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Potions Under Duress The Price of Madness
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The Price of Madness

1: Dangerous Assumptions

2: No Time For Tears

3: Keeping Secrets

4: Sense and Sensibility

5: Traveling by Pensieve

6: In Hagrid's Head

7: Whores and Serpents

8: Putting Aside the Past

9: Getting Things Sorted

10: Throwing Tantrums

11: An Uncomfortable Shower

12: Uneasy Thoughts

13: Love and War

14: Shaken Up

15: Kiss and Tell

16: To Shop or Not to Shop

17: Return to the Tower

18: A Shower of Confessions

19: Frustrations

20: Knee-high Whores

21: Gringotts Revisited

22: A Gentleman Caller

23: Goblin Magic

24: The Missing Madman

25: Paying the Price

26: Albus Lives!

27: Courage Under Fire

28: The Seventh Horcrux

29: A Stubborn Wizard

30: Explorations

31: The Sky's the Limit

32: The Madness of War

33: A Dash of Madness

34: Love and Madness

The Price of Madness

PlaidPooka

1,095 Reviews   |   1,095 Ratings, 1 Like, 528 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 107,692 Words 39 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

It's possible in wartime that madness eventually comes for us all. Yet some madness might be carefully purchased; some sanity knowingly sacrificed. This story is such a tale.

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: Dangerous Assumptions

Chapter 2: No Time For Tears

Chapter 3: Keeping Secrets

Chapter 4: Sense and Sensibility

Chapter 5: Traveling by Pensieve

Chapter 6: In Hagrid's Head

Chapter 7: Whores and Serpents

Chapter 8: Putting Aside the Past

Chapter 9: Getting Things Sorted

Chapter 10: Throwing Tantrums

Chapter 11: An Uncomfortable Shower

Chapter 12: Uneasy Thoughts

Chapter 13: Love and War

Chapter 14: Shaken Up

Chapter 15: Kiss and Tell

Chapter 16: To Shop or Not to Shop

Chapter 17: Return to the Tower

Chapter 18: A Shower of Confessions

Chapter 19: Frustrations

Chapter 20: Knee-high Whores

Chapter 21: Gringotts Revisited

Chapter 22: A Gentleman Caller

Chapter 23: Goblin Magic

Chapter 24: The Missing Madman

Chapter 25: Paying the Price

Chapter 26: Albus Lives!

Chapter 27: Courage Under Fire

Chapter 28: The Seventh Horcrux

Chapter 29: A Stubborn Wizard

Chapter 30: Explorations

Chapter 31: The Sky's the Limit

Chapter 32: The Madness of War

Chapter 33: A Dash of Madness

Chapter 34: Love and Madness


About PlaidPooka

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PlaidPooka

24 Stories  |  Favorited by 599  |  109 Reviews Written  |  1,071 Review Responses

I'm a 53 year old woman who wrote fanfic for years and adored doing it.  While I lost the heart for fanfic after book 7 came out, I am still writing, and can be found at http://julianneqjohnson.com

You can find my published work on Amazon under the name Julianne Q Johnson.

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10/10

Lyndie578

Oh, my.  Well, that would be good--I think...--because I, too, belive that they were arguing about Snape killing Dumbledore in Draco's stead.  Snape wouldn't want to kill Dumbledore for any reason other than Dumbledore was forcing him to.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I refuse to believe there wasn't some plot afoot!  Even if JKR herself shows up on my doorstep to tell me otherwise! *giggle*  Thanks!  :)

10/10

Lyndie578

I've read ahead a couple of chapters and had to come back to this one to make another comment.  The Patronus casting in this chapter is really brilliant.  When I thought back on it, you've really framed his insanity brilliantly by demonstrating the instability of his mind, yet he maintains the ability to control it--even if his hold is so very tenuous.  Thanks ever so much!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

What a lovely compliment!  There are so many levels of madness, and so many different types.  My Severus still has some of his marbles left! Lol!  :)

10/10

MMADfan

Oh, so very pleased to see that you updated! I'm grinning ear-to-ear. And I liked Severus and Hermione's "reconciliation." I was also pleased to see the boys' reactions -- especially after having sheltered Mad Severus for so long, I would have been disappointed if they had reacted in any other way. And their questions were quite astute and showed their caring for Hermione.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of Severus -- and Albus -- and am particularly looking forward to any scene you may care to share of the two of them having a discussion -- that could be interesting and touching, I think.

Very cool story, very glad you updated, and very proud of you for losing weight! (Having lost over 30 lbs myself, and, thank God, kept it off, I know how much work that can be.) Good luck on the 5 K walk and raising money for the Humane Society (I'm a big animal lover, myself). Congrats!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Good for you for the 30 lbs!  I seem to be stuck at 40 lbs lost, but I haven't given up yet!  Thanks for reading, and thanks for the kind review!  :)

9/10

firefly124

A very nice chapter, indeed!  Poor Severus, getting all worked up like that and then ... full stop.  Yikes!  It's nice to see Harry and Ron handling their relationship a bit better than they do in most fics.  A pleasant change.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  A bit naughty of me, wasn't it?  But we'll make it up to him soon!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

CharmedForce

*is totally embarrassed that I gave a huge fangirl squeal when I received the update email in my inbox*

But it was worth it! That was an evil cliffie for so long last time, but this chapter made up for it. I don't think I could have handled Hermione and Severus being on the outs with each other so soon. A little misunderstanding that was resolved perfectly is one thing; having the two not speak is another. 

I was very glad to see that Hermione returned to infirmary immediately. If she had let it go then I am afraid that they may never have resolved it. 

Great update, and CONGRATS!! Losing that much weight is an AMAZING accomplishment. Anytime you are feeling a little down or are struggling, just think back to last Christmas' pictures, and think of what this Christmas' pictures will look like if you stick to your plan.  Good luck with your 5k walk, and I hope you raise plenty of money!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

That's a great idea about the pictures!I couldn't let Hermione and Severus fight too long.  He's had enough trouble, I think.  Thanks so much!  :)

10/10

averygoodun

"I expect you'll explain later on how Severus can be functional in carrying out his orders without being sane, right? And is there a cure for his madness?" said I.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

In my mind, folks that have a bit of mentle trouble often get fixated on completing a task.

May I say, "Oh.  Duh."?  I do love this story, and part of the reason is Snape's functionality.  Don't mind me, my brain shuts down at a certain hour. 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

No worries!  Lol, I'm hardly a head doctor.  I am trying to make Severus' mental state as honest as possible, but it is a bit of a stretch for me.  Thanks!  :)

10/10

jessajohns

Great chapter!  I am reading this at work, and was unable to stifle my laughter when Hermione promised Severus she'd not hex off his nipples.  It makes me laugh even thinking about it now!  You definitely have me looking forward to more.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  Nothing pleases me more than making folks giggle at work! :D  Thanks!  :)

10/10

Doomspark

Interesting story you've got here, Pooka. A bit darker than I expected, but with plenty of humor to lighten it. Quite possibly the best thing you've written so far.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

That means a lot to me Doomie, coming from you!  This is similar to the tone I was trying to get with OWF, but I think I'm getting a better handle on it.  Thanks, sweetie!  :)

0/10

harrypotterfan2005

severus need a stright jacket and a nice padded room

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol!  Perhaps.  But that wouldn't be nearly so much fun! :)

0/10

Atropos

Wow, Whore's Snape new favorite word, eh?  I can't wait to see what happens next!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol, yes definitely!  I'm glad you're getting a kick out of it.  thanks! :)

0/10

JoKK2

Now this is a really interesting and new plot.  I can't wait to find out what's up with Snape.  And I am really liking this "in-charge" Draco.  Look forward to more soon.  Thanks, JoAnne

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm so glad that you like it so far.  And I'm glad that you like Draco.  I've always thought that Draco was pretty clever, when he wasn't being a complete wanker! *giggle*  Thanks!  :)

10/10

septentrion

more and more interesting. I'd like to know though how Snape came to be mad.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

That will be explained more fully as we go along.  Lol, I don't want to give all the fun away all at once!  Thanks for reading and thanks for the kind review!  :)

10/10

Selene

I'm sure most, if not all, reviewers have asked you this:  why is "whore" Severus' new favorite word?  I love your style of writing, you're doing fabulous.  Can't wait for more!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*snicker*  I can't say.  Or at least I won't say.  It would spoil it! :x  I'm so glad that you like it so far!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

mugglemomof3

I hope this find you and your muse happy and healthy. I think that I read that DH did a number on your muse. I hope it regains its strength soon. This is by far, one of my fave fics of all time and I would love to see it finished. I hope everything works out for you. Hugs and best of wishes! Muggle Mom

10/10

macropis

Dying for an update here!  Seriously, I fear for this and other wonderful WIPs as the book 7 release date looms.  My biggest fear is that this will be abandoned if it gets canon-shafted.  Hope to read the ending soon!

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

I am so excited. This is really good, doll! :) I wondered if the boy would be Draco. I like that Severus is playing like someone who's mad. Muahaha... Did the stress from killing Dumbledore get to him? Teehee... Can't wait for more.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol, something got to him, but my lips are sealed! :x  I'm so happy that you like it so far, Sun!  Thanks!  :)southern_witch_69's response: Oi!I am the Dark Lady, and I demand you tell me all your secrets... *drops Veritaserum in Pook's cup*At least tell me what the raging hard on is for? LOL!!! Jarvey juice spill on him, causing him to be horny and hate whores? LOL

10/10

Mrs Alfred

A cliffhanger! Oh! The pain...the pain.... I'm a little speechless right now. :-) This is going to be another one of you fantastic stories. I am delighted to read the first chapter - your writing is, as always, excellent. 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thanks you so much!  I hope you enjoy the rest of it as well.  More soon!  :)

10/10

kiwifire

Oh, I need more.  Nownownow.  Please. =)  A nice new intruiging story, I'm excited!  I very much like the shifting Patronus idea, very cool.  Obviously surprised about Hermione leaving school, but it -does- make sense of course.  "Harry’s searches had turned up nothing; and now Hermione was afraid she knew why."  le sigh. =\This is so great, I can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome work!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thanks so much!  More coming soon!  :)

10/10

Lyndie578

Great start!  I'm so glad you've been inspired to write about the Horcrux Hunt.  I'm looking forward to many chapters to come.  Thanks for sharing!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you for reading!  And thanks for the kind review!  :P

0/10

redheaddoxy

I can't wait to see how the story ends! Please post the ending!

9/10

septentrion

you have picked my curiosity with such a beginning. And I like the idea of a changing patronus meaning madness. But why would Severus use a patronus if not to contact the Order ? Is he trying to lure Harry to Hermione's house ? Please update soon !

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

My lips are sealed, except to say that wizards use Patronuses as messengers.  I'm not about to spoil the fun by saying who Severus was calling! *giggle*  There should be more soon.  Thanks for the lovely review!  :)

10/10

ccrawley10

Like the story.  Very interesting that Snape is insane.  Looking forward to more of the story.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  :)

0/10

nightqueen

Wooo Hooo!!!!!     A knew story from Pooka!! This is sooo my lucky night.  You've got me hooked. I can't wait to see if Severus really is crazy and if the boy turns out to be Draco.  Very intriguing beginning! I'm looking forward to chapter two.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you NQ!  I'm pretty excited myself to be doing another chaptered SS/HG fic.  I'm so glad that you'll be coming along as well!  :)

0/10

Hypnobarb

Ooooh!  Good start on the hunt for the horcruxes.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you!  :)

10/10

greenwood

I don't know if I left a review or not yet because my mac is crashing each time I leave one.  I am using my husbands PC and I am hoping for the best.  I love this story and do so hope it gets finished soon.  I loved the last chapter where Albus is alive (I am so sure so many fans would like this story to be true!)  I so hope you finishe this story because if I dont like the one JKR puts out, I can always reread this one HA HA!  I look forward to the next installment.

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