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Potions Under Duress Fair Exchanges
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Fair Exchanges

1: 1: The Art of the Deal

2: 2: Fair and Square

3: 3: Old Habits Die Hard

4: 4: Compound Interest

5: 5: The Great Escape

6: 6: The First Brick Crumbles

7: 7: Distillations

8: 8: What Goes Around

9: 9: The Potions Master

10: 10: That Which Does Not Kill Me

11: 11: Reckoning

12: 12: Abandon

13: 13: Sensibility

14: 14: Snape's Worst Week

15: 15: Silver Linings

16: 16: Fever

17: 17: Truth

18: 18: Confrontations

19: 19: Tension

20: 20: Disclosure

21: 21: The Interpretation of Dreams

22: 22: Words of Warning

23: 23: Objects In Motion

24: 24: All The Pretty Horses

25: 25: Answering the Master

26: 26: Survivor Guilt

27: 27: Feast or Famine

28: 28: The Toad's Revenge

29: 29: The Great Escape, Part II

30: 30: A Time To Act

31: 31: Stress Management

32: 32: Atropos

33: 33: Season's End

34: 34: Spinner's End

35: 35: A Breath of Fresh Air

36: 36: His Master's Voice

37: 37: The Return of the Students

38: 38: Hermione Granger and the Half-Blood Prince

39: 39: Defense Against the Dark Arts

40: 40: The Difference Between Day and Night

41: 41: The Three-Body Problem

42: 42: The Challenge

43: 43: 9/19/1996

44: 44: The Gift

45: ??: Day of the Jackal

46: ??: An Uninvited Guest

47: 45: Snape's Best Week

Fair Exchanges

Fawkes_07

909 Reviews   |   909 Ratings, 0 Likes, 358 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 75,033 Words 52 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Dolores Jane Umbridge Draco Malfoy Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Ronald Weasley James Potter Lily (Evans) Potter Sirius Black Remus Lupin Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Ginevra Weasley Gregory Goyle Kingsley Shacklebolt Luna Lovegood Millicent Bulstrode Neville Longbottom Nymphadora Tonks Pansy Parkinson Vincent Crabbe Original Character Peter Pettigrew Fawkes Firenze Bellatrix Lestrange Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid

Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Severus Snape is not known for his generous nature. Both may learn more than they bargained for before the tale ends.

This is canon-compliant with books 5 and 6 and provides a behind-the-scenes story that JKR never even guessed...

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Chapters (47)

Chapter 1: 1: The Art of the Deal

Chapter 2: 2: Fair and Square

Chapter 3: 3: Old Habits Die Hard

Chapter 4: 4: Compound Interest

Chapter 5: 5: The Great Escape

Chapter 6: 6: The First Brick Crumbles

Chapter 7: 7: Distillations

Chapter 8: 8: What Goes Around

Chapter 9: 9: The Potions Master

Chapter 10: 10: That Which Does Not Kill Me

Chapter 11: 11: Reckoning

Chapter 12: 12: Abandon

Chapter 13: 13: Sensibility

Chapter 14: 14: Snape's Worst Week

Chapter 15: 15: Silver Linings

Chapter 16: 16: Fever

Chapter 17: 17: Truth

Chapter 18: 18: Confrontations

Chapter 19: 19: Tension

Chapter 20: 20: Disclosure

Chapter 21: 21: The Interpretation of Dreams

Chapter 22: 22: Words of Warning

Chapter 23: 23: Objects In Motion

Chapter 24: 24: All The Pretty Horses

Chapter 25: 25: Answering the Master

Chapter 26: 26: Survivor Guilt

Chapter 27: 27: Feast or Famine

Chapter 28: 28: The Toad's Revenge

Chapter 29: 29: The Great Escape, Part II

Chapter 30: 30: A Time To Act

Chapter 31: 31: Stress Management

Chapter 32: 32: Atropos

Chapter 33: 33: Season's End

Chapter 34: 34: Spinner's End

Chapter 35: 35: A Breath of Fresh Air

Chapter 36: 36: His Master's Voice

Chapter 37: 37: The Return of the Students

Chapter 38: 38: Hermione Granger and the Half-Blood Prince

Chapter 39: 39: Defense Against the Dark Arts

Chapter 40: 40: The Difference Between Day and Night

Chapter 41: 41: The Three-Body Problem

Chapter 42: 42: The Challenge

Chapter 43: 43: 9/19/1996

Chapter 44: 44: The Gift

Chapter 45: ??: Day of the Jackal

Chapter 46: ??: An Uninvited Guest

Chapter 47: 45: Snape's Best Week


About Fawkes_07

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Fawkes_07

Member Since 2006  |  14 Stories  |  Favorited by 163  |  109 Reviews Written  |  1,630 Review Responses

Someone who really, REALLY ought to be doing something else, but just keeps on writing.

Wondering why my stories take forever?  Have a look at My Other Time Devourer:  www.willametteartcenter.com  I'm both the webmaster and the president of the Friends of the Visual Arts, a 501-C3 nonprofit in Salem, Oregon.  We Put The Fun Back In Art. 

    Having 2 sweet little boys tends to drag things out too. 

And what the heck, as long as it's self-pimpage time:  If you just can't wait for the next chapter of Fair Ex, you can always go buy my book.  It's not HP or fanfic but it's got that Fawkesy snark (in spades)  It's here: www.turondo.com  Warning: there's a bad word in the title.

Author Website
http://www.turondo.com
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Reviews for Fair Exchanges

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10/10

MadEye

I must say, Fawkes, I ENVY your stylings. You have added background and a depth of character that I cannot. I am thoroughly enjoying it!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

LOL, well, thanks, and enjoy! 

0/10

indigohue_235

hah! ive read so far on mugglenet when i realized you couldnt have the full story, so i made an account here so i could feed my addiction! maybe its just me, but i really do laugh out loud at Snape's inner thoughts. good writing :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  Nah, Snape's just an utterly hilarious guy--if you can get past the sourpuss exterior.

10/10

irasciblespirit

FFabulous story! I read it originally on MFF.net, but this is SO much better! You have done a really great job!!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  Yeah, MNFF kinda cut me off about the whole centaur scene.  But you can see how it goes on to be important when Voldy confronts Snape, so I couldn't just leave it out. 

0/10

lilynotpotter

Absolutely love this story. Followed it from Mugglenet. Please post more soon! I am in love with the HG/SS fics, and this one is stupendous.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks, yah, I hope to get back to it soon.  Gotta finish "Heirs" first.

10/10

Morganabythesea

So, are we or are we not going to finish this story? I love your writing, but you need to finish what you have started.  All of these stories began because of Jo, what would you have said and thought if she just stopped?  Being an author means being responsible for your stories and your readers.  You may have lost your muse, but as you know, you must either find it again or let your readers know that you have lost it and will not continue.  I know you have not lost it so...

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

No, I haven't lost the muse, but other things have come up.  I spent the first part of December writing grants to keep my art studio going.  My intention was to finish "Heirs" by Xmas.  But then my friend Phil was killed in an avalanche and I've been barely able to hold it together.  So patience is in order.  I wrote a eulogy for Phil that I may just "publish" here in order to explain my lack of writing.

Response from Morganabythesea (Reviewer)

I am so sorry to hear about your friend Phil.  I think a eulogy on TPP would be a good way to honor him, I'm sure he was very proud of your abilities as a writer.  Your pause in writing is more than understandable.  I hope your grants come through and the holidays are not too hard on you.  I look forward to you writing again when ever you feel able.  Again, my apologies and condolences.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I kinda look forward to feeling better, too, but right now it's pretty hard.  Thanks.

10/10

Faerie love

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story please finish it.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I will, it'll just take time.  Lotsa stories going...

10/10

Persevero

An unusual hitch in the proceedings! 

On a more serious note, having Hermione regard this is as (potentially) just a fling is upsetting - we're used to serious, faithful Hermione.  And not Ron.  But hey, it's your story.  I love the humour.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Well, that was kind of a point I wanted to make--everybody does serious Hermione and I wanted to try something a little different.

10/10

snapekitty13

omg! you have got to finish this!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I will, I will--I have to finish Heirs of Slytherin first.

Response from snapekitty13 (Reviewer)

well good luck with that! i'm so glad i came across this! i joined this group on facebook and one of the questions on the discussion board was "where can i find really good snape fanfic?" and someone wrote that this site was really good and then they recomended this one very strongly.

10/10

MrsStrawberry

Phew! Am fanning myself frantically........How have you managed to keep us all on the proverbial edge for 44 chapters?Wow.....am speechless with admiration!I am sure that I am not alone in my keen anticipation of future offerings?Where are you taking us now......I'm sure that moldeyvoldey's demise will figure....not too much angst for our fav couple (after all they've been thru' already!)....and what of WonWon and HP?Put us out of our misery soon....?

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

LOL!  Well, my plan is to continue this story through HBP but it will rapidly become AU at that point, as it was started long before DH came out and I wrote the epilogue well before we found out the "alleged" outcome with our Sev.I'm trying to finish my other major fic but I promise to return to Fair Ex soon--possibly by Xmas.  :)

Response from MrsStrawberry (Reviewer)

That's great.I was so caught by your writing style that I checked out your other fics......Brilliant! Am just about to start 'Heirs'......have sent the kids to bed for some peace and uninterrupted quiet.........Ahhhhh bliss!!!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I hear that!  That's when I do my writing around here.

0/10

GryffKat

I came to this story after seeing it praised in another writers authors notes. I wanted to tell you that I find your writing very evocative. I was reading Chapter 12, in particular: "Severus Snape placed his hands on either side of her face and fell into the kiss like a man stepping off a skyscraper." Wow! My stomach just swooped. I felt the falling. Superb. I am comforted in knowing this story will continue. I have become attached to it.  

Cheers, Kat

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

awwwww...thanks!  That skyscraper bit is one of my favorite lines too.  But now I'm totally curious where you heard about the story--someone else referred to Fair Ex in their author's notes from another story? *crosses eyes*

Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)

I was reading the referring story a few days agp, and of course I can't find it now. I was actually reading it, saw the author's notes and bailed on it to click to Fair Exchanges with the intention of adding it to my favorites for later reading. Well, I started right in on Fair Exchanges and did not go back to the other story. I will continue looking and let you know as soon as I find the other story. It was a HG/SS fic for sure. It was pretty good and I did want to finish it so I am motivated to find it.Best, Kat

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Coolness.  email me when you find it--I don't check my answered-review list very often.

10/10

holycow98

I can not wait for the next one....please....I hope you haevn't stopped writing this story....It is my favorite...

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

There's more to come but I have too much other stuff to do first...

9/10

shamelessad

Well, that was an evil place to leave it!  Now I really want updates!I am truly enjoying your writing style, and the humor you use is just wonderful.  This story is wonderfully crafted, with the story weaving in and out of canon events from the books.  Thank you for posting it!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  I hope to get to it someday but I gotta finish "Heirs."

0/10

shamelessad

This is so wonderful already!  I'm glad I decided to start, even if it is a WIP.  But I find myself already hoping that updates are on their way!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

*big grin*  Well, if you're only on 5, you have a lot of reading ahead, but I'm working on other projects at the moment... but I WILL get back to it, I promise.

10/10

ickle duddykins

Dearest Fawkes,I hope you haven't died.With undying love,

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

.:o)So, Real Life's got you pretty busy? If it helps, we could always plan a mock-kidnap. I'll keep you here, locked away in the computer room and send evil ransom notes to your loved ones. It'll be perfect. Let me know if this sounds appealing to you, we can make it work.On a completely separate note, I've noticed that you live in Salem. I live in Natick (20 minutes or so from Boston), and have visited Salem many, many times in the past. If there is one thing that defines that town it is the museums and the galleries. I always support the arts, so thanks for your hard work and for fostering creativity.Peace and love (make the world go 'round),i.d.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Hi Ickles,Not to bust your bubble or anything, but that's Salem, OREGON, not Salem, Mass.  Hee hee.  We're more defined by the Gold Pioneer on top of the State Capitol building.  Sadly, a kidnapping and stuffing into a computer room wouldn't help at all, as what's been bogging me down of late has been managing the website for my nonprofit.  We're throwing a section of the State Fair which starts a week from today--and I've never tried to host a party for half a million people before.  It's a veritable Boat Load of work. Super Boat Load.  But it'll be done by Labor Day, and then the kids go back to school... and then it's just Me and Severus.

Response from ickle duddykins (Reviewer)

Well damn, Fawkes! Watchya doin' in Oregon? Salem, MA is home of the witches, completely appropriate for a Potter fan I think. Anyway, Oregon or Massachuetts, it's great to support the arts. If ever you find yourself up this way, you've got to bring the kids to one of the witches museums. It's pretty freakin' awesome.So you've never in your life hosted a party for half a million people? That's pathetic; are you antisocial or something? Heh, just kidding. That seems like the logical 'number one thing on the to do list', I'll let you off the hook.Have a good one,i.c.

10/10

faula_tara

ok  i am now waiting the ending of 2 of your stories that have sucked me in and have my kids asking me when its their turn on the computer. so now i get to check to see if you have added to this on top of heir of slytheringrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr you are almost as frustrating as rowling heself just kidding i am enjoying what you have written in both storries thank you for sharing them with me

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Oh, heavens, then whatever you do, DON'T start Private Lessons, because that one's the last on the To Do list.

Response from faula_tara (Reviewer)

lol i love your writting style and where would i find this story you mentionedthank you for exploring a more adult version of the hp sagait kind of nice having one version to share with my children ans some stories just for momthank you again i have no imagination adn i wait on tender hook for the completion of you 2 wonderful storiesyours sincerley Julie

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Almost all my stories are archived here--just click on my author's page for the list.

10/10

helshez

Wow! I would have reviewed the earlier chapters, but I was too busy reading! I love the way you have wrapped your story in canon events (must have taken a lot of work), and I love the angsty twists and turns (you can never have too much suffering). Of all the fanfics I've read, this is (in my opinion) the most interesting by far. I hope you'll be able to continue this soon, I'm dying to see how this turns out. ;D

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  I do plan to finish it, but I've gotta finish "Heirs" first.

10/10

jade vert

I love this story and this chapter please update soon

 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I will--but I have to finish "Heirs" first.

0/10

LillyGranger

hahaha! love the twist! simply hilariouse! fantastic, and I hope this is not the end!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

It's not, but it's on major hold at the mo.

Response from LillyGranger (Reviewer)

yeah? is everything okay? or are you just busy? have you read the seventh book?

Response from LillyGranger (Reviewer)

Yeah I read it, why? Trying to work it in? I say go for it!

0/10

irishredlass

Okay, I am hooked!  I admit that I had to go searching for this after reading all that had been posted on Muggle Net but, where is the rest.  You did not end this the same way.  I want more.  I want to be Hermione!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

It's not finished yet.  It's on hold while I work on another fic, though.

10/10

HBAR

As always, excellent chapter! Not at all what I expected, but well done. I have read a lot of HG/SS and I think you have done a fantastic job at writing these characters as they really would act/feel/think in this situation (throughout the whole story, not just this chapter). Don't make us wait too long for more brilliance!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

awwwww... Thanks!  I'm writing as fast as I can, but I'm doing a lot of volunteer work right now and time is tight.

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

I have a soft spot for people who do volunteer work.  I'll be patient. *sigh*

10/10

sregner

Hermoine...you are always thinking....(thank god)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Between the two of them, they can actually produce a clue!

0/10

pygmypuff

That was a brilliantly evil chapter! You think it's going to happen, then it doesn't, and then it does, I love it!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

:)

10/10

Aurenna

haha, what a minx. Nice idea, you. ;)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

*bows*

0/10

gah_meep

OMG!

 I laughed soooo hard.

 Hermione is a smart girl.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Yay!

10/10

blue artemis

A sexual cliffie?  That is cute.  I really enjoyed that chapter. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Well, it's not exactly a cliffie, so much as a fill in the blank.  So to speak.

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