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Potions Under Duress The Price of Madness
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The Price of Madness

1: Dangerous Assumptions

2: No Time For Tears

3: Keeping Secrets

4: Sense and Sensibility

5: Traveling by Pensieve

6: In Hagrid's Head

7: Whores and Serpents

8: Putting Aside the Past

9: Getting Things Sorted

10: Throwing Tantrums

11: An Uncomfortable Shower

12: Uneasy Thoughts

13: Love and War

14: Shaken Up

15: Kiss and Tell

16: To Shop or Not to Shop

17: Return to the Tower

18: A Shower of Confessions

19: Frustrations

20: Knee-high Whores

21: Gringotts Revisited

22: A Gentleman Caller

23: Goblin Magic

24: The Missing Madman

25: Paying the Price

26: Albus Lives!

27: Courage Under Fire

28: The Seventh Horcrux

29: A Stubborn Wizard

30: Explorations

31: The Sky's the Limit

32: The Madness of War

33: A Dash of Madness

34: Love and Madness

The Price of Madness

PlaidPooka

1,095 Reviews   |   1,095 Ratings, 1 Like, 528 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 107,692 Words 39 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

It's possible in wartime that madness eventually comes for us all. Yet some madness might be carefully purchased; some sanity knowingly sacrificed. This story is such a tale.

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: Dangerous Assumptions

Chapter 2: No Time For Tears

Chapter 3: Keeping Secrets

Chapter 4: Sense and Sensibility

Chapter 5: Traveling by Pensieve

Chapter 6: In Hagrid's Head

Chapter 7: Whores and Serpents

Chapter 8: Putting Aside the Past

Chapter 9: Getting Things Sorted

Chapter 10: Throwing Tantrums

Chapter 11: An Uncomfortable Shower

Chapter 12: Uneasy Thoughts

Chapter 13: Love and War

Chapter 14: Shaken Up

Chapter 15: Kiss and Tell

Chapter 16: To Shop or Not to Shop

Chapter 17: Return to the Tower

Chapter 18: A Shower of Confessions

Chapter 19: Frustrations

Chapter 20: Knee-high Whores

Chapter 21: Gringotts Revisited

Chapter 22: A Gentleman Caller

Chapter 23: Goblin Magic

Chapter 24: The Missing Madman

Chapter 25: Paying the Price

Chapter 26: Albus Lives!

Chapter 27: Courage Under Fire

Chapter 28: The Seventh Horcrux

Chapter 29: A Stubborn Wizard

Chapter 30: Explorations

Chapter 31: The Sky's the Limit

Chapter 32: The Madness of War

Chapter 33: A Dash of Madness

Chapter 34: Love and Madness


About PlaidPooka

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PlaidPooka

24 Stories  |  Favorited by 599  |  109 Reviews Written  |  1,071 Review Responses

I'm a 53 year old woman who wrote fanfic for years and adored doing it.  While I lost the heart for fanfic after book 7 came out, I am still writing, and can be found at http://julianneqjohnson.com

You can find my published work on Amazon under the name Julianne Q Johnson.

Author Website
http://julianneqjohnson.wordpress.com/

Reviews for The Price of Madness

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10/10

jessajohns

The image of Severus "talking to the potted plants" is very funny.  I really enjoyed his conversation with the suit of armor as well.  Very funny stuff.  He is very much like a "self-sufficient toddler" and the scenes with Hermione, when not making me laugh, were rather sweet.  An entertaining read.  It's also good to see Draco and Harry taking a more mature path than Sirius and Severus ever did.  That's something I'd like to see JKR do in Book 7 (guess we'll just have to wait and see).  I can't wait to see the Order's reactions.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Huh.  I could have sworn that I responded to this one already.  Lol, maybe I muffed it up somehow!  I'm glad that you are enjoying the humor in this fic.  I don't think i could write without at least a touch of humor.  I'd like to see Harry and Draco working things out as well.  I'll keep my fingers crossed until book 7!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

septentrion

why isn't anything simple ? How are they going to overcome the fact that order members are bound to wander 12GP ? I hope to find out soon ! 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol, I don't think much of anything in this crazy fic is simple, but I promise you that they'll work it out!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

zambonigirl

Ooh, excellent chapter! Poor Snape, must be so strange for him. Thanks for updating, Pookie.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Strange indeed.  I feel terribly sorry for my mad Severus.  Not sorry enough to make it easy on him, *giggle* but still sorry.  I'm always putting the poor sod in the most awkward situations!  Thanks, sweetie!  And thanks for finishing Mr. Mom!  I love that fic!  :)

0/10

KiraAlexia

Another interesting & touching chapter.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you! :)

10/10

JoKK2

I really like this grown up Harry and Draco.  It is a very nice change/progression for these characters.  You have crafted a very intriguing story.  I want to know what your characters know (and what you know) right now, but that is the mark of you being better than just good at what you do.  So I will wait, because I know I will enjoy the journey you take us on to get to the answers as well as the answers themselves.  Thanks for sharing.  I look forward to more very soon.  JoAnne

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

How sweet!  Now this is a review that a beginning writer like me is tempted to print out and hang on the wall for encouragement!  Lol, I promise that by the time the fic ends, you will know all!  Thanks!  :)

0/10

Mrs Suzy Black

This is one of the best Snape/Hermione stories that I've ever read!!! And you're imagination is AMAZING!!! The Albus return to life was very very well done!!! YOU ROCK ;)I hope you'll UPDATE SOON 'cause I won't be able to sleep well till the end of this story ;)CYA!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I's so glad that you like it so much!  And thank you for your patience between updates.  Thanks!  :)

10/10

skyblue

Good God you can't leave us like this.  I love Severus like this.  It's such a cute picture even if he calls everyone a whore.  I am in love with this fic.  Good job

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Lol!  I think that's what I get a kick out of.  What Severus says is less important than how he says it.  Thanks!  :)

10/10

June W

"yampy"??  Ooh, I'm getting an education from this story!!  I'm very glad Hermione has healed up most of his ailments (does he need nutritional potions too?) and hope she can feed him decently.  Exceptionally nice to see Harry and Ron acting in a more mature manner than they have in the HP books, regarding Severus, Draco, and the memory of Sirius.  Thanks for letting Sevvy have a nice nap!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Yes, I've been reading my Brit Slang website again! :D  I like a more reasonable Ron and Harry, myself.  Oh, they will still have their moments, I'm sure.  But they are good guys at heart.  Thanks, sweetie!  your comments always mean a lot to me!  :)

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

“I still don’t like it,” Ron said stubbornly.OH, but SW loves it. Muahahaha. *such a naughty little whore...*

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*snicker*  Thanks Sun!  We should have some fun with mad Severus now! :D

10/10

averygoodun

"What do you think the other Order members are going to do when they pop in and find the man who killed Albus talking to the potted plants?”

HA!  You are so good.  You ratchet the tension up, then you present a serious problem in a way that forces a laugh!  I'm loving it! 

I love the dynamic that's developing between Hermy and Sev, between Harry and Draco... you're really bringing these characters to life!

And I love the way you managed to make Severus coo.

Is there anything I can do/offer that will speed up the writing progress?  Because I want more!  More, I tell you! 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

You are the sweetest!  Lol, I think the only believable way to do a cooing Snape is to make him nutters.  No wonder I just had to write this story!  I'm glad that you like the humor so far.  I think that this fic would be one giant angst-fest without it.  Dario Fo has been a huge influence in my writing style, not that I am anywhere in his league.  I promise that I'll write as fast as I can!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

severusluv

Hi,I love this Severus, although I hope he snaps out of his craziness when the "Dark Whore" is dead. I giggle everytime he says "whore".  I think he has detached himself from reality a bit so he can deal with the "pain" of it at a later time when "DW" is gone.  Hermione should be able to help there. Keep up the great writing.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm so glad that you are enjoying my mad Severus!  I confess that I giggle everytime I type the phrase "Dark Whore"!  I think that Hermione is already a comfort to him, and should continue to be.  Thanks!  :)

0/10

mayadidi

I saw a few emails begging for an update so I decided it was worth a try and read the first few chapters.  Before I knew it I had spent the last 4 hours reading the whole thing!  I loved it!  great job so far! my mom works for the humane society so I would rather donate in my part of country to the local one, but its definately a worthy cause; good luck with the walk!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Wow!  You read the whole thing at once!  How cool is that?!  I'm glad you donated to the local furries, that rocks!  Thanks!  :)

0/10

KiraAlexia

Another great interesting chapter.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you!  :)

10/10

lipa

Congratulations and thanks for intending to finish the story. Though I sort-of consider it finished already. The madness is over, we know why, they have sorted out their relationship and the rest is just not really important. Or funny.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I suppose that is all true, but I do plan to have a bit of fun with lemons and other things.  We are getting close to the end, though.  Thanks!  :)

0/10

Resi

Much love, adoration, happiness, and other good things.  Admiration and glee. Other good things.   Squeels and scares everyone in the vicinity.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  :)

10/10

cocoachristy

Now that's what I'm talking about! Bravo! Great chapter! Thanks for the update. I am so happy Hermione didn't leave things like that. I just hope he doesn't get upset when he wakes and finds her gone...

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  :)

8/10

Kat7

Finally!!!!!  I'm so gald Hermione and Severus had some "them" time!  And what a cute littel reunion scene! 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

Maddie

Yea! Severus is sane again, Hermione had the courage to straighten out the misunderstanding between them, snogging has commenced, and all is right with the world.  At least their universe.  As for the rest of the wizarding world, I guess we we find out in later chapters.  Thanks for the update.  Congratulations on your personal endeavors.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thanks,

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

!  :)

10/10

juliannanight

Lovely chapter!! I have missed you writing this very much! As you one knew, I'm in bad health here, so there is no way I could even drop you a dollar or two, since I still have no money coming in, and am still in the hospital. I do wish you the best! Its a great thing you doing for little furry ones!!Hope to see more dear!Jules

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Not to worry!  I know what it's like not to have the money for anything extra.  I hope your health is doing better.  I'll keep you in my happy thoughts!  :)

10/10

zambonigirl

this must be my month for making charitable contributions, so I'm totally on board with giving to your worthy cause. I know it's not obvious, what with my menagerie of fantastical beasts (shut up, guinea pigs are totally fantastical! As are weird little birds!), but I'm an animal activist through and through, and I think that the Humane Society is the rockinest organization for the little furries. They're not as in-your-face as PeTA, and they're bent on education, not eradication, of pets. So....long story short, I'm proud of you, Pookie. I'm proud and I think that you rock. Good for you, getting your life in order. I figured that there was a reason behind your not posting as much lately, and it's an excellent reason. Let me know if there's anything else I can do to support you during this time of awesomeness that you're going through. Oh-and this chapter was great. I'm really missing the smut still, but the kisses were hot and fab. Your loving and adoring fan,Auntie Zambi (or "Hottie" as the niece says.)

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Hiya Zambi!  I'm finally catching up on some reviews.  Thanks so much for your contribution.  The readers raised 150 bucks for the Humane Society walk, and I raised an additional 150 around here.  So that was 300 bucks for the furries and that rocks!  And I agree that Guinea pigs are totally fantastical!Writing is still going very slowly, but I'm 40 lbs lighter.  My weight loss seems to be a bit stuck, but I feel ever so much better than I did at 225 lbs!  I started writing again, and I'm hoping the writer's block days are over.Thanks, Zambi!  You rock!

10/10

Lyndie578

Great update!  Thanks for helping Hermione make Severus see sense.  The trio's light banter at the end made me smile, too.  Good job!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  :)

10/10

ayerf

Phew! I'm glad to see Severus behaved himself (mostly) and didn't make things difficult for Hermione (well, not in an angsty way).I look forward to more soon!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  :)

8/10

imhilien

A great chapter, thank you! ^_^

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you for reading!  :)

10/10

KMJ

I am so so so so so (i think you get the idea) happy that you updated!

Love the chapter, but please dont torture us by making us wait long for the next one please, i beg of you! :)

-KarlaMarie

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm afraid the torture was completely unintended, but I'm finally writing again!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!!! I think I am only one of a whole lot of "The price of madness" fans who thinks you are the best thing in the world next to chocolate and icecream today! This story is so totally brilliant, there is no words to express my joy when I saw the notice telling me that a new chapter had been added. And what a chapter, it was hot, it was great, it was exellent, and Harry and Ron's questions and reactions at the end of the chapter was really icing on the cake! Please don't let us wait for such a long time for the next update, but rest asure that if it takes some time; chapters likt this one makes us forgive everything!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

How sweet!  I can only appologize for the long waits in between chapters, but I think my writing is finally back on track.  Thanks so much!  :)

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