You are about to be declared the Queen of Evil Cliffhangers.  You're probably sitting there cackling over your keyboard, enjoying tormenting us peasants.  Aaargh!

ARGH!!!  It ends there????  What a tease!!! 

No, seriously, this is the only WIP that I am following and I look forward to each chapter with anticipation (think Dr. Frank N. Furter from Rocky Horror, and you get the tone I use that in...)  This story just gets better and better and you continue to make Severus' madness so believable and heart-wrenching.

Thanks for making me break my word on reading WIP's and continuing to write a great version of Book 7.

Such suspense. Wonderful!

This is soo good! I especially liked the bone-mending charm, that detail really made it so much more realistic.

Ohhhh!!! Loverly food for thought! I just love it when someone comes up with something in fanfiction that turns the cranks and spins the wheels. What a clever Pooka;) But, I worry for Severus' magical, mental, and physical strength after what he's trying to do. Be kind to Severus!

You truly surprised me, Pook.  I never would have imagined the story taking this turn.  Brava!  If I could do magic, I'd immediately banish all your distractions so I wouldn't have to wonder how Severus will manage to finish what he has started.  ~

*does happy dance*  Great chapter!  Each one just gets better.  Thrilling story.

Oh my! What a place to stop -- I understand there might be a "slight pause" before the next posting, but let's hope it is not too long. I feel like I am holding my breath to find out if Severus can complete the ritual in his current state of mind. Or if, as I suspect, that completing the ritual will clear his madness. I don't know why, but I have the feeling the only person who can get through the barrier (either physcially, by voice or maybe mentally) is Hermione. They have a connection and maybe she is the extra strength Severus needs. Well I guess I will just have to wait -- patiently if I can -- until the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Thanks, JoAnne

Ah!!!! That's really all I've got. Fantastic work!

Okay, that was good.  I apologize for my threat in the last review.  This is moving along quite well, and then YOU END THE CHAPTER!  [breathes deeply, trying to slow heart-rate.]  Well done, PP, it's very exciting.  [sing-song:] I know what the Bone Mending Charm was forrrrr!  I'm a clever girlllll!  And you write a wonderful storyyyyy!

You know, I think I'm growing old waiting for SH to post your chapters.  This was splendid as usual.  I always liked Bill.  Now where the hell did you put Severus? [looms threateninigly, brandishing a short length of chain] (Just kidding. Don't want to see our boy hurt any more, that's all.)  I thought that looked rather Mordor-ish.  On to the next chapter! (I'm in heaven!)

Wow!!  Quite original.  I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out.  What a great place to leave us!  Great job!!

Short chapter, but well written just the same, sorry to hear the next chapter may take awhile, keep up the good work, can't wait for albus to get back so severus can be sane again.

I cant believe it!! omg! i didnt even know u posted here, but i got to read two chapters! and what brilliant chapters they were!! Yay! im thinking, either the cup has something to do with the returning of albus' soul? or, maybe albus' soul is in severus' body causing his madness?? the latter seems like a likely possibility.. Cant wait till the next chappy!!pyro

Wonderful chapter my dear. You have me bouncing for more like normal! Perfect!!!

He's bringing Albus back?! Yey! I love this fic, cant wait to see if he succeeds.

Very interesting development!

Oh! You can't leave it there! That's just not fair. The cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers.Another great chapter though :)

OH...I can't stand it! Well, OK, I can, but gee ... what suspense, with Albus on the brink of resurrection...and the BUTTERFLIES ARE BAAAAACK!! It's really been great watching your plot unfold and see different clues and details assume their places in the story.

awesome as usual ;) can't wait to see if Severus succeeds ~!

Talk about a new twist in the tale.  I am intrigued and can't wait to find out what happens next.

I'm so sorry to read that there will be a slight pause before your next update - because this story is completely addictive! I certainly hadn't figured out what would happen in this chapter; and that's was a great story is to me: surprising, well written and with the characters in character (suffering from madness or not)!

Oh damn.  I can't wait till the next chapter!  I love this story soooo much!  Please update soon!!!  Cheers!  ~Brena

I *so* didn't predict this. Which, of course, is good!

I find myself so worried for Severus, which is the sign of a good story teller. So, nothing really insightul to say outside of "very good" and "more please!" 

I can't put into words how much I love this story.Wonderful.