What about Hermionie!!!!

Loving your interpretation of the events of Spinner's End...I don't normally like humourous stories much, but Snape's internal dialogue is one of the funniest I have ever read! I've often said that Snape had to be the busiest guy in OoTP too, with all the running he had to do during the MoM fiasco, but this really illustrated it! Thanks! :D~HR

Heeheehee...now he just has to survive Hermione, which could be worse than mares, stallions and moldie Voldie all rolled in one...LOVE the baby centaurs! I have a young colt and filly here, full brother and sister, and I can just see the baby centaurs capering about as they do! Filly is almost two and colt is almost one...~HR

Uhhhhhhhhhohhhhhhhh...there were only four mares, originally...Snape better have his dragonskin boots on for this one, I think he's just wallowed into a really deep manure heap now...and poor guy, to have Voldemort laugh at him getting laid! See, and people wonder why I feel sorry for Snape in real life, can you believe it?Well, hopefully V keeps laughing and doesn't register a certain boss mare named Hermione...~HR

Whooooeee! LOVE the characterization with the centaur/a/s, but ohhhhhh myyyyy...if Hermione finds out what Snape's got up to...and what of the stallions? I'm almost afraid to read on, not knowing just exactly how deep he's dug himself into trouble this time...The whole centaur idea is *wonderful*, though, they're far underutilized in the fandom! Judging by my username, I'm sure it's obvious why I like it...~HR

Awwww, damn! I wanted her to call his bluff! Course, I don't know what actually happens next till I see the next chapter, do I? So away I go! Accio Chapter 22!~HR

Wow...some excellent insights that delve beyond the obvious involving Snape's Worst Memory. I really, really like your interpretation here, many things I have suspected myself but summed up neatly in a nutshell here.~HR

Bwahahahahahaha!  A brilliant comedic ending to a perfectly tense situation.

I have long since thought (in fact, since read one on July 16th - in point of fact I read chapter 1, chapter 2 and then chapter 2 again, , nd then 3-27, and then chapter 2 again . . . . he NEVER stated the task because *HE* *DIDN'T* *KNOW* *IT*.  He found out *later*, because come chapter 27, Dumbledore himself knew what the task was - BUT HOW???  Snape must have told him, which means Snape found out, probably around the time of the argument Hagrid overheard in the Forest.) 

*cough*

Why yes, I am a canon nazi, thank you for asking.

A lovely telling of a horrible situation.

This chapter was an absolute hoot.  I enjoyed it immensely - poor Severus!  I admit, I wasn't too sure in the first couple of chapters;  the idea of Hermione reading to him at bedtime seemed quite a stretch.  But i'm certainly intrigued now, and look forward to more.

You wicked woman, to put Ol' Severus through all these ordeals. The man must be exhausted by now. Let's hope Draco will never find out, what "sacrifices" Severus had to made for his safety.And what a relief you send Bella away (pffeww).Whatever your imagination brings, it's certainly surprising.

After reading the other reviews, I wanted to mention that I didn't think it was too long, even if it was longer than other chapters.  (Haven't I complained that previous chapters were too short?)  I still say "well done!"

Amazing!  I love the Whiz-bangs.  (It sort of takes on a new meaning, where he put them.)  Canon-nazis may complain about the liberties you took with the Vow, but I thought it was excellent.   My favorite  LOL line was Damn it, Bellatrix, you are roughly as helpful as a fart in a windstorm.

Truly....but not well.

Well that's amazing . you always surprise me and please me with your writings. And the end was totaly unexpected afer having read your live journal. But once again my imperfect english can't allow me to find what "B word" I am suppose to understand. Could you help me with that or maybe there is nothing more to understand ?

Another good one. As per usual, you had Sev's inner monologue cracking me up. You are great at writing the kind of dry humor he would probably really think. Nice spin on the scene from HBP. Can't wait for more!

Taking liberties, are we? Making Harry Potter X-rated? You must be a Gryffindor, dear Author, there is no other explanation for the audacity. I realize that such is the predeliction of a large portion of the readership of this site, but really! That seems particularly gratuitous. Narcissa isn't that type, and while I suspect under other circumstances, Severus wouldn't have minded in the least, these weren't those circumstances. It seems you are keeping with your theme of giving Snape a hard time, though.I shudder to think what gem comes next from your fertile imagination.I eEagerly await the next chapter.

Hmmmm. enjoyed the chapter, liked the way you did it, seeing Snape's side of it all, and I always thought he was bluffing in that chapter, glad you think so too!Not too keen on the outcome of a Vow to the Death, how many other people is he going to have it off with?! But it does add a good twist, not something I expected to happen, which is all part of the fun. 

Well and truly fucked indeed!  And none the wiser either.  I've always thought he was bluffing and you pointed it out very clearly.  The poor man is a slag ... well it's not his choice, but still!  I'm glad it wasn't Wormtail to whom he had to make and Unbreakable Vow!

Blah Blah Blah...snooooooze

Yes, literally and metaphorically too, in the case of Severus's last words.I somehow think that I'm not the only one to want Bellatrix's head. Preferably on a pike, but a pitchfork would be fine.Is it too much to hope that you won't screw poor Severus around in this way again?Long chapter compared to some, although I can't say that it's nice due to the events depicted therein.

I enjoyed the way Severus thought of Pettigrew, and your retelling of ch 2 of HBP with the addition of the Vow to the Death.

oh my

Beautimus! The first part of the chapter had me laughing a lot, but then the mood shift with Albus worked quite well. It struck me as sort of touching. Sorry for not reviewing sooner, but this was very good like it always is!

Very interesting chapter, the conversation with Dumbledore, and Snape realizing that the end is near, loved the owl too, very cute and very crafty of Dumbledore to have such a cunning little friend!