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The Price of Madness
PlaidPooka1,094 Reviews | 6.86/10 (1,094 Ratings, 0 Likes, 527 Favorites )
It's possible in wartime that madness eventually comes for us all. Yet some madness might be carefully purchased; some sanity knowingly sacrificed. This story is such a tale.
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PlaidPooka
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I'm a 53 year old woman who wrote fanfic for years and adored doing it. While I lost the heart for fanfic after book 7 came out, I am still writing, and can be found at http://julianneqjohnson.com
You can find my published work on Amazon under the name Julianne Q Johnson.
Reviews for The Price of Madness
Ha! I was right about the bone-mending spell! And I have theories about why Sev was so loony, too, and the butterflies, and I LOVED the whore line. But then I've loved all the whore lines. It was rather unsatisfactory that he was unconscious all through the scene with Hermione, but I'm supposing that it will all come right in the end. Right? Brava, Plaidie! Now keep it coming!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Not to worry, we'll have a...touching?...reunion scene soon. *Muahahahaha!* Glad that you liked the whore explanation! I've been waiting ages to get to that part and I was afraid that after the big build up, folks might be dissapointed by the explanation. Thanks so much! :)
Response from jenonymous (Reviewer)
Nah! You NEVER disappoint! (You leave us hanging for long periods, but... ahem. Sorry. IwillnotwhineIwillnotwhineIwillnotwhine....[Spins in desk chair three times and spits on the floor, as in a pseudo-superstitious ritual] All better.)
All the reviews talking about dead Dumbledore reminded me of The Princess Bride and Max's explanation of the degrees of deadness. The comparison made me giggle! (One of my all-time favorite books.)
OMG!!! That was awesome!!! Albus is finally back and Severus is a miracle worker. I wonder what he'll be like when he awakens. Will he still be calling everyone a whore (which by the way still manages to crack me up everytime I read it) or will he once again be sane. This was a lovely way to start off the new year!!!! I loved it! Thanks!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Hmmm... Because I adore you, NQ, I'll give you a hint. No and maybe. *grin* Thanks, love! You rock! :)
I believe I understand where the whore thing came from. Was Dumbledore inside Severus? I assume there'll only be a few more chapters before the end. *sadness* It is beautiful and I can't wait to hear the explanation!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I bet you do, and yes. I'm not sure how many chapters are left. We still have Voldy to bump off and a slew of lemons to do...so maybe a bit more than you expect. Thanks! :)
Response from Selene (Reviewer)
Yay! I was a little sad that it seemed to be wrapping up so soon...I was hoping to see Hermione and Severus together for a while before you ended it. You write so beautifully...
WHORE! hahahaha.....I hope you thake that in the spirit it was ment ;-) I have loved this story and now I will tell you why this is so, I took care of a loved one who was dieing of Alzheimers and when he stopped calling people by their names he made up enderments of this sort. Having personally witness a beloved, who was so incredible suffer in such a simimlar way to your character of Severus nearly rebroke my heart. Thank you for bring back my beloved in even such a minor way. There may be tears in my eyes as I type this to you it brought back all the feeling of love also. Thank you from the bottom of a heart that is often been described as three sizes too small. I avidly wait for the next chapter with highest regards.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I cannot possibly believe that you have a Grinch heart when you have such kind things to say to me. Though Severus' madness had it's funny parts, I've tried really hard to keep his illness as honest as I possibly could. No easy task, as I have no psych background at all, only my own observations to go on. If my poor attempt touched your heart in any way, then that is more thanks than I could ever wish for. My granfather got that forgetful before he died. (He was 96!) And I've never forgotten that even though he didn't know my name, and sometimes didn't know who I was, he was always so very happy to see me. Just because folks can't remember things doesn't mean they aren't still there, you know what I mean? Thanks you so much for your kind words! :)
Anonymous
Yaaaaay! Wonderful. I'm so excited to see where things go from here. I hope that Albus can help bring Severus back to himself. I also hope that RL has calmed down so we can have furiously quick updates!
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter even as we speak, so keep your fingers crossed! Thanks so much! :)
It worked! It worked!! Poor Albus, waking up from death just in time to get slapped by Minerva... Glad that Severus didn't get hexed by Poppy. Now, is Voldyshorts still hovering in the air? And is Severus no longer "mad" - no more "whore" names? Will they have to keep Albus' resurrection a secret from Voldy - and Draco? SQUEEEE!! It worked!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
*giggle* If I was Minerva, I would have slapped him too! :D As to the whore names, big hint in this chapter, and that's all I'll tell you! :x Thanks, June! I always get a big smile on my face when I see a review from you. You rock! :)
Response from June W (Reviewer)
(pouts) but I wanted to see what "whore" name Severus would give to Albus... "Purple Pimp"? "Twinkle Pimp"? "Whoremaster"?
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Ha! I'm torn between Twinkle Pimp and Whoremaster! :D
Wow, this story is really amazing! I've read straight through this evening, and it was an evening quite well spent. I'll be looking forward to you next update!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Wow! Straight through?! I couldn't ask for a nicer compliment that that! thanks so much! :)
Evil evil cliffy. I can't wait for an update! I need to know if SS is still mad. :)
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Well, there is a rather large hint in this chapter, but other than that, You'll have to wait! ;) Thanks! :)
::Does incredibly fervent and joyful happydance:: I'm so glad you updated.
And yet another cliffie - when Severus wakes up -- will he still be crazy?
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Now that's the big question, isn't it? Though there was a big hint in the last chapter. ;) Thanks! :)
Response from amsev (Reviewer)
I fogot to mention: Pooka RULZ!!!
That chapter title is pretty angsty. I'll have to go back and see if any other big hints jump out at me.
ooh, ooh--and update Loved "watching" Severus do his work. Hmm, Poppy doesn't know how "normal" Severus is status-post tower incident. That should be interesting when he wakes up!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
You've said it! His mental state is still a bit up in the air. *Muahahahaha*<---evil writer laughter. It should be big fun! Thanks,
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
! :)
Oh, squee, Pook!!! SQUEEE!!! Albus is back, Severus is okay, *does happy dance*I want to know more about what Albus has to say - how he's going to explain himself! ;o)
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Albus does have some explaining to do, doesn't he? I'm working on that even as we speak! *Go me!* *giggle* Thanks, Honey! You're a sweetheart! :)
This chapter was well worth the wait. But, a little mediwitch wand waving hasn't told Poppy what frame of mind Sev might be in. Somehow I doubt that bringing Albus back to life resulted in the spontaneous resurrection of Severus' mental capacities to normal. Hope Hermione is there when he wakes up!
Response from Darque Hart (Reviewer)
After reading some of your other reviews and re-reading the pertinent bits of the chapter, I am wondering about the term ‘whore’ and comparing it to ‘hor crux’. [Don’t pay any attention to me. I have a habit of taking everything at face value without delving into the why of it all. Always puts me a step behind and usually with egg on my face.]
Still hope Hermione is there when he wakes up;)
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Many folks have wondered about the similarities between "whore" and "Horcrux" and I haven't disuaded them, but it is a bit of a red herring. Severus was feeling a bit ill used when he started Albus' plan, and his mad mind fixated on that. Too true! Poppy can't imagine his mental state, and I won't say that his experience hasn't left it's marks. ;) Should be fun! Thanks! :)
Dang! What a place to leave us. Great job!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Thanks,
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
! :)
Yah! They both made it out alive! I hope Severus will be able to get part of himself back now. Wonderful and hopeful chapter! Thanks for the great update.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Albus lives! :D Thanks so much! :)
GAH!!! Okay! Okay! We're to the point we reasonably thought would happen, NOW WHAT? (in a good way)
Happy New Years to yourself as well, and thank you for taking time out of your own busy schedule to write such entertaining stories!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
*giggle* Oh, we have all sorts of things left to do in this fic. It's going to be big fun, I think! Thanks so much! :)
Yuppi, so happy to see another chapter to this wonderful story!!!! Please say that we won't have to wait so long for the next one? Keep up this wonderful writing!!!!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I promise I'll write as fast as I can! Thanks! :)
But I wanna hear what Dumbledore has to say, too!!!! Great chapter, I was literally wringing my hands since the last chapter to find out what was happening! I was looking forward to seeing a huge reaction from Harry on seeing Dumbledore alive again (tears....hugging him with a fierce verocity), but Minerva and DD's reunion more than made up for it!!Oh and Draco is cute too.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I have a little thing for Draco, I admit. Despite his cowardly ways. Lol, yes, Minerva beat Harry to the punch, so to speak! Thanks so much! :)
Gods, Pook... you weave your words so well, I get so completely wrapped up in the tale that is always such a shock to come to the end of a chapter! I can't wait for the next update, and i expecially can't wait for this to be finished so I can read it through without stopping!! Fantabulous, Dahling!! GG
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
It's a shock for me to come to the end of a chapter too. It means I have to start with a brand new one! :D Thanks so much, love! :)
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Severus is when he wakes up! Thanks for the new chapter.
Response from sleepygirl68 (Reviewer)
After leaving my review, I looked through some of the other reviews that have been left for you. I recognized some of the reviewers names as having written some great stories themselves. What a great compliment to you that you have written such a great story as to keep them on tenterhooks along with the rest of us!Hope we have another update soon...LOL! (not so subtle hint!)
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I have to tell you, everytime I see a review from Shiv, or Sun, or Christy, or quite a few other brilliant writers I could name, I'm completely shocked! What they are doing reading this when they could be writing away, I'll never know, but they are awfully kind to do so. And so are you! Thanks so much for reading and thanks for the kind review! :)
you wonder why we read this story?? I've been checking everyday to see if you've updated. It's extremely well written, very much in character, and spans the gammit of emotions. This is one of the very best stories I've read, and screw JKR, your story is better. And now that you've updated, I wish you a wonderful New Year, and keep writing please!!!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
How sweet! I certainly couldn't ask for a nicer compliment than that. Thank you so much for reading, and thanks for the kind review! :)
Fiinally! Yay! Albus is back! I can't wait until Severus wakes. I bet he will act like nothing happened between him and Hermione--LOL, never mind, I will just (not so patiently) wait for your update!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
We should have some fun with Severus and Hermione once he wakes up...but no hints for you! *Muahahahaha!* Thanks so much, Christy! :)
yeah a new update. I have been waiting for ages and ages. Love the story keep it up and hopefully R.L. will not get in the way for a quicker update.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I'll do my best to update again soon. Thanks! :)
Happy New Year!!!!
I'm so glad to see an update to this. I can't wait to see Severus' first interaction with Hermione. I'm also curious to see why he went mad, and if he is fully back now.
The non-stop use of the word whore makes sense now- Albus being the pimp fits perfectly, especially with the way he dresses.
Minerva slapping Albus was also right on.
Thank you for writing this wonderful fanfic.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
"Albus being the pimp fits perfectly, especially with the way he dresses."ROFLMAO! Oh, that is going to make me laugh all night! Thanks so much! :)
Happy New Year and thank you! The update was well worth the wait, even as I stew in anticipation of what will (or won't?) happen when Severus is able to have a conversation with Hermione. Great to see this story again.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I think that their first conversation will be big fun! ;) Thanks so much! :)
Hooray!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
You're the best! I love it when Dumbledore gets to live.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)
I love it when he gets to live myself! Thanks! :)