Goblin Magic
Chapter 23 of 34
PlaidPookaIt's possible in wartime that madness eventually comes for us all. Yet some madness might be carefully purchased; some sanity knowingly sacrificed. This story is such a tale.
ReviewedA/N: As always, thanks to everyone who has taken the time to leave me a review. I read every single one and I cherish them.
It may be a couple of weeks until my next update, as my work is once again being a complete bear. But I'll keep writing as much as I can!
Big thanks to alert reader and canon-goddess SouthernWitch69, for finding some words that I forgot to cap. You rock, Sun! If anyone sees an oopsie and wants to join the ranks of the alert readers, please email me at plaidpooka@yahoo.com. You can certainly leave such things in the reviews, but I prefer emails because I will get to them faster. Some times it takes me awhile to get through the reviews.
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And still I'm standing here
I'm awaiting this grand transition
I'm a fool in search of wisdom
And I'm on the road to madness
Yes, I'm on the road to madness
-Queensryche
"In any event," Bill said cheerfully, "you needn't use any memory charms on me to keep your secret. It looks as if Severus was a pawn in one of Albus' games, so I can't blame him for what happened. I'm glad that you're taking care of him. From the looks of his Patronus, I imagine that he takes some looking after."
"He does," Ron said with a sigh. "It's really strange having him around. Sometimes he seems nearly his old self, but he won't eat or sleep unless you make him, and if something sets him off, he throws a tantrum like a six foot tall child."
"Hermione's told me a bit about that. It's a shame that we can't take him to St. Mungo's, but they'd have the Aurors in before you could say Azkaban."
"Enough about Severus," Hermione said a tad sharply. The thought of Severus, Aurors, and Azkaban was enough to make her want to change the subject. "What about that scroll, Bill? And what does it have to do with the vault that you showed to me?"
"Fetch the scroll that nearly gave me a heart attack, and I'll fill the boys in about the vault."
While Hermione retrieved the scroll from her bag, Bill described the vault that he'd wanted Hermione to see.
"I know that vault!" Harry said excitedly. "That's the one that the stone was in! It was Albus' vault, wasn't it?"
"That wasn't Albus' personal vault, although he had one just as fancy. That's a Hogwarts vault, made available to the headmaster and anyone he sees fit to give permission to access it."
"Why did you want me to see it?" Hermione asked.
"That's a long story," Bill said, taking the scroll from Hermione. Unrolling the scroll, he glanced over the cramped writing and Hermione saw that he once again went rather pale. "It's a long story, and it begins with this scroll. This is goblin magic, and it's a type of magic that they have kept carefully hidden from the wizarding world. The Department of Magical Law Enforcement would classify it as Dark Arts in a heartbeat."
"Is it Dark Arts?" Ron asked.
"I don't know...it's like comparing apples to oranges...it isn't anything like our way of thinking at all. The goblins consider it just, not dark, but it's pretty grim all the same. They don't handle justice the way that wizards do. They are a painfully fair-minded people, but they're very Old Testament--eye for an eye and all of that rubbish. They are fair, but they are not merciful."
"If the Ministry would classify it as dark, why haven't they done anything about it?" Harry asked, puzzled. "Can the goblins truly keep it that secret? After all, we know at least two wizards who know about it, you and Severus."
"You know, I was very puzzled that Severus had any knowledge about what's written on that scroll. But if Albus sent him looking for the cup, it makes sense that he'd be looking for a way to destroy it as well. So, yes, Severus and I know about this magic, and I expect that there are a handful of others who know of it as well," Bill said. "Personally, I wouldn't dream of talking to anyone about it. I fancy my skin too fondly for that."
"Surely the goblins wouldn't kill you!" Hermione said, appalled at the idea.
"They keep this magic secret, Hermione. I think that they'd kill anyone who threatened that secret. That's why I was so nervous when you brought that damned scroll right into Gringotts. There is one hell of a lot that I admire about the goblins, but I wouldn't dare believe that my association with them would protect me if they found me with that scroll. They are a hard and sometimes rather nasty people, and they would do whatever they deem necessary to keep their people, their traditions, and their magic safe. The goblin wars were no picnic. In the end, the only way that the Ministry could deal with them effectively at all was to offer them a great deal of autonomy. Goblins may be under Ministry rule on the surface, but the truth is that they govern themselves. If a goblin commits a crime in the wizarding world, the Aurors don't take them to Azkaban, they give the criminal to the goblins to deal with."
"And what happens to them?" Ron asked.
"It depends on the crime," Bill said, pausing to take a long drink of his ale. "They have their own prison, and some goblins spend time on the wrong side of the bars. They value money very highly, and some wrongdoers are made to give up part or all of their wealth to pay fines. But some goblins, the ones that do the worst crimes, are never seen again."
"They kill them?" Hermione asked with a visible shudder.
"Worse than that, in my opinion. Oh, they end up dead, no doubt about that. But they aren't quite free. That's what that scroll is about. It's got a goblin soul magic spell on it."
"Soul magic!" Hermione said, wide-eyed with excitement. "That must be why Severus gave it to me in the first place. He said that we can't destroy the cup until we separate the soul from it."
"Sensible," Bill said, nodding his head. "The soul gives the cup too much power. Take the soul out, and it's just a cup. A magical cup, certainly, but not indestructible."
"But what is this soul magic? And what does it have to do with the Hogwarts vault?" Hermione asked.
"You noticed that vault seven hundred and thirteen has no key...no visible means of entry?"
"Yes, of course. Swarf touched it to open it, and he said that only a goblin could do so."
"Too true. That door recognizes a goblin's touch, and they've made it even more specific than that. Voldemort broke into that vault by using the Imperius Curse on a goblin and forcing him to touch the door. Now, the door only will open for specific goblins, ones who have proven themselves able to throw the Imperius off."
"That must be one complicated ward," Harry said with admiration.
"It isn't a ward at all," Bill responded. "It's too complex a set of ideas for a ward to handle. Even when the door recognized all goblins, it wasn't a ward that did that...it was a goblin."
"A goblin!" squeaked Ron. "What did they do, transfigure one into a door?"
"I didn't think that you could transfigure magical beings into inanimate objects," Hermione mused. "How did the goblins manage that?"
"They didn't transfigure a goblin," Bill said and then paused again to drain the last of the ale from his bottle. "They had a criminal, one who had done something they considered unforgivable. They removed his soul from his body and placed it in the door. That door is animate. It is a living, thinking door that has the consciousness of the goblin soul that resides within it. They can give the door all sorts of complicated instruction and it will comprehend anything that a live goblin would be capable of understanding."
"That's horrible!" Ron nearly shouted. "Can you imagine it? Being trapped in a door, day after day. It's enough to drive a person batty!"
"I told you that it was grim," Bill said simply.
"Hold on a minute," Harry said. "You said that this was the soul of a goblin that had done something terrible--something bad enough that they couldn't forgive it. How can they trust such a person to guard anything? It seems to me that a criminal like that would be more likely to cause trouble than to do what the very people that turned him into a door wanted him to do."
"Ah, but that's the trickiest part of all," Bill said. "You see, if the animate vaults behave for a period of time that is decided in their trial, then the goblins will release their souls when their debt is paid. The soul is freed to move on to the goblin's idea of the hereafter, and according to goblin tradition, that soul is free and blameless in the goblin afterlife because it has paid its debt in full. Animate vaults who misbehave will have their souls moved to some worthless trinket where they will be trapped for all eternity."
"Nasty piece of work," muttered Harry.
"It's Machiavellian," Bill agreed. "I told you that while I do admire a lot about the goblins, they are a pretty nasty lot. I try not to judge them, because their ways are not our ways, but I'd rather face a pack of rabid werewolves than get on the wrong side of the goblins."
"So, the vault that we visited has a goblin soul trapped in it, and they used goblin soul magic to accomplish that," Hermione summed up. "What's on that scroll then?"
"I thought that you would have guessed by now, Hermione," Bill said, giving the scroll in his hands another look. "I have no idea where Severus got this, but it's the goblin's soul release spell."
"He was living with Voldemort after he left Hogwarts," Harry said. "We've heard that Voldemort gave him access to his books."
"That explains it then," Bill said. "It's almost a sure bet that Voldemort is one of the few wizards that know about goblin soul magic. The way he tried to break into that vault suggests that he knew what he was about."
"So what do we do with it?" Hermione asked, peering at the scroll with obvious unease. "Can you show me how to destroy the cup, Bill?"
"No, that's not a good idea. I'd have to teach you Gobbledegook, to start with. Smart as you are, that could take years. I think that I'd better handle this spell myself. I've never tried this sort of magic before," he said as he read over the scroll, "but it seems pretty straight forward. Only one thing worries me. When I release the soul, what do we do with it?"
"Severus told me that we should just let it go," Hermione explained. "He said that without an object to anchor it, it would be drawn back to Voldemort himself."
"Is that wise?" Ron yelped. "Won't that make him stronger?"
"Does he seem weak to you now?" Hermione snapped, not realizing how much she sounded like the man who had told her those very words.
"Hermione's correct," Bill said, chuckling. "Having only a fraction of his soul hasn't affected his power any, though it has obviously affected his humanity. That settles it then. We release his soul, let it fly back to ol' snake eyes, and with any luck at all, he won't even realize that he's regained it."
The discussion over, Harry fetched the cup for Bill. Bill read over the scroll carefully a few times, and then he was ready to begin. Standing in the middle of the library with his wand drawn, Bill began to recite from the scroll. Though he clutched his wand tightly, he made no motions with it. Goblins did not use wands, so no movements were involved.
"Vuhk nahk hkals tu Oghor-hai.
Vuhk thrakat burzum tu Oghor-hai.
Ihkls nels, ihkls ilsvat vuhk.
Ihkls irn vuck hket.
Rehkizirat... vutizirat... vehkazirat... rehkenzirat.
Hke, hkati nels."
Though Bill's voice went on, Hermione stopped trying to pay attention to the words. She'd been considering learning Gobbledegook, but Bill's recitation made her think twice. The language was guttural and harsh, which sounded very ugly to her English ears. In fact, she'd bet that Bill would end up with a very sore throat before he was done reciting that spell.
It seemed that Bill's voice droned on and on, but the spell only took around five minutes to complete. As Bill voiced the last line, a sickly, greenish-gray vapor rose from the cup and hovered for a moment over it. Then it slowly rose to the ceiling where it disappeared from sight.
"Ugh! Filet of Voldemort," Ron muttered, his eyes still trained on the ceiling.
Walking over to Bill, Harry bent down and picked up the cup. "It's harmless now. Do we really need to destroy it?"
"As much as I hate to, I think that we should," Hermione said sadly. "The headmaster told you how Tom Riddle seemed obsessed with founder objects. If he finds out that we have Hufflepuff's cup, he won't rest until he recovers it."
"You're right, Hermione," Harry agreed. "I hate to destroy it, but I suppose it's for the best."
Reluctantly, Harry returned the cup to the floor. Drawing his wand, he paused for only a moment.
"Deletum!" Harry said sharply.
The cup on the floor seemed to waver in their sight for a moment. Then, with a flash of yellow light, it was gone. The destruction of the Horcrux was a cause for celebration, and they all grinned and laughed as Ron passed out more bottles of ale.
"What will you three do now?" Bill asked, after they had settled down a bit.
"Well, with the cup destroyed, that leaves two Horcruxes to go. We're positive that Nagini is one, and Hermione says that all we have to do about her is kill her to destroy that Horcrux. That only leaves one unaccounted for. It will be hard to discover, but I can't help but think that we're much closer to our goal now that the cup is destroyed."
"And the summer is only half passed," Bill said with a teasing grin. "Why, you might get Voldemort sorted just in time to head back to Hogwarts for your final year."
"I don't think we'll be that lucky," Hermione said with a sigh.
"Lucky? Are you mad?" groused Ron. "I like being out of school. I don't care if we ever go back!"
"You may very well get your wish," said Hermione, "and then where will you be? It's a lot easier to get a job if you've finished school."
"Fred and George do all right," Ron replied smugly. "I expect that I'll manage just fine."
"You know, Hermione," Bill said thoughtfully, "Swarf was quite taken with you. If you wanted to go into curse breaking, I imagine that he would take you on anytime. He wouldn't care if you finished school or not. They prefer to get curse breakers young and then train them at Gringotts."
"Wasn't that just a story you made up to get Swarf to take us on a tour of the vaults?"
"It was, but it's worth thinking about all the same. You would make a fine curse breaker, in my opinion."
Later, Hermione blamed herself for what happened next. She was the sensible one. She was the one that should have been paying attention. Unfortunately, she was daydreaming about what it would be like to be a curse breaker like Bill. She was daydreaming, the boys were talking and laughing with Bill, and no one was paying any attention at all to the clock.
At precisely nine o'clock, the small fire in the hearth turned emerald green and Remus came tumbling out of it. Remus had just enough time to look at Bill with an expression of appalled surprise before the fire turned green again. At that point, several things happened almost simultaneously. Draco arrived, his smile of welcome fading from his face as he saw Bill Weasley drawing his wand. Remus lunged at Bill, trying to knock his wand arm up as Harry, wand already drawn, stepped in front of Draco to block Bill's shot.
In an astonishing demonstration of control, Bill managed to keep from voicing the curse that was already on the tip of his tongue. His eyes darted quickly around the room as he reassessed the situation. Still standing in front of Draco, Harry had his wand pointed at Bill's chest. Hermione and Ron also had their wands drawn, but they didn't seem to know what to do with them. Having reached Bill, Remus grasped Bill's wand arm firmly and tried to get Bill to lower his wand.
"Release me, Remus," Bill said softly.
"Bill, you don't understand the situation," Remus said calmly but insistently. "You've got to give us a chance to explain what's going on before you go hexing anyone willy-nilly."
"I think," began Bill, roughly shaking Remus' hand off of his arm, "that Draco Malfoy is the source responsible for all of that pertinent information you've been giving the Order. You lot might have given me some warning instead of shocking the hell out of me."
"You were supposed to be gone by now," Hermione said rather lamely.
"Damn it, Bill!" Ron said. "I know you're too fucking clever by half, but how did you figure that out so quickly?"
"Malfoy arrived practically on Remus' heels," Bill said, putting his wand away. "It seemed obvious once I had a moment to think about it."
"May I come out from behind Harry now?" Draco asked cheerfully. "I think that the eldest Weatherby may have scared the pants off of me." When Harry stepped out of the way, Draco stuck one hand into his trousers and felt around. "No," he said cheekily, "they're still there."
"Draco," Bill said pleasantly, coming forward to shake the blond wizard's hand. "Sorry about almost hexing you."
"As if you could! If I hadn't been worried about hitting my unasked for protector, I'd have knocked you on your arse!" Draco said. His tone may have been a bit snide, but his handshake was firm and friendly.
More bottles of ale were passed out, and everyone drank and chatted as they calmed down. Eventually, Draco headed for the lab in the basement to visit Severus, and Harry explained to Remus about using the Pensieve to look at the odd spell that Severus used on the tower.
Harry hadn't progressed very far in that explanation when Draco ran back into the room.
"It's Severus," Draco said frantically. "He's gone!"
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Endnote: Those of you familiar with Tolkien's work may have recognized the words of Bill's spell. I'm certain that I have not done justice to Tolkien's goblin language, but I could not resist a small homage to the father of fantasy.
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1094 Reviews | 6.86/10 Average
Wonderful!! I really enjoyed this. Such a brilliant idea and execution. I feel like many authors lost their mojo for writing fanfic after book 7. I am glad that given some time you decided to come back. You have such a great talent for writing.
Exciting battle. Loving this story.
Lemons!!! Yippee!!!!
Lol. Still calls her Trollop. But now it seems sweet.
Poor Harry. It would be quite the emotional upheaval to find out you harbor a chunk of Riddles' soul.
My, oh my. I adore the idea of Goblin soul magic. What a creative and fun concept. That Severus was sheltering Ablus' soul the whole time is poetically beautiful.
Lol. The constant use of the word whore is making me laugh. It reminds me of the tv she is Dwadwoid and their use of cocksucker. So funny!
Intense start. I like the idea that her memory is so perfect. I'm curious to see if her acute mental abilities will help to get her out of the situation.
Oh my goodness, I just stumbled upon this, and am so delighted to find it finished! I haven't read your final chapters yet. Because I remember how great your story is, I feel I really need to start over and reread it in its entirety.
I know how hard it can be to finish a story. Please know that your efforts to tie up this loose end are greatly appreciated.
I also look forward to reading your paranormal fic, after I've had time to resavour and finish this one!
best regards,
One of your long time fans
The story was absolutely fascinating and I'm truly sad it's over. I love (I wish there was a word that meant more) the way you undid the evil carnage waged by the horrible old whore who wrote the infamous book 7. I was tempted to be done with the fandom then too, but I couldn't bear to leave Severus Snape dead. The Half Blood Prince deserved so much better than what the blond whore gave him. I hated that book, and it took me years to read the whole thing through once I saw how she had killed of Severus Snape in the most un-Snapish way possible. But, so many wonderful authors like yourself came to my rescue, and I was eventually healed by the overwhelming evidence demonstrated by a plethora of other stories that proved Severus Snape had not lived a tragic and lonely life, then died a horrible meaningless death as his reward for protecting Harry Potter and helping to destroy Voldemort. Instead, he had survived and found love at last. But your story is the only one I can think of that lessened my dislike of Albus Dumbledore for his unfair exploitation and cruel use of Severus Snape to accomplish his goals for the greater good. It seemed Albus thought everyone else had a right to some little happiness except him. I was desperately looking for a nice long love story between Severus and Hermione when I saw that I had bookmarked this story and came back to finally find it had been finished. The way you brought back Dumbledore was utterly brilliant! You also achieved a very rare feat in this fandom by allowing Severus to not only live, but live without the lifelong grief of having killed Albus Dumbledore. The fact that the curse on the tower knocked Albus over the side didn't seem like any other Avada Cadavra listed in cannon. At the end of book 6 I had a little hope that maybe he wasn't really dead after all. I also don't think I've ever read a story where Voldemort was rehabilitated. That was genius! I did find it fitting that he should be nearly a squib and take Filche's place. He deserved so much worse. Thank you so much for coming back and finishing this story. I am sorry you are done with this fandom, Pooka. I love your writing. Thank you a thousand times for such a happy ending. I'm still as addicted to the fandom as I was 12 years ago when the first movie was released. I must be completely crazy.
No! No! I must go to bed again!!! You are marvelous. You are brilliant! I will tell you how brilliant when I have more time. I must exercise self discipline and tear myself away so that I can rise at 5 am. Maybe just one more chapter.
I have to go to bed and I just don't want to stop reading. I always write reviews but I can't stop between chapters. I promise to go back and read the entire story again and write my reviews. The story is just too good to pause from. Love to you PlaidPooka. I love this story. I must make myself go to sleep so I can work tomorrow. Kisses and hugs to you from breastlady. I'll be off to mother mothers and another very long day.
I stand by my opinion that JKR got to the Polyjuice scene, everyone changed.......and she dropped the completed book in a puddle on her way to her editor and had to hurry the rest out over a long weekend.
'm so pleased that you've finished this!!
Thank you!
When I caught this title on the newest updates list, it tugged at my memory, that perhaps, I had read some it of, but I wasn't sure. Into the first chapter, I certainly recalled it.
Even though I knew it had been some time, I hadn't realized just how long it had been since I lost track of your updates.
I sat down and read this from start to finish all of this morning.
I can't recall exactly how long ago I read this - I will tell you that this story has been embedded enough in my mind somewhere, so-much-so, that I remembered each and every chapter as I re-read them.
I am very pleased that you found it within you to complete this tale. It's incredibly well thought out, well written and overall, just a wonderful story.
I, too, was immensely disappointed with book 7. I have read so much better endings in the fan-fic realm, that that drivel that JKR thrust upon her fans. And it does appear that now, in hind-sight, she is realizing that herself. Not that it does much good, at this point.
I do find it sad that you have washed your hands of fan-fic. You have such a passionate balance, a realistic approach with these characters - its truely a pleasure to read your works here.
I enjoyed The Price of Madness very much. Thank you for sharing your musings.
Ah... I just finished reading this in one sitting, and to the end! I've always lamented that such a great work was unfinished - but no more! Thank you so much for coming back and completing this story!
Good god, the lunch discussion had me heaving with laughter! Your writing is a joy to read and the story has me on my toes to find out more!
I enjoyed it all. Couldnt stop. Now 2:43 am it was an excellent fic.
I should be writing more reviews. This idea of getting Albus back, Bloody Brilliant. I find the story extremely good and was so happy to see I did not have to wwit till the end for Severus to get his wits about him again. I ov that Harry and Ron treat him with respect and took him in, also understanding Hermione falling in love with the mad man. I love it when they are mature enough to understand him.
gads its 1.25 am and I'm going to have to get to bed, Tomororw will be Christmas eve 21012. So much to do. I do hope I can finish but I don't see how. Thanks again for such an amazing story.
Precious, love the dangly bits sentence, hysterically funny. I'm loving this story and can't imagine how I've missed this one. It's new, brilliant and a pleasure to read.
~Squees with joy!~
Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you! I am ecstatic to see this story finished. Thank you so much for seeing it through to the end. Sometimes obstinate little fangirls gets exactly what they want for Christmas!
~Smooches you.~
Thank you so much for finishing the story. I had forgotten about it until I saw it again this morning. I'm glad I stopped and read the ending. I like what you did with Tom, I think it gives hope to the world. A very sweet ending. I will never be able to see the word or hear the word trollop without smiling.
I don't usually write reviews on stories because I don't really have a way with words but here goes. I can't tell you how excited I was when I heard that you had finished this story. It has always been on my top ten favorites and I was resigned that it would remain unfinished. I am very grateful to all of the authors that give their time and put their heart and soul into writing for others enjoyment. There are so many wonderful unfinished works out there and it is really a shame. I am so glad that this story isn't one of them any longer. I can understand your feelings about book 7. I still have not read it all and was very disappointed in how it ended.
Thank you Pook for all the wonderful memories reading your stories! Maybe some day the muse will hit you and you"ll come back and write something else!
Thank you, Pook for finishing your story. Though I wasn't one of your original readers, I've certainly enjoyed myself these last two-and-a-half days. (Hardly fair, is it? Something that takes years, devoured in the blink of an eye...)
I share your sentiments wholeheartedly about Book 7. I adored the first five books, and read and re-read them many times. Book 6 seemed to me to be a bit off; almost as if Jo were getting even with all us SS/HG shippers. But it was all right, re-readable. Uh huh. Book 7 was read once... and then thrown roughly to the floor, never to be read again.
Almost made me give up on reading fanfiction, almost. Though I've lost the thrill of SS/HG, I'm still here. I loved your mad Snape and all the whore references. Thanks for being here for us long term fans! B R A V A ! ! !
Wonderful story! You are now one of my favorite fic-writing trollops!