I just wanted to add... 'It seemed that he only pranced about naked when Hermione was in attendance.'  Now I can go to bed with the image of a naked prancing Severus in my head.

Nice chapter, doll. I laughed greatly in the beginning, imagining Snape sitting on the throne while a mortified Hermione looks on.ahahahaha

The last paragraph in this chapter made me remember how changed Severus is, and I got a bit teary-eyed. As much as I love this Severus, I still prefer the Potions Master. I laughed so hard during this chapter - but I can't wait for Severus to get better. And to find out what the research he's doing is. I dont' remember, but did Severus ever come out and say that it'll help against Voldemort? If it doesn't, maybe he's working on a way to help himself? Although that's probably far-fetched, it's a rather comforting thought.Anyway, I loved this chapter (and all the chapters that came before it) and I hope you update again soon!

I so love this story. There's something about this very mercurial Severus (and no, the 'whore' stuff hasn't gotten old for me yet) that is so touching.

Pooka,  Another fabulous chapter my dear.  Severus might be a bit mixed up but he knows what he wants. LOL I wonder if he will be tempting our Ms. Granger in further chapters?  I know he said he wouldn't but he's a sly one and Severus is Slythrin, and knows how to get what he wants.   That one minute of vulnerability, when he thought she didn't care was heart breaking and then just as quickly his hope is restored and his heart mended with the thought of Hermione loving him.  My favorite part however, was Hermione brushing Severus' hair.  I have a weakness for that myself and know just what a lovey experience it is.  As always you leave me wanting more!!

Oh, Pook, this chapter is just lovely. Finally a proper breakthrough for both of them!!! 

Oh Happy Happy Joy Joy...another chapter. The discussion between Hermione and Severus was delightful. I loved seeing glimpses of the old Severus in there. I hope that he's working on the potion that will save him. And...may I make a guess? I think that a part of Dumbledore's soul is inside of Severus...just a thought.Red 

*sighs happily*

Such a romantic declaration of love...

So he does know what happened to him and tries to reverse it. I hope he succeeds for both their sakes.

Why does he call everyone 'whore'? Hmm, as a sign of his insanity it is certainly unusual, as someone prone to insult people would do so constantly and would not be fixed to a particular insult like that. 

All in all, another brilliant chapter! Update soon! This story is addictive.

bye,

Shal 

*coos over Severus*  He's so adorable!  I want one!  I do hope he gets better, for Hermione's sake.

I was so excited to see the update. This relationship is very strange. I wonder if Sev knows how to make himself better. Oh, I hope it all works out in the end. Thanks for the update. I love it!!!!

UPDATE!!!forget severus being insane, i pretty much am due to the 4 weeks since your last update.

Poke!

I know you've said on WIKTT that you've been mad busy and what not, but just a note that I'm missing my next installment of Mad Severus and his whores. :x 

The cauldron could explode while he pretty little whore is down low with him. Then they'd be trapped together, and he'd find his madness gone temporarily. Teehee. And then... lemonade anyone?

lovely update thanks for pointingme here.  Snape seems in full control here.  Lovely imagery and logical flow.  Well done.

This is such a masterfully written story.  Your writing flows and is silky like Sev's voice!  I love the humorous bits you've embedded (honorable Hufflepuff whore) and I'm amazed that you can write a strong, smart, cunning, yet insane Severus. I'm truly enjoying it and I thank you for sharing it. 

This story is really wonderful! Severus is so very cunning, even the mad version of him! Loving every minute of it and can't wait till you have more up.

Excellent story!  You have to finish this.  Please, please, please???

Thank you for updating so quickly--this was an unexpected treat!  Great chapter.  The whole 'whore' thing is too funny!

“Sorry,” Severus said dryly, “but I’m not feeling particularly honorable today. Why don’t you ask some nice Hufflepuff whore?”

Ha!  Oh, wonderful chapter, Pook!  I love the way Harry and Ron instantly know she's lying, and the mature way they react to the truth (though I imagine Harry would have turned a little green as well). 

Hopefully one of the scary things Snape will be brewing will be a cure of sorts, but I'm guessing they'll have to wait a while for that.  *sigh*  Ah well, I'm enjoying the story as it's told, so "eventually" can wait.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

LOL. Not exactly what Hermione was expecting that Severus wanted. I think she was a bit put out by that. LOL. Another fantastic chapter. Awaiting eagerly for the next installment.Blessed beRed

So what is the vice of your muse--chocolate? alcohol?? having readers on their hands and knees begging for more??? I'll arrange for any and all that your muse requires to get a chapter finished quickly..:D

I love the emotional outbursts that you have written into this chapter especially. Hermione's temper tantrums are great...And I'd like to know a few of the more inventive insults she came up with..after all I've got 4 brothers that regularly need to be insulted..

Update again quickly...PLEASE??

LOL Severus is very cunning ! Even in his madness. He may even manage to get a snog in addition to shopping

Teehee! Severus surely has a way with Hermione, LOL. I like it!

'Shopping!' hehe, and I bet there isn't even 'a pair of black silk boxers, extra roomy' on that list either ;D  Poor Hermione.Really enjoying this story.  Will we be finding out more about what Severus is upto soon?

Another good chapter! I'm so greedy. I want to say, "More, more, more," but I won't. I know how that goes. :)