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Fair Exchanges
Fawkes_07909 Reviews | 6.76/10 (909 Ratings, 0 Likes, 358 Favorites )
Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Severus Snape is not known for his generous nature. Both may learn more than they bargained for before the tale ends.
This is canon-compliant with books 5 and 6 and provides a behind-the-scenes story that JKR never even guessed...
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Fawkes_07
Member Since 2006 | 14 Stories | Favorited by 163 | 109 Reviews Written | 1,630 Review Responses
Someone who really, REALLY ought to be doing something else, but just keeps on writing.
Wondering why my stories take forever? Have a look at My Other Time Devourer: www.willametteartcenter.com I'm both the webmaster and the president of the Friends of the Visual Arts, a 501-C3 nonprofit in Salem, Oregon. We Put The Fun Back In Art.
Having 2 sweet little boys tends to drag things out too.
And what the heck, as long as it's self-pimpage time: If you just can't wait for the next chapter of Fair Ex, you can always go buy my book. It's not HP or fanfic but it's got that Fawkesy snark (in spades) It's here: www.turondo.com Warning: there's a bad word in the title.
Reviews for Fair Exchanges
I so admire the dialogue you write for my favorite couple. I'm so happy to see you return to updating this story and hope you will continue with some regularity. ~
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I hope so too. I have the next chapter done, at least, and it was fun to write. I just have such a time crunch...
I have to agree with Severus, there. If she wants a normal boyfriend, she must not want him.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*shrugs* If I managed to land Snape, I'd want to parade him around a bit. Not to mention some snogging in the corridors...
No she doesn't. Hermione is full of it. She had normal. Nobody is more a normal boy than Ron. That's why he's so repulsive! And likely to remain so.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*sporfle* When did she "have" Ron, so to speak? Hee hee. Come on, for all her smarts, Hermione is still young. She's just having a bit of "grass is always greener" syndrome. And of course Severus is being his usual Eeyore-like self.
SO GOOD *slaps hand repeatedly on the desk* good, good, good. Hey, personally I could trade in the hand-holding and lake watching for the Snark Master. I look forward to another great chapter!-
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*sporfle* Yeah, I probably could to, now that you mention it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*sporfle* Yeah, I probably could to, now that you mention it.
You know, I never read the last chapters of this story over at MuggleNet... this is having a very gloom and doom feel to it with that 'beginning of the end' bit. You're not going to allow me to hide my head in the sand, are you? [<-- That's a rhetorical question.]
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
That depends...are you an ostrich? Remember, this is Snape we're talking to. He's not exactly Mr. Merry Sunshine Optimist. It's not going to be easy over the next year, but, well, without giving away the ending, haven't you learned to Trust Yer Fawkes yet?*smirk*
I can just picture what Severus might have been thinking at the end of this chapter: 'that light at the end of the tunnel is an oncoming train.'
That reference to Umbridge was shudder inducing. You're very good at that!
I look forward to more... soon
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Yep. Oooh, a shudder! Yay!Writing...
Aww, poor Severus! But everything will work out in the end ... right?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Not tellin'. Neener neener.
Oh, that last sentence is so endearing.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Yeah, poor Sev. He tries, it's just that he's so darn restricted...
You're not just torturing Snape, you're torturing me!
*cries*
Update soon!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*evul cackle* It's working!
BRILLIANT, I love you, you're amazing, oh god please write more.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
awwwww...you're gonna make my head swell up.
I'm glad somebody has a plan....Great chapter, as always. Torturing Snape is your privilege, but torturing your readers is an Unforgivable! So update soon!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I may just be one of those Dark writers that uses Unforgivables, ya know...
Response from KarenDetroit (Reviewer)
Oh, horror! Protego!
*squeeeeee* Yay! You updated! I really liked this chapter, even if it was a bit short. That is one of my top favorite scenes from HBP, and I love that you incorporated it into the story. I thought it was really cute when you wrote this,"...fighting an insane urge to pinch her on the bum when she entered the classroom."Lol, I thought that was cute ;)Overall, a great chapter, though a bit short. I'm looking forward to reading more :D~ Vicky
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Snape's such a romantic...
That was a really entertaining take on that particular passage in HBP.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
:) Glad you think so!
So lovely to have a new chapter, thanks for keeping us readers happy! Liked the chapter, I do love the way you work your story in with the book, it's brings a whole new light to it, if that makes sense! Poor old Snapey Poo, are you going to give him a hard time?! How about the old prat Slughorn, and maybe some Draco trouble too!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Moi? Abuse dear Severus? *evul grin*
I was so excited to find out this story was updated! I was so sorry to finish this great chapter.... I look forward to more.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! I've been going to town on Heirs and I'd like to wrap up Lessons, but I didn't want to lose my whole readership on poor Sev and Herms. Eh, a little absence makes the heart grow fonder.
I just can not imagine anyone having a life beyond fanfiction! You really do need to get your priorities straight.
You need an antagonist? Try Slughorn. He had been Severus' professor and with all that sucking up Slug does, there should be at least some room for him to antagonize his former student. I can't picture Severus being agreeable to the Slug Club, especially with him fawning over Potter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Tell me about it. I was trying to explain to my mother yesterday why I didn't call her for Mother's Day until a week late. Had something to do with moving the Art Center that I'm the president of, plus creating the summer class schedule (and getting it on the website, which I'm webmaster of), and the inevitable spring cold that one gets when one has a 4-year-old in preschool, and...BTW, I haven't forgotten Slughorn. *evul grin*
You arn't going to torture him to badly huh? I mean he will have a happy ending?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Not tellin'. But the ending was written months ago and I think it's pretty happy--with the requisite dose of angst and loss, of course.
Thank you for the update, I feel bad that you plan to torture SS, but at the same time I look forward to it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Hee hee hee. Same here.
An update! Aw, poor Severus; if <i>you</i> planning for evil things to come to him then he is in for a terrible year! I may have already said this at some point, but I love the way you incorporate it all into the same scenes from canon, but not so that we're reading the same long paragraph - keep up the amaaazing work!~
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
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Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! I try to keep the Canon quotes to the minimum necessary--glad it's working for at least one reader!
Looking at previous chapters, Snape doesn't need any antagonist but you.
Plenty of giggle worthy moments! Hope to see more soon.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*sniffle* That really got me right here *fist over heart*. *is honored*
Well, would you believe it, here I was coming along to ask you when we're going to be getting an update, as it's been soooo long, and what do I discover?! A chapter that I haven't read! Now how the bloody hell did that happen?! I was very cross with myself, but also very excited, what a treat! I blame it on the fact that I've barely had any internet since I moved house 3 months ago, and only got it fixed (finally) this week.And what a chapter it was! At long long last they are back together and there's some action! Brilliant chapter, and please can we have an update soon, this is my favorite fic and it's been far too long!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I really am trying--the best is yet to come, but I've just GOT to get Heirs of Slytherin done before the Real Book 7.
*sigh* Why does it have to be over? I am dying for more!I am so happy that I was finally able to take some time away from schoolwork to read the last four chapters. They were all wonderful, and I really loved them. Snape's... feelings about Wormtail were rather hilarious, and I loved the bit with Bellatrix's hair.But I especially loved this last chapter. You write their quiet moments, when they're just sitting with each other, so well. It was so romantic, and incredibly sweet. I really loved it. I can't wait to read the next chapter!Hopefully, now that school's coming to an end, I'll have more time to read, because I really would like to go back and reread some of the chapters.Great job!! :D~ Vicky
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Cool! Thanks! I really hope to write more soon, but I gotta work on Heirs...
That was one of the more teasing, sensually oriented scenes I've had the pleasure of reading.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*grin* Yay! Well, more to come if I can get alone with my keyboard...!
Please, please send us the next one.... I'm dying to know!!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Trying...it'll be worth the wait, honest!
THAT WAS GREAT! I love your story. :) Can't wait for the next update! -Elle
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I'm workin' on it...but it'll be a while yet. got inspired on other fics.