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Fair Exchanges
Fawkes_07909 Reviews | 6.76/10 (909 Ratings, 0 Likes, 358 Favorites )
Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Severus Snape is not known for his generous nature. Both may learn more than they bargained for before the tale ends.
This is canon-compliant with books 5 and 6 and provides a behind-the-scenes story that JKR never even guessed...
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Member Since 2006 | 14 Stories | Favorited by 163 | 109 Reviews Written | 1,630 Review Responses
Someone who really, REALLY ought to be doing something else, but just keeps on writing.
Wondering why my stories take forever? Have a look at My Other Time Devourer: www.willametteartcenter.com I'm both the webmaster and the president of the Friends of the Visual Arts, a 501-C3 nonprofit in Salem, Oregon. We Put The Fun Back In Art.
Having 2 sweet little boys tends to drag things out too.
And what the heck, as long as it's self-pimpage time: If you just can't wait for the next chapter of Fair Ex, you can always go buy my book. It's not HP or fanfic but it's got that Fawkesy snark (in spades) It's here: www.turondo.com Warning: there's a bad word in the title.
Reviews for Fair Exchanges
Ahh! Logic has cleared the air, good thing too! She might be younger but she sure knows how to use a trump card. Unfortunately for Severus.... teehee!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
They both have a knack for getting under the other's skin.
*is gleeful*Hermione is fantastic!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Yay! Glad you think so!
Hi! Fantastic story. You've written HG and SS so well, that this is the best 'justification' for their pairing I've ever read. Truly, utterly believable and extremely well-done.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Cool! Thanks!
"Don't you 'ah, ah, ah' me" I love that line. This is so them. Love the hole chapter too. Thanks for every word of it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*grin* You're welcome! More chapters soon.
I'm sorry I was so busy I let chapters being posted without time to read them and worse review them. I'm going to correct that ASAP. An dit doesn't matter that Hermione was ont in there cause I like having Snape's POV sometimes. Going to read the next immediately.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
No problem. Enjoy!
Uh oh! This sounds serious... what does he plan to end? Now I have to read the next chapter, don't I? LOLGreat stuff as usual.... :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*snerk* and I see you posted this review at 2 AM... Now that's the sort of thing an author just loves. How much more complimented can you get than someone unable to put down your story at 2 AM?(p.s. if you're a night watchman or something, you don't need to tell me).
Response from mmesnape (Reviewer)
*hehehe* lol, I usually work at night (in a hospital, mind you)... but i had a night off yesterday. So, this would mean that I am either very involved in the story or I'm daft. Probably both if you ask me. But the story does earn the right to be read completely and enjoyed as such. .... me, as a night-owl.
What a predicament! Good God! Pretending that he and Black were lovers!? Yikes! If this ever gets back to Harry's or Lupin's ears, they are going to crucify him. Literally!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Either that, or rub their hands with glee...
Response from mmesnape (Reviewer)
That too... LOL
Can we call this a centaura gang-bang??? What has Severus gotten himself into? Oh well, he's a big boy, he can probably handle himself with these frisky ladies. *wink*
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I think he'll do all right, though someone pointed out today that he didn't bring any contraceptive potions... o_O
Response from mmesnape (Reviewer)
Being of different 'species', I doubt that it would serve any purpose. But... if a centaura could be impregnated by a human, would we be seeing little Snapes with hooves? O_O
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*STRONGLY resists urge to make a joke about horses with greasy manes and noses that are the usual size but oddly shaped...*
Darn it! I want a massage too! I swear, I'm really in need of a stress releaser... um, yeah. *impish smile*
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Man, tell me about it. And there'd be no whining here afterward!
Argh! Not a life and/or death cliffhanger, but still!
What is this hidden memory that she's so keen to show him? I'm eagerly awaiting the answer in the next chapter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Soon, preciousssss, soon...
Uh oh! There goes Snape's grand composure, out the window. Teehee! Can you smell what the Rock... um... Hermione's cooking? (sorry about that little whimsical wrestling reference... couldn't help myself. *grin*)The beginning of a little romance for our dour Potions man? Yipee!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
A little romance, but also a lot of other things. Poor Snape doesn't know what train he's about to get on.
HAhaHAha... rotfl That little chat with Lucius has me in stitches! I just sprayed my monitor with a perfectly good vintage of iced tea! LOLSnape playing the coquettish lover was too freakin' funny for words. And Lucius... poor thing! LMAOGreat stuff.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
5 and 8 are probably my favorite chapters, although I also love the slashy stuff later. How can you feel sorry for Lucius when HE got Snape into this mess in the first place, the fink! ;)
Fawkes... I'm truly sorry if I hadn't left a review before now. I had read part of the story, but had forgotten about it until I saw it up again on the board. Sooooo.... I am re-reading it again from the first chapter. The story has been excellent up to this chapter, a joy to read. But seeing Umbridge give Snape a 'feel'? Ewwwww!*Cough, gag* Whoa! Too much!I promiss to leave more reviews as I go along and since I still have like thirty-something chapters to cover... a few reviews here and there should do it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Hee hee, no problem. I'm glad you've liked it well enough to become re-acquainted with it, although I do love specific reviews. Thanks!
I liked this chapter, very much. The way he used his Legilimency skills to push her to defend herself was quite effective. Bravo! Nicely done.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! I was pretty proud of how that turned out.
Hermione is a bit confused, isn't she? If I had Snape in hand? I wouldn't be thinking about Ron Weasley. Bill or Charlie, maybe, but not Ron.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*snort* I wouldn't call it confused, so much as young and perhaps greedy? :)
Oh wow, didn't see the whole I just want a boyfriend coming. I didn't think that Hermione would be so shallow. I feel sorry for both Ron and Severus in the coming chapters.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Shallow? She's only 16! I think she's got good sense in not wanting to commit to a Wizard lifetime with Sev just yet.
Response from lupinschewtoy (Reviewer)
I didn't mean shallow for not wanting to commit to a wizarding lifetime, shoot I'm married to someone who is only 2 years older, and sometimes I wonder if a normal muggle lifetime is too long. lol. No I meant she's shallow for wanting to show off a real boyfriend to stop the gossip. I understand the desire for wanting a boyfriend, just not the need to be seen having a boyfriend.
No Hermione no! Haha. Nice transitional chapter, and thanks for the quick update!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks!
By the end of this, Hermione had better be sure of her feelings! I can understand that at this stage in her life that she can't be, though. What you doubtless won't reveal is whether or not this ends the same way as it did on Mugglenet.
More soon?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Heh. I have the next 2 chapters done--they were written months ago, and beta'd by Vorona. But I'm going to let everyone have a chance to read this before moving on--and maybe I'll have time to write a few more in the meantime.
Poor Hermi. Her worries about her relationship were actually pretty funny. Its a nice change to see her as the one reluctant to move forward in the relationship emotionally. I can see why she would though. It was nice hearing her perspective and to have an update of yours to read so soon! Fantastic and I can't wait for more.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Its a nice change to see her as the one reluctant to move forward I thought so, too. Plus, I vowed to keep this story canon compliant and Herms HAS to have a good reason for flirting with Ron in Year 6. And besides, if things went perfectly between them, poor Draco wouldn't have ANY hope of getting some action. :P
First off, I want to say that this fanfic introduced me to the wonderful world of fanfiction. Long ago I discovered the first few chapters on Mugglenet and was immediately hooked on fanfiction, more specifically Snape/Hermione. I now realize that I use your fic as a standard for other fics I read, but none of them really quite compare. The way yout tie in the story to the plot of the books is genius. Seriously. Not to mention your writing style is spectactlar.I was so excited to find that a whole lot more of this story was posted here. It's my favorite Snape/Hermione fic yet, and I cant wait for your next update!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Awwwww *blush* I created a convert! That made my day! Seriously, that was a really nice compliment--thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. You know, MNFF censored some of the early chapters too, so you might want to go through it here and see if there's anything new to you...
Response from woodia (Reviewer)
Yeah, luckily I read the whole thing from the beginning since it had been a while since I first read it. Keep up the great work!
Okay, now my head hurts. Hermione needs professional counselling. Or alternatively, she can pass Snape on to some more mature and appreciative woman, (I can think of several volunteers, but demand right of first refusal) and play Quidditch with Ron.Gah!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Awww, don't be a spoil-sport--Herms is only 16, after all. Besides, what fun would it be if she automatically fell in love with Sevvie? It's more interesting if she needs a bit of persuading. Plus, there's that whole canon compliancy issue--she was pretty flirtatious with Ron in Year 6. Gotta justify that somehow...
Response from KarenDetroit (Reviewer)
And Snape needs counselling to figure out why he wants a child bride.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*snerk* I second that motion.
Aww. Angsty, yet still cute. I love that you still have them in character and yet they can still have some tender moments that aren't completely tripe. Excellant, I can't wait for another update.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
:)
The more I read of your story the more I'm starting to think Harry is a git. I know he's had issues but who in this series hasn't? Anyway, I'm thrilled you updated and we were treated to some snarky inner dialogue. That made my day and I cannot wait to read more about the blooming relationship of our couple complete with post coital awkwardness in class. Gods but the idea of that man teaching DADA is so damn sexy. Sorry, I got a bit hormonal there,lol. Great job!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*snerk* Well, Severus of course thinks he's doo-doo on a shingle, but Harry does have some redeeming qualities. Hee hee hee.
That was nice tender moment. Thanks for the update!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*grin* thanks!
I admire your skills in interweaving (I hope this is an English word) Rowling's plot with yours!Go on Hermione: Lovely how she critiscise his teaching methods! I mean she is so right about the reason no one is answering his questions (it was very funny to go back one chapter and read what Snape was thinking in that moment :))Thank you! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thank you! I hoped people would go back and read the corresponding chapters for the "new perspective," so it's nice to know someone is doing it! :)