Boy, that was a big leap forward.Poor Draco, he will have to wait with the rest of us to find out what's going on

SQUEEE!!!  You're the best, Pooks!!  This is way better than anything Rowling could write. I think Severus didn't tell Kreacher where he was going.  Any chance Hermione could help Severus concentrate - encourage him?  Can Severus hear and see outside the ward?  Did he see Filet of Voldyshorts leave at Grimmauld?  SQUEEE!!!!

Thats a nasty cliff hanger.Happy Turkey day to you and your betas!

Love it!!!

Yes, yes, yes!!! A new chapter, what a glorious day. And such a brilliant chapter!!! I can hardly wait for what comes next, this was rather unexpected, but absolutely much appriciated. Oh, please say you will be giving us even more sooooooon. I so love this story!!!!!!

Oh. My. Gods!  Is that why he's been insane?  He's been carrying Albus' soul as well as his own?  Oh IcantwaitIcantwait!  OK, I'll wait.  Anxiously and with bated breath.  :-)

Ooooh.  I picked a good day to check for an update!

Love the intense scenes.  I'm curious as to what Severus is struggling with, poor Hermione having to watch! 

Has Snape been doing a Dr. McCoy--carrying Albus's consciousness since his "death?"  I can certainly see how that would make an orderly soul like Severus go mad.  And Hermione losing her head a bit for a minute there was touching.  It shows how much she cares.

Another cliffhanger--you're a naughty author!  Keep up the good work.

Great update again. I like the pace and the action going on. Muahahha... Looking forward to seeing our dear Headmaster back in the saddle again. :)

ooohhh that was wonderful! What a wonderful surprise this chapter was! You are so very clever.A

Ooooh... How long is a slight pause? 'Cause it's torture waiting for more!If Dumbledore planned all this, I somehow doubt he planned for Severus to go mad. Hopefully if Dumbledore does return, he'll be able to set Severus right again... although that seems too straightforward!

I thought that was it, i was kinda of certain that severus didnt really kill albus in your story and the potion had something to do with bringing him back from the dead!will it also bring back severus' mind? this i can only ponder as i wait in suspence for the next update!!!-KarlaMarie

i am glad for the update.  I love this story.

Good Grief !  I was not expecting that cliff !   I love your story and the involvement with a lot of characters with some "meat" to them if you know what I mean.  They are not just window dressing so to speak.  Thanks for the good story Pook.

I finally got my buttocks over here to the Petualnt Poetess and registered.  I just couldn't wait for Sycophant Hex to get around to putting up the next couple chapters.  Your last two chapters were fantastic as usual.  And, I am generously prepared to forgive you for that "nasty tricksy" cliffhanger since I read on your LJ that you were almost finished with the next chapter.

Evil, evil, evil cliffie.  If I didn't love the story so much, I'd hate you now.  Er, If hermione is so against learning Goblin, should she work for Gringots?

Hey, Pookie! I just wanted to let you know that I'm printing the chapters out and reading them, so I haven't been leaving regular reviews, or irregular reviews, for that matter. Really enjoying the story, as always with your work, and I'm as impatient as ever for the next chapter. Oh, and, um...if Bill needs some comfort? I'm so totally available.

ouuuuu another evil cliff hanger. Do they teach you this at fan fiction writing school? Now where could Snape have wondered off? I would have though the house warded him in? Was he affected by the departing goblin soul? Oh so many questions! Lovely chapter!

I love this story. Another fantastic chapter. So very tense!

It's amazing, Pook.  You've created a chapter chock full of so much: cool Bill, cheeky Draco, gobbledygook soul-magic, and wands drawn tension.  Everything is there except Severus, whose presence on the periphery is confirmed by a ghoulishly pathetic patronus before he goes on the lam.  His absence from the last two chapters and now from 12GP leaves me wanting to whinge.  I've got to hope Draco has some good ideas where to start looking.  ~

Evil cliffy! Bet SS is off after the next horcrux. :)Thanks for updating!

One more down, two to go.  And speaking of going, where the Hell did Severus go?  Well, that was one great hell of a twist.   I just hope he didn't go a visitin' to ole Moldiebutt--that would be a bummer.  Thanks for the great chapter.  I look forward to reading your next when you get around to posting.  Everybody's RL gets hectic this time of year, and with a busy work life you can only do so much other work.  Good luck.  Thanks and cheers!!!

*sighs* Well, I got what I asked for I suppose- lot's of nice answers in this chapter. And the Tolkien-esque-ishness was wonderful, of course. But the ending! You, my dear, are waaaaaaay too good at writing cliffhangers. Seriously. They're always so perfectly delivered, timed, and wonderfully agravating. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter.~Morgan

I'm so glad you updated.? Your combination of intrigue, humour and romance has me totally hooked.? I'd give you a 5-star rating, except everybody on this site has 5 stars too, and so what you truly deserve is 10 stars.? Here's hoping for at least 10 more chapters!Cheers,??

Yeah! Not only more questions for Hermione but the readers as well! I am no good at predicting. I cant even see the end of a movie coming for heavens sake. Seriously even the Sixth Sense surprised me.  Don’t leave the loyal readers hanging on by our butt cheeks for too long.