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Fair Exchanges
Fawkes_07909 Reviews | 6.76/10 (909 Ratings, 0 Likes, 358 Favorites )
Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Severus Snape is not known for his generous nature. Both may learn more than they bargained for before the tale ends.
This is canon-compliant with books 5 and 6 and provides a behind-the-scenes story that JKR never even guessed...
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Member Since 2006 | 14 Stories | Favorited by 163 | 109 Reviews Written | 1,630 Review Responses
Someone who really, REALLY ought to be doing something else, but just keeps on writing.
Wondering why my stories take forever? Have a look at My Other Time Devourer: www.willametteartcenter.com I'm both the webmaster and the president of the Friends of the Visual Arts, a 501-C3 nonprofit in Salem, Oregon. We Put The Fun Back In Art.
Having 2 sweet little boys tends to drag things out too.
And what the heck, as long as it's self-pimpage time: If you just can't wait for the next chapter of Fair Ex, you can always go buy my book. It's not HP or fanfic but it's got that Fawkesy snark (in spades) It's here: www.turondo.com Warning: there's a bad word in the title.
Reviews for Fair Exchanges
That was fun. I hope you're feeling better. I have also had my share fair or falls from a horse, though (knock on wood) I haven't broken anything yet. Since it has been so long since the last chapter though, I was hoping to ask that when you post the next one, could you maybe give us a quick update on where everyone has been and what's been going on? I have to admit that I remember very little of this story except that I liked it. I have about 40 different stories that I'm currently following and it's hard to keep track of them all. Thanks for this chapter!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Oh, I'm HORRIBLE at summaries. Besides, this story parallels OOTP and HBP, so all you have to do is remember Canon...
I've read the first two or three chapters of this in the past and then always forgotten about it. I don't intend to stop now though. It's fascinatingly good. Superb, really - your Hermione is just perfect.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Cool! Glad you think so!
Thanks for the update. It's been so long since I've read this, had to refresh. Sorry you've had it tough this past year and hope you have recovered fully (so you can write more :-) ) Merry Christmas!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Hopefully it was still good the 2nd time through...I'm slowly gettng better, though broken ribs hurt like nothing else, I find.
What a wonderfully unexpected chapter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*grin* Thanks!
OMG SNAPE IS GOING TO BE A FATHER !!!! (sorry for the yelling) That's most assuredly a wonderful Christmas gift and an embarrasing thing to tell one's girlfriend...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
LOL, well, he's only gong to be a father for another day or two, until he brews Hagrid the appropriate potion. It's not safe for the mother centaura to have another foal right now.
Thank you very much!! Merry Christmas! And hope you get to feeling better :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Boy, me too. Merry Xmas!
Very good. Get well soon. Hint, hint! :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Trying. My osteoblasts have been on overtime for 8 weeks now.
OK, I almost got busted for reading this at work when I squealed out loud!! I'm so glad there's a lot more to read...now I just have to figure out how to get things done at home so I can read. Too bad I don't have a wand
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Man, do I EVER wish I had a wand. I wonder what Freud would say...
OMG, just realized you're reviewing Ch. 5. New reader? Heehee, well, zany times ahead.
Oh dear. That's not good, is it. (I'd rate it higher if I could!Q!)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Well, fortunately Hagrid is beng a responsible gamekeeper...
I have missed this story soooo much! thanks for posting again, as it was Fair Exchanges that brought me to TPP in the first place. HOpe you are feeling better, and have a better holiday than you'd had an autumn! Post again when you've got time, this truly is too good to go unfinished. Cheers!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Awww, feel honored to be the drivng force for you to find TPP (which I consider the best archive, meself).
i love this story!!!i just reread it again.for the love of god please finish it!!! or at least give me another chapter!! please!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
LOL, well, now that Heirs is out of my hair, I have time to think about other fics again. Soon, soon...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
LOL, well, now that Heirs is out of my hair, I have time to think about other fics again. Soon, soon...
Oh my god! I'm dying for more! I just stayed up all night...literally...reading this from start to finish. And I'm now dreading an early breakfast because it means I have no more sexy Snape to read about. *sigh* Eggs and bacon it is...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Ahem... Bacon is NEVER dreary. But yeah, it'll still be a while before I'm ready to finish this story. good stuff takes time, and all that...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Ahem... Bacon is NEVER dreary. But yeah, it'll still be a while before I'm ready to finish this story. good stuff takes time, and all that...
Just re-read this for the tenth (or so) time. It's just so fantastic. Can't wait for you to get further into this. Who cares about SS/HG? They already have a gazillion stories to themselves. Bring on the pretty slash! :-D
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*sporfle* It's funny, some people complain that I've sullied the story with non-HG "action," and others want more...They always say write what YOU like, and this is why, there's no way to please EVERYONE. :)
Response from RedOrchid (Reviewer)
So true. Then I guess I'll just have to hope and pray that you like the same things as me. :-)
I've enjoyed the story with HG/SS but am not liking all the "partners" Snape is with, would she give him another glance if she knew, If she's suppopsed to be faithful, then he should be too. It takes some of the magic away for the reader.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Who ever said anything about monogamy? She already accepted that he was seeing another woman (even though he wasn't) and has been entertaining thoughts of Ron. And he hasn't been running off to mess around like a swinging guy from the 70's, he's been getting wrenched into unwanted but unavoidable situations thanx to his spy/double agent status. This isn't a sweet little romance, it's a cold hard look at the reality of duplicitous living. With Teh Funneh. :)
I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this story. I enjoy the relationship between Severus and Hermione. However I have reservations about Severus' "infidelities" with the centauras and Draco, as well as Hermione's indecisiveness about what she wants. I don't want to see any of them hurt. It seems cruel of Hermione think about courting Ron, then go and seduce Severus. Surely she has more conscience than that. I understand that Severus has roles to play, but he told Hermione that he loves her.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Well, that's the beauty in complexity. He does love Hermione. But he has BAGGAGE, like none other--and his baggage is continuing on right now, and will continue until Voldy is dead. As for Herms, well, if you read carefully, you'll notice she's never said three certain little words to him... This is not a straightforward love story by any means.
LOVE it! God, what a great twist! Fantastic! Bring it on! (or, if you don't want to include the slashy goodness in this story, please write it on the side as a companion PWP)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
LOL, well, I do write those occasional asides, but I think the slashy stuff will be included here. Such as it is--this IS only an R rated fic, not NC-17...
Response from RedOrchid (Reviewer)
NC-17 on the side? *hopeful smile*LOL, kidding aside, whatever you got, I'm looking forward to it. Good luck with finishing Heirs as well. Offer of help, should you want any, still stands. :-)
Oh my.
Well, you're back with a bang! (So to speak.)
I don't think anybody should be surprised with this turn of events, considering you've already tossed him (quite willingly) to the centaur chicks and he's had a heavy (and enjoyable, from his pov) snog with Draco already.
But, do we get to see what happened between Sev & Hermione? Are you going to go back to that, and finish the scene? Or have we moved forward in time?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Haven't decided. Like I said, this chappie is an aside, so it's more of a contemporaneous event. I don't think we'll revisit The Big Night, but the Big Morning After, definitely.
Oh, my. I never suspected that Hermione's emotions were this disengaged. I fear for Severus.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Well, it WAS pretty clear in HBP that she was trending toward Ron. But I think she's got a lot to think about...
Just for once, I'd like to have a normal boyfriend, someone to hold hands with in the corridor and walk around the lake with."
This is the beginning of the end, then. He took her hand, letting nothing show in his face but a hint of self-deprecation. "Again I'm sorry, Hermione. I can only hope I will suffice."
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Oh, the angst. I'm rereading this story now that you're updating again, and oh, this chapter ending twists the knife in the most painful way. Well done!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
sigh. Yeah, things aren't always exactly how we'd like them to be. But Sev is the ultimate pessimist, as well...
Wow you're back! It's good to see the story that converted me to this ship updated again. Keep up the fabulous writing and beautiful character development. I'll keep an eye out for updates!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Don't hold your breath yet--but there will be more story to come. GOTTA finish "Heirs!"
Was very happy to see an update to this story. It's been awhile and had to re-read the whole thing again. I hope the next update won't be far away.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Sadly it will probably be a while. But someday I'll be able to work on it regularly.
I have just found this little gem of yours and enjoyed every single bit! What a nail biting, hair trearing experience... Thank you for this exquisite weekend entertainment!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
LOL! Well, glad you enjoyed it--more to come, eventually.
Contrary to your saying I like this very much, but I also would have like to know what happened exactly after the end of the previous chapter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
LOL, well, I'm glad you did--but I do get flak for introducing all this non HG "romance." Anyway, I'll be getting back to the Morning After ch. 44 sometime soon...
ah, Poor Severus. Remus is in for it now! Lucky sod.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Man, ain't it the truth. Sigh.
Snape and Hee hee hee, in the same equation, as well as the whole "Origin of the Universe" thing! Been there! Love it!! hee hee
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Done that, too. Except I could read it the next morning, just couldn't remember how it worked. Alas.