing very well. Looking forward to more. Thank you.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. I am glad that you liked the chapter. Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. I am glad that you liked the chapter. Cheers. /M
Yay. that was very sweet.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Isn't it? :-)Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Isn't it? :-)Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. /M
I think Severus was just as surprised by that kiss as Morgaine and everyone else was!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I think he was the one who was the most surprised.Glad you're enjoying the story.Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
I think he was the one who was the most surprised.Glad you're enjoying the story.Cheers. /M
Poignant and lovely. So very sad yet hopeful. Thanks so much.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thanks for your kind words, Kyria.Glad that you are still enjoying this./M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thanks for your kind words, Kyria.Glad that you are still enjoying this./M
'My grandmother used to say that a friend is somebody who takes a step closer towards you and holds your hand when everybody else turns their back on you.’ A beautiful line that started the tears that went on through the rest of this chapter. 
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Oh, thank you for this wonderful review.'Mistakes Forgiven' is one of my favourite chapters, and I am very glad that you enjoyed it, even if it made you cry.And the line is actually from my grandmother. She's a very wise woman.Thanks again for your thoughts. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Oh, thank you for this wonderful review.'Mistakes Forgiven' is one of my favourite chapters, and I am very glad that you enjoyed it, even if it made you cry.And the line is actually from my grandmother. She's a very wise woman.Thanks again for your thoughts. /M
Excellently written, from Severus' shock at Morgaine finding out about his being a Death Eater, to Morgaine's actual thoughts on the matter.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you very much!Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you very much!Cheers. /M
Wow, that was intense. Ugh, that Voldemort is awful, imeriousing a girl to attack her mother. Now Dumbledore, he's just a jerk. Typical of him to not give Severus a heads up. Just bumble your way through, you'll figure everything out eventually. Dork.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
There' a reason why Voldemort is the Dark Lord.As for Dumbledore, you'll see that I have some unresolved issues with the man.Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
There' a reason why Voldemort is the Dark Lord.As for Dumbledore, you'll see that I have some unresolved issues with the man.Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. Cheers. /M
Typical Snape behavior, giving a complement, even if it's only in his head, quickly followed by reservations. At least he admits it would be fun for him to test her.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Snape rule #1: Never give a compliment.Snape rule #2: In the event of having given a compliment, deny it. ;-)Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Snape rule #1: Never give a compliment.Snape rule #2: In the event of having given a compliment, deny it. ;-)Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.Cheers. /M
Terrific. Thanks so much for an exciting chapter.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you. Glad you liked it. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you. Glad you liked it. /M
Lovely. I like what you have done with this. It is getting better all the time. Thanks.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you, Kyria. Glad you liked it. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Thank you, Kyria. Glad you liked it. /M
Nicely done. He is one that would hide and nurse his hurts in silence. Broodingly. Very Heathcliff of him, isn't it? Good progression and timing. I am waiting for more avidly.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Good morningThank you for your kind words. You're right, it is very Heathcliff-ish of Severus to hide and brood, preferably down in the dungeon with a bottle of firewhisky. It's amazing how such an intelligent person lacks communication skills.Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. More is on the way.Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
Good morningThank you for your kind words. You're right, it is very Heathcliff-ish of Severus to hide and brood, preferably down in the dungeon with a bottle of firewhisky. It's amazing how such an intelligent person lacks communication skills.Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. More is on the way.Cheers. /M
Love this. Thank you so much for a lovely chapter.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
And thank you for being a faithful reader and reviewer.Cheers. /M
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Morgaine's Story)
And thank you for being a faithful reader and reviewer.Cheers. /M