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Potions Under Duress The Price of Madness
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The Price of Madness

1: Dangerous Assumptions

2: No Time For Tears

3: Keeping Secrets

4: Sense and Sensibility

5: Traveling by Pensieve

6: In Hagrid's Head

7: Whores and Serpents

8: Putting Aside the Past

9: Getting Things Sorted

10: Throwing Tantrums

11: An Uncomfortable Shower

12: Uneasy Thoughts

13: Love and War

14: Shaken Up

15: Kiss and Tell

16: To Shop or Not to Shop

17: Return to the Tower

18: A Shower of Confessions

19: Frustrations

20: Knee-high Whores

21: Gringotts Revisited

22: A Gentleman Caller

23: Goblin Magic

24: The Missing Madman

25: Paying the Price

26: Albus Lives!

27: Courage Under Fire

28: The Seventh Horcrux

29: A Stubborn Wizard

30: Explorations

31: The Sky's the Limit

32: The Madness of War

33: A Dash of Madness

34: Love and Madness

The Price of Madness

PlaidPooka

1,095 Reviews   |   1,095 Ratings, 1 Like, 528 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 107,692 Words 39 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

It's possible in wartime that madness eventually comes for us all. Yet some madness might be carefully purchased; some sanity knowingly sacrificed. This story is such a tale.

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: Dangerous Assumptions

Chapter 2: No Time For Tears

Chapter 3: Keeping Secrets

Chapter 4: Sense and Sensibility

Chapter 5: Traveling by Pensieve

Chapter 6: In Hagrid's Head

Chapter 7: Whores and Serpents

Chapter 8: Putting Aside the Past

Chapter 9: Getting Things Sorted

Chapter 10: Throwing Tantrums

Chapter 11: An Uncomfortable Shower

Chapter 12: Uneasy Thoughts

Chapter 13: Love and War

Chapter 14: Shaken Up

Chapter 15: Kiss and Tell

Chapter 16: To Shop or Not to Shop

Chapter 17: Return to the Tower

Chapter 18: A Shower of Confessions

Chapter 19: Frustrations

Chapter 20: Knee-high Whores

Chapter 21: Gringotts Revisited

Chapter 22: A Gentleman Caller

Chapter 23: Goblin Magic

Chapter 24: The Missing Madman

Chapter 25: Paying the Price

Chapter 26: Albus Lives!

Chapter 27: Courage Under Fire

Chapter 28: The Seventh Horcrux

Chapter 29: A Stubborn Wizard

Chapter 30: Explorations

Chapter 31: The Sky's the Limit

Chapter 32: The Madness of War

Chapter 33: A Dash of Madness

Chapter 34: Love and Madness


About PlaidPooka

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PlaidPooka

24 Stories  |  Favorited by 599  |  109 Reviews Written  |  1,071 Review Responses

I'm a 53 year old woman who wrote fanfic for years and adored doing it.  While I lost the heart for fanfic after book 7 came out, I am still writing, and can be found at http://julianneqjohnson.com

You can find my published work on Amazon under the name Julianne Q Johnson.

Author Website
http://julianneqjohnson.wordpress.com/

Reviews for The Price of Madness

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10/10

macropis

I love this story, I feel like a kid waiting for christmas for each new chapter.  I try to read them slowly but I reach the end way too soon...

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm just thrilled that you are enjoying it so much!  That's what keeps me typing along!  :)

10/10

Wolf Moonshadow

    I just wanted to add... 'It seemed that he only pranced about naked when Hermione was in attendance.'  Now I can go to bed with the image of a naked prancing Severus in my head.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  I think I'll count prancing Severus' instead of sheep tonight!  Thanks, love!  You rock!  :)

Response from Wolf Moonshadow (Reviewer)

absolutions   *head-desk* or wall, as the case may be. 

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Nice chapter, doll. I laughed greatly in the beginning, imagining Snape sitting on the throne while a mortified Hermione looks on.ahahahaha

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  I couldn't resist that image!  thanks, Sun!  :)

10/10

Melissa_Snape

The last paragraph in this chapter made me remember how changed Severus is, and I got a bit teary-eyed. As much as I love this Severus, I still prefer the Potions Master. I laughed so hard during this chapter - but I can't wait for Severus to get better. And to find out what the research he's doing is. I dont' remember, but did Severus ever come out and say that it'll help against Voldemort? If it doesn't, maybe he's working on a way to help himself? Although that's probably far-fetched, it's a rather comforting thought.Anyway, I loved this chapter (and all the chapters that came before it) and I hope you update again soon!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I prefer the Potions Master myself, though i do find this Severus very endearing.  Not to worry!  He'll be at least more like his old self before the tale ends.To answer your question, Severus has not told anyone anything about his research, not even Draco.  I'll do my level best to update soon.  Kind reviews like yours definitely help keep me going!  Thanks!  :)

0/10

maegwen

I so love this story. There's something about this very mercurial Severus (and no, the 'whore' stuff hasn't gotten old for me yet) that is so touching.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm so glad that you think so!  Thanks! :)

10/10

nightqueen

Pooka,  Another fabulous chapter my dear.  Severus might be a bit mixed up but he knows what he wants. LOL I wonder if he will be tempting our Ms. Granger in further chapters?  I know he said he wouldn't but he's a sly one and Severus is Slythrin, and knows how to get what he wants.   That one minute of vulnerability, when he thought she didn't care was heart breaking and then just as quickly his hope is restored and his heart mended with the thought of Hermione loving him.  My favorite part however, was Hermione brushing Severus' hair.  I have a weakness for that myself and know just what a lovey experience it is.  As always you leave me wanting more!!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I have a soft spot for hair brushing myself, and it's not something that Mr. Pooka would ever do, so I must live vicariously through my fanfic! *giggle*  I'm certain that Severus intends to be good, but that doesn't mean he'll be any good at it.  I expect that he'll get quite a lot of enjoyment out of teasing. ;)  Thanks, love!  You're the best!  :)

0/10

HogwartsHoney

Oh, Pook, this chapter is just lovely. Finally a proper breakthrough for both of them!!! 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

It was about time, I'd say!  Thanks, doll!  And thanks for the head's up as well!  :)

0/10

Red Writing Hood

Oh Happy Happy Joy Joy...another chapter. The discussion between Hermione and Severus was delightful. I loved seeing glimpses of the old Severus in there. I hope that he's working on the potion that will save him. And...may I make a guess? I think that a part of Dumbledore's soul is inside of Severus...just a thought.Red 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm afraid that I must keep my lips sealed where people's theories are concerned.  But I sure do love hearing what they are!  Like Severus, my lips are sealed on the potions as well. ;)  I'm glad that you think Severus is still recognisable, even in his difficulty.  Thanks so much!  :)

10/10

shalimar1981

*sighs happily*

Such a romantic declaration of love...

So he does know what happened to him and tries to reverse it. I hope he succeeds for both their sakes.

Why does he call everyone 'whore'? Hmm, as a sign of his insanity it is certainly unusual, as someone prone to insult people would do so constantly and would not be fixed to a particular insult like that. 

All in all, another brilliant chapter! Update soon! This story is addictive.

bye,

Shal 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

It's not unusual for someone who's having mental troubles to fixate on a certain thing, or even a certain word.  We'll find out why Severus is fixated on the word "whore", I promise.  But not yet!  Severus does indeed know what happened to him, even if he isn't at all certain that it can be fixed.  But I wouldn't fret.  I have a habit of writing obnoxiously happy endings! ;)  Thanks so much!  :)

0/10

Selene

*coos over Severus*  He's so adorable!  I want one!  I do hope he gets better, for Hermione's sake.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol!  I want one too!  I'll give you a hint. ;)  This fic is rated NC-17.  Hermione will not sleep with Severus until he is at least much more himself.  Make of that what you will!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

mugglemomof3

I was so excited to see the update. This relationship is very strange. I wonder if Sev knows how to make himself better. Oh, I hope it all works out in the end. Thanks for the update. I love it!!!!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol!  It is strange indeed!  I suppose that is why I'm having so much fun writing it.  Thanks!  :)

0/10

Badb Marie

UPDATE!!!forget severus being insane, i pretty much am due to the 4 weeks since your last update.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol!  Sorry about the wait, but chapter 17 is now updated!  And I'm about half way done with chapter 18, so I hope there won't be such a long break again!  :)

0/10

maegwen

Poke!

I know you've said on WIKTT that you've been mad busy and what not, but just a note that I'm missing my next installment of Mad Severus and his whores. :x 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I've been missing it too!  I've made a promise to myself to get the next chapter squared away this week, no matter what!  :)

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

The cauldron could explode while he pretty little whore is down low with him. Then they'd be trapped together, and he'd find his madness gone temporarily. Teehee. And then... lemonade anyone?

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*gigglegiggle*  Not yet, Sun!  No lemons yet!  No matter what delicious ideas you throw at me as to how I can work them in early! :D  Thanks, Sun!  You saved my butt!  :)

0/10

droxy

lovely update thanks for pointingme here.  Snape seems in full control here.  Lovely imagery and logical flow.  Well done.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

The PP is a great archive.  NSS does a terrific job with it.  The PP is the only archive other than SH that I've posted all of my fics to.  Glad that you liked the update!  Thanks!  :)

0/10

snapeophile

This is such a masterfully written story.  Your writing flows and is silky like Sev's voice!  I love the humorous bits you've embedded (honorable Hufflepuff whore) and I'm amazed that you can write a strong, smart, cunning, yet insane Severus. I'm truly enjoying it and I thank you for sharing it. 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

What a lovely compliment!  I am trying my best to stay honest with Severus, even with his maddness, and I'm so glad that you think I'm on the right track!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

like_queen

This story is really wonderful! Severus is so very cunning, even the mad version of him! Loving every minute of it and can't wait till you have more up.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm trying to keep him recognisable, even in his madness.  Thanks so much!  :)

10/10

sleepygirl68

Excellent story!  You have to finish this.  Please, please, please???

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I haven't abandoned a fic yet!  I'm not about to start with this one!  Thanks!  :)

Response from sleepygirl68 (Reviewer)

Thank you.I was reading over the reviews that were written after I wrote mine and I have to agree with Snapeophile about the way you are writing Snape's character is captivating.  It is totally intriguing and is why I was begging for the story to be completed.I am very relieved to know the story will be completed.  Nothing is more frustrating than be captured by an unfinished story!

0/10

snapeophile

Thank you for updating so quickly--this was an unexpected treat!  Great chapter.  The whole 'whore' thing is too funny!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I was so relieved to get that chapter written this week.  I'm so glad that you got a kick out of it!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

averygoodun

“Sorry,” Severus said dryly, “but I’m not feeling particularly honorable today. Why don’t you ask some nice Hufflepuff whore?”

Ha!  Oh, wonderful chapter, Pook!  I love the way Harry and Ron instantly know she's lying, and the mature way they react to the truth (though I imagine Harry would have turned a little green as well). 

Hopefully one of the scary things Snape will be brewing will be a cure of sorts, but I'm guessing they'll have to wait a while for that.  *sigh*  Ah well, I'm enjoying the story as it's told, so "eventually" can wait.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm so glad that you're getting a kick out of it!  Lol, I suppose Harry would have turned a bit green at that, but I liked him in the role of teaser best.  I'm afraid that I have to keep my big mouth shut about what Severus is planning to brew, but it should be fun getting there!  Thanks!  :)

0/10

Red Writing Hood

LOL. Not exactly what Hermione was expecting that Severus wanted. I think she was a bit put out by that. LOL. Another fantastic chapter. Awaiting eagerly for the next installment.Blessed beRed

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  Yes indeed, I think that was why Hermione got so mad at the end!  Even if a girl plans to say no, she likes to be asked! ;)  Thanks!  :)

0/10

queenp

So what is the vice of your muse--chocolate? alcohol?? having readers on their hands and knees begging for more??? I'll arrange for any and all that your muse requires to get a chapter finished quickly..:D

I love the emotional outbursts that you have written into this chapter especially. Hermione's temper tantrums are great...And I'd like to know a few of the more inventive insults she came up with..after all I've got 4 brothers that regularly need to be insulted..

Update again quickly...PLEASE??

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed that chapter, and it was big fun to write!  But I can't update until I manage to write more!  I promise you that I'll do my very best.  Thanks, QP!  :)

Response from queenp (Reviewer)

so what gets your muse to get off her arse and inspire you? I want to give her a kick in the pants...I want an update NOW!! ;D I'm seriously loving this new look at the post HBP situation...

10/10

septentrion

LOL Severus is very cunning ! Even in his madness. He may even manage to get a snog in addition to shopping

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

ROFL!  You maybe right about that! ;)  Thanks!  :)

10/10

karelia

Teehee! Severus surely has a way with Hermione, LOL. I like it!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

He is a Slytherin, mad as a hatter, but still a Slytherin! :D  Thanks!  :)

0/10

DawnEB

'Shopping!' hehe, and I bet there isn't even 'a pair of black silk boxers, extra roomy' on that list either ;D  Poor Hermione.Really enjoying this story.  Will we be finding out more about what Severus is upto soon?

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Bits and pieces, but you won't find out all of what Severus is up to for a little while yet.  LOL!  Nope, no silk boxers!  Just nasty old potion ingredients!  Thanks!  :)

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